"The air came up at her thick and warm, smelling of iron filings, wet chalk, and underneath that something floral and wrong — saffron, maybe, or the burnt-sugar reek of a fairground."
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"Her watch — worn leather strap, the buckle hole she'd used so long it had stretched oval — read 4:12 a.m."
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"Dozens of them, hundreds — small circles pressed into the film, in ranks, in pairs, four to a set, the unmistakable signature of trestle legs."
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"Goods had been sold — she could see a spill of something granular and violet-black glittering at the foot of the tiled wall, and a scatter of what looked like fish scales, and a coin, and she'd have all of it bagged."
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"Three years ago, a lock-up in Silvertown, and DS Morris walking through a doorway ahead of her, and the doorway had been a doorway and then it had been — and the report had said *absconded*, and the pension board had said *insufficient evidence of death*, and the air in that lock-up had smelled exactly like this."
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"The needle held its bearing like a compass should — steady, patient, absolute — except that it was aimed at the tiled wall on the eastbound side, at a blank stretch of cream and oxblood tile between two rusted advertising frames."
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"At floor level, where the tile met the platform, the dust had been swept — but the broom's arcs stopped eight inches short of the wall, as though whoever wielded it had not wanted to get closer."
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"Below her, the shaft dropped away into a throat of cream tile gone the colour of nicotine, and at the bottom the arc lights the scene techs had rigged threw eve…"
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"Twenty-nine, all forward momentum, the kind of officer who arrived at conclusions the way other people arrived at bus stops."
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"The platform was a hundred and thirty feet of curving tunnel, and the body lay near the middle of it, half on its side, one arm folded beneath as if it had been…"
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"His eyes were open too, and there was nothing in them, which was ordinary, and no petechiae, which was not, given the bruising she could see rising around the t…"
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"The face wasn't a compass face at all: instead of the cardinal points, someone had cut fine, deliberate marks into the metal, spidery little figures that folded…"