Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRMG8N277FKK2K417X4X5J

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.100200
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The frost gave out three steps past the oaks. Aurora felt it through her boots first — the crunch of December grass turning to something soft and giving, like walking onto a mattress. She stopped with one foot on either side of the line. Behind her heel, white rime and the black skeleton of Richmond Park in winter. In front of her toes, clover. Green clover, thick with bees. "Don't stand in the doorway," Nyx said. Their voice came from everywhere and nowhere, a draught under a door. "The stones don't like indecision." "The stones don't like—" Eva's teeth were still chattering from the walk. "Rory, the stones don't *like* things. Stones don't have opinions." Aurora stepped through. The cold peeled off her in one motion, like a coat lifted from her shoulders by someone standing behind. Warmth pressed in. Not summer warmth — no sun for it, the sky above the clearing was the deep bruised violet of nine at night in August — but the air held heat the way stone holds it, radiating up from the ground. She unzipped her jacket. Sweat sprang along her spine. "Oh," Eva said. She came through, and her breath stopped fogging mid-word. "Oh, that's—" "Yeah." The grove ran maybe forty metres across, ringed by seven oaks that weren't oaks so much as pillars that had once considered being oaks and lost interest halfway. Their bark spiralled. Wildflowers grew in bands of colour, foxglove and cornflower and something with petals like wet paper that Aurora had no name for, and they grew in *rings*, concentric, each ring a different bloom, as though someone had planted them with a compass. Aurora looked back. The gap between the two nearest standing stones showed a strip of the park — frozen bracken, the grey glimmer of a puddle, the far-off orange smear of the A308. It looked like a photograph propped against the air. She could see it. She could not hear it. No traffic. No aircraft descending into Heathrow, and there was always an aircraft descending into Heathrow. "Nyx. Sound doesn't come in." "Nothing comes in that isn't invited." The shadow slid across the clover without displacing it, a stain moving over cloth. In here their edges held better; Aurora could see the shape of shoulders, the long line of a coat that wasn't cloth. Violet points where eyes should sit. "Which is worth remembering when you consider going out." Eva turned in a slow circle, arms out. "There's no wind." "No." "But listen." She lifted a finger. They listened. Something moved in the flowers — a low continuous seething, thousands of small stems shifting against each other, rising and falling in long swells like breath. The grass leaned east. Then west. Nothing pushed it. "Right," Eva said. "Right. Great. Fine." Aurora crouched and put her palm flat to the ground. Warm. Not sun-warm. Blood-warm, twenty-two, twenty-three degrees, and under her hand a pulse she felt in the bones of her wrist rather than her skin — slow, a beat every four or five seconds, too deep and too patient to be anything with a heart she'd recognise. She didn't mention it. She stood, wiped her hand on her jeans, and checked her phone. "No signal?" "No clock." She turned the screen towards Eva. 88:88. The numbers didn't move. "Yours?" Eva pushed her sleeve back. Her watch — the cheap one with the second hand that ticked loud enough to annoy people on buses — had its second hand travelling backwards in a smooth glide, no ticks, gaining a full rotation while they watched. "I paid nine quid for this." "Then it owes you nothing." Nyx had drifted to the far edge of the clover ring. "Come. And step where I step." "You don't step. You *hover*." "Then step where I would step, if I were burdened with feet." They went deeper. Aurora hadn't expected deeper — from outside, the grove had looked like a clearing you could cross in twenty seconds. It kept unfolding. The oaks that had ringed the boundary stood behind them and also, somehow, ahead of them, and between them ran a path of flat pale stones set into the moss, each one worn hollow in the middle by feet. A lot of feet. Centuries of them. Aurora stopped at the sixth stone and knelt again. Scratches crowded its rim, cut into the surface with a knife or a nail: five vertical marks, then five more, then a diagonal through them. Tallies. They ran round the whole edge of the stone and doubled back over themselves, hundreds, the later ones scraped shallow and shaky. "Someone was counting." Nyx said nothing. "Counting what? Days?" "Whatever they had left to count." The shadow's voice thinned. "Time runs on a different gear in here. Some mortals sit down for an afternoon and stand up to find their grandchildren buried. Some spend a decade and walk out to a supper still warm on the table. There's no rule I've ever found. There's only a mood." Eva had gone very still. "How long have we been in?" "Eleven minutes," Aurora said. "By what?" "By counting." She held up her hand — she'd been