Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSEHX27SDHJ1P0D3BJ4F5S

Run Details

Duration:
9.3s
Cost:
$0.004827
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance cast a sickly emerald hue across the slick Soho pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the scent of spilled stout, old dust, and damp wool. Maps of forgotten continents and faded black-and-white photographs papered the dark timber walls. Silas dragged his left leg around the sticky mahogany counter, wiping down the surface with a grease-stained rag. He tossed a fresh beer mat toward a solitary figure huddled in the corner booth. Aurora pulled the collar of her worn leather jacket tight against the chill seeping through the floorboards. Straight black hair brushed her shoulders, framing a face sharpened by years of missed meals and missed rent. A faint crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist caught the amber glow of the wall sconce as she reached for her glass. She traced the rim with a fingernail, eyes scanning the dim room. The brass bell above the front door chimed. A gust of wet London wind swept inside, carrying the roar of evening traffic. A man stepped out of the drizzle, shaking rain from the shoulders of a tailored charcoal overcoat. He paused, scanning the tavern before locking eyes with the corner booth. Grey-streaked auburn hair framed a face etched with lines that hadn't existed back in Cardiff. "Rory?" Evan dropped his leather briefcase onto an empty chair. The polished leather scuffed against the floorboards. Aurora froze, her fingers tightening around the glass until her knuckles turned white. "You're a long way from the Severn estuary." Evan slid into the opposite side of the booth without waiting for an invitation. The familiar scent of sandalwood and expensive scotch cut through the stale tavern air. "Look at you. Still hiding in the dark." "What do you want, Evan?" "Can a man not check in on an old classmate? We share history." "We share a restraining order." Evan chuckled, a low, smooth sound that lacked any real warmth. He unbuttoned his coat, revealing a crisp white shirt and a silk tie knotted with precision. "You always did have a flair for the dramatic. Cardiff University expected great things from you. Pre-law top of your class. Then you vanished. Left your parents a frantic voicemail and dropped off the edge of the earth." "I left because staying meant drowning." "You ran from a promising future." Evan leaned forward, resting forearms on the sticky wood. His hazel eyes searched her face, mapping every change, every hard angle the years had carved into her cheeks. "Look at this place. You serve drinks to ghosts in Soho now? Is this what freedom looks like?" "Nobody serves drinks here except Silas." Aurora gestured vaguely toward the bar with her chin. "And I deliver food. I pay my own rent. No one tells me when to speak or how to dress." "Your father still asks about you every Sunday roast." Evan reached across the table, his palm resting flat near her glass. "He thinks you lost your mind. Your mother cries every time your name comes up in conversation." "Tell them I died. It would be closer to the truth than whatever story you invented to cover my absence." "I didn't invent anything." Evan pulled his hand back, steepling his fingers beneath his chin. "I simply told them the truth. That you threw away a brilliant career for the sake of adolescent rebellion. You abandoned a man who loved you." "You broke my wrist, Evan." "An accident." He dismissed the accusation with a flick of his wrist. "You tripped over the rug in the hallway. You were always clumsy when you drank too much." Aurora stood up so fast the wooden bench scraped against the floor with a harsh shriek. Silas stopped wiping the counter, his hand sliding instinctively toward the heavy timber beneath the cash register. "Get out." Aurora's voice dropped to a low, venomous hiss. "Sit down, Rory. You're making a scene." Evan didn't flinch. He adjusted his cuffs, his gaze tracking her movements with cold detachment. "You haven't changed at all. Still fly off the handle the second someone points out your flaws." "I survived you. That isn't a flaw." "You survived nothing." Evan stood, towering over the table. The sharp tailoring of his suit contrasted absurdly with the frayed tavern decor. "You're living in a box, dodging shadows, pretending you're some kind of survivor. You threw away a life of comfort for this miserable hole." "Comfort came with a bruise on my ribs every time I spoke out of turn." "Every action has a reaction, Rory. You provoked me." Evan stepped closer, invading her space, towering over her with the same practiced intimidation he had mastered years ago in their South Wales terrace house. "You always pushed until you broke something." A heavy shadow fell across the table. Silas stood beside them, his limp pronounced as he planted his weight squarely on his right foot. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed beneath the dim light. He didn't raise his voice, but the quiet authority in his posture commanded the entire room. "The lady asked you to leave." Evan turned his head slowly, looking Silas up and down with unconcealed disdain. "This is a private conversation. Mind your own business, barkeep." Silas didn't blink. His hazel eyes remained locked on Evan's face, cold and steady as a sniper's crosshairs. "In this establishment, every conversation within these four walls belongs to me. And right now, your presence is souring the beer." "I'm leaving of my own accord." Evan grabbed his briefcase from the chair, shooting one final, lingering look at Aurora. "Your father's number hasn't changed, Rory. When you grow up, give him a call." He turned on his heel and strode toward the door. The brass bell chimed softly as he disappeared back into the rainy London night. Aurora sank back down onto the