Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRKR9E9RFXQFNW5WR7D695

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Duration:
49.6s
Cost:
$0.072185
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and Rory had to lean her shoulder into the door to get it to turn. She'd expected the kid from downstairs with the wrong order again. Vindaloo for a flat that ate nothing but toast. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain in his eyelashes. "You've added a lock," he said. "You've added a bruise." She didn't move out of the doorway. There was a purple bloom along his jaw, half-hidden by the collar he'd turned up, and the ivory handle of his cane sat crooked in his grip, like he'd been holding it a different way. "Three locks, actually. Two of them since April." "Since April." He let that sit. Water dripped from the hem of his coat onto Eva's welcome mat, which said GO AWAY in curling script. "May I come in, or shall we do this where the neighbours can enjoy it?" Ptolemy came down the hall at a trot, tail up, and wound himself around Lucien's ankles like they were old friends. Traitor. Rory looked at the cat, then at the puddle spreading under his shoes, then stepped back and let the door swing. "Wipe your feet." He did. Meticulously. That was the thing about him — he'd murder a man in a cellar and still knock the mud off before he crossed your threshold. The flat swallowed him. Eva's research stacks rose off every flat surface, a paper city, and Lucien had to angle sideways past a tower of Latin folios to reach the kitchen counter. The curry house below was doing something with cumin and burnt onion; the smell came up through the floorboards, through the walls, and had lived in Rory's clothes for eight months. "Charming," he said. "Eva's out." "I know. She's at the Whitechapel archive until midnight. She books the reading room under her mother's name, which is—" he set the cane against the counter, "—sweet, but not clever." "You checked." "I always check." He shrugged out of the coat and looked for somewhere to put it. There was nowhere. He folded it over his arm instead, and that small defeat did more to soften her than anything he could have said. Rory filled the kettle because her hands needed a job. "Say it, then." "Say what?" "Whatever you came to say. You don't cross London in the rain for tea, and you don't come here at all, because you told me — and I want to get this right — you told me that the safest thing I could do was pretend I'd never heard your name." "I did say that." "You said it in an alley off Berwick Street with my blood on your shirt." "Yes." His jaw worked. The bruise moved with it. "I remember the shirt." The kettle started its low complaint. Rory turned to face him and set her back against the counter, arms crossed, because she'd learned in the last eight months that if she gave him her profile he'd talk to the side of her head all night and never say the true thing. "I sat in this flat for three weeks," she said. "I jumped every time the stairs creaked. Eva put wards on the windows that made the glass hum. And you were in a wine bar on Greek Street the whole time, Lucien. Silas told me. Tuesdays and Fridays, corner table, that awful Sancerre you pretend to like." "It's not awful." "You let me think you were dead." "I let you think I was gone. There is a difference, and you are clever enough to know it." "Don't." She pointed at him, one finger, steady. "Don't do the thing where you compliment my intelligence so I'll stop shouting." "You're not shouting." His mismatched eyes moved over her — the amber one caught the kitchen bulb and threw it back, the black one gave nothing. "That's rather worse." The kettle clicked off. Neither of them touched it. "There was a man," Lucien said, "who wanted to know who you were. What you could do. Whether you'd be missed." He said it flatly, an accountant reading a column. "He asked me. He paid, in fact, and I took the money, because a man like that gets suspicious when you refuse it. Then I gave him a name that wasn't yours and an address in Deptford that hasn't existed since the Blitz, and I spent April and May and most of June making certain he stayed interested in the wrong Aurora." Rory's throat closed. She got it open again. "And you couldn't have told me." "If you had known, you would have gone looking for him." "That's—" It was true. She hated that it was true. "That's my decision to make." "Yes." He picked at a thread on his cuff. "That is the part I've come to concede." Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and sat between them like a chaperone. Rory scratched the cat's ear because it was easier than looking up. "Where is he now? The man." "Avaros, I imagine. Or wherever they file the pieces." Lucien touched his own jaw, absently, the way you check a tooth. "He objected to being lied to. Loudly. On Thursday." "Is that—" she gestured at the bruise. "That is the cheerful half." "Sit down." "I'm fine." "Sit down, Lucien, or I'll swear at you in Welsh and you'll pretend not to understand it." He sat. She had to move a stack of grimoires off the kitchen chair to make room, and when she came back with the first-aid tin from under the sink he'd gone still and obedient in a way that unsettled her more than blood would have. She stood over him. Tilted his chin with two fingers to catch the light. His skin was warm. Warmer than a person's. "You've split it," she said. "Here. Along the bone." "It'll close." "It'll scar." "I have a number of those." "Hold still." She wet the gauze. He didn't flinch when she pressed it, which was its own kind of showing off, and she was close enough now to smell the rain in his hair and the cedar underneath it, and the fact that she noticed made her furious. "You could have written," she said quietly. "Two lines. *Alive. Don't look for me.* I'd have burned it and slept." "I wrote nine." Her hand stopped. "Nine letters." His voice didn't change. "They're in a drawer in Marylebone. I read them the next morning and each one said the same thing underneath, which was *come and find me*, and that would have killed you." He caught her wrist then — the left one, thumb landing exactly over the small crescent scar, the way it always had, like his hand had memorised it. "I was not willing to be the reason. Not again." She should have pulled away. She counted three floorboard creaks from downstairs, and the extractor fan in the curry house kitchen, and her own pulse under his thumb, and she didn't pull away. "You're an arrogant, manipulative, catastrophically French coward," she said. "Yes." "And you still haven't said why you're here tonight." He let go of her wrist. Straightened his shoulders inside the ruined suit. Looked up at her with the amber eye and the black one both. "Because he asked about you, Aurora," Lucien said. "And before he stopped asking, he told me who sent him."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.033
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1237
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1241
ratio0.007
matches
0"Alive. Don't look for me."
