Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRN9C8SY2MR0N9NME1QFM6

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1m
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came off Dean Street in sheets, and every third person who pushed through the door of the Raven's Nest shook themselves like a dog and apologised to nobody. Rory had the towel over her shoulder and Silas's ledger open on the bar because he refused to use the till's report function, said it lied. Tuesday. Eleven customers, four of them the same four who came every Tuesday, one of them asleep under the photograph of a bombed-out Dresden. The door went again. Rory didn't look up. "Two minutes, I'll be with you." "You're behind a bar." She knew the vowels before she knew the voice. Cardiff, but sanded — the edges taken off the way people took them off when they moved east and got tired of being asked to say things twice. Nia Prosser stood dripping on the mat in a camel coat that had cost more than Rory's month. Hair cut to the jaw, blow-dried straight, the kind of straight that needed appointments. A leather folio under one arm. A wedding band, thin, plain, and a second ring above it with a stone in it that caught the green of the neon through the window. "Bloody hell," Rory said. "Yeah." Nia didn't move from the mat. "I walked past twice. I thought, that's not her. And then I thought, that's absolutely her, she's got the towel thing." "The towel thing." "You did it in the Woodville. Third year. You wiped that table for nine minutes because you didn't want to talk to Gareth." "Gareth had opinions about Nietzsche." "Gareth had opinions about everything." Nia came forward at last and put the folio on the bar and stood with her hands flat either side of it, like a woman about to make an offer on a house. Up close her face was the same and not. Fuller. Better slept. The little scar through her eyebrow from the bike still there, silvered. Rory poured her a whisky without asking, then stopped with the bottle tilted. "Do you still—" "I still." Nia took it. "Don't look so relieved. I have three of these a year and I bill for the hangover." At the far end of the bar Silas moved a glass an inch to the left, which was his way of saying he was listening. His signet ring clicked once on the wood. Rory ignored him. "You're in London." "Since 2019. Islington. Well — Finsbury Park, but I say Islington to my mother-in-law." Nia drank. Her throat worked. "God, that's foul. You're in London." "Since a while." "Since a while." Nia set the glass down with great care, the way you set down something you might otherwise throw. "Four years, Rory. Four years and a bit. Your number went dead in the March. I rang your mam." "I know you rang my mam." "She told me you were 'having a bit of a rest.'" The words came out flattened, courtroom-flat. "Jennifer Carter said her daughter was having a bit of a rest and then she asked me about my dissertation." Rory found something to do with the ledger. The column of figures blurred and reassembled. "She didn't know where I was either. Not for a bit." "You could have texted me one word. One. 'Fine.' I'd have taken 'fine.'" Nia turned the whisky glass a quarter-turn. "I'd have known it was a lie and I'd have taken it." The man under Dresden snored and shifted. Somebody outside dragged a suitcase over the kerb, and the wheels made a sound like tearing. "You look like a solicitor," Rory said. "I am a solicitor." "You were going to Lisbon." "I was going to Lisbon." Nia laughed, one syllable, no warmth in it and no bitterness either, just the noise you make at a thing you've stopped arguing with. "I was going to Lisbon and I was going to write eighty poems and live off olives. Do you remember the flat? The one with the blue tiles, the picture I had on my wall?" "You made me look at that picture every day for two years." "I sold my car for the deposit and then Dad had his stroke, and by the time he could hold a fork again the flat was gone and the poems were — " she opened one hand, closed it. "I did a training contract in Bristol. I was good at it. Turns out that's what happens if you're good at something. People pay you to keep doing it until you can't remember wanting anything else." "You've got a garden." "I've got a garden," Nia said. "How did you know I've got a garden?" "You've got the hands of a woman with a garden." Nia looked at her own hands, surprised, and something young came into her face and went out again. "Roses. Which is the most humiliating possible hobby. Owen bought me secateurs for my birthday and I cried." "Owen." "Married him in the Vale. Two hundred people. My cousins did a conga." Her eyes came up. "I sent an invitation to your parents' address." Rory kept her face level. "I know." "You know." "Mam kept it. She gave it to me last Christmas in a Tupperware with a load of other post." The towel had come off her shoulder and she was folding it into smaller and smaller squares. "I sat in the car and read it in the Asda car park." "And?" "And it was a lovely invitation. Letterpress." "Aurora." Nobody used her whole name. It landed in her like a stone into a well and she felt the splash go all the way down. "I couldn't have come," Rory said. "In the November. I couldn't have