Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRFX5SKAVYWGPSR22DYSPB

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Duration:
1m 7s
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$0.093485
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory worked it with the heel of her hand, the chain still hooked, and cracked the door four inches — enough to see who was standing in the stairwell that smelled permanently of cumin and frying onions from the curry house below. Charcoal suit. Rain still beading on the shoulders like it hadn't decided whether it was allowed to soak in. An ivory cane handle resting against a gloved palm. She shut the door. Not slammed. That would have been a statement, and statements invited replies. She simply closed it, turned the deadbolt she'd just opened, and stood there in the narrow hallway with her forehead nearly touching the wood, listening to her own pulse behave badly. "Aurora." Through the door his voice came muffled and patient. "I know you are there. I can hear you not breathing." "That's not a thing you can hear." "And yet." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring like a badly tuned engine, entirely unhelpful. Rory looked down at the cat. The cat looked up at her with the flat gold judgement of something that had never once had to make a difficult decision. "Six weeks," she said to the door. "Forty-three days." "You counted." A pause. Rain hissing against the stairwell window. "I count everything. It is a professional deformity." She pressed her thumb into the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old habit, the way other people cracked knuckles. Then she undid the bolt, unhooked the chain, and opened the door properly, because standing in a hallway arguing with a piece of wood was undignified and because — she was honest enough with herself to admit it in the half-second before the hinges swung — she wanted to see his face. Lucien Moreau looked terrible, which was to say he looked like he always did, only more so. The platinum hair was slicked back with rain rather than pomade. There was a shadow under the amber eye and a deeper one under the black, and a cut healing along his jaw that someone had closed with three neat butterfly stitches and no anaesthetic she'd bet. "You look like hell," she said. "I have been there. The service is poor." He didn't step forward. That was the thing about Lucien; he never crowded a doorway. He waited to be given the room. "May I come in?" "Give me one reason." "I have four. Three are useful and one is only true." "Start with the true one." He held her gaze. The amber eye caught the bare bulb in the stairwell and turned the colour of whisky held up to a lamp. "I did not want to be anywhere else tonight." Rory stepped back from the door. He came in the way he did everything — carefully, taking up less space than his shoulders suggested he should. He set the cane against the shoe rack, peeled off his gloves finger by finger, and stopped dead in the middle of Eva's front room, which was less a room than a paper avalanche in progress. Books stacked to the windowsill. Scrolls in cardboard tubes leaning in the corner like abandoned umbrellas. Post-its in four colours climbing the wall above the desk in a pattern that made sense to precisely one person on earth, and that person was currently in Prague chasing a rumour. "She has been busy," Lucien said. "She's been possessed by the ghost of a very tidy librarian who died screaming." Rory shut the door. Bolted it. All three, even the sticky one, and she felt him watch her do it. "Eva's away. It's just me and the cat and about nine hundred pounds of Latin." "And you are living here now." "I'm sleeping here. My flat's got a Fae debt collector sitting on the stairs. Silas says he's been very polite about it. He's brought a flask." She crossed to the kitchen alcove and put the kettle on, because her hands needed something and because she was not going to stand in the middle of the room and let him look at her. "You could have called." "You blocked my number." "You have eleven numbers." "You blocked seven." A dry note in it. "I have been rationing the rest." The kettle began to mutter. Rory got two mugs down, then stood there staring at them, one in each hand, and felt the whole thing rise up in her throat like water finding a crack. "You gave him my name," she said. Behind her, silence. Not a startled silence. A braced one. "Yes." "You sat in that back room in Whitechapel with a glass of something forty years old and you gave Malphora's broker my name, and then you kissed me in the alley behind the Golden Empress like it was a thing you'd been thinking about for a year, and then you got in a car." "Yes." She turned around. He hadn't moved. He stood among Eva's books with his hands loose at his sides, and he took it — that was the unbearable part, he simply stood there and took it with those mismatched eyes steady on her face, and did not offer her a single thing to hate. "Say