Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRH6VB2YY537M2BP7R4P47

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Duration:
54.0s
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$0.085250
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks stood in a ring, seven of them, and every one had died standing up. Rory counted them twice because the number kept sliding. Bark like grey stone, trunks split down the middle as though something had walked out of each one and never bothered closing the door behind it. Between the trees, February had stopped. She could see it stop — frost on the grass to her side of the ring, and past it, three feet away, cowslips and bluebells and something with petals the colour of raw liver, all of it nodding in a wind that wasn't touching her hair. "Right," Eva said. "So we're not doing this." "We're doing this." "Rory." "She said the stones, she said dusk, she said bring no iron." Rory patted her jacket pockets, coming up with keys, and hesitated. "Are keys iron?" "Brass," Nyx murmured. They'd come out of the shadow under the nearest oak the way water comes out of a cloth, wringing themselves upright until the silhouette had shoulders. Violet light where eyes belonged. "Steel, likely. Leave them in the leaf litter. Nothing here wants your Vauxhall." "It's a Corsa." "Nothing here wants that either." Eva laughed — one short, ugly bark of a laugh, the kind that comes out of people right before they cry — and then Rory stepped between two of the oaks and the sound cut off like a phone dropping a call. The cold went. That was the first thing. Not warmth exactly, more the absence of any opinion about temperature, air that sat on the skin without weight. The second thing was the light. Above her the sky had gone the wrong colours in the wrong order: a low band of green over the treeline, then rose, then a deep drowned blue with no stars in it at all, and something moving through that blue very slowly, too large to be a bird and too silent to be a plane. The third thing was the grass. It leaned toward her feet. "Eva." Her own voice came back to her flat, no echo, as if the clearing had swallowed the edges of it. "Eva, come through, it's—" Eva came through with her arms crossed tight over her chest and stopped dead. Her mouth opened. Nothing came out of it. "Yeah," Rory said. The grove ran maybe forty yards across, and Rory knew — the way you know the shape of your own bedroom in the dark — that it was bigger inside than the ring allowed. Wildflowers grew in drifts and spirals, and the spirals were deliberate; she could see the pattern of them from where she stood, the way you see a face in a crowd. Moss climbed the standing stones in letters. Not letters she could read. Letters all the same, with the confidence of letters, curling up the granite and stopping neatly at the top. "Don't step on the white ones," Nyx said behind her. Eva froze mid-stride, heel hovering. "Why." "Because they were something else recently." "That's not an answer, that's a—" Eva looked down. Under her boot, a cluster of small white blooms had turned their faces up. Each one had a dark centre, and each dark centre had a ring of paler dark around it, and Rory's stomach turned over as she recognised what she was looking at. Eva put her foot down somewhere else. Very carefully. They went in deeper. The ground rose, which it shouldn't have — Richmond Park was flat as a plate out here, Rory had cycled it a hundred times — and as they climbed, the noise started. Not birdsong. Something like birdsong that had learned the tune by ear and got the intervals slightly wrong, coming from three directions, answering itself. Water somewhere too. Rory turned her head to place it and the sound moved. "How long've we been in?" Eva asked. "Four minutes." "Feels longer." "It is longer," Nyx said. They walked without disturbing anything, and Rory noticed they'd gone solid — properly solid, boot-shaped depressions in the moss — which meant they wanted to be. That worried her more than the sky. "Outside, it might be Tuesday. It might be the same breath you took at the stones. Do not count. Counting is how people lose thirty years and a wife." "Cheerful." "Accurate." At the top of the rise the trees opened and Rory stopped so suddenly Eva walked into her back. A pool sat in a hollow, ten feet across, perfectly round. No stream fed it and none left it. The water was black and utterly still, and it held the sky — but not the sky above them. In the water it was noon. Hard blue, high white cloud, and a sun sitting fat and yellow at the top, and when Rory crouched at the edge her own face didn't appear in it at all. "Rory." "I see it." "Your face isn't—" "I said I see it." She sat back on her heels. Her hands had gone damp. At her throat the Heartstone hung cold as a coin, and she took a strange comfort in that; whatever this place was, it wasn't Hel, it had no door down. "Nyx. Is it safe to touch?" Nyx considered the pool for a long moment. "Safe. Rude." "Rude how?" "You would be putting your hand in someone's afternoon." Eva made a small sound and sat down hard on a stone. "I want to go home." "You don't." Rory said it gently, because it was true, and because she'd seen Eva's face in the last thirty seconds — the way she kept turning her head to catch the flowers moving, the way her hand had gone out to a hanging vine without her deciding it. Wonder looked a lot like nausea from the outside. Rory had learned that about herself in a stairwell in Cardiff, running from something with too many joints, laughing. Past the pool the wildflowers thinned into a colonnade of birch, white bark so bright it made the eye ache, and Rory walked it with one hand out, brushing trunks. Each one hummed faintly under her palm. Different notes. She went four trees along before she understood the notes made a phrase, and that the phrase came out backwards, and that she'd started walking to its rhythm without deciding to. She stopped. Lifted her hand off the bark. "There," Nyx said. At the end of the colonnade, half-buried, a doorframe. Just the frame — moonsilver-pale wood, or stone pretending to be wood, standing upright in the moss with grass grown thick through where a threshold should be. Nothing on the other side but more birches. And yet the air inside the frame was doing something: a slow shimmer, like heat off tarmac, and through it the birches on the far side stood in autumn, gold-leaved, dropping. Eva came up beside her. Neither of them spoke for a while. "That's the Veil, isn't it," Eva said at last. "That's what they mean. That's an actual—" "Not a rift." Nyx's whisper had gone thin. "A seam. Someone stitched here, once, and did it well. Do not step through it, either of you. Not tonight. Not on a whim." Rory looked at the gold leaves falling on the other side of nothing, and at the frost-free grass under her boots, and found she'd been holding her breath for so long her ribs hurt. "Isolde," she said, loud, to the trees. "We came. Where are you?" The humming birches went quiet, all at once, like a room turning to look.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:48:14.585Z" 7/25/2026, 1:48:14 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.049