tapping her thumb against her forefinger since the boundary, steady, a habit from long drives. "Eleven minutes and change, my time. Which might be nothing to do with anything, but it's something." "God, you're strange." "You asked me here." The path bent round a stand of birches with silver-white bark that carried faces in it. Not carved. Grown — the knots and lenticels had arranged themselves into eyes and open mouths, and as Aurora passed the nearest one, its bark eye *tracked* her, a slow sliding of pale wood, and closed. Eva made a small sound and grabbed the back of Aurora's jacket. "Don't touch them," Nyx said. "Don't speak to them. Above all, don't apologise to them." "Why would I apologise?" "Because you're British and you'll want to. Resist." Beyond the birches the ground dipped into a hollow, and in the hollow was water. A stream, three feet across, running clear over pebbles. Aurora watched it for four seconds before her stomach turned over. It ran uphill. Out of the dip, up the slope, over the lip of the rise and away between the trees, and where it went over the lip it made no sound at all, though it chattered happily enough down in the bowl. "Nyx." "I see it." "Is it safe?" "It's water." A pause. "It is also possibly a road. I'd advise against drinking a road." Eva laughed — one high, cracked note — and pressed her knuckles to her mouth. "This was in Richmond. This whole time. I've had picnics up there. I've had *Deliveroo* up there." "And something has been under it, having a very long thought." Nyx moved ahead, up the slope beside the climbing water. "Keep moving. If we stop long enough to be comfortable, it starts asking us for things." The flowers thickened as they climbed. Bells the colour of arterial blood hung from vines strung between trunks like party bunting, and each bell held a bead of liquid at its lip, and each bead caught light there was no source for. Aurora walked with her hands at her sides and her elbows in. Halfway up she felt heat bloom against her sternum. She stopped. Pulled the chain out from under her shirt. The Heartstone sat in her palm, and the crimson at its centre had woken — a slow throb of light, and warmth like a mug of tea through a jumper, building. Eva leaned in. "That was cold in the car." "I know." "It's supposed to do that near—" Eva's voice dropped. "Rory. It's supposed to do that near *Hel*." Aurora closed her fingers round the stone and looked up the slope, past the bunting of bells, to where the uphill stream vanished into a dark seam between two oaks that stood too close together. "Nyx," she said. "What's up there?"
created_at"2026-07-25T13:50:02.526Z" 7/25/2026, 1:50:02 PM
model"anthropic/claude-opus-5-20260723"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency4425
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time64048
tokens_prompt1763
tokens_completion2162
native_tokens_prompt2695
native_tokens_completion3469
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning217
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"end_turn"
service_tier"default"
usage0.1002
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"76cb4608-f48c-483d-8da8-9957fb44244e"
id"msg_011CdNtB3VJNqk7JNMAhoGY6"
is_byokfalse
latency1573
model_permaslug"anthropic/claude-opus-5-20260723"
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1784987402-EoYeYthGgftjCqxhqxPG"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1784987402-SkC1LUu3U05TbB3DE6AB"
upstream_id"msg_011CdNtB3VJNqk7JNMAhoGY6"
total_cost0.1002
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Amazon Bedrock"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"happily"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"happily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"stomach"
3"comfortable"
4"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch "
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1341
ratio0.004
matches
0"like"
1"rings"
2"hover"
3"tracked"
4"Deliveroo"
5"Hel"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1032
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
December1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora14
August1
Heathrow2
Eva11
Heartstone1
Nyx5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"August"
3"Heathrow"
globalScore0.822
windowScore0.833
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a photograph propped against"
1"looked like a clearing you could cross in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1341
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean22.35
std22.01
cv0.985
sampleLengths
09
160
224
322
43
571
614
71
873
967
105
1157
1211
131
146
1537
166
1757
1816
192
2014
2144
226
2322
245
2512
2665
277
2857
293
303
313
3258
3311
344
352
3642
373
384
3952
4012
4115
424
438
4435
4543
461
473
483
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs149
matches
0"were still chattering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences125
ratio0.096
matches
0"Aurora felt it through her boots first — the crunch of December grass turning to something soft and giving, like walking onto a mattress."
