Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSGJ47KWKKDDGPVF30BYNG

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46.9s
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$0.023401
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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the rusted gate of Richmond Park with her shoulder. The hinge screamed like something wounded, then choked into silence. Behind her, London hummed—distant cars, a siren that faded into nothing, the low thrum of a city that never slept. Ahead, darkness waited with open arms. She had come because the stone had burned. That was the only logic that held water. For months, the Heartstone pendant had rested cold against her collarbone, a deep crimson weight no larger than her thumbnail, suspended from a silver chain that some unknown hand had fastened around her neck outside Silas’ bar. Tonight it had turned vicious. Heat had traced her ribs, seared her skin through her shirt, and pulled her north with the insistence of a hook in her chest. North, toward old oaks and hidden clearings she had only heard whispered about in back rooms and wary glances. Now she stood in air that tasted of copper and old rain. The moon hung high, half-strangled by October clouds, yet the grove supplied its own pale luminescence. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in reckless abundance—foxglove, wild garlic, white campion that glowed with a faint, corpse-like phosphor. They bloomed in defiance of frost, of autumn, of any law Rory understood. Her boots crushed stems that released scents of honey layered over rot, sweet and wrong, like perfume sprayed over a grave. She stopped at the circle of standing stones. Ancient oak, black with centuries and slick with moss, jutted from the earth in a ring broad enough to swallow a cottage. Carvings covered every surface—spirals that hurt to follow, eyes with too many lids, figures with limbs that branched like trees. Rory did not reach out to touch them. She had learned, in harder ways, that old things noticed when you invited them. "Find the source and leave," she said. Her voice came out thin, swallowed by air that felt thicker than it should. The pendant hung outside her jacket now, visible against her black sweater. Its crimson heart pulsed with a rhythm that matched nothing in her body—no heartbeat, no breath, some other clock altogether. Near a portal to Hel, it warmed. Here, in this pocket torn between Earth and the Fae realm, it hung dead and heavy. That absence terrified her more than any heat. She took three steps into the circle. The wind died. Not faded—died. One moment it rustled her straight black hair across her face, cool and familiar. The next, silence pressed against her eardrums with the weight of deep water. Rory froze, her bright blue eyes scanning the tree line. The oaks beyond the stones stood motionless, not a leaf trembling. No owls called. No foxes rustled through undergrowth. Even London had vanished, leaving her with only her shallow breath and the soft crunch of dead petals beneath her boots. Then she heard the breathing. Not hers. Hers came quick, shallow, panicked. This was deeper, wetter, emanating from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory turned in a slow circle, her right hand drifting to the knife in her coat pocket. The breath tracked her movement, always lingering behind her left shoulder, close enough that she should have felt warmth on her neck. She felt only cold. "Who's there?" Her words echoed back distorted, repeating in a voice that wore her accent but carried a hollow, wooden quality that did not belong to human lungs. She moved faster, circling the interior, searching for a tear in the air, for colors that did not belong, for anything she could understand and fight. The wildflowers had shifted. She was certain of it. Moments ago they faced the moon with botanical obedience. Now they leaned away from her, stems bending with silent urgency, creating narrow paths that funneled inward, toward the center, away from escape. Rory’s heart slammed against her ribs. She checked her watch—half past three. She blinked, and the hands stuttered, or perhaps they had always read half past three, she could not be sure. Time in this place moved like water through broken glass, unpredictable, cruel. At the edge of her vision, something slid between two standing stones. Tall—taller than any human right—its spine curved like a drawn bow, limbs that bent in directions elbows and knees refused to allow. It did not walk. The ground seemed to pull it forward on invisible threads, smooth and dreadful. Rory snapped her head toward it, and it vanished, leaving only darkness and the faint, sickening impression of eyes that reflected nothing, not even moonlight. Her left wrist itched. She pulled back her sleeve, exposed the small crescent-shaped scar, pale and old against her skin, legacy of a childhood fall she barely remembered. She rubbed it hard, a habit born of older fears, ones with human faces and human voices. The pendant suddenly blazed. Not warm—arctic. The crimson gem flared with an inner light that painted her chest and the dead grass at her feet in shades of fresh blood. Rory gasped and clutched it, expecting a portal, a rip in reality, some explanation for why she had been dragged here. Nothing opened. But the breathing grew louder, closer, layered now—two, three, a chorus of hidden mouths. She pressed her back against the nearest stone, sliding downward until her knees struck earth. The pendant had gone dark again, dead weight against her sternum. She pulled her legs to her chest, wrapped her arms around her shins, and forced her eyes to stay open, to scan, to watch. The figures emerged. Not running. Walking with a gait that turned her stomach, feet landing in patterns of three, then four, then three again. The closest stopped at the circle’s edge, precisely where she had entered. Human in outline, mostly, but its arms hung past its knees, fingers trailing in the wildflowers, and its head swiveled too far, studying her with a face that was only a blank oval of shadow. Its mouth hung open, stretching wider with each second, revealing nothing inside—only darkness that pulsed with its own rhythm. Rory stopped breathing altogether. She wanted to scream, but her throat had sealed itself. She wanted to run, but her legs had turned to water. Then, deep in the woods beyond, came a new sound. Footsteps. Human ones, running hard, crashing through undergrowth without care for stealth. The figures turned in perfect, mechanical synchronization, heads snapping toward the noise like puppets yanked by a single cord. Rory seized the moment. She scrambled upright, her legs shaking, and bolted for the gate she had entered—no, that path was gone, replaced by smaller, sharper stones arranged in spirals that led back inward. She ran the opposite direction, deeper into the grove, toward the heart of the circle, away from the figures, away from whatever poor soul was running toward death. She ran until her lungs burned and her vision blurred with tears she refused to shed, until she stumbled into the very center, where the wildflowers grew tallest, brushing her shoulders with soft, insistent touches, and where a pool of black water waited, still as glass, reflecting not the moon but something beneath its surface that moved with hungry purpose. Rory fell to her knees at the pool’s edge. Behind her, the human footsteps had reached the border. She heard a scream—terrified, male, cut short with a wet sound that made her stomach clench. Then silence swallowed everything. But she was not alone. The pool rippled, though no wind stirred the air. In its dark surface, she saw her reflection—bright blue eyes wide with terror, black hair plastered to her cheeks, the crescent scar stark white on her wrist, her body kneeling at the water’s edge. Except she was kneeling. The reflection stood. And smiled with teeth that had not been there a moment before. Rory turned, slowly, her heart a wild thing in her chest, expecting to see one of the figures behind her. There was nothing. Only the pool, and her own face in the water, now leaning closer, closer, reaching up with hands that dripped not water but something darker, something that wanted to pull her down into the black. Rory scrambled backward, her palms scraping soil, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The pendant lay dead against her chest, useless, betrayed by whatever rules governed this place. She turned and ran, blind, through wildflowers that grabbed with gentle, persistent hands, through stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took away from the center, running not toward escape—there was no escape—but toward the distant sound of a road, a gate, anything that belonged to the world she knew. Behind her, the water splashed. She did not look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"precisely"
2"very"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1465
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"grave"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count2
10
word"footsteps"
count2
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"mechanical"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"grave"
4"pulsed"
5"familiar"
6"scanning"
7"warmth"
8"echoed"
9"stomach"
10"footsteps"
11"perfect"
12"mechanical"
13"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"e with terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1449
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1440
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Heartstone1
Tonight1
October1
Rory13
Hel1
Earth1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Tonight"
4"Hel"
5"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took away from the center, running not toward escape—there was no escape—but toward the distant sound of a road, a gate, anything that belonged to the world she knew"
61.97% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.38
wordCount1449
matches
0"not the moon but something beneath its surface"
1"not water but something darker, something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"darkness that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean29.57
std26.5
cv0.896
sampleLengths
048
18
293
312
468
58
664
721
863
97
103
1179
125
1361
142
1526
1667
1744
1812
1964
2045
214
2247
232
2414
2550
263
2787
284
2921
3010
3131
324
3358
3460
3534
364
375
3843
394
403
4112
4220
433
4435
4528
4653
475
485
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"been dragged"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs242
matches
0"was running"
1"was kneeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences107
ratio0.131
matches
0"Behind her, London hummed—distant cars, a siren that faded into nothing, the low thrum of a city that never slept."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in reckless abundance—foxglove, wild garlic, white campion that glowed with a faint, corpse-like phosphor."
2"Carvings covered every surface—spirals that hurt to follow, eyes with too many lids, figures with limbs that branched like trees."
3"Its crimson heart pulsed with a rhythm that matched nothing in her body—no heartbeat, no breath, some other clock altogether."
4"Not faded—died."
5"She checked her watch—half past three."
6"Tall—taller than any human right—its spine curved like a drawn bow, limbs that bent in directions elbows and knees refused to allow."
7"Not warm—arctic."
