Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSGQWKTR4SKTNVFS0VSSJT

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.005473
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones of the Fae Grove wore moss like old bruises. Aurora Carter stepped past the ancient oaks, her boots crushing wildflowers that bloomed despite November's teeth. She had come for the Heartstone. Its crimson glow had pulled her here, warm against her collarbone, pulsing faster with every yard closer to Richmond Park's hidden mouth. She wore black. Her shoulder-length hair caught nothing. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. Wrong. The air tasted of copper and forgotten summers. Time in the Grove moved like a drunk—an hour inside could bleed days outside, or swallow minutes whole. Rory knew this. She still came. Footsteps cracked behind her, though she had not turned. The wildflowers glowed faint white, wrong for night, wrong for season. The pendant throbbed. "Not alone," she said. Her voice drowned in the wrongness. Shadows stretched between the oaks, long and finger-thin. They did not match the moon, which hung sickle-thin and silent. Rory walked deeper. The clearing opened like a mouth. Something moved at the edge of her vision—there, then not there, a shape wearing the darkness wrong. She stopped. Her bright blue eyes scanned. The Heartstone burned her sternum now. Deep crimson, thumbnail-sized, silver chain biting her skin. Near a Hel portal, it warmed. Near a portal, it sang without sound. Rory reached for it. Her fingers found the gem through her coat. A breath, not hers, grazed her neck. Cold. Ancient. She spun. Nothing stood where nothing should stand. Yet the wildflowers bent away from an invisible weight. Rory's heart hammered a steady rhythm against the stone's pulse. She was cool-headed, quick-thinking, the girl who had fled an abusive ex in Cardiff and rebuilt herself in London delivery routes for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress. Intelligence meant nothing here. The Grove held its breath. She walked forward. The wrongness deepened. Sounds arrived that had no source—laughter like breaking glass, whispers in languages her Welsh mother had never taught, her Irish barrister father never spoken. Footsteps circled, always behind, always just beyond the ancient oaks. Rory tightened her grip on the Heartstone. Its faint inner glow answered the dark. She reached the center. The ground held a circle of blackened earth. No grass. No wildflowers. Here, time had died differently. Rory knelt. The pendant blazed now, crimson light painting her sharp features, her straight black hair, the small crescent scar hidden beneath her sleeve. Warmth flooded her palm. Then she heard her name. Not spoken. Remembered. "Aurora Carter." The voice came from everywhere—the moss, the stones, the wrong-moving shadows. Rory rose slowly. She did not run. Running fed them. "You came for the portal," she said. Silence answered. But the silence had weight. She turned in a circle. The Grove had changed. The standing stones stood closer. The wildflowers glowed brighter, guiding her or trapping her—she could not tell. Her backstory flashed: fleeing Evan, fleeing Cardiff's weight, finding Eva's hand in London, finding work above Silas' bar, finding this pendant from an unknown benefactor who knew her true reason for leaving law school behind. The wrongness peaked. A figure stood at the tree line. Not human. Not fully. It wore Rory's shape, her height, her black hair, but its bright blue eyes were wrong—too bright, glowing with the same crimson as the Heartstone. The crescent scar marked its wrist, mirrored. "Malphora," Rory whispered. The alias she never used. The name the unknown benefactor had signed. The figure smiled with Rory's mouth. "You sought me," it said with Rory's voice. The wildflowers screamed—silent, bending flat. The ancient oaks groaned. Rory clutched the Heartstone. Its warmth was not comfort now. It was recognition. "I came for answers," she said. The figure stepped into the clearing. Its feet did not touch the blackened earth. "You came because I called," it said. The shadows between the trees multiplied. They moved with purpose. The sounds—the glass-laughter, the whispers—grew louder, orchestrated. Rory's intelligence sparked. Out-of-the-box. Always. "You are the portal," she said. The figure—Malphora, the mirror, the Fae-touched—tilted its head. "I am the door you opened." The Heartstone pulsed in rhythm with Rory's heart, both accelerating. She understood then. The pendant was not given. It was planted. The unknown benefactor was not human. The grove was not a place but a mouth, and she had walked inside willingly. The shadows rushed. Rory did not scream. She held the crimson stone high, its faint inner glow fighting the dark. "I close it," she said. "Not open it." Malphora's smile widened. "Too late." The ancient oaks bent inward. The wildflowers withered in an instant, blackening. Time in the Grove shattered—minutes outside became centuries inside, or centuries collapsed to nothing. Rory felt the portal open behind her, a cold breath of the Hel realm, pulling at her coat, her hair, her very presence in London, in Cardiff, in any world that knew her as Rory Carter, delivery girl, survivor, student of pre-law. She held the Heartstone. The crimson gem blazed. And Rory Carter stepped through the dark.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:05:27.846Z" 7/25/2026, 2:05:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"throbbed"
