| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1308 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1308 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "loomed" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1294 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "You came for the door." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1212 | | uniqueNames | 24 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Tonight | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | London | 2 | | November | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Cheung" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "November" | | 7 | "Brendan" | | 8 | "Eva" | | 9 | "Carter" | | 10 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Tuesday" | | 4 | "Sunday" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.799 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.091 | | wordCount | 1294 | | matches | | 0 | "not spoken, but felt" | | 1 | "not with her eyes, but with the warmth in her bones" | | 2 | "not into death, but into the thorns, into the trees, into the very pocket of the" | | 3 | "not for her death, but for her choice" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 33.18 | | std | 24.53 | | cv | 0.739 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 134 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 48 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 55 | | 36 | 48 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 222 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Time moved wrong here—an hour inside could swallow days outside, or shrink them to minutes." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots despite the late November chill—pink foxgloves, white moon daisies, crimson poppies that smelled of copper and honey." | | 2 | "Her blue eyes scanned the dark, quick and sharp, the way her father Brendan had taught her to read a courtroom—look for the lie hiding in plain sight." | | 3 | "A sound that didn’t belong in any park—like glass grinding inside velvet." | | 4 | "Near a portal, the codex in her mind—learned from Eva, from whispers—said it pulsed." | | 5 | "She had walked ten minutes, yet her watch—checked with trembling fingers—read only two minutes past midnight." | | 6 | "Not walking—unfolding." | | 7 | "From it came a voice—not spoken, but felt—like fingers tracing her spine." | | 8 | "Rory saw it then—not with her eyes, but with the warmth in her bones." | | 9 | "Then the flowers turned again—this time away from Rory, toward the portal, bowing in reverence or fear." | | 10 | "The gate to Richmond Park waited beyond, but she knew—her bones knew, the scar knew, the crimson heart knew—that stepping outside might take minutes, or it might take years." | | 11 | "She crossed the line of ancient oaks, and the wildflowers released a single scent—sweet, cloying, a goodbye wrapped in iron." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 149 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.006711409395973154 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 10.19 | | std | 7.14 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 38.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.2677165354330709 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Then the flowers turned again—this" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Her straight black hair stuck" | | 1 | "She had come because the" | | 2 | "She worked delivery for Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "She found the boundary where" | | 4 | "She spoke to break it." | | 5 | "Her voice bounced back flat," | | 6 | "Its faint inner glow illuminated" | | 7 | "She held it up." | | 8 | "She walked deeper." | | 9 | "Her blue eyes scanned the" | | 10 | "Her breath caught." | | 11 | "It came from behind her." | | 12 | "She had no map for" | | 13 | "She backed away from the" | | 14 | "She had walked ten minutes," | | 15 | "She didn’t care." | | 16 | "She cared that she was" | | 17 | "Its face was a blank" | | 18 | "She did not run." | | 19 | "she said, and her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.298 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the iron" | | 1 | "Midnight clung to the trees" | | 2 | "Her straight black hair stuck" | | 3 | "She had come because the" | | 4 | "The deep crimson gem, no" | | 5 | "She worked delivery for Yu-Fei" | | 6 | "Tonight none of that mattered." | | 7 | "The unknown benefactor who had" | | 8 | "She found the boundary where" | | 9 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 10 | "Time moved wrong here—an hour" | | 11 | "Rory knew the stories." | | 12 | "Eva had whispered them in" | | 13 | "The air changed immediately." | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots" | | 15 | "The wrongness settled in her" | | 16 | "She spoke to break it." | | 17 | "Her voice bounced back flat," | | 18 | "The pendant throbbed harder." | | 19 | "Its faint inner glow illuminated" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stepped past the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed beneath her boots despite the late November chill—pink foxgloves, white moon daisies, crimson poppies that smelled of copper and honey." | | 1 | "Grass pressed flat in a circle, as if something heavy had rested there for centuries." | | 2 | "The oak standing stones that had marked the boundary now ringed the clearing tighter, their gaps sealed by thorns that twisted with unnatural speed." | | 3 | "Its limbs bent wrong, too many joints, and the wildflowers it touched withered to black dust that smelled of old books and rot." | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed, their ancient oaks now humming with a low vibration that shook through her boots." | | 5 | "Rory clenched her free hand, feeling the itch of her scar, feeling the cool head that had carried her out of Cardiff and away from Evan." | | 6 | "Rory stepped backward, not breaking eye contact with the portal, not turning her back on the grove that moved wrong and breathed wrong and kept secrets in its b…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |