| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He crouched — carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.338 | | leniency | 0.676 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.029 | |
| 79.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1486 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1486 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "absolutely" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tended to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 80 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1491 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "r" | | 1 | "Mon dieu." | | 2 | "stay away from me, Aurora." | | 3 | "coward." | | 4 | "walked off" | | 5 | "Bien sûr," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 859 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Faizel | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Aldgate | 1 | | October | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Victorian | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Rory | 5 | | Recalibrated | 1 | | British | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Frenchman | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1491 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "chose that moment" | | 1 | "let that sit" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 22.59 | | std | 23.38 | | cv | 1.035 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 102 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 57 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 95.65% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "been trusted" | | 1 | "been told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | 0 | "was counting" | | 1 | "was lying" |
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| 18.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "She was proud of that, later — she simply closed it, calmly, the way you'd close a cupboard on something that had started to smell." | | 1 | "\"I would not dream of it.\" He came in past her, and the hall filled with him — rain, cold wool, that expensive vetiver-and-smoke smell that she had spent three months failing to un-remember." | | 2 | "\"Ah.\" He crouched — carefully, cane braced, the way he always did, one hand flat to the floorboards — and offered two fingers to Ptolemy, who accepted them like a knighthood." | | 3 | "He never argued the point when you were right; he simply agreed, elegantly, and left you standing there holding your anger like a bag of shopping with the handle gone." | | 4 | "He waited — and that was the thing that undid her, that he waited, that after everything he stood there in a cramped hallway stacked with other people's books and let it be her choice." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 839 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03814064362336114 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009535160905840286 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 12.97 | | std | 13.59 | | cv | 1.048 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 53.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stood in the" | | 1 | "Somewhere below them, the curry" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 36.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't Faizel." | | 1 | "It made the platinum of" | | 2 | "She shut the door." | | 3 | "She was proud of that," | | 4 | "She looked down at him." | | 5 | "He looked up at her." | | 6 | "She opened it." | | 7 | "He came in past her," | | 8 | "He had to turn sideways" | | 9 | "He crouched — carefully, cane" | | 10 | "She let that sit." | | 11 | "He turned the cane once" | | 12 | "His voice went dry and" | | 13 | "She watched it land, watched" | | 14 | "He never argued the point" | | 15 | "she said, Her throat closed" | | 16 | "She waited it out." | | 17 | "He said it like a" | | 18 | "She looked up sharply." | | 19 | "He said it very evenly," |
| | ratio | 0.458 | |
| 53.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt always stuck." | | 1 | "Rory had to lift the" | | 2 | "It wasn't Faizel." | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "It made the platinum of" | | 5 | "Nobody said her name like" | | 6 | "She shut the door." | | 7 | "She was proud of that," | | 8 | "The creak of a floorboard" | | 9 | "Something in his voice went" | | 10 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to" | | 11 | "She looked down at him." | | 12 | "He looked up at her." | | 13 | "The traitor started purring in" | | 14 | "She opened it." | | 15 | "He came in past her," | | 16 | "He had to turn sideways" | | 17 | "Rory folded her arms and" | | 18 | "He crouched — carefully, cane" | | 19 | "She let that sit." |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell with rain still beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane hooked over his forearm, one amber eye an…" | | 1 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to wind out from beneath a tower of Eva's grimoires, tail up, and shove his tabby skull against Rory's ankle with the entitlement of a…" | | 2 | "In the narrow hall he was too close, and he knew it, and he didn't step back, and she hated the small mean part of herself that was glad." | | 3 | "And Lucien Moreau, fixer, information broker, the Frenchman who had never once in her hearing done anything so undignified as smile properly, smiled properly." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He came in, and the hall filled with him — rain, cold wool, that expensive vetiver-and-smoke smell that she had spent three months failing to un-remember" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 68 | | tagDensity | 0.191 | | leniency | 0.382 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |