Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSD4SSWGQ217MJRDF2GPRJ

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Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.041370
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt snapped back, and the door swung open before Rory reached the latch. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, his ivory-handled cane planted squarely against her fraying welcome mat. Tailored charcoal wool draped over his broad shoulders, untouched by the grease and grime of the stairwell. His heterochromatic eyes swept over her frayed oversized jumper, lingering on the exposed line of her collarbone before rising to meet her glare. "You changed the deadbolt," he said. "Not fast enough." Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles turning white. "Silas keeps a heavy iron cosh behind the bar downstairs. Give me thirty seconds and I will fetch him to show you the door." "Silas is currently occupied with a late delivery of Belgian ale." Lucien leaned lightly on his cane, the ferrule clicking against the floorboards. "He won't hear you." "Get out, Lucien." "We have unfinished business, Aurora." He stepped forward. Rory stood her ground for one stubborn second, but the heat rolling off him pushed her back into the narrow hallway. Lucien crossed the threshold, closing the heavy oak door behind him with the soft click of a trap springing shut. Her flat smelled of stale tea, ginger broth from her shift at Golden Empress, and the lavender detergent she used to wash her clothes. Lucien brought the scent of ash, expensive French cologne, and crushed cloves into her small sanctuary. It wiped away her ordinary world in a single breath. "You do not answer my calls," he said. "I blocked your number six weeks ago." She retreated toward the small kitchen counter, her hand instinctively coming up to cover the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Right after you traded my location to the court fixers in Exchange Alley." "I gave them a false trail." "You gave them my address." "I gave them an address three streets over and watched the building until every last one of those hounds cleared out." Lucien walked deeper into the room, his long stride effortless. His polished black boot made almost no sound against the worn floorboards. "If I wanted you caught, Rory, you would be sitting in an iron cage beneath the Thames." "Am I supposed to thank you?" Her voice rasped. "Should I pour you a drink for giving me twenty-four hours to pack my life into a rucksack and sleep on Eva's sofa?" "A drink sounds delightful." He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the side of her armchair, surveying the cramped flat. His golden right eye caught the dim lamp light, burning like molten coin, while his left remained a solid, bottomless abyss of black. The demonic blood in his veins flared whenever his temper spiked, warming the air around them until the cold draught from the window vanished completely. Rory picked up a silver butter knife from the drying rack. It felt pathetically light in her hand, but her fingers locked around the handle anyway. "Do not test me tonight, Luc." "You hold a butter knife like a barrister holding a pen." Lucien halted two feet away, close enough that she could see the subtle pattern of grey silver stitching along his lapel. "Ineffective, but cute." "I spent three years studying law. I know exactly how many places I can stick this before a judge calls it self-defence." A sharp smile cut across his pale face. "There she is. I missed that tongue." "I didn't miss you." The lie hung between them, thick and clumsy. Lucien lifted his left hand, his long, leather-gloved fingers reaching out to brush a stray lock of straight black hair away from her cheek. Rory flinched, but she did not pull back. The heat of his skin burned through the thin leather, sending a dangerous, familiar shudder down her spine. "You lied to me," she whispered, her cool composure cracking at the edges. "You said you were done with Avaros. You swore you were just an information broker in London." "I am an information broker," he replied softly. "I simply omit the parts of the truth that would make you run." "You kept me in the dark while those monsters hunted me." "I kept you alive!" His voice dropped an octave, resonating with a gravelly rumble that vibrated in her chest. The iris of his golden eye shrank to a razor-thin slit. "You think Evan was the only threat? Your ex was an abusive baseline human with a gambling habit and a dirty temper. The things following you now are far worse, Aurora. They smell your blood. They know what your father buried in Cardiff." Rory dropped the knife. It clattered loudly against the laminate counter. "My father was a barrister." "Your father was a collector of ancient debts," Lucien corrected, his tone silky once more as he mastered his temper. "And now those debts belong to you." "I don't owe anyone anything." "The court of Avaros disagrees." He closed the remaining distance between them, trapping her against the edge of the kitchen counter. His cane rested against her hip, pressing gently. He smelled so distinctly of fire and refined luxury that her senses reeled. The memory of his mouth against hers in that rain-slicked alleyway three months ago returned with brutal clarity, making her pulse hammer against her ribs. "Why come here now?" she asked, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. "Why tonight?" "Because the wards on Brick Lane failed an hour ago," Lucien said, his dark eye fixed on her lips. "And because I find myself incapable of letting you die." "I don't need your protection." "You do." He slid his hand up her arm, his thumb tracing the crescent scar on her wrist through her jumper. "You need my blade, my secrets, and my mark." "I am not making a deal with a demon." "Half-demon," he murmured, tilting his head down until his lips brushed the shell of her ear. "And you already made the deal the night you let me into your bed." Rory bit her lip, refusing to give him the satisfaction of a gasp. The air in the flat grew suffocatingly warm. Her heart battered against her ribs, torn between the fury burning in her gut and the undeniable, dark pull he exerted over every nerve in her body. "Get out," she said again, though the command lacked steel. "Make me." The heavy oak door behind them exploded inward with a deafening crack. Splintered wood showered the hallway as a towering shadow surged into the frame, its triple-jointed limbs clicking violently against the floorboards while black sap dripped from its exposed fangs. Lucien did not flinch. With a fluid, practiced motion, he twisted the ivory handle of his cane, drawing a slender, gleaming silver blade from the hollow wood, and stepped between Rory and the beast.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
72.34% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien leaned lightly [lightly]"
1"he replied softly [softly]"
2"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.723
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.128
82.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"completely"
2"softly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1134
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"effortless"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"effortless"
2"familiar"
3"down her spine"
4"vibrated"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"tracing"
8"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1134
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount722
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Moreau1
Lucien10
Golden1
Empress1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.807
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1134
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.65
std19.38
cv0.786
sampleLengths
014
156
26
338
427
53
65
744
850
98
1041
116
125
1360
1432
154
1666
1726
186
1935
2022
2115
224
238
2450
2530
2621
2711
2873
2916
3027
315
325
3362
3415
3529
365
3730
389
3930
4048
4110
422
4312
4429
4534
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences82
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount728
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"long, leather-gloved fingers"
1"slender, gleaming silver blade"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03571428571428571
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.016483516483516484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.83
std8.49
cv0.614
sampleLengths
014
116
217
323
46
514
624
723
84
93
105
113
1221
1320
1424
1516
1610
178
1828
1913
206
215
2231
2312
2417
259
2623
274
2818
2923
3025
3111
3215
336
3432
353
3622
378
387
394
408
4124
428
4318
4413
4517
468
4713
4811
4919
56.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3780487804878049
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences50
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes swept over"
1"He stepped forward."
2"Her flat smelled of stale"
3"It wiped away her ordinary"
4"She retreated toward the small"
5"His polished black boot made"
6"Her voice rasped"
7"He tapped the ivory handle"
8"His golden right eye caught"
9"It felt pathetically light in"
10"she whispered, her cool composure"
11"he replied softly"
12"His voice dropped an octave,"
13"It clattered loudly against the"
14"He closed the remaining distance"
15"His cane rested against her"
16"He smelled so distinctly of"
17"she asked, her voice dropping"
18"He slid his hand up"
19"he murmured, tilting his head"
ratio0.44
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences50
matches
0"The deadbolt snapped back, and"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"His heterochromatic eyes swept over"
3"Rory gripped the edge of"
4"Lucien leaned lightly on his"
5"He stepped forward."
6"Rory stood her ground for"
7"Lucien crossed the threshold, closing"
8"Her flat smelled of stale"
9"Lucien brought the scent of"
10"It wiped away her ordinary"
11"She retreated toward the small"
12"Lucien walked deeper into the"
13"His polished black boot made"
14"Her voice rasped"
15"He tapped the ivory handle"
16"His golden right eye caught"
17"The demonic blood in his"
18"Rory picked up a silver"
19"It felt pathetically light in"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory gripped, her knuckles turning white"
1"Lucien leaned lightly, the ferrule clicking against the floorboards"
2"Lucien walked, his long stride effortless"
3"she whispered, her cool composure cracking at the edges"
4"Lucien corrected, his tone silky once more as he mastered his temper"
5"she asked, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
6"she said again, though the command lacked steel"
86.17% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Lucien corrected (correct)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.383
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.128
79.0283%