Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSD4SRE4H3R92NF5S9GE8G

Run Details

Duration:
33.6s
Cost:
$0.013410
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the iron gate of Richmond Park with her shoulder. Midnight clung to the trees like wet wool. Her straight black hair stuck to the damp collar of her coat, and the crescent scar on her left wrist itched with a phantom heat that always preceded trouble. She had come because the Heartstone Pendant demanded it. The deep crimson gem, no larger than her thumbnail, had pulsed against her skin since sunset, its silver chain drawing warmth like a coal buried in her chest. She worked delivery for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress by day, lived above Silas’ bar, and had fled an abusive ex named Evan back in Cardiff. Tonight none of that mattered. The unknown benefactor who had given her the artifact had left no note, no address, only this pull. She found the boundary where the ancient oaks stood in a crooked circle, their bark silvered by moonlight and something older. The standing stones marked the edge of Isolde’s grove, a pocket torn between Earth and Fae. Time moved wrong here—an hour inside could swallow days outside, or shrink them to minutes. Rory knew the stories. Eva had whispered them in her ear before Rory left for London. Now she stepped past the stones. The air changed immediately. Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots despite the late November chill—pink foxgloves, white moon daisies, crimson poppies that smelled of copper and honey. The wrongness settled in her ribs. She spoke to break it. “You brought me to a graveyard that grows,” she said. Her voice bounced back flat, swallowed by the trees. The pendant throbbed harder. Its faint inner glow illuminated her fingers. She held it up. The crimson heart brightened, casting red veins across her palm. “I don’t know what you want.” A rustle answered from the left. Not wind. The branches hung still, heavy with blossoms that should have died months ago. Rory turned her head slowly. At the edge of her vision, between two moss-crowned oaks, something shifted. Not an animal. Something that wore the shape of a shadow but moved with purpose. She walked deeper. The clearing opened like an eye. Grass pressed flat in a circle, as if something heavy had rested there for centuries. The scent of iron grew stronger. Her blue eyes scanned the dark, quick and sharp, the way her father Brendan had taught her to read a courtroom—look for the lie hiding in plain sight. Footprints interrupted the dew. Small, bare, pointed like a child’s but trailing away from her, deeper into the grove. Her breath caught. “Hello?” The word hung empty. Then she heard it. A sound that didn’t belong in any park—like glass grinding inside velvet. It came from behind her. She spun. Nothing stood there except wildflowers bowing in no breeze. But the grinding continued, closer, layered with a wet click. Rory’s hand found the pendant. The warmth spiked. Near a portal, the codex in her mind—learned from Eva, from whispers—said it pulsed. She had no map for Hel portals, no pre-law textbook to guide her. Only instinct. She backed away from the footprints. The trees seemed closer now. The oak standing stones that had marked the boundary now ringed the clearing tighter, their gaps sealed by thorns that twisted with unnatural speed. Time twisted too. She had walked ten minutes, yet her watch—checked with trembling fingers—read only two minutes past midnight. Outside, London could be sleeping through Tuesday or screaming through Sunday. She didn’t care. She cared that she was not alone. The rustle came again. This time she caught it dead-on. A figure stood between two poppies. Tall, thin, draped in something that drank the moonlight. Its face was a blank where features should have been, but its head tilted, listening. Rory’s heart hammered. She did not run. Running made you prey. “I see you,” she said, and her voice stayed steady, cool-headed, the Carter steel her Welsh mother had reinforced with quiet discipline. The figure did not move, but the flowers around it turned. Every crimson petal rotated to face Rory, like eyes opening. The grinding sound stopped. In the silence, Rory heard her own blood. The pendant burned now, hot enough to sting. She looked down. The crimson gem glowed brighter, illuminating the crescent scar on her left wrist. The scar pulsed in time with the stone, as if they spoke the same language. “You’re not a benefactor,” Rory said to the dark. “You’re the trap.” The figure stepped forward. Not walking—unfolding. Its limbs bent wrong, too many joints, and the wildflowers it touched withered to black dust that smelled of old books and rot. Rory backed toward the center of the clearing. The flat grass circle felt like an altar. The standing stones loomed, their ancient oaks now humming with a low vibration that shook through her boots. She spoke to keep her mind clear, the quick thinking she was known for sharpening like a blade. “I work delivery. I live above a bar. I don’t belong in fairy tales, and I don’t belong here.” The figure stopped ten feet away. Its head tilted further, almost curious. From it came a voice—not spoken, but felt—like fingers tracing her spine. *You came for the door.* The words settled in her skull, cold and precise. The pendant flared. Rory saw it then—not with her eyes, but with the warmth in her bones. A tear in the air behind the figure, a vertical rip that bled silver light. A portal. Near it, the Heartstone had screamed its warning. “I came because this thing dragged me,” Rory said. She lifted the pendant, let it swing on its silver chain. “Not for your door.” The blank face seemed to study the crimson glow. Then the flowers turned again—this time away from Rory, toward the portal, bowing in reverence or fear. The wrongness peaked. The grinding sound returned, louder, now layered with whispers in a language that hurt her teeth. The figure began to dissolve, not into death, but into the thorns, into the trees, into the very pocket of the grove. But the portal remained, open and hungry. Rory did not move toward it. She stood in the center, the black hair plastered to her face, her bright blue eyes fixed on the silver tear. The pendant had cooled slightly, no longer burning, but still pulsing, still watching. She was not alone. She had never been alone here. The grove had been waiting, not for her death, but for her choice. Rory clenched her free hand, feeling the itch of her scar, feeling the cool head that had carried her out of Cardiff and away from Evan. She spoke one last time into the dark, her voice cutting the whispers like a knife through silk. “I’m leaving. And I’m taking the door with me, or I’m burning it down.” The wildflowers shivered. The oak stones hummed louder. The figure did not return, but the air pressed against her, heavy with promise and threat. Rory stepped backward, not breaking eye contact with the portal, not turning her back on the grove that moved wrong and breathed wrong and kept secrets in its blooming, impossible soil. She reached the boundary stones. The gate to Richmond Park waited beyond, but she knew—her bones knew, the scar knew, the crimson heart knew—that stepping outside might take minutes, or it might take years. She was Rory Carter, delivery worker, survivor, quick thinker. She would not be lost. She crossed the line of ancient oaks, and the wildflowers released a single scent—sweet, cloying, a goodbye wrapped in iron. The pendant went quiet. But in the dark behind her, the portal still glowed, and something watched her leave with eyes that had no face, learning her name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"throbbed"
