Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSEHF0RJD399ETK5550226

Run Details

Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.016186
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts disengaged with a series of sharp, metallic thuds that echoed through the narrow entryway. Aurora pulled the heavy oak door inward, framing the silhouette standing under the flickering halogen strip of the hallway. Rain dripped from the brim of a charcoal wool coat, pooling on the frayed welcome mat. "You didn't answer my calls." Lucien Moreau leaned his weight onto his ivory-handled cane, the amber eye catching the dim light of the flat while his black eye remained a well of endless shadow. Rain slicked his platinum hair back against his skull, accentuating the razor-sharp plane of his jaw. He smelled of ozone, cheap rain, and the expensive lavender pomade he imported from Paris. Aurora gripped the edge of the door, her knuckle bones pressing white against her skin. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed with a dull, ghost-like ache. "It's two in the morning, Lucien. Normal people sleep." "We were never normal, *chérie*." He stepped forward, forcing her to either back up or let the heavy timber hit his chest. She retreated two steps into the entryway. Lucien slipped inside, sweeping his gaze across the chaotic cramped living room of the Brick Lane flat. Yellowed scrolls overflowed from cardboard boxes, ancient leather-bound lexicons rested precariously on footstools, and the sharp stench of stale curry from the restaurant downstairs hung heavy in the warm air. A ginger tabby cat leaped down from a stack of law journals, weaving around Lucien's trousers with a rumbling purr. "Ptolemy, move," Aurora snapped, though her voice lacked real bite. She crossed her arms, tucking her hands into the sleeves of her oversized Cardiff University jumper. "You shouldn't be here. We agreed." "You agreed." Lucien set his cane against the side of a bookshelf, unbuttoning his tailored coat with long, deliberate fingers. His knuckles bore fresh, darkening bruises. "I merely allowed you the illusion of an exit." "Seven months." Her voice cracked, a tiny fracture in the cool-headed facade she took pride in maintaining. "Seven months of total silence, and you show up soaking wet, bleed on my floor, and talk about illusions?" "I am not bleeding." He slid the coat off his shoulders, hanging it over the back of a wooden dining chair already overburdened with notes on demonology. Beneath it, his crisp white shirt stuck to his shoulder, a dark maroon stain spreading near the collarbone. Aurora stepped closer, her eyes narrowing. "You're terrible at lying for a professional fixer." "A minor inconvenience on the South Bank." Lucien's hand twitched toward his neck, then dropped. He watched her through half-lidded eyes, the amber iris burning with an unreadable heat. "A localized disagreement over an artifact." "Sit down before you ruin my landlord's floorboards." He obeyed without his usual velvet sarcasm, sinking into the saggy armchair near the window. The leather groaned under his weight. Aurora marched into the tiny kitchenette, her heart hammering a fierce, uneven rhythm against her ribs. She snatched a clean rag, a bottle of antiseptic, and a bowl of warm water, her hands trembling just enough to make the ceramic rattle. Seven months ago, she had walked out of his penthouse in Mayfair with a bruised ego and a chest full of unspoken confessions, convinced that a half-demon with a soul full of secrets could never fit into her messy, reassembled life. Yet here he sat, occupying her space, breathing her air, reducing all her hard-won distance to dust with a single glance. She returned to the main room and dropped the supplies onto the coffee table beside his boots. "Shirt off," she said. Lucien unbuttoned his collar, his movements unusually slow. As the linen fell away, it revealed a jagged, shallow tear across his collarbone, the edges black with traces of low-level hellfire that sizzled faintly against his pale flesh. Aurora knelt between his knees, her breath catching in her throat. The heat radiating off his skin was stifling, a natural byproduct of his lineage that always made her skin prickle with dangerous electricity. She dipped the cloth into the water and pressed it to the wound. Lucien hissed, his fingers gripping the arms of the chair until the wood creaked. "Your touch remains as gentle as a dockworker's." "I can leave it to rot if you prefer." She dabbed the black residue away, watching the muscles in his chest tighten. "Why come here, Luc? You have an entire network of underworld doctors who would leap at the chance to stitch up the great Lucien Moreau." "They talk." "And I don't?" "You yell," he corrected, a