bench, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The tremor in her hands spread up her arms, making her fingers ache. Silas pulled a small ceramic tumbler from beneath the bar and poured a finger of dark amber liquid. He walked over, set the glass down on the scarred wood between them, and pulled out the chair Evan had just vacated. He lowered himself onto the seat with a slow, deliberate wince from his bad knee. "He knows where you live now," Silas said, his voice gravelly and quiet. "He followed me." Aurora stared at the condensation trickling down the side of the glass. "Or he hired someone. It doesn't matter. He found me." "Nobody finds anyone in this city unless they leave a trail." Silas rested his elbows on the table, watching her with practiced patience. "Or unless they want to be found." "I didn't want this." "You stayed in the same borough for three years, Rory. Soho is small. London is smaller than you think when men like that start looking." Silas reached out, tapping a finger against the edge of her glass. "You thought you could outrun Cardiff by hiding behind a delivery helmet." "What was I supposed to do? Stay and let him finish the job?" "No." Silas shook his head, the grey streaks in his auburn hair catching the light. "You should have come to me the day you crossed the county line. Not two years later when the past knocks on the front door." Aurora lifted the tumbler and swallowed the liquor in one sharp burn. The fire hit her chest, grounding her against the sudden vertigo. "He talked about my parents," she whispered, her voice cracking for the first time. "He makes it sound like I'm the villain. Like I broke my own bones." "That's what men like that do." Silas leaned back, crossing his arms over his chest. "They rewrite the history until the victim believes the lie." "I don't believe the lie." Aurora slammed the empty glass down onto the wood. "I remember every second of it." "Good." Silas stood up, his knee clicking as he straightened his frame. He picked up her empty glass and turned toward the bar. "Because tomorrow, we change your route. We change your name again. And if he comes back through that door, you don't argue with him. You let me handle the trash."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:04:16.173Z" 7/25/2026, 2:04:16 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Silas leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.377
leniency0.755
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.075
92.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1379
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"solitary"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"solitary"
1"chill"
2"traced"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"familiar"
6"warmth"
7"silk"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1379
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount803
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Cardiff1
Evan13
Aurora10
South1
Wales1
Silas12
persons
0"Evan"
1"Aurora"
2"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"South"
5"Wales"
globalScore0.691
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1379
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.34
std18.87
cv0.643
sampleLengths
082
169
222
344
41
516
613
744
85
913
105
1165
126
1352
1435
1538
1620
1741
185
1929
2033
2110
2239
237
2446
2515
2641
2753
286
2923
3039
3134
3224
3326
3455
3513
3625
3730
384
3949
4013
4140
4223
4328
4425
4520
4653
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount808
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01608910891089109
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009900990099009901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.52
std6.6
cv0.455
sampleLengths
017
119
213
318
415
517
618
722
812
98
1014
1117
1212
1315
141
159
167
1713
1822
1914
208
215
2213
235
2411
2516
2638
276
2815
2919
3018
3115
3220
3321
3417
3520
3615
3726
385
3912
4017
4116
4217
4310
4410
4512
4617
477
489
4913
54.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.37894736842105264
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences62
matches
0"He tossed a fresh beer"
1"She traced the rim with"
2"He paused, scanning the tavern"
3"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
4"His hazel eyes searched her"
5"He dismissed the accusation with"
6"He adjusted his cuffs, his"
7"He didn't raise his voice,"
8"His hazel eyes remained locked"
9"He turned on his heel"
10"He walked over, set the"
11"He lowered himself onto the"
12"she whispered, her voice cracking"
13"He picked up her empty"
ratio0.226
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Maps of forgotten continents and"
2"Silas dragged his left leg"
3"He tossed a fresh beer"
4"Aurora pulled the collar of"
5"A faint crescent-shaped scar on"
6"She traced the rim with"
7"The brass bell above the"
8"A gust of wet London"
9"A man stepped out of"
10"He paused, scanning the tavern"
11"Evan dropped his leather briefcase"
12"The polished leather scuffed against"
13"Aurora froze, her fingers tightening"
14"Evan slid into the opposite"
15"The familiar scent of sandalwood"
16"Evan chuckled, a low, smooth"
17"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
18"Evan leaned forward, resting forearms"
19"His hazel eyes searched her"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Grey-streaked auburn hair framed a face etched with lines that hadn't existed back in Cardiff."
1"Silas stopped wiping the counter, his hand sliding instinctively toward the heavy timber beneath the cash register."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Evan reached, his palm resting flat near her glass"
1"Silas said, his voice gravelly and quiet"
2"she whispered, her voice cracking for the first time"
3"Silas stood up, his knee clicking as he straightened his frame"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.075
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.038
82.6742%