something else," she said. "Say something that isn't yes." "There is nothing that isn't yes." His voice had gone quiet and precise, the way it did when he was doing something expensive to himself. "I gave him your name because he already had it. It came to him from three directions before it came to me, and if I had refused I would have been outside the room and unable to tell you which door he intended to come through. So I gave him what he had and I bought the thing he did not know he was selling, which was time. Nine days of it. You used them. You are standing here." "I nearly wasn't." "I am aware. I was in Marseille counting hours." Something flickered across his face, quickly buried. "Do not mistake me. I am not asking you to call it kindness. It was a trade, and I made it, and I would make it again, which is precisely why you were right to block seven of my numbers." The kettle screamed. Rory turned it off without pouring. "And the kiss?" she said. For the first time he looked away — out at the black window, at the rain making orange smears of the streetlights along Brick Lane. "That was not a trade," he said. "That was the only thing I have done in eleven years that I did not calculate first. I got into the car because if I had stayed another minute I would have told you everything, and if I had told you everything you would have gone to him yourself. You would have. You are the most reckless intelligent woman I have ever met." "That's not romantic." "It was not intended to be." He looked back at her. "It is the most frightened I have ever been." Rory set the mugs down. The little click of ceramic on the counter sounded enormous. She crossed the room. Ptolemy shot off the armchair and vanished under the desk. She stopped a foot from Lucien and looked up — five foot six to his five eleven, close enough to see that the butterfly stitches were his own work, uneven at the third one where he'd have been doing it left-handed in a mirror. "I'm still angry," she said. "You should be." "Forty-three days, Lucien. I sat in that stairwell on the eleventh night with a bottle of Silas's worst gin and I decided I was done with you. I made a whole speech. I rehearsed it in the shower." "I would like to hear it." "You would not." She reached up and, very lightly, touched the edge of the cut on his jaw. He didn't flinch, but the breath went out of him in a way that had nothing to do with pain. "Who did this?" "Someone who will not do it again." "That's not an answer." "No," he agreed. "It is a gift. Take it." She let her hand fall to his lapel instead and closed her fist in the wet wool, and for a moment neither of them did anything at all. The rain went on. Downstairs someone laughed in the curry house and a pan clattered and the ordinary world carried on being the ordinary world one floor below. "If you do it again," Rory said, "if you trade one more piece of me for time, I will not be in a stairwell with gin. I will be gone. Cardiff, Dublin, somewhere with no doors you can find." "There is no such place." "Then I'll invent one." The corner of his mouth moved. "You probably would." "Say you understand." "I understand." He lifted his hand and, slowly enough that she could have stopped it at any point in the journey, tucked a strand of black hair behind her ear. His thumb rested against her cheekbone. "Aurora. I am very bad at this." "At what?" "At being a man who has nothing to sell." His fingers trembled, once, and steadied. "I do not know what to offer you." Rory pulled him down by the lapel. It was nothing like the alley. The alley had been a lightning strike, all rain and adrenaline and the reek of the restaurant bins. This was slower, and worse, and better — his hand sliding to the back of her neck, the cold of his rain-damp shirt against her wrists, the small ragged sound he made against her mouth that she suspected he'd have paid money to take back. She broke it off first, on purpose, and rested her forehead against his sternum while she got her breathing under control. "That isn't forgiveness," she said into his shirt. "No." "It's a deposit." Lucien Moreau laughed — a real one, surprised out of him, rusty as an unused hinge. "Then I shall have to be very careful with your credit." "Sit down," Rory said, letting go of him. "You're bleeding on Eva's floor, and if she comes back and finds demon blood on the Latin she'll skin us both. I'll make the tea. Then you're going to tell me the other three reasons." He sat, in the one chair not buried in paper, and watched her with both his terrible eyes as she filled the kettle again. "The second reason," he said, "is that Malphora's broker is dead." The tap ran over the rim of the kettle. Rory shut it off very slowly. "And the third?" "The third," said Lucien, "is that someone has begun using your name in rooms you have never been in." He picked up the cane, laid it across his knees, and folded his hands on it. "And I do not think it is a coincidence that the name they are using is Malphora's."