faint, razor-thin smile touching his lips. "You berate. You analyze my poor choices with the terrifying precision of your father's courtrooms. But you do not talk." Aurora fell silent, applying the antiseptic with firm, deliberate pressure. She kept her focus locked on the slice near his collarbone, refusing to lift her eyes to the dark stubble dusting his jaw, or the way his chest heaved with shallow breaths. The air between them stretched taut, vibrating with every word they were actively avoiding. "Evan found out where you were," Lucien whispered softly. Her hand froze against his skin. The rag dropped into the water, turning the liquid a murky, pale pink. She stared at the black eye that mirrored her own shock. "What?" "Your former flame," Lucien continued, his tone dropping its usual playful cadence, turning flat and lethal. "He was asking questions around the docks in Cardiff. Then he took a train to Paddington yesterday morning." Aurora stood up, pacing toward the small window overlooking the rain-slicked brickwork of the alley below. London hummed outside, a muffled roar of wet tires and distant sirens. "He doesn't know about Brick Lane. He doesn't know about Yu-Fei's restaurant. I cut every tie." "He was paying low-level scryers," Lucien said, his boots thudding softly as he stood up from the chair. He didn't bother with his cane as he closed the distance between them, stopping just behind her shoulder. The heat of his body washed over her back. "I made sure those scryers gave him incorrect addresses. In South London. Then I had a... conversation with him." Aurora turned around, her spine hitting the cold glass of the windowpane. Lucien towered over her, his heterochromatic gaze locking her in place. "You went after him?" Her voice rose, laced with sudden, sharp panic. "Are you out of your mind? You promised me you wouldn't mess with my past!" "I promised I wouldn't interfere with your choices, Rory," he said, using the nickname that usually only her old friends dared to utter. "Protecting you from a miserable brute who thinks he owns you is not interfering. It is maintenance." "I don't need your protection!" She pushed her hands against his broad chest, intending to shove him back, but her palms flat-lined against the solid muscle beneath his bare skin. She didn't push. Her fingers curled into the black cotton of his trousers instead. "I left Cardiff to get away from men who thought they knew what was best for me." "I do not know what is best for you," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a gravelly purr that vibrated against her palms. "I only know that the thought of him placing a single hand on you again makes the demon half of my blood boil until I cannot think." Aurora looked up, searching his face. The arrogance was gone, stripped away by the rain, the bleeding wound, and the sheer exhaustion etched into the lines around his eyes. "You vanished for seven months," she whispered, her anger dissolving into something far more dangerous—a hollow, aching vulnerability. "You let me walk out of that door." "Because if you stayed, you would have been dragged into my father's debts," Lucien admitted, his hand rising slowly, hesitating before his knuckles brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist. "I spent seven months clearing those debts. Blood for blood. Contract by contract. So that when I stood in front of you again, I brought no shadows with me." "You brought a hellfire cut and an enraged ex-boyfriend," she retorted, though her voice lacked conviction. "Details." Lucien leaned down, his forehead coming to rest gently against hers. His breath blew hot against her lips, rich with the iron tang of his blood and the sweet scent of rain. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Tell me to walk out that door and back to Mayfair, and I will." Aurora stared at his mouth, the curve of his lower lip just millimeters from her own. Her breath caught in her throat, the heat radiating between them burning away the cold autumn draft creeping through the window seals. "You're an idiot," she whispered. "Undoubtedly." She reached up, her fingers sliding into the wet, silk-soft strands of his platinum hair, and pulled him down to bridge the remaining space between them.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:04:15.73Z" 7/25/2026, 2:04:15 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien whispered softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.913
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.043
86.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1482
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1482
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"throbbed"
3"chaotic"
4"facade"
5"silence"
6"unreadable"
7"velvet"