8"But the breathing grew louder, closer, layered now—two, three, a chorus of hidden mouths."
9"Its mouth hung open, stretching wider with each second, revealing nothing inside—only darkness that pulsed with its own rhythm."
10"She scrambled upright, her legs shaking, and bolted for the gate she had entered—no, that path was gone, replaced by smaller, sharper stones arranged in spirals that led back inward."
11"She heard a scream—terrified, male, cut short with a wet sound that made her stomach clench."
12"In its dark surface, she saw her reflection—bright blue eyes wide with terror, black hair plastered to her cheeks, the crescent scar stark white on her wrist, her body kneeling at the water’s edge."
13"She turned and ran, blind, through wildflowers that grabbed with gentle, persistent hands, through stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took away from the center, running not toward escape—there was no escape—but toward the distant sound of a road, a gate, anything that belonged to the world she knew."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.038834951456310676
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.009708737864077669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean13.54
std10.31
cv0.762
sampleLengths
012
110
220
36
48
58
637
75
824
919
1012
1116
1218
1313
1421
158
1622
1720
188
1914
207
2114
2212
2320
247
2516
268
277
283
292
3014
3113
3210
3311
343
355
3621
375
382
395
4011
4117
4222
434
442
4526
4626
474
485
499
61.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40186915887850466
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then she heard the breathing."
1"Then, deep in the woods"
2"Then silence swallowed everything."
3"Only the pool, and her"
ratio0.04
98.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences99
matches
0"She had come because the"
1"They bloomed in defiance of"
2"Her boots crushed stems that"
3"She stopped at the circle"
4"She had learned, in harder"
5"Her voice came out thin,"
6"Its crimson heart pulsed with"
7"She took three steps into"
8"Hers came quick, shallow, panicked."
9"She felt only cold."
10"Her words echoed back distorted,"
11"She moved faster, circling the"
12"She was certain of it."
13"She checked her watch—half past"
14"She blinked, and the hands"
15"It did not walk."
16"Her left wrist itched."
17"She pulled back her sleeve,"
18"She rubbed it hard, a"
19"She pressed her back against"
ratio0.303
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rory pushed through the rusted"
1"The hinge screamed like something"
2"She had come because the"
3"That was the only logic"
4"Tonight it had turned vicious."
5"Heat had traced her ribs,"
6"The moon hung high, half-strangled"
7"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
8"They bloomed in defiance of"
9"Her boots crushed stems that"
10"She stopped at the circle"
11"Carvings covered every surface—spirals that"
12"Rory did not reach out"
13"She had learned, in harder"
14"Her voice came out thin,"
15"The pendant hung outside her"
16"Its crimson heart pulsed with"
17"Here, in this pocket torn"
18"That absence terrified her more"
19"She took three steps into"
ratio0.717
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now she stood in air"
1"Even London had vanished, leaving"
2"Now they leaned away from"
ratio0.03
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in reckless abundance—foxglove, wild garlic, white campion that glowed with a faint, corpse-like phosphor."
1"Its crimson heart pulsed with a rhythm that matched nothing in her body—no heartbeat, no breath, some other clock altogether."
2"Her words echoed back distorted, repeating in a voice that wore her accent but carried a hollow, wooden quality that did not belong to human lungs."
3"She moved faster, circling the interior, searching for a tear in the air, for colors that did not belong, for anything she could understand and fight."
4"Now they leaned away from her, stems bending with silent urgency, creating narrow paths that funneled inward, toward the center, away from escape."
5"Rory snapped her head toward it, and it vanished, leaving only darkness and the faint, sickening impression of eyes that reflected nothing, not even moonlight."
6"Human in outline, mostly, but its arms hung past its knees, fingers trailing in the wildflowers, and its head swiveled too far, studying her with a face that wa…"
7"She scrambled upright, her legs shaking, and bolted for the gate she had entered—no, that path was gone, replaced by smaller, sharper stones arranged in spirals…"
8"She ran until her lungs burned and her vision blurred with tears she refused to shed, until she stumbled into the very center, where the wildflowers grew talles…"
9"She heard a scream—terrified, male, cut short with a wet sound that made her stomach clench."
10"Only the pool, and her own face in the water, now leaning closer, closer, reaching up with hands that dripped not water but something darker, something that wan…"
11"Rory scrambled backward, her palms scraping soil, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
12"She turned and ran, blind, through wildflowers that grabbed with gentle, persistent hands, through stones that seemed to lean closer with each step she took awa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8484%