got on a train in the November." Nia's jaw shifted. She reached for the whisky and didn't pick it up. "Because of him." "Because of him." "I asked you." Her voice dropped, and the drop was worse than volume. "In the Pen and Wig, do you remember, the night of the mooting thing, and you had that mark on your arm and you said the boot of the car had come down on it, and I said Rory, and you looked at me like I'd spat in your drink. And I let it go. I let it go because you're — " she gestured at all of Rory, the whole length of her — "because you're the cleverest person I know and I thought, well, if it were that, she'd know. She'd have worked it out before me." "That's not how it works." "No," Nia said. "I've since done a course." The laugh got out of Rory before she could stop it, and Nia's mouth twitched, and for a second the two of them were nineteen in a kitchen that smelled of Lambert & Butler and burnt toast. Then it passed and the bar came back, the maps, the rain, the green light lying in a stripe along the wet shoulder of that camel coat. Rory pushed the glass an inch towards her. "Drink your foul whisky." "Is he — " Nia stopped. "Is that finished. Him." "He's in Cardiff. I'm here." Rory turned her left wrist over, absently, the way she did, thumb finding the small crescent scar she'd had since she was six and a bike and a wall. "I do deliveries for a Chinese place on Gerrard Street. Six days some weeks. I live upstairs, above this." Nia looked at the ceiling. Then at the bookshelf against the back wall, the one that sat a half-inch proud of the plaster and always had. "Above a bar," she said. "Above a very good bar," Silas said, without turning round.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1275
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"absolutely"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"absolutely"
1"eyebrow"
2"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen97
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1284
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount656
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas3
Tuesday2
Dresden2
Prosser1
Rory14
Nia15
Lambert1
Butler1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Prosser"
4"Rory"
5"Nia"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Dresden"
globalScore0.357
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1284
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean22.53
std22.81
cv1.012
sampleLengths
029
150
28
36
44
537
664
74
828
93
1023
115
1262
1316
1422
1536
163
1725
183
1940
206
2137
2226
2332
2423
257
264
275
2864
2912
3075
314
3214
3310
3436
351
3625
377
382
3949
401
417
421
4325
4419
4516
463
47112
485
498
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"being asked"
83.04% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was listening"
1"was folding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"Cardiff, but sanded — the edges taken off the way people took them off when they moved east and got tired of being asked to say things twice."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount660
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01818181818181818
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0015151515151515152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.97
std13.27
cv1.023
sampleLengths
029
126
21
323
44
54
66
74
89
928
1018
1114
126
1326
144
157
1621
173
1823
195
2038
219
221
232
2412
2513
263
275
2817
2925
308
313
323
3316
343
356
363
3721
3819
396
4017
4120
428
437
4411
4520
4612
477
4816
497
70.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.47474747474747475
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then it passed and the"
1"Then at the bookshelf against"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences47
matches
0"She knew the vowels before"
1"His signet ring clicked once"
2"Her throat worked."
3"she opened one hand, closed"
4"Her eyes came up"
5"It landed in her like"
6"She reached for the whisky"
7"Her voice dropped, and the"
8"she gestured at all of"
ratio0.191
13.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences47
matches
0"Rain came off Dean Street"
1"Rory had the towel over"
2"The door went again."
3"Rory didn't look up."
4"She knew the vowels before"
5"Cardiff, but sanded — the"
6"Nia Prosser stood dripping on"
7"Hair cut to the jaw,"
8"A leather folio under one"
9"A wedding band, thin, plain,"
10"Nia didn't move from the"
11"Nia came forward at last"
12"The little scar through her"
13"Rory poured her a whisky"
14"Nia took it"
15"His signet ring clicked once"
16"Rory ignored him."
17"Her throat worked."
18"Nia set the glass down"
19"The words came out flattened,"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Nia Prosser stood dripping on the mat in a camel coat that had cost more than Rory's month."
1"A wedding band, thin, plain, and a second ring above it with a stone in it that caught the green of the neon through the window."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Her voice dropped, and the drop was worse than volume"
1"Silas said, without turning round"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nia came forward (come forward)"
1"Nia laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.063
87.4611%