8"unspoken"
9"vibrated"
10"etched"
11"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1481
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"As the linen fell away, it revealed a jagged, shallow tear across his collarbone, the edges black with traces of low-lev…"
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1059
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Paris1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien14
Cardiff1
University1
Mayfair1
Aurora11
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Paris"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Cardiff"
4"Mayfair"
globalScore0.839
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1481
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"convinced that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean32.2
std21.39
cv0.664
sampleLengths
017
135
25
360
437
522
674
732
835
936
1045
1114
1235
138
1421
15103
1617
174
1837
1947
2022
2147
222
233
2431
2556
269
2730
281
2934
3044
3164
3223
3327
3440
3561
3650
3729
3826
3960
4016
4152
4238
435
441
4526
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was stifling"
1"were actively avoiding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences96
ratio0.01
matches
0"\"You vanished for seven months,\" she whispered, her anger dissolving into something far more dangerous—a hollow, aching vulnerability."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1072
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"pressing white against her"
1"ancient leather-bound lexicons"
2"faint, razor-thin smile"
3"wet, silk-soft strands"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025186567164179104
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010261194029850746
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean15.43
std7.85
cv0.509
sampleLengths
017
119
216
35
429
516
615
715
813
99
1022
117
1217
1330
1420
1510
1616
176
1820
196
209
2117
2219
2327
2418
256
268
2715
2814
296
308
3115
326
3316
3425
3541
3621
3717
384
398
4029
4111
4223
4313
4414
458
4622
4725
482
493
50.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3541666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences69
matches
0"He smelled of ozone, cheap"
1"He stepped forward, forcing her"
2"She retreated two steps into"
3"She crossed her arms, tucking"
4"His knuckles bore fresh, darkening"
5"Her voice cracked, a tiny"
6"He slid the coat off"
7"He watched her through half-lidded"
8"He obeyed without his usual"
9"She snatched a clean rag,"
10"She returned to the main"
11"She dipped the cloth into"
12"She dabbed the black residue"
13"he corrected, a faint, razor-thin"
14"She kept her focus locked"
15"Her hand froze against his"
16"She stared at the black"
17"He didn't bother with his"
18"Her voice rose, laced with"
19"he said, using the nickname"
ratio0.406
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences69
matches
0"The three deadbolts disengaged with"
1"Aurora pulled the heavy oak"
2"Rain dripped from the brim"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned his weight"
4"Rain slicked his platinum hair"
5"He smelled of ozone, cheap"
6"Aurora gripped the edge of"
7"The crescent scar on her"
8"He stepped forward, forcing her"
9"She retreated two steps into"
10"Lucien slipped inside, sweeping his"
11"A ginger tabby cat leaped"
12"Aurora snapped, though her voice"
13"She crossed her arms, tucking"
14"Lucien set his cane against"
15"His knuckles bore fresh, darkening"
16"Her voice cracked, a tiny"
17"He slid the coat off"
18"Aurora stepped closer, her eyes"
19"Lucien's hand twitched toward his"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The three deadbolts disengaged with a series of sharp, metallic thuds that echoed through the narrow entryway."
1"Yet here he sat, occupying her space, breathing her air, reducing all her hard-won distance to dust with a single glance."
2"As the linen fell away, it revealed a jagged, shallow tear across his collarbone, the edges black with traces of low-level hellfire that sizzled faintly against…"
3"She kept her focus locked on the slice near his collarbone, refusing to lift her eyes to the dark stubble dusting his jaw, or the way his chest heaved with shal…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora snapped, though her voice lacked real bite"
1"she retorted, though her voice lacked conviction"
2"Lucien leaned down, his forehead coming to rest gently against hers"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Aurora snapped (snap)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"Lucien whispered softly (whisper)"
3"Lucien continued (continue)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Lucien admitted (admit)"
6"she retorted (retort)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.348
77.9032%