Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
77
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took away from the center, running not toward escape—there was no escape—but toward the distant sound of a road, a gate, anything that belonged to the world she knew"
"Behind her, London hummed—distant cars, a siren that faded into nothing, the low thrum of a city that never slept."
1
"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in reckless abundance—foxglove, wild garlic, white campion that glowed with a faint, corpse-like phosphor."
2
"Carvings covered every surface—spirals that hurt to follow, eyes with too many lids, figures with limbs that branched like trees."
3
"Its crimson heart pulsed with a rhythm that matched nothing in her body—no heartbeat, no breath, some other clock altogether."
4
"Not faded—died."
5
"She checked her watch—half past three."
6
"Tall—taller than any human right—its spine curved like a drawn bow, limbs that bent in directions elbows and knees refused to allow."
7
"Not warm—arctic."
8
"But the breathing grew louder, closer, layered now—two, three, a chorus of hidden mouths."
9
"Its mouth hung open, stretching wider with each second, revealing nothing inside—only darkness that pulsed with its own rhythm."
10
"She scrambled upright, her legs shaking, and bolted for the gate she had entered—no, that path was gone, replaced by smaller, sharper stones arranged in spirals that led back inward."
11
"She heard a scream—terrified, male, cut short with a wet sound that made her stomach clench."
12
"In its dark surface, she saw her reflection—bright blue eyes wide with terror, black hair plastered to her cheeks, the crescent scar stark white on her wrist, her body kneeling at the water’s edge."
13
"She turned and ran, blind, through wildflowers that grabbed with gentle, persistent hands, through stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took away from the center, running not toward escape—there was no escape—but toward the distant sound of a road, a gate, anything that belonged to the world she knew."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
62
technicalSentenceCount
13
matches
0
"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in reckless abundance—foxglove, wild garlic, white campion that glowed with a faint, corpse-like phosphor."
1
"Its crimson heart pulsed with a rhythm that matched nothing in her body—no heartbeat, no breath, some other clock altogether."
2
"Her words echoed back distorted, repeating in a voice that wore her accent but carried a hollow, wooden quality that did not belong to human lungs."
3
"She moved faster, circling the interior, searching for a tear in the air, for colors that did not belong, for anything she could understand and fight."
4
"Now they leaned away from her, stems bending with silent urgency, creating narrow paths that funneled inward, toward the center, away from escape."
5
"Rory snapped her head toward it, and it vanished, leaving only darkness and the faint, sickening impression of eyes that reflected nothing, not even moonlight."
6
"Human in outline, mostly, but its arms hung past its knees, fingers trailing in the wildflowers, and its head swiveled too far, studying her with a face that wa…"
7
"She scrambled upright, her legs shaking, and bolted for the gate she had entered—no, that path was gone, replaced by smaller, sharper stones arranged in spirals…"
8
"She ran until her lungs burned and her vision blurred with tears she refused to shed, until she stumbled into the very center, where the wildflowers grew talles…"
9
"She heard a scream—terrified, male, cut short with a wet sound that made her stomach clench."
10
"Only the pool, and her own face in the water, now leaning closer, closer, reaching up with hands that dripped not water but something darker, something that wan…"
11
"Rory scrambled backward, her palms scraping soil, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
12
"She turned and ran, blind, through wildflowers that grabbed with gentle, persistent hands, through stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took awa…"