2"scanned"
3"weight"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"pulsed"
8"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences115
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords833
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Near a portal, it sang without sound."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount774
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove5
Carter3
November1
Heartstone7
Richmond1
Park1
Hel2
Cardiff3
London3
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Welsh1
Irish1
Silence1
Evan1
Eva1
Rory18
Malphora2
Fae-touched-tilted1
persons
0"Carter"
1"November"
2"Heartstone"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Silence"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
8"Rory"
9"Malphora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Hel"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
globalScore0.337
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
79.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.2
wordCount833
matches
0"not a place but a mouth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean14.12
std12.29
cv0.871
sampleLengths
056
116
21
332
423
510
628
724
827
912
109
112
1215
1340
145
1540
1614
174
1817
192
2026
215
223
232
2411
2510
267
277
2826
2935
303
317
324
3332
3415
356
368
379
3813
396
4014
417
4217
435
446
458
466
4710
4832
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"was planted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences119
ratio0.084
matches
0"Time in the Grove moved like a drunk—an hour inside could bleed days outside, or swallow minutes whole."
1"Something moved at the edge of her vision—there, then not there, a shape wearing the darkness wrong."
2"Sounds arrived that had no source—laughter like breaking glass, whispers in languages her Welsh mother had never taught, her Irish barrister father never spoken."
3"The voice came from everywhere—the moss, the stones, the wrong-moving shadows."
4"The wildflowers glowed brighter, guiding her or trapping her—she could not tell."
5"It wore Rory's shape, her height, her black hair, but its bright blue eyes were wrong—too bright, glowing with the same crimson as the Heartstone."
6"The wildflowers screamed—silent, bending flat."
7"The sounds—the glass-laughter, the whispers—grew louder, orchestrated."
8"The figure—Malphora, the mirror, the Fae-touched—tilted its head."
9"Time in the Grove shattered—minutes outside became centuries inside, or centuries collapsed to nothing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount508
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.025590551181102362
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003937007874015748
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean7
std6.47
cv0.925
sampleLengths
012
116
26
322
43
55
68
71
88
918
103
113
129
1311
143
154
166
178
1811
193
206
2117
222
235
246
258
266
277
284
298
307
311
321
332
346
359
3610
3726
384
395
403
413
4224
4310
447
457
464
478
482
492
43.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.31932773109243695
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners38
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then she heard her name."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences93
matches
0"She had come for the"
1"Its crimson glow had pulled"
2"She wore black."
3"Her shoulder-length hair caught nothing."
4"She still came."
5"Her voice drowned in the"
6"They did not match the"
7"Her bright blue eyes scanned."
8"Her fingers found the gem"
9"She was cool-headed, quick-thinking, the"
10"She walked forward."
11"Its faint inner glow answered"
12"She reached the center."
13"She did not run."
14"She turned in a circle."
15"Her backstory flashed: fleeing Evan,"
16"It wore Rory's shape, her"
17"it said with Rory's voice"
18"Its warmth was not comfort"
19"It was recognition."
ratio0.28
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences93
matches
0"The standing stones of the"
1"Aurora Carter stepped past the"
2"She had come for the"
3"Its crimson glow had pulled"
4"She wore black."
5"Her shoulder-length hair caught nothing."
6"The crescent scar on her"
7"The air tasted of copper"
8"Rory knew this."
9"She still came."
10"Footsteps cracked behind her, though"
11"The wildflowers glowed faint white,"
12"The pendant throbbed."
13"Her voice drowned in the"
14"Shadows stretched between the oaks,"
15"They did not match the"
16"Rory walked deeper."
17"The clearing opened like a"
18"Something moved at the edge"
19"Her bright blue eyes scanned."
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped past the ancient oaks, her boots crushing wildflowers that bloomed despite November's teeth."
1"They did not match the moon, which hung sickle-thin and silent."
2"She was cool-headed, quick-thinking, the girl who had fled an abusive ex in Cardiff and rebuilt herself in London delivery routes for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Emp…"
3"Rory felt the portal open behind her, a cold breath of the Hel realm, pulling at her coat, her hair, her very presence in London, in Cardiff, in any world that …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
76.6701%