| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 844 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 844 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 833 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.75% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Near a portal, it sang without sound." |
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| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 774 | | uniqueNames | 22 | | maxNameDensity | 2.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 5 | | Carter | 3 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Cardiff | 3 | | London | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Malphora | 2 | | Fae-touched-tilted | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Cheung" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Eva" | | 8 | "Rory" | | 9 | "Malphora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.337 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.95% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.2 | | wordCount | 833 | | matches | | 0 | "not a place but a mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 14.12 | | std | 12.29 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Time in the Grove moved like a drunk—an hour inside could bleed days outside, or swallow minutes whole." | | 1 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—there, then not there, a shape wearing the darkness wrong." | | 2 | "Sounds arrived that had no source—laughter like breaking glass, whispers in languages her Welsh mother had never taught, her Irish barrister father never spoken." | | 3 | "The voice came from everywhere—the moss, the stones, the wrong-moving shadows." | | 4 | "The wildflowers glowed brighter, guiding her or trapping her—she could not tell." | | 5 | "It wore Rory's shape, her height, her black hair, but its bright blue eyes were wrong—too bright, glowing with the same crimson as the Heartstone." | | 6 | "The wildflowers screamed—silent, bending flat." | | 7 | "The sounds—the glass-laughter, the whispers—grew louder, orchestrated." | | 8 | "The figure—Malphora, the mirror, the Fae-touched—tilted its head." | | 9 | "Time in the Grove shattered—minutes outside became centuries inside, or centuries collapsed to nothing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 508 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.025590551181102362 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003937007874015748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 7 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.925 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 43.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.31932773109243695 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard her name." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come for the" | | 1 | "Its crimson glow had pulled" | | 2 | "She wore black." | | 3 | "Her shoulder-length hair caught nothing." | | 4 | "She still came." | | 5 | "Her voice drowned in the" | | 6 | "They did not match the" | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned." | | 8 | "Her fingers found the gem" | | 9 | "She was cool-headed, quick-thinking, the" | | 10 | "She walked forward." | | 11 | "Its faint inner glow answered" | | 12 | "She reached the center." | | 13 | "She did not run." | | 14 | "She turned in a circle." | | 15 | "Her backstory flashed: fleeing Evan," | | 16 | "It wore Rory's shape, her" | | 17 | "it said with Rory's voice" | | 18 | "Its warmth was not comfort" | | 19 | "It was recognition." |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the" | | 2 | "She had come for the" | | 3 | "Its crimson glow had pulled" | | 4 | "She wore black." | | 5 | "Her shoulder-length hair caught nothing." | | 6 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 7 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 8 | "Rory knew this." | | 9 | "She still came." | | 10 | "Footsteps cracked behind her, though" | | 11 | "The wildflowers glowed faint white," | | 12 | "The pendant throbbed." | | 13 | "Her voice drowned in the" | | 14 | "Shadows stretched between the oaks," | | 15 | "They did not match the" | | 16 | "Rory walked deeper." | | 17 | "The clearing opened like a" | | 18 | "Something moved at the edge" | | 19 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned." |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped past the ancient oaks, her boots crushing wildflowers that bloomed despite November's teeth." | | 1 | "They did not match the moon, which hung sickle-thin and silent." | | 2 | "She was cool-headed, quick-thinking, the girl who had fled an abusive ex in Cardiff and rebuilt herself in London delivery routes for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Emp…" | | 3 | "Rory felt the portal open behind her, a cold breath of the Hel realm, pulling at her coat, her hair, her very presence in London, in Cardiff, in any world that …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |