Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSDHVKZ09JSY3YGKB9MZY5

Run Details

Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.026567
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rusted steel gates of the abandoned Camden Tube station yawned open like a broken jaw. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath the twisted sign, her shoulder brushing graffitied brick. Her worn leather watch caught the beam of her torch: half past eleven. Below ground, the air tasted of iron, damp stone, and the ghost of electricity. She moved with military precision through the dark. The Veil Market should not have been here. It moved locations every full moon, sliding like a shadow through London's bones. Yet this abandoned station beneath Camden served as its current address—hidden behind a gate that demanded a bone token, filled with stalls of enchanted goods now shoved aside in panic. The black market's silence felt wrong. Eva waited near the old ticket booth. Eva's curly red hair glowed copper in the torchlight. Round glasses reflected the beam. She clutched her worn leather satchel full of books against her chest, her freckled complexion drawn tight. Her left hand tucked hair behind her ear, then again. "Quinn," Eva said. "You're late." "Traffic doesn't care about supernatural murders," Harlow replied. She stopped ten feet from the body. "Walk me through it." "Don't walk through it. Don't touch it yet." Eva stepped aside, her satchel straps creaking. "The guards found him forty minutes ago. They claim he was a Shade artisan, one who crafted protective sigils. The chest wound—look at it, Harlow. Those aren't blade marks. That's tearing. Supernatural tearing. Portal backlash, perhaps. Or something that forced its way through a rift." Harlow knelt. Her brown eyes narrowed. She used a silver pen to lift the silk robe. The victim lay against the tiled wall beneath an old advertisement for cigarettes. Black silk pooled around him like spilled ink. No blood soaked the fabric. His face showed surprise frozen in rigor, mouth slightly open, eyes wide toward the ceiling. His hands rested open, palms up—except one clenched left fist. "The energy here is wrong," Eva continued. "I've felt this in the archives. The Veil Compass in his hand—" "Show me." Eva reached with gloved fingers. She pulled a small brass compass from the victim's open right palm. Verdigris coated the casing in patches of green-blue age. The face bore protective sigils etched deep into metal. The needle trembled, then locked. "Crafted by a Shade artisan," Eva said. "Points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. Look where it aims." The needle pointed straight at the brick wall behind the corpse. Harlow took the compass. She turned her body, the needle following, then snapped back to the wall with magnetic certainty. "If a rift sits there, it's well hidden." "Exactly. The killer came through it. Dragged him here, or pulled him through." "Did you check the wall?" "I—no. The guards said—" "Don't tell me what they said. Show me what they missed." Harlow stood. Her leather watch ticked against her wrist. She walked to the wall and tapped it with her knuckles. Solid. No hollow echo. She looked down. The floor tiles near the body were cleaner than the rest—dust wiped away in a perfect arc, not scattered but deliberately cleared. "Eva, when does the market relocate?" "Every full moon. The last was Tuesday." Eva tucked hair behind her left ear, her nerves visible. "This station should be empty. Dead. Yet the bone token gate was open. Someone forced entry." "Was it forced?" Harlow moved backward, tracing the clean tiles with her boot. "Look at the floor. The dust is gone in a circle—centered not on the body, but on this spot." She pointed to a tile near the victim's feet. "The compass needle doesn't point to the wall. Watch." She held the compass over the tile. The needle dipped. It pointed downward, trembling violently toward the grout line. Eva leaned closer, her glasses fogging. "Down?" "Through the floor." Harlow crouched, running her fingers along the grout. One tile wobbled. She lifted it with her pen. Beneath, darkness. Old maintenance pipes stretched into blackness, and in the distance, a faint blue glow—supernatural energy, cold and alive. "The Shade artisan wasn't murdered by a portal," Harlow said. Her voice stayed low, precise. "He was planting one. Or maintaining it." Eva's mouth opened. "But the wound—" "Staged." Harlow pointed with her pen. "Look at the silk. No arterial spray. The wound is shallow, circular, with blackened edges—alchemical burn residue, not magical tearing. He was positioned here after death, or killed elsewhere and moved. The compass was placed in his right hand to direct attention to the wall. His left hand clutches the real key." She used the pen to pry open the victim's clenched left fist. A small bone token fell out—fresh white, unmarked, clean of grime. "Every entry requires a bone token," Harlow said. "This one is new. No wear. No market grime. He didn't enter through the gate. He came up from below." Eva stepped back, her satchel bumping her hip. Her green eyes widened behind round frames. "The tunnel—" "Leads straight out of Camden. Past every guard. Past the token check. The market moves every full moon to avoid detection." Harlow stood, brushing dust from her knees. "But this location was kept open artificially. The victim wasn't a victim. He was the mechanism that held the door open. And the 'crime' isn't murder." She walked to the edge of the open tile. The blue glow deepened, casting sharp shadows up her face, highlighting her sharp jaw. "Get your books, Eva." Harlow's brown eyes held no warmth. "We aren't closing a crime scene. We're sealing a breach that others were meant to miss." Eva tucked her hair behind her ear once more, her earlier certainty crumbling. "You saw the floor." "I saw what wasn't there." Harlow glanced at the body, then at the hidden hatch, then at her colleague. "Dust tells stories. So does silence. The others looked at the wall because the compass told them to. I looked at the compass and saw where it lied." She stepped over the open tile, her boot echoing on the metal rung of an old ladder. "Come on. The rift is still open. And whatever comes through it won't wait for our interpretations."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped aside [aside]"
1"Harlow moved backward [backward]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.1
90.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"silk"
count3
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"silk"
2"etched"
3"trembled"
4"magnetic"
5"echo"
6"perfect"
7"tracing"
8"warmth"
9"echoing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"clenched left fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"e in panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1031
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount604
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Tube1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Veil1
Market1
London1
Eva12
One1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
5"One"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.424
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
6.01% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.94
wordCount1031
matches
0"not scattered but deliberately cleared"
1"not on the body, but on this spot"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean25.78
std17.42
cv0.676
sampleLengths
056
18
257
37
441
55
619
760
816
951
1019
112
1240
1319
1411
1528
1613
175
184
1938
2022
216
2233
2350
2419
257
2640
2722
286
2958
3023
3128
3217
3354
3423
3526
3617
3747
3817
3917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences95
ratio0.053
matches
0"Yet this abandoned station beneath Camden served as its current address—hidden behind a gate that demanded a bone token, filled with stalls of enchanted goods now shoved aside in panic."
1"His hands rested open, palms up—except one clenched left fist."
2"The floor tiles near the body were cleaner than the rest—dust wiped away in a perfect arc, not scattered but deliberately cleared."
3"Old maintenance pipes stretched into blackness, and in the distance, a faint blue glow—supernatural energy, cold and alive."
4"A small bone token fell out—fresh white, unmarked, clean of grime."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount609
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03284072249589491
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006568144499178982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean10.85
std8.46
cv0.779
sampleLengths
016
113
213
314
48
58
613
730
86
97
109
115
1217
1310
143
152
168
177
184
1915
2045
212
224
2310
2413
258
265
2715
2810
297
3012
312
325
3312
349
359
365
377
3812
3911
404
4116
428
4313
445
454
4613
477
4811
491
75.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.47368421052631576
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
62.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"She moved with military precision"
2"It moved locations every full"
3"She clutched her worn leather"
4"Her left hand tucked hair"
5"She stopped ten feet from"
6"Her brown eyes narrowed."
7"She used a silver pen"
8"His face showed surprise frozen"
9"His hands rested open, palms"
10"She pulled a small brass"
11"She turned her body, the"
12"Her leather watch ticked against"
13"She walked to the wall"
14"She looked down."
15"She pointed to a tile"
16"She held the compass over"
17"It pointed downward, trembling violently"
18"She lifted it with her"
19"Her voice stayed low, precise."
ratio0.393
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rusted steel gates of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked beneath"
2"Her worn leather watch caught"
3"She moved with military precision"
4"The Veil Market should not"
5"It moved locations every full"
6"The black market's silence felt"
7"Eva waited near the old"
8"Eva's curly red hair glowed"
9"She clutched her worn leather"
10"Her left hand tucked hair"
11"She stopped ten feet from"
12"Eva stepped aside, her satchel"
13"Her brown eyes narrowed."
14"She used a silver pen"
15"The victim lay against the"
16"His face showed surprise frozen"
17"His hands rested open, palms"
18"Eva reached with gloved fingers."
19"She pulled a small brass"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Yet this abandoned station beneath Camden served as its current address—hidden behind a gate that demanded a bone token, filled with stalls of enchanted goods n…"
1"The blue glow deepened, casting sharp shadows up her face, highlighting her sharp jaw."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva stepped aside, her satchel straps creaking"
1"Eva tucked, her nerves visible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.05
72.5661%