1"come and find me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount710
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Moreau1
Water1
Eva2
Lucien6
Latin1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Water"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Latin"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1241
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences101
matches
0"let that sit"
1"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.4
std21.13
cv0.988
sampleLengths
044
111
26
354
440
543
63
728
863
93
102
1131
122
1341
1413
152
1651
174
1815
1913
2051
2157
223
237
2419
2521
2629
279
2892
2914
3011
3115
3217
3324
346
3530
367
375
382
392
4017
4160
428
439
442
452
466
4748
4820
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs126
matches
0"was doing"
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"That was the thing about him — he'd murder a man in a cellar and still knock the mud off before he crossed your threshold."
1"The curry house below was doing something with cumin and burnt onion; the smell came up through the floorboards, through the walls, and had lived in Rory's clothes for eight months."
2"\"I know. She's at the Whitechapel archive until midnight. She books the reading room under her mother's name, which is—\" he set the cane against the counter, \"—sweet, but not clever.\""
3"\"You're not shouting.\" His mismatched eyes moved over her — the amber one caught the kitchen bulb and threw it back, the black one gave nothing."
4"\"They're in a drawer in Marylebone. I read them the next morning and each one said the same thing underneath, which was *come and find me*, and that would have killed you.\" He caught her wrist then — the left one, thumb landing exactly over the small crescent scar, the way it always had, like his hand had memorised it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount639
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02190923317683881
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004694835680751174
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean12.29
std13.06
cv1.063
sampleLengths
024
111
29
311
46
511
635
78
86
919
1015
1121
121
1321
143
152
161
1725
184
1928
2031
213
222
2331
242
2516
263
2722
2810
293
302
3151
324
3315
344
355
364
376
3845
3910
4047
413
427
4319
448
4513
4626
473
484
495
65.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.43564356435643564
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences53
matches
0"She'd expected the kid from"
1"She didn't move out of"
2"He let that sit"
3"he set the cane against"
4"He shrugged out of the"
5"He folded it over his"
6"His jaw worked"
7"She pointed at him, one"
8"His mismatched eyes moved over"
9"She got it open again."
10"It was true"
11"She hated that it was"
12"He picked at a thread"
13"she gestured at the bruise"
14"She had to move a"
15"She stood over him."
16"His skin was warm."
17"She wet the gauze"
18"He didn't flinch when she"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.491
16.60% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences53
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"She'd expected the kid from"
2"Vindaloo for a flat that"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"She didn't move out of"
5"He let that sit"
6"Water dripped from the hem"
7"Ptolemy came down the hall"
8"Rory looked at the cat,"
9"That was the thing about"
10"The flat swallowed him."
11"Eva's research stacks rose off"
12"The curry house below was"
13"he set the cane against"
14"He shrugged out of the"
15"He folded it over his"
16"Rory filled the kettle because"
17"His jaw worked"
18"The bruise moved with it."
19"The kettle started its low"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Water dripped from the hem of his coat onto Eva's welcome mat, which said GO AWAY in curling script."
1"She had to move a stack of grimoires off the kitchen chair to make room, and when she came back with the first-aid tin from under the sink he'd gone still and o…"
2"He didn't flinch when she pressed it, which was its own kind of showing off, and she was close enough now to smell the rain in his hair and the cedar underneath…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1700%