Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRJBF1QCVBYWK36P5ZJ0QV

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and I had to shoulder the door to get it open. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with his cane hooked over one wrist and blood on his cuff. "Rory." "No." I got the door halfway shut before the ivory handle wedged itself in the gap. He didn't push. He never pushed. He simply left the cane there like a bookmark and waited, and the cumin-thick air of the stairwell curled between us, and somewhere below the curry house radio played something with too much bass. "Five minutes," he said. "You had five minutes in March. You used them to lie to me." "I used them to keep you alive. The lie was incidental." "That's a lovely line. Did you practise it in the cab?" One corner of his mouth moved. The amber eye caught the bulb on the landing and glowed like a struck match; the black one gave me nothing, the way it never did. Thirty-two years old and dressed for a funeral he hadn't been invited to. Charcoal wool. Silk tie the colour of dried wine. And that cuff, stiff and dark and unmistakable. "Whose is it?" I asked. "Not mine." "That's not an answer, Luc." "It's the only one you'll like." I stepped back. I told myself it was because he'd bleed on Eva's stair carpet and she'd never forgive me, and not because my pulse had done something humiliating the moment I heard that accent flatten my name into two syllables it didn't deserve. He came in. He always came into a room as if he'd bought it and was deciding whether to keep the fittings. Eva's flat did not accommodate him. Books stacked to the height of my hip on every flat surface, a card table drowning under photocopied grimoires, a mug of cold tea with a saucer for a lid. Ptolemy uncoiled from the radiator, took one look at Lucien, and flowed under the sofa like spilled water. "Even the cat," I said. "Animals have excellent instincts and terrible manners." He set the cane against the bookcase. "You've moved." "I'm staying. There's a difference." "Above Silas' bar isn't safe any more." "Nowhere's safe. You told me that. It was the one true thing you said all spring." He turned then, and the flat felt smaller. He was only five inches taller than me and it never mattered; the man occupied space in a way that had nothing to do with the space. "Sit down," he said. "Get out." "Aurora." "Don't." My voice cracked in the middle and I hated it. "Don't do the full name thing. It works and I know it works and I'd like the dignity of pretending it doesn't." Silence. The bass thumped up through the floorboards. He looked at the card table, at Eva's notes, at the same three words she'd written and circled and written again, and I saw him read them and I saw him decide not to mention them, and that decision moved across his face like weather. "Say it," I said. "Say what?" "Whatever you came to say instead of the thing you actually came to say. Let's get the first one out of the way." "Three people are dead in Whitechapel." He said it the way other men said the football results. "Since Thursday. Human, all three. Throats intact, hearts intact, and something has been taken out of them that doesn't show on a coroner's table." "And you want the girl who does noodle deliveries on a moped." "I want the girl who found the Thornwood door when four of my people walked past it twice." He pulled off the ruined cuff link and set it on a stack of books, precise as a chess move. "You see the shapes of things. It's rare and it's inconvenient and it has been keeping me awake." "The murders have." "Non." He didn't look up. "You have." The radiator ticked. I focused on it because focusing on him was a mistake I'd made before, in a corridor under the Barbican, with his hand flat against the wall by my head and neither of us breathing. "You disappeared for eleven weeks," I said. "Yes." "Not a call. Not a note. Silas said you'd gone to Marseille." "Silas talks." "He said your father sent for you." The muscle in his jaw shifted. That was all. With Lucien, that was a scream. "I don't discuss Avaros." "No, you discuss nothing, that's the whole business model." I crossed my arms because my hands wanted something to do and they'd made poor choices in the past. "You knew what I was walking into in that cellar. You knew, and you let me go in blind, and then you stood in the doorway afterwards with your handkerchief out like a gentleman." "You'd have refused." "That was mine to refuse!" "Yes." He said it so quietly it stopped me. "It was. I took it. I'd take it again." "That's not an apology." "I'm not offering one. I'm telling you what I am, so that when you decide, you decide honestly." "Decide what?" He crossed the room. Two steps, three, and the books didn't dare get in his way, and then he was close enough that I could smell him under the wool: bergamot, cold iron, and something faintly scorched, like a match a second after it goes out. He didn't touch me. That was the worst of it. He stood there with his hands at his sides and let the distance do all the work. "Whether you want me at your door," he said, "or on the other side of it. I'll respect either. But I'd like to stop guessing." My wrist ached. The old crescent scar, that stupid little moon I'd earned falling off a wall in Cardiff at seven, throbbed like a warning. It had been doing that for weeks. I hadn't told anyone. "You're bleeding on Eva's floor," I said. "It isn't my blood." "Whose?" "A man who thought he knew where you were living." The bass stopped downstairs. In the sudden hush I could hear his breathing, and mine, and the small greedy silence between the two. "Luc." "Mm." "Why are your hands shaking?" He looked down at them as though they belonged to a stranger and had offended him personally. "They aren't." "They are." "He wasn't alone," Lucien said. Something in my chest went cold and clean, like water. I reached past him for the cane, and my fingers closed over ivory that was warmer than it had any right to be, and he let me take it without a word. "How many?" I said. "I counted four in the alley behind the curry house." "You counted four and you came upstairs?" "I came upstairs," he said, "because they weren't looking for me." The name went through the wall then. Not shouted. Sung, low and wrong and in a language that made the window glass sweat. Malphora. Ptolemy screamed under the sofa. And the top deadbolt, the good one, the one Eva had paid a locksmith forty pounds to fit, tore out of the frame and skittered across the floorboards to my feet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount768
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
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One1
Eva4
Lucien4
Silence1
Barbican1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"One"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1203
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"heard that accent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean16.04
std16.89
cv1.053
sampleLengths
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31
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54
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711
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962
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112
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136
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1522
1654
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343
357
3638
377
381
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402
417
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453
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100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"been invited"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"was deciding"
91.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences111
ratio0.018
matches
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100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount770
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
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100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
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std10.5
cv0.969
sampleLengths
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374
382
391
4011
4122
421
437
4445
454
462
4723
4817
4924
68.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences52
matches
0"I got the door halfway"
1"He didn't push."
2"He never pushed."
3"He simply left the cane"
4"I stepped back."
5"I told myself it was"
6"He came in."
7"He always came into a"
8"He set the cane against"
9"He turned then, and the"
10"He was only five inches"
11"My voice cracked in the"
12"He looked at the card"
13"He said it the way"
14"He pulled off the ruined"
15"He didn't look up"
16"I focused on it because"
17"I crossed my arms because"
18"He said it so quietly"
19"He crossed the room."
ratio0.519
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences52
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"I got the door halfway"
3"He didn't push."
4"He never pushed."
5"He simply left the cane"
6"The amber eye caught the"
7"Silk tie the colour of"
8"I stepped back."
9"I told myself it was"
10"He came in."
11"He always came into a"
12"Eva's flat did not accommodate"
13"Books stacked to the height"
14"Ptolemy uncoiled from the radiator,"
15"He set the cane against"
16"He turned then, and the"
17"He was only five inches"
18"My voice cracked in the"
19"The bass thumped up through"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.21
leniency0.419
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2765%