1"Not summer warmth — no sun for it, the sky above the clearing was the deep bruised violet of nine at night in August — but the air held heat the way stone holds it, radiating up from the ground."
2"The gap between the two nearest standing stones showed a strip of the park — frozen bracken, the grey glimmer of a puddle, the far-off orange smear of the A308."
3"In here their edges held better; Aurora could see the shape of shoulders, the long line of a coat that wasn't cloth."
4"Something moved in the flowers — a low continuous seething, thousands of small stems shifting against each other, rising and falling in long swells like breath."
5"Blood-warm, twenty-two, twenty-three degrees, and under her hand a pulse she felt in the bones of her wrist rather than her skin — slow, a beat every four or five seconds, too deep and too patient to be anything with a heart she'd recognise."
6"Her watch — the cheap one with the second hand that ticked loud enough to annoy people on buses — had its second hand travelling backwards in a smooth glide, no ticks, gaining a full rotation while they watched."
7"Aurora hadn't expected deeper — from outside, the grove had looked like a clearing you could cross in twenty seconds."
8"\"By counting.\" She held up her hand — she'd been tapping her thumb against her forefinger since the boundary, steady, a habit from long drives."
9"Grown — the knots and lenticels had arranged themselves into eyes and open mouths, and as Aurora passed the nearest one, its bark eye *tracked* her, a slow sliding of pale wood, and closed."
10"Eva laughed — one high, cracked note — and pressed her knuckles to her mouth."
11"The Heartstone sat in her palm, and the crimson at its centre had woken — a slow throb of light, and warmth like a mug of tea through a jumper, building."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1025
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"far-off orange smear"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02829268292682927
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.000975609756097561
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.73
std10.96
cv1.022
sampleLengths
09
124
211
314
46
55
67
712
85
912
1010
113
1219
133
1440
154
165
173
189
192
201
2128
223
2342
243
2530
269
274
285
292
3014
315
3220
3322
346
359
368
373
381
396
402
4126
424
432
443
453
463
4710
481
492
74.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.49193548387096775
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners61
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"A lot of feet."
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences73
matches
0"She stopped with one foot"
1"Their voice came from everywhere"
2"She unzipped her jacket."
3"She came through, and her"
4"Their bark spiralled."
5"It looked like a photograph"
6"She could see it."
7"She could not hear it."
8"She lifted a finger"
9"She didn't mention it."
10"She stood, wiped her hand"
11"She turned the screen towards"
12"Her watch — the cheap"
13"They went deeper."
14"It kept unfolding."
15"They ran round the whole"
16"She held up her hand"
17"It ran uphill."
ratio0.247
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The frost gave out three"
1"Aurora felt it through her"
2"She stopped with one foot"
3"Their voice came from everywhere"
4"Eva's teeth were still chattering"
5"Aurora stepped through."
6"The cold peeled off her"
7"Warmth pressed in."
8"She unzipped her jacket."
9"Sweat sprang along her spine."
10"She came through, and her"
11"The grove ran maybe forty"
12"Their bark spiralled."
13"Wildflowers grew in bands of"
14"Aurora looked back."
15"The gap between the two"
16"It looked like a photograph"
17"She could see it."
18"She could not hear it."
19"The shadow slid across the"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers grew in bands of colour, foxglove and cornflower and something with petals like wet paper that Aurora had no name for, and they grew in *rings*, con…"
1"Her watch — the cheap one with the second hand that ticked loud enough to annoy people on buses — had its second hand travelling backwards in a smooth glide, no…"
2"The oaks that had ringed the boundary stood behind them and also, somehow, ahead of them, and between them ran a path of flat pale stones set into the moss, eac…"
3"The path bent round a stand of birches with silver-white bark that carried faces in it."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.3494%