Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSFWJ0747YMCVAMPTNA1WR

Run Details

Duration:
26.5s
Cost:
$0.037452
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Damp cold seeped through the soles of Harlow’s boots. She descended the spiral cast-iron staircase, her torch flame piercing the gloom of the abandoned Camden station. Rust flakes drifted down like red snow. Below, soot coated the tiles of a platform decommissioned before the Blitz. Constable Miller crouched beside a hump of shadow near the tunnel archway. Flashlight beams crisscrossed the dark, illuminating swirls of airborne dust. "Mind your step, Detective." Miller picked his way across broken masonry. "Transit police dragged us out here twenty minutes ago. Local taggers forced the emergency grate." Harlow halted beside the body. A man lay sprawled on his back, eyes staring blankly into the arched ceiling. His expensive wool coat hung open, soaked through with underground drip. "Looks like a robbery gone sideways." Miller pointed his beam at a leather wallet protruding from the dead man's breast pocket. "Cash is still inside, but his phone is gone. Scuffle escalated. Stab wound to the neck, hit the carotid." Harlow crouched. Sharp jaw set, she adjusted the cuff of her jacket, exposing her worn leather watch. Three-fifteen in the morning. The second hand ticked backwards three seconds, leaped forward six, then died. She tapped the glass. Nothing. "Look closer, Miller." She reached into her kit, pulling out a pair of latex gloves. Miller shifted his weight, light swaying over the victim's face. "The blood pool is small, sure. Traumatised neck vein can seal under rapid shock." Harlow snapped the powderless rubber over her fingers. She tilted the victim’s collar back with two fingers. The tear in the fabric had charred edges. Stiffened threads curled like fried wire. Beneath the cloth, the neck wound wasn't a slice. Four distinct puncture marks lined the sternocleidomastoid muscle, neatly spaced, perfect as drill holes. No jagged torn flesh. No splash of dark arterial spray along the Victorian tunnel tiles. "A knife blade leaves jagged entry margins and drag marks." Harlow leaned lower, scenting the air. Ozone and burnt copper cut through the underground damp. "These holes are cauterised. Flesh cooked from the inside out." Miller rubbed the back of his neck. "Road flare? Modified cattle prod?" Harlow swept her beam across the stone floor around the head. A circle of pale grey dust enclosed the upper torso, fine as bone ash, breaking in a crisp arc six inches from the victim's ears. Outside the ring, thick soot lay undisturbed. Inside, the floor was scrubbed spotless. "Someone brought a brush?" Miller squinted. "Or brought a broom down here?" "Look at his hands." Harlow took the dead man’s right wrist. The fingers curled tight, locked in rigor. Under the fingernails, flecks of bright green verdigris gleamed against pale skin. Microscopic metal filings clung to the pads of his thumbs, catching the bright LED white of her light. She levered the stiff fingers open. An impression pressed deep into his palm—a circle no larger than an old crown coin, etched with intricate, jagged geometry that bruised the dead skin. The shape formed interlocking triangles around a central eye. Miller leaned down, whistling softly. "A medallion? Branding?" "No brand." Harlow traced the outer rim of the impression without touching the skin. "He held something hot. Brass, by the oxidation residue." "Maybe he was selling stolen antiques down here." Miller shone his light farther down the dark tunnel throat. The tracks disappeared into absolute blackness. "Camden Market is right above us. Plenty of fence activity on the surface." "Fences operate on street level, not forty feet below ground in a sealed tube line." Harlow stood, her eyes tracking the floor past the ash circle. A single footprint pierced the undisturbed dust three yards toward the tunnel mouth. Smaller than a man's boot. The tread was smooth, flat-soled—a woman's riding boot or delicate leather dress shoe. A thin dragging line ran alongside it, as though the traveler dragged a heavy satchel. Harlow stepped toward it. Her light caught a glint near the rail bed. A piece of bone, snapped cleanly at both ends, lay beside the iron track. It wasn't human. Small, polished smooth, carved with a vertical line through three horizontal dashes. Miller stepped over the rail, his heavy boot crunching on ballast. "Forensics is ten minutes out. We should let them dust the perimeter before we track dirt over everything." Harlow pinned him with a dark gaze. "Look at the dust around your boot, Constable." Miller froze, lowering his light. "You're kicking up soot." She gestured toward the clean footprint. "That impression over there didn't disturb the soot around it. The dust settled around the foot after it was placed. The air currents in this shaft moved around that spot." Miller frowned. "Drafts come through the ventilation shafts all the time." Harlow held up her hand. The cold air on her skin was dead calm. Not a whisper of wind rattled the loose cables hanging from the vault above. Yet six feet ahead, a wispy tendril of dust lifted off the rail, spun in a tight, silent spiral, and dissolved into nothingness. Her throat tightened. Three years ago, in a derelict warehouse in Southwark, DS Morris had stared at a similar silent vortex moments before his heart ruptured without a single physical mark on his chest. She reached into her coat pocket, pulling out a small steel ruler. She measured the distance between the ash arc on the floor and the victim's feet. Exactly five feet, seven inches. "Search his pockets." Harlow pointed at the coat. "Not the wallet. Check the lining." Miller knelt, grunting as he manipulated the stiff fabric. His gloved hand slipped into the internal breast pocket, then probed lower along the hem. "Seam's torn." "It isn't torn. It's tailored." Miller pulled his hand back, clutching a small scrap of vellum. The paper was heavy, yellowed, torn from a larger volume. Red ink, oxidized almost brown, formed columns of dense, archaized script. "Looks like