Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSG3S655GW4DTRD7P5RQEQ

Run Details

Duration:
5.4s
Cost:
$0.002620
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three heavy deadbolts scraped open one by one within the narrow frame on Brick Lane. Rory pulled the steel bolt back, her shoulder pressed against the splintered wood, expecting a courier slip or Eva empty-handed and begging for tea. Platinum blond hair caught the harsh amber glow of the hallway bulb. Lucien stood on the threshold, filling the cramped landing in a tailored charcoal suit that smelled faintly of rain and expensive tobacco. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers—one amber, one stark black. "You missed our meeting at the docks," Lucien said, his thumb hooking over the silver crook of his ivory-handled cane. "I don't keep diaries for foreign fixers," Rory retorted, her fingers tightening around the door's edge until the wood bit into her palm. "A poor habit when the cargo involves your own skin." Lucien stepped past her shoulder before she could shift her weight, bringing the chill of the London street inside the cramped flat. Ptolemy the tabby bolted from a pile of ancient research scrolls, his tail bushed as he hissed from the safety of the kitchenette counter. "Take your boots off or get out," Rory said, slamming the heavy door behind him and throwing all three bolts back into place with deafening metallic thuds. "Cold welcomes suit London weather, Laila, but they waste time." Lucien set his cane against the stack of grimoires by the sofa, his platinum hair catching the light as he turned. "Don't call me that," Rory said, crossing her arms over her chest to hide the slight tremor in her hands. "You left Marseille without a word. No note, no message, just a missing chair at the café and a city full of blood-hunters sniffing my coat." "I cleared the alley behind you so you could breathe," Lucien said, closing the distance between them until the heat radiating from his chest cut through the chill in the room. "Staying meant a blade in your ribs." "I handle my own ribs," Rory said, tilting her chin up to meet his mismatched gaze, refusing to step back even as his cologne—smoke and crushed mint—overwhelmed her senses. "You handle them with far too many scars," Lucien murmured, his gaze dropping to the thin crescent mark visible on her left wrist. "Leave my wrists out of this." Rory pushed hard against his lapel, her palms flat against the dark wool of his suit. Lucien caught her wrists mid-shove, his fingers wrapping firmly around her bones without squeezing, anchoring her hands against his chest right over the rapid, heavy thud of his heart. "You run the moment things require honesty, Lucien." Rory strained against his grip, her breath catching as his thumb brushed once over the tender skin above her pulse point. "I came back across the channel," Lucien said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its polished edge. "Does that look like running?" "That looks like arrogance," Rory snapped, though she stopped pulling away, her fingers curling slightly into the fabric of his lapel instead. "I missed you," Lucien said, the admission falling between them with the weight of lead. "You have a strange way of showing devotion, leaving me to dodge demons in alleyways while you broker deals in Marseille." Rory stared up at him, her bright blue eyes burning with a mix of fury and old ache. "The deal in Marseille was for your contract," Lucien said, his jaw tightening as the mask slipped entirely. "They wanted your blood for the Avaros gate. I burnt their ledger to ash before I caught the Eurostar." Rory swallowed hard, the sharp retort dying in her throat as the reality of his absence settled over her like a physical weight. "You burned a syndicate ledger for me?" Rory whispered, the fight draining out of her limbs. "I would burn the city down to keep you breathing," Lucien said, his gaze searching her face with raw desperation. Rory let out a shaky breath, her fingers sliding up the wool of his lapel to rest against the side of his neck, feeling the warmth of his skin beneath her palm. "You are an absolute idiot, Lucien Moreau," Rory said, her voice softening just enough to betray the armor she wore. "I know," Lucien murmured, lowering his forehead until it rested gently against hers.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:05:07.249Z" 7/25/2026, 2:05:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory pushed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.833
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
86.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount718
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount718
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"firmly"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences29
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences29
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences33
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords715
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount508
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva1
Rory13
Lucien12
London1
Ptolemy1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.22
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount715
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
47.59% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean27.5
std8.71
cv0.317
sampleLengths
039
144
220
323
432
524
627
731
846
938
1029
1123
1222
1329
1429
1522
1622
1715
1839
1937
2023
2116
2220
2332
2420
2513
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs85
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences33
ratio0.061
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers—one amber, one stark black."
1"\"I handle my own ribs,\" Rory said, tilting her chin up to meet his mismatched gaze, refusing to step back even as his cologne—smoke and crushed mint—overwhelmed her senses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount514
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.0311284046692607
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009727626459143969
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences33
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
79.54% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences33
mean21.67
std7.56
cv0.349
sampleLengths
015
124
212
322
410
520
623
732
824
927
1031
1120
1226
1331
147
1529
1623
1722
1829
1929
2017
215
2222
2315
2439
2518
2619
2723
2816
2920
3032
3120
3213
90.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5454545454545454
totalSentences33
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount1
totalSentences29
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
ratio0.034
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences29
matches
0"Rory pulled the steel bolt"
1"Platinum blond hair caught the"
2"Lucien stood on the threshold,"
3"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
4"Lucien said, his thumb hooking"
5"Rory retorted, her fingers tightening"
6"Lucien stepped past her shoulder"
7"Ptolemy the tabby bolted from"
8"Rory said, slamming the heavy"
9"Lucien set his cane against"
10"Rory said, crossing her arms"
11"Lucien said, closing the distance"
12"Rory said, tilting her chin"
13"Lucien murmured, his gaze dropping"
14"Rory pushed hard against his"
15"Lucien caught her wrists mid-shove,"
16"Rory strained against his grip,"
17"Lucien said, his voice dropping"
18"Rory snapped, though she stopped"
19"Lucien said, the admission falling"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences29
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien stood on the threshold, filling the cramped landing in a tailored charcoal suit that smelled faintly of rain and expensive tobacco."
1"Rory let out a shaky breath, her fingers sliding up the wool of his lapel to rest against the side of his neck, feeling the warmth of his skin beneath her palm."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Lucien set, his platinum hair catching the light as he turned"
1"Rory pushed hard, her palms flat against the dark wool of his suit"
2"Lucien said, his voice dropping an octave, losing its polished edge"
3"Lucien said, the admission falling between them with the weight of lead"
4"Lucien said, his jaw tightening as the mask slipped entirely"
5"Rory whispered, the fight draining out of her limbs"
6"Lucien said, his gaze searching her face with raw desperation"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory retorted (retort)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory snapped (snap)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.333
68.7829%