Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRP0PKWEFH7A07CK1T7PKE

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Duration:
1m 5s
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$0.090940
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had been coming down since four, and by nine the gutters on Frith Street ran like small brown rivers. The green neon over the door threw its light onto the wet pavement, and people passed through it without stopping, hoods up, shoulders hunched. Then one of them stopped. Rory heard the door before she saw anything. She was at the end of the bar with a shoebox of receipts and a chewed pencil, splitting Yu-Fei's Tuesday takings into two piles that refused to agree with each other. "God, that's better." A woman shook her umbrella out over the mat, which was Silas' one rule and the one nobody obeyed. "Sorry. Sorry. Do you do food, or is that—" "Crisps," Silas said, from under the bar. "Three flavours. Two of them are the same." "I'll take the third." She peeled back her hood. Rory's pencil stopped moving. Nia Prydderch had cut her hair. That was the first thing — the black rope she used to wear over one shoulder in the law library was gone, replaced by something blunt and expensive that ended at the jaw. She'd got taller somehow, or it was the coat, a grey wool thing with the collar turned up, and shoes that didn't belong in Soho on a wet Tuesday. She set a leather bag on the stool beside her with the care of someone whose bag cost more than the stool. "Wine," she said. "Red. I don't care." "You will," Silas said, and poured her something anyway. Rory considered the door to the back stairs. Eleven steps, a bookshelf, a room with no windows. She had got very good, over three years, at being somewhere else. Nia turned her head to look at the wall of photographs and saw her instead. Nothing happened for a second. Then the glass went down on the bar without being drunk from, and she said, "No." "Hiya, Nia." "No." Nia was off the stool. "You're— Rory. Aurora bloody Carter." She crossed the four feet of floorboard and stopped short, hands half up, like she'd come to a fence. "I've been looking for you for three years." "I know." "You know." Nia's arms dropped. "Right. Well. That's—" She laughed, one flat note. "That's honest, at least." "Sit down. You're dripping on the receipts." Nia sat. She looked at Rory the way she used to look at case law she suspected of lying to her — front to back, twice. Rory let her. She was aware, in a distant way, of the state of her own hands: knuckles chapped from the moped handlebars, a thumbnail split, a smear of hoisin on the cuff of a fleece with GOLDEN EMPRESS stitched over the heart. "You've got shorter hair than me," Nia said. "You've got better hair than me." "I've got a mortgage in Bermondsey and a man who irons his own shirts. The hair's the least of it." She picked up her wine, finally, and drank half. "Your mother rang my mother. Did you know that? Christmas, the first year. Standing in the hall with the cordless, asking if I'd heard anything, and my mam saying no, love, no, nothing, and doing that face at me over the top of it." "I sent them a card." "A card." Nia put the glass down. "From Bruges." "It wasn't Bruges." "I know it wasn't Bruges, Rory, that's my point." Her voice climbed and she pulled it back down, glancing at Silas, who had developed a sudden interest in the glass-washer. "Sorry. I'm not— I've had a day. I've been in a room in Aldgate since eight this morning learning about anti-money-laundering compliance and I only came in here because of the sign." "The sign gets everyone." "It's a good sign." Nia turned her glass by the base. "Third year I stopped looking. I want you to know that, because I think it's the worst thing I've done. I made a decision on a Tuesday, in a meeting, and the decision was: she doesn't want to be found. And then I felt better. That's the bit I can't—" She stopped. "Anyway. You look well." "I look knackered." "You look like someone who's slept, though." Nia said it quietly. "That's new." Rory turned a receipt over. Sixteen forty for a delivery to Greek Street; the man had tipped in twenty-pence pieces and she'd carried them up the stairs in her fist. "He came to my flat," Nia said. "Evan. Two weeks after. Stood on the step with a bag of your things and asked me to talk sense into you." "What did you say?" "I made him tea." Nia's mouth twisted. "I made the man tea, Rory. I sat him at my table and I said I was sure it would all blow over, and he cried, and I felt sorry for him. It was February and I had my whole life in front of me and I sat there being kind to him." "You didn't know." "Don't." Nia's hand came down flat on the bar. "Don't be gracious about it. I saw your wrist in Wetherspoons in the November and I said nothing, because it was easier to believe you about the door frame. I've built quite a career on noticing what's in front of me and I didn't notice you." She reached out, then, and took Rory's left hand, and turned it, thumb moving over the small pale crescent below the heel of it. "This one I know. Nan's greenhouse. You were eight." "Nine." "Nine." Nia let go. "The other ones I don't know." The rain hit the window in a handful and slid. Silas set two glasses upside down on the towel and left through the door beside the bookshelf without a word, which was, Rory understood, his version of a hand on the shoulder. "Who's he?" Nia said. "Landlord." "That's not what he is." "No." Nia waited. Rory said nothing else, and watched Nia file that away