created_at"2026-07-25T13:47:31.906Z" 7/25/2026, 1:47:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His fingers trembled once [once]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.028
64.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count6
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"precisely"
2"very"
3"quickly"
4"lightly"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1822
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"calculate"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"calculate"
4"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1831
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1115
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Moreau2
Lucien6
Eva2
Prague1
Rory11
Bolted1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Prague"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he always did, only more so"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1831
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"see that the"
1"enough that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean23.18
std24.46
cv1.055
sampleLengths
05
142
228
34
443
521
67
72
842
97
102
112
1216
1373
1464
156
1634
174
1811
195
2034
216
22104
236
2449
256
2666
274
284
2914
3035
317
3210
331
3454
351
3653
3710
38104
393
4056
419
425
4325
4470
453
4620
4715
4858
495
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was allowed"
1"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was standing"
1"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences134
ratio0.067
matches
0"Rory worked it with the heel of her hand, the chain still hooked, and cracked the door four inches — enough to see who was standing in the stairwell that smelled permanently of cumin and frying onions from the curry house below."
1"Then she undid the bolt, unhooked the chain, and opened the door properly, because standing in a hallway arguing with a piece of wood was undignified and because — she was honest enough with herself to admit it in the half-second before the hinges swung — she wanted to see his face."
2"That was the thing about Lucien; he never crowded a doorway."
3"He came in the way he did everything — carefully, taking up less space than his shoulders suggested he should."
4"He stood among Eva's books with his hands loose at his sides, and he took it — that was the unbearable part, he simply stood there and took it with those mismatched eyes steady on her face, and did not offer her a single thing to hate."
5"For the first time he looked away — out at the black window, at the rain making orange smears of the streetlights along Brick Lane."
6"She stopped a foot from Lucien and looked up — five foot six to his five eleven, close enough to see that the butterfly stitches were his own work, uneven at the third one where he'd have been doing it left-handed in a mirror."
7"This was slower, and worse, and better — his hand sliding to the back of her neck, the cold of his rain-damp shirt against her wrists, the small ragged sound he made against her mouth that she suspected he'd have paid money to take back."
8"Lucien Moreau laughed — a real one, surprised out of him, rusty as an unused hinge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1110
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03873873873873874
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.016216216216216217
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean13.66
std14.62
cv1.07
sampleLengths
05
142
22
317
49
54
62
710
831
910
1011
117
122
1313
146
1523
167
172
182
192
206
218
2221
2352
2417
2511
2636
276
2812
2911
307
314
324
3311
345
354
3621
379
386
3920
4036
415
4211
4332
446
4518
462
4714
4815
496
44.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3283582089552239
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners44
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then she undid the bolt,"
ratio0.014
72.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences73
matches
0"She shut the door."
1"She simply closed it, turned"
2"she said to the door"
3"She pressed her thumb into"
4"He didn't step forward"
5"He waited to be given"
6"He held her gaze."
7"He came in the way"
8"He set the cane against"
9"She crossed to the kitchen"
10"She turned around."
11"He hadn't moved."
12"He stood among Eva's books"
13"His voice had gone quiet"
14"He looked back at her"
15"She crossed the room."
16"She stopped a foot from"
17"She reached up and, very"
18"He didn't flinch, but the"
19"She let her hand fall"
ratio0.37
35.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences73
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory worked it with the"
2"An ivory cane handle resting"
3"She shut the door."
4"That would have been a"
5"She simply closed it, turned"
6"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
7"Rory looked down at the"
8"The cat looked up at"
9"she said to the door"
10"She pressed her thumb into"
11"Lucien Moreau looked terrible, which"
12"The platinum hair was slicked"
13"He didn't step forward"
14"That was the thing about"
15"He waited to be given"
16"He held her gaze."
17"The amber eye caught the"
18"Rory stepped back from the"
19"He came in the way"
ratio0.849
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory worked it with the heel of her hand, the chain still hooked, and cracked the door four inches — enough to see who was standing in the stairwell that smelle…"
1"The cat looked up at her with the flat gold judgement of something that had never once had to make a difficult decision."
2"He set the cane against the shoe rack, peeled off his gloves finger by finger, and stopped dead in the middle of Eva's front room, which was less a room than a …"
3"Post-its in four colours climbing the wall above the desk in a pattern that made sense to precisely one person on earth, and that person was currently in Prague…"
4"He stood among Eva's books with his hands loose at his sides, and he took it — that was the unbearable part, he simply stood there and took it with those mismat…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.389
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.028
82.2414%