Latin," Miller muttered, turning it toward his torch. "Or old French." Harlow snatched the slip from his fingers, holding it by the corners. The script wasn't Latin. The characters were angular, full of harsh geometric drops and floating diacritics—the same sigils pressed into the dead man's palm. On the reverse, a stamp bore a seal: a stylized owl wrapped around a cracked globe, stamped in blue archive ink. "British Museum," Harlow murmured under her breath. Miller raised an eyebrow. "Museum record? A mugger killed a curator?" "Curators don't carry bone tokens and brass compasses into dark tunnels at three in the morning." Harlow tucked the vellum into an evidence bag. "And muggers don't leave thousands of pounds in a dead man's coat while taking only a piece of brass." "So what are we looking at?" Harlow stared down the dark expanse of the tube tunnel. Farther down, where the modern line turned toward Euston, the air shimmered. Not heat haze—the temperature down here hovered near freezing. The darkness itself seemed thicker there, heavy, pulsing like a slow, rhythmic breath. "We aren't looking at a mugging." She turned her torch beam off, dropping the tunnel back into absolute darkness save for Miller's trembling light. "We're looking at an execution." "Execution?" Miller laughed, a thin, nervous sound that bounced off the curved iron walls. "Detective, people don't get executed in abandoned stations with old paper and bone scraps." "They do if they bring the wrong key to the wrong door." Harlow pointed her torch beam directly at the wall behind the victim. The white light bathed the dirty white tiles. Hidden beneath decades of brake dust and grime, etched deep into the ceramic glaze with surgical precision, lay a door-sized rectangle. Within the border, dozens of sigils spiraled inward toward a keyhole no larger than a coin. Fresh green verdigris smeared the keyhole's edge. Miller took a step back, his light flitting erratically over the wall. "That... that wasn't there when I did the first sweep." "It was there." Harlow felt the cold metal of her watch against her pulse point. The second hand twitched once, reversed, and stood still. "You just didn't know what to look for."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"perfect"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"traced"
6"glint"
7"whisper"
8"measured"
9"eyebrow"
10"shimmered"
11"rhythmic"
12"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1349
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount999
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Harlow19
Camden1
Blitz1
Miller18
Victorian1
Ozone1
Southwark1
Morris1
Latin1
Euston1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Miller"
2"Morris"
places
0"Southwark"
1"Euston"
globalScore0.549
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed thicker there, heavy, pulsing like a slow, rhythmic breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1349
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.98
std15.38
cv0.57
sampleLengths
045
122
226
330
440
538
615
724
869
935
1012
1149
1212
134
1444
156
1634
178
1823
1937
2026
2146
2213
2329
2429
2515
265
2740
2811
2951
3034
3132
3214
3326
345
3532
3613
3757
387
3911
4043
416
4244
4329
4428
4524
4645
477
4822
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was scrubbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"An impression pressed deep into his palm—a circle no larger than an old crown coin, etched with intricate, jagged geometry that bruised the dead skin."
1"The characters were angular, full of harsh geometric drops and floating diacritics—the same sigils pressed into the dead man's palm."
2"Not heat haze—the temperature down here hovered near freezing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.020854021847070508
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006951340615690168
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean10.97
std6.18
cv0.564
sampleLengths
09
117
27
312
412
510
611
715
85
914
1011
1121
1219
132
1415
154
1612
174
181
1915
2010
2114
228
239
248
256
269
2714
284
2911
3016
319
3210
337
345
3511
3625
377
386
396
406
414
427
437
4412
4518
466
4725
489
495
84.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5284552845528455
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners65
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Exactly five feet, seven inches."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences94
matches
0"She descended the spiral cast-iron"
1"His expensive wool coat hung"
2"She tapped the glass."
3"She reached into her kit,"
4"She tilted the victim’s collar"
5"She levered the stiff fingers"
6"Her light caught a glint"
7"It wasn't human."
8"She gestured toward the clean"
9"Her throat tightened."
10"She reached into her coat"
11"She measured the distance between"
12"His gloved hand slipped into"
13"She turned her torch beam"
ratio0.149
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences94
matches
0"She descended the spiral cast-iron"
1"Constable Miller crouched beside a"
2"Flashlight beams crisscrossed the dark,"
3"Miller picked his way across"
4"Harlow halted beside the body."
5"A man lay sprawled on"
6"His expensive wool coat hung"
7"Miller pointed his beam at"
8"The second hand ticked backwards"
9"She tapped the glass."
10"She reached into her kit,"
11"Miller shifted his weight, light"
12"Harlow snapped the powderless rubber"
13"She tilted the victim’s collar"
14"The tear in the fabric"
15"Harlow leaned lower, scenting the"
16"Ozone and burnt copper cut"
17"Miller rubbed the back of"
18"Harlow swept her beam across"
19"A circle of pale grey"
ratio0.713
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"An impression pressed deep into his palm—a circle no larger than an old crown coin, etched with intricate, jagged geometry that bruised the dead skin."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow stood, her eyes tracking the floor past the ash circle"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Miller muttered (mutter)"
1"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
2"Miller laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.143
88.9016%