somewhere, the way she'd file a witness going quiet. "You'd have been called by now," Nia said at last. "You know that. You'd have finished pupillage in the spring, you'd be doing your first magistrates' court, you'd be complaining about it. Bethan's at 3 Verulam. She asks after you. She asks in this careful way, like your name's a bruise." "I hated it." "You were better at it than me." "That's not the same thing, Nia." "No." Nia looked at the fleece, the stitched name over the heart, and Rory watched her decide not to say the obvious thing, and then say it anyway, because she'd never in her life managed the swallow. "Do you like it? The— this?" "I know every street in three postcodes." Rory shrugged. "Nobody knows where I am unless I want them to. Old ladies give me biscuits. Yu-Fei shouts at me in two languages." She looked up. "Yes. I like it." "Right," Nia said, and her eyes were wet, and she hated it, Rory could see, the way she pressed the back of her wrist under one and then the other, briskly, like sorting post. "Right. Well. Nobody warns you. That it goes. Three years, and it's not that I forgot you, it's that I got used to the shape of the space." She sniffed hard. "I got used to it. That's the confession, if you want one." "I'm not a priest." "You'd be a terrible priest." Nia laughed, properly this time, and drank the rest of the wine in one. "Pour me another. And come round this side of the bar and sit with me, for God's sake. You're stood there like you're taking a statement."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She peeled back [back]"
1"She sniffed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.896
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.06
96.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1279
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount658
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.04
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street2
Yu-Fei1
Tuesday2
Silas4
Rory12
Prydderch1
Soho1
Nia20
Greek1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Prydderch"
4"Nia"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Greek"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1279
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean24.6
std25.39
cv1.032
sampleLengths
049
139
231
315
49
54
690
77
89
929
1015
1121
122
1338
142
1517
167
1769
188
196
2073
215
229
233
2462
254
2667
273
2813
2930
3029
314
3260
333
3488
351
3610
3742
384
391
405
411
4221
4351
443
457
466
4743
4838
4977
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
49.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences92
ratio0.033
matches
0"That was the first thing — the black rope she used to wear over one shoulder in the law library was gone, replaced by something blunt and expensive that ended at the jaw."
1"She looked at Rory the way she used to look at case law she suspected of lying to her — front to back, twice."
2"Sixteen forty for a delivery to Greek Street; the man had tipped in twenty-pence pieces and she'd carried them up the stairs in her fist."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.023636363636363636
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005454545454545455
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.9
std13.72
cv0.987
sampleLengths
020
124
25
38
431
522
69
77
88
99
104
116
1233
1329
1422
153
164
179
188
199
2012
2115
225
2316
242
256
2624
278
282
295
308
314
327
332
3424
353
3640
378
386
3929
4044
415
427
432
443
4530
4632
474
4811
4952
63.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.44565217391304346
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then one of them stopped."
1"Then the glass went down"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences47
matches
0"She was at the end"
1"She peeled back her hood"
2"She'd got taller somehow, or"
3"She set a leather bag"
4"She had got very good,"
5"She crossed the four feet"
6"She laughed, one flat note"
7"She looked at Rory the"
8"She was aware, in a"
9"She picked up her wine,"
10"Her voice climbed and she"
11"She reached out, then, and"
12"She looked up"
13"She sniffed hard"
ratio0.298
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"Rain had been coming down"
1"The green neon over the"
2"Rory heard the door before"
3"She was at the end"
4"A woman shook her umbrella"
5"Silas said, from under the"
6"She peeled back her hood"
7"Rory's pencil stopped moving."
8"Nia Prydderch had cut her"
9"That was the first thing"
10"She'd got taller somehow, or"
11"She set a leather bag"
12"Silas said, and poured her"
13"Rory considered the door to"
14"She had got very good,"
15"Nia turned her head to"
16"Nothing happened for a second."
17"Nia was off the stool"
18"She crossed the four feet"
19"Nia's arms dropped"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She was at the end of the bar with a shoebox of receipts and a chewed pencil, splitting Yu-Fei's Tuesday takings into two piles that refused to agree with each …"
1"Silas set two glasses upside down on the towel and left through the door beside the bookshelf without a word, which was, Rory understood, his version of a hand …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nia said, and her eyes were wet, and she hated it, Rory could see, the way she pressed the back of her wrist under one and then the other, briskly, like sorting post"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"She sniffed hard (sniff)"
2"Nia laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.358
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.09
85.0478%