Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSJDS7MCBBM99GY1967GW1

Run Details

Duration:
10m 26s
Cost:
$0.024610
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain soaked Rory’s coat as she pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest. The green neon above the entrance bled crimson into the puddles outside, then vanished into the dark. Inside, the air smelled of burnt orange peel, stale ale, and the particular dust of old paper. Black-and-white photographs of strangers stared from the brick walls. Ancient maps curled behind glass frames, countries renamed by war, borders drawn in ink that had long since faded. She shook the water from her hair, straight black strands clinging to her cheeks. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched beneath her sleeve, a childhood relic that always woke when the weather turned sour. Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades. His grey-streaked auburn beard caught the low amber light. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed with each circular motion. His left leg dragged a fraction as he shifted his weight, that old Prague injury announcing itself in silence. “Usual corner?” His voice carried the gravel of unfiltered cigarettes and long nights. “Just a pint,” Rory said. She slid onto the stool beneath the Caucasus map, far enough from the door that the draft wouldn’t reach her. Then she saw Eva. Eva sat at the corner table, half-hidden by a pillar, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent. Her hair, once a wild halo of copper curls that smelled of cheap shampoo and rebellion, now lay in a sharp, disciplined bob. She held a glass of red wine with both hands, as though the stem might shatter without warning. Eva looked up. The glass stopped halfway to her lips. “Rory Carter,” she said. Not a question. Rory’s fingers tightened around her pint glass. The cold bit through her palm. “Eva.” Years collapsed into the space between them. They had not spoken since Cardiff, since the night Eva had shoved a duffel bag into Rory’s hands and told her to run before Evan came back. “You look different,” Eva said. Rory glanced at the leather bag beside Eva’s chair, at the heels that had replaced the scuffed trainers of their youth. “So do you.” Eva set her glass down. The sound cracked sharp against the wood. “You disappeared.” “You told me to.” “I told you to leave Evan. Not to vanish from the earth.” Rory drank. The ale was bitter, familiar, grounding. “You vanished first. You stayed.” “I stayed because someone had to hold the line.” “You stayed because you always liked the courtroom more than the fight.” Eva’s jaw tightened. “I stayed because you ran without a word. One morning you were there, sharing a flat that smelled of damp and hope. The next, nothing. A letter I found under my pillow. Three lines.” “I thought you wouldn’t want to hear from a delivery girl who lived in fear.” Eva leaned forward, her polished mask cracking at the edges. “You think I care about the delivery?” “Then why the armour?” Eva pulled back one hand, then the other, hiding them in her lap. “Because I wear it now. Just like you wear that scar.” Rory touched her left wrist, the crescent hidden beneath her sleeve. She did not hide it. She only acknowledged it, the way one nods to an old enemy across a room. Silas limped from behind the bar, set a bowl of peanuts on their table without being asked, and retreated. His hazel eyes met Rory’s for half a second, then moved on. The signet ring on his right hand caught the light like a small, sealed secret. Eva stared at the peanuts. “Your father called my firm.” Rory went still. “Brendan? He never calls anyone unless there is a bill to be paid.” “Not your father. Your mother. Jennifer. She used your full name. Aurora Carter. She asked if I knew where you were.” The name Aurora sat heavy in Rory’s mouth, a stranger’s coat draped over her shoulders. “Why?” Eva’s voice dropped, stripped of its boardroom steel. “She is dying, Rory. Not gently. Not with grace. Months. Perhaps weeks. She asked me to find you.” The words hung in the dim air between the old maps and the photographs of people long dead. Rory looked at Eva, searching for the girl who had once screamed at Evan in a car park, who had promised they would both get out, who had believed that running was the same as freedom. “Do you miss who we were?” Rory asked. Eva’s breath came sharp, quick, controlled. “Every day. I miss the girl who believed leaving was enough. I am still running. I just do it in heels now, in courtrooms, in briefs that bury people alive with language.” “You became him,” Rory said. Not an accusation. A fact observed. “I became the barrister he always wanted you to be. And I hate myself for it.” Rory finished her pint. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a small crescent of old pain that had never learned to fade. “I deliver food for Yu-Fei Cheung. I live in the flat above this bar. I do not have a father who writes my future with a fountain pen. I have a mother who is dying, and I have not seen her since I fled.” “You could see her now.” “I do not know if I can go back.” Eva stood, smoothing her coat with hands that trembled despite her practice. The movement was mechanical, learned, false. “None of us can go back. But some of us have to pretend we never left.” She walked toward the door. The green neon from the sign above caught her hair, turning it copper for one brief, ghostly second, then black, then gone. Rory sat alone beneath the Caucasus map. Silas limped over, set another pint before her, and said nothing. His presence filled the space Eva had emptied. Rory wrapped her hands around the cold glass. Outside, rain kept falling against the window, washing the streets clean of nothing. Inside, the black-and-white photographs watched, silent and unchanging, witnesses to every departure that had ever been named regret. She thought of Cardiff. She thought of Eva’s letter, unread, unwritten, lost in the years she had spent becoming someone else. She thought of her mother’s voice, searching for Aurora, a name Rory had tried to bury beneath delivery bags and barstools. The weight of it pressed down, not sharp, not sudden. It settled, slow and certain, like water finding its level. Rory drank. The ale tasted of endings. She did not finish the glass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"throbbed"
4"trembled"
5"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences72
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1102
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount784
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory19
Raven1
Nest1
Prague1
Caucasus2
Eva17
Cardiff2
Evan2
Aurora2
Silas3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
places
0"Prague"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.288
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"believed that running"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean22.96
std17.15
cv0.747
sampleLengths
076
136
258
313
45
524
661
710
84
93
1014
1134
125
1324
1414
154
1612
1713
189
1912
2037
2115
2217
234
2424
2531
2646
2710
2816
2921
3016
3126
3218
3336
348
3538
3611
3716
3866
395
409
4134
4227
4326
4439
4542
4620
4713
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"being asked"
1"been named"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences96
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount790
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.0189873417721519
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0037974683544303796
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.48
std8.14
cv0.709
sampleLengths
014
117
217
39
419
514
622
717
89
913
1019
1113
125
1320
144
1520
1623
1718
183
197
204
213
227
236
241
257
2627
275
2821
293
305
317
322
334
3412
352
366
375
389
3912
403
4134
4215
4310
447
454
4613
4711
4811
495
46.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners30
51.28% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Then she saw Eva."
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences65
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
2"His left leg dragged a"
3"His voice carried the gravel"
4"She slid onto the stool"
5"Her hair, once a wild"
6"She held a glass of"
7"They had not spoken since"
8"She did not hide it."
9"She only acknowledged it, the"
10"His hazel eyes met Rory’s"
11"She walked toward the door."
12"His presence filled the space"
13"She thought of Cardiff."
14"She thought of Eva’s letter,"
15"She thought of her mother’s"
16"It settled, slow and certain,"
17"She did not finish the"
ratio0.277
29.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences65
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"She shook the water from"
2"The crescent scar on her"
3"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
4"His grey-streaked auburn beard caught"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"His left leg dragged a"
7"His voice carried the gravel"
8"She slid onto the stool"
9"Eva sat at the corner"
10"Her hair, once a wild"
11"She held a glass of"
12"Eva looked up."
13"The glass stopped halfway to"
14"Rory’s fingers tightened around her"
15"The cold bit through her"
16"Years collapsed into the space"
17"They had not spoken since"
18"Rory glanced at the leather"
19"Eva set her glass down."
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Ancient maps curled behind glass frames, countries renamed by war, borders drawn in ink that had long since faded."
1"Silas stood behind the mahogany bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better decades."
2"Eva sat at the corner table, half-hidden by a pillar, wearing a coat that cost more than Rory’s monthly rent."
3"Rory glanced at the leather bag beside Eva’s chair, at the heels that had replaced the scuffed trainers of their youth."
4"Eva stood, smoothing her coat with hands that trembled despite her practice."
5"Inside, the black-and-white photographs watched, silent and unchanging, witnesses to every departure that had ever been named regret."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.7878%