4"scanned"
5"velvet"
6"silence"
7"loomed"
8"tracing"
9"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences121
matches(empty)
95.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1294
ratio0.004
matches
0"You came for the door."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1212
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Tonight1
Isolde1
Earth1
Fae1
Rory17
London2
November1
Brendan1
Eva2
Hel1
Tuesday1
Sunday1
Carter2
Welsh1
Cardiff1
Evan1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Isolde"
5"Rory"
6"November"
7"Brendan"
8"Eva"
9"Carter"
10"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Tuesday"
4"Sunday"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.799
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like an altar"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.091
wordCount1294
matches
0"not spoken, but felt"
1"not with her eyes, but with the warmth in her bones"
2"not into death, but into the thorns, into the trees, into the very pocket of the"
3"not for her death, but for her choice"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"cared that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.18
std24.53
cv0.739
sampleLengths
0134
174
237
319
425
56
653
758
819
94
104
1142
1237
1375
1410
1541
1622
1721
184
1947
2012
2129
2234
2318
2419
2524
265
2751
2824
2926
3048
3140
3223
3344
3414
3555
3648
3724
3824
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"was known"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences127
ratio0.094
matches
0"Time moved wrong here—an hour inside could swallow days outside, or shrink them to minutes."
1"Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots despite the late November chill—pink foxgloves, white moon daisies, crimson poppies that smelled of copper and honey."
2"Her blue eyes scanned the dark, quick and sharp, the way her father Brendan had taught her to read a courtroom—look for the lie hiding in plain sight."
3"A sound that didn’t belong in any park—like glass grinding inside velvet."
4"Near a portal, the codex in her mind—learned from Eva, from whispers—said it pulsed."
5"She had walked ten minutes, yet her watch—checked with trembling fingers—read only two minutes past midnight."
6"Not walking—unfolding."
7"From it came a voice—not spoken, but felt—like fingers tracing her spine."
8"Rory saw it then—not with her eyes, but with the warmth in her bones."
9"Then the flowers turned again—this time away from Rory, toward the portal, bowing in reverence or fear."
10"The gate to Richmond Park waited beyond, but she knew—her bones knew, the scar knew, the crimson heart knew—that stepping outside might take minutes, or it might take years."
11"She crossed the line of ancient oaks, and the wildflowers released a single scent—sweet, cloying, a goodbye wrapped in iron."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount149
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.006711409395973154
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.19
std7.14
cv0.7
sampleLengths
012
18
229
39
428
525
65
718
821
916
1015
114
1212
136
144
1522
166
175
1810
199
204
217
224
2310
246
256
262
2713
285
2912
303
3112
323
336
3415
356
3628
374
3815
393
401
414
424
4312
445
452
469
4710
485
493
38.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.2677165354330709
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners34
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Then she heard it."
1"Then the flowers turned again—this"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences114
matches
0"Her straight black hair stuck"
1"She had come because the"
2"She worked delivery for Yu-Fei"
3"She found the boundary where"
4"She spoke to break it."
5"Her voice bounced back flat,"
6"Its faint inner glow illuminated"
7"She held it up."
8"She walked deeper."
9"Her blue eyes scanned the"
10"Her breath caught."
11"It came from behind her."
12"She had no map for"
13"She backed away from the"
14"She had walked ten minutes,"
15"She didn’t care."
16"She cared that she was"
17"Its face was a blank"
18"She did not run."
19"she said, and her voice"
ratio0.298
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences114
matches
0"Rory pushed through the iron"
1"Midnight clung to the trees"
2"Her straight black hair stuck"
3"She had come because the"
4"The deep crimson gem, no"
5"She worked delivery for Yu-Fei"
6"Tonight none of that mattered."
7"The unknown benefactor who had"
8"She found the boundary where"
9"The standing stones marked the"
10"Time moved wrong here—an hour"
11"Rory knew the stories."
12"Eva had whispered them in"
13"The air changed immediately."
14"Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots"
15"The wrongness settled in her"
16"She spoke to break it."
17"Her voice bounced back flat,"
18"The pendant throbbed harder."
19"Its faint inner glow illuminated"
ratio0.86
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Now she stepped past the"
ratio0.009
38.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots despite the late November chill—pink foxgloves, white moon daisies, crimson poppies that smelled of copper and honey."
1"Grass pressed flat in a circle, as if something heavy had rested there for centuries."
2"The oak standing stones that had marked the boundary now ringed the clearing tighter, their gaps sealed by thorns that twisted with unnatural speed."
3"Its limbs bent wrong, too many joints, and the wildflowers it touched withered to black dust that smelled of old books and rot."
4"The standing stones loomed, their ancient oaks now humming with a low vibration that shook through her boots."
5"Rory clenched her free hand, feeling the itch of her scar, feeling the cool head that had carried her out of Cardiff and away from Evan."
6"Rory stepped backward, not breaking eye contact with the portal, not turning her back on the grove that moved wrong and breathed wrong and kept secrets in its b…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.6899%