64.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
6
adverb"utterly"
count1
7
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
5"perfectly"
6"utterly"
7"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"echo"
3"stomach"
4"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1068
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
February1
Rory15
Nyx6
Eva12
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Hel1
Wonder1
Cardiff1
persons
0"February"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Eva"
4"Heartstone"
5"Wonder"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.798
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Something like birdsong that had learned the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1267
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.86
std28.58
cv1.105
sampleLengths
016
187
28
33
41
526
647
73
85
942
1089
1111
1225
1322
143
1596
1610
176
186
1954
209
2174
227
232
242
2567
261
271
2819
2975
301
313
323
3352
3410
352
369
3717
3877
3970
408
413
4275
4312
4416
4532
4634
4712
4814
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs171
matches
0"wasn't touching"
1"was looking"
2"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences103
ratio0.097
matches
0"She could see it stop — frost on the grass to her side of the ring, and past it, three feet away, cowslips and bluebells and something with petals the colour of raw liver, all of it nodding in a wind that wasn't touching her hair."
1"Eva laughed — one short, ugly bark of a laugh, the kind that comes out of people right before they cry — and then Rory stepped between two of the oaks and the sound cut off like a phone dropping a call."
2"The grove ran maybe forty yards across, and Rory knew — the way you know the shape of your own bedroom in the dark — that it was bigger inside than the ring allowed."
3"Wildflowers grew in drifts and spirals, and the spirals were deliberate; she could see the pattern of them from where she stood, the way you see a face in a crowd."
4"The ground rose, which it shouldn't have — Richmond Park was flat as a plate out here, Rory had cycled it a hundred times — and as they climbed, the noise started."
5"They walked without disturbing anything, and Rory noticed they'd gone solid — properly solid, boot-shaped depressions in the moss — which meant they wanted to be."
6"The water was black and utterly still, and it held the sky — but not the sky above them."
7"At her throat the Heartstone hung cold as a coin, and she took a strange comfort in that; whatever this place was, it wasn't Hel, it had no door down."
8"\"You don't.\" Rory said it gently, because it was true, and because she'd seen Eva's face in the last thirty seconds — the way she kept turning her head to catch the flowers moving, the way her hand had gone out to a hanging vine without her deciding it."
9"Just the frame — moonsilver-pale wood, or stone pretending to be wood, standing upright in the moss with grass grown thick through where a threshold should be."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1062
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"solid, boot-shaped depressions"
1"Hard blue, high white cloud,"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03389830508474576
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011299435028248588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.3
std11.95
cv0.972
sampleLengths
016
19
226
36
446
53
65
73
81
923
103
113
1226
135
1413
153
165
1742
183
195
2019
216
2256
236
245
2521
264
2714
283
295
303
3134
3231
337
345
3519
3610
375
381
396
409
4114
4231
437
442
454
4632
472
4822
493
89.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5631067961165048
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners58
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Just the frame — moonsilver-pale"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences67
matches
0"She could see it stop"
1"They'd come out of the"
2"It leaned toward her feet."
3"Her own voice came back"
4"Her mouth opened."
5"They went in deeper."
6"They walked without disturbing anything,"
7"She sat back on her"
8"Her hands had gone damp."
9"She went four trees along"
10"she said, loud, to the"
ratio0.164
71.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences67
matches
0"The oaks stood in a"
1"Rory counted them twice because"
2"Bark like grey stone, trunks"
3"She could see it stop"
4"Rory patted her jacket pockets,"
5"They'd come out of the"
6"Violet light where eyes belonged."
7"Eva laughed — one short,"
8"The cold went."
9"That was the first thing."
10"The second thing was the"
11"The third thing was the"
12"It leaned toward her feet."
13"Her own voice came back"
14"Eva came through with her"
15"Her mouth opened."
16"Nothing came out of it."
17"The grove ran maybe forty"
18"Wildflowers grew in drifts and"
19"Moss climbed the standing stones"
ratio0.776
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Bark like grey stone, trunks split down the middle as though something had walked out of each one and never bothered closing the door behind it."
1"She could see it stop — frost on the grass to her side of the ring, and past it, three feet away, cowslips and bluebells and something with petals the colour of…"
2"Something like birdsong that had learned the tune by ear and got the intervals slightly wrong, coming from three directions, answering itself."
3"They walked without disturbing anything, and Rory noticed they'd gone solid — properly solid, boot-shaped depressions in the moss — which meant they wanted to b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.049
85.2140%