Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSMS7TJ0J86GYR892AVGH0

Run Details

Duration:
13.8s
Cost:
$0.014379
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass handle clicked down before the third knock could echo. Aurora swung the door wide, a half-eaten slice of buttered toast poised in her left hand, ready to bark at the delivery driver who kept dumping packages on the landing. The words died in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the flickering hallway bulb, his pale skin casting a ghostly hue against the peeling wallpaper of the stairwell. His charcoal coat smelled faintly of rain, cloves, and expensive tobacco. A thin ivory handle rested under his gloved fingers, the hidden silver blade silent inside its sheath. His mis-matched eyes—one golden as summer honey, the other an abyss of absolute dark—fastened onto hers. "Your locks are getting worse, *chérie*." Lucien stepped over the threshold without an invitation, his polished leather shoes making no sound against the worn floorboards. "A child with a hairpin could bypass those deadbolts." Aurora slammed the door shut, the frame rattling against its hinges. Ptolemy darted out from beneath a tower of leather-bound journals, his orange tail puffing into a brush before he vanished into the safety of the kitchen. "You have five seconds to explain why you aren't at the bottom of the Thames." She threw her toast onto a plate piled high with scribbled parchment. "Three months, Lucien. No phone calls. No mesages. Just a smear of ash on my rug and my apartment broken into twice by low-level imps looking for your ledger." Lucien unbuttoned his coat with practiced, languid grace, draping it over the back of an unvarnished kitchen chair. He did not look at her. Instead, his gaze swept over the cramped sanctuary on Brick Lane, taking in the overflowing ash-trays, the dried lavender hanging from the exposed rafters, and the red thread crisscrossing a map of Soho pinned to her wall. "I had business in Marseille." His voice rasped like silk drawn over raw iron. "Complications arose." "Complications." Aurora rounded the narrow kitchen island, her bare feet sticking slightly to the linoleum. She jabbed a finger at his chest, stopping an inch short of the dark silk waist-coat underneath. "You vanished five minutes after we—" "After we made a mistake." The air went dead cold. The smell of turmeric and roasting cumin drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, but in the flat, the atmosphere turned thick, heavy with the weight of that rainy Tuesday night ninety days ago. The night she had bandaged a gouge in his side, the night his hand had tangled in her straight black hair, the night his dark eye had lost its bottomless void and burned with a terrifying, absolute hunger. Aurora pulled her hand back, curling her fingers into a fist. She tucked her hair behind her ear, her fingernails digging into the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "A mistake," she repeated, her tone flat. "Right. The information broker’s favorite shield. Tidy it up, label it an error in judgment, and file it away." "I saved your life by leaving, Rory." Lucien took a single step forward, the ivory head of his cane ticking against the floor. "The court of Avaros doesn't negotiate with fixers who develop soft spots for human girls from Wales." "I am twenty-five years old, not a girl, and I don't need a half-demon playing martyr to keep me breathing." She squared her shoulders, towering as much as her height allowed, refusing to back up even as he closed the distance between them. "I managed just fine before you bled all over my rug, and I managed fine while you were off hiding in France." Lucien stopped inches away. The scent of him swept over her, sharp and possessive, instantly melting the cold armor she had spent three months forging. His amber eye caught the amber glow of her desk lamp, flickering with an ancient, infernal light that made her breath catch in her throat. "You managed fine?" His hand moved faster than a striking viper, his gloved fingers catching her chin, thumb pressing gently into the hollow beneath her jaw. He tilted her face up. "Is that why you haven't slept in three days? Is that why you kept my signet ring on the chain around your neck?" Aurora froze. Her hand flew to the collar of her oversized sweater, but it was too late. The silver band, cool against her collarbone, picked up the dim light through the knit fabric. She snatched his wrist, her grip tight, trying to yank his hand away from her face, but he was an anchor anchored to the abyss. He didn't budge. "It's silver," she hissed, her blue eyes flashing with a lethal sharpness. "It keeps the scrying spells off my back. It's utility, Moreau. Purely practical." "Lie to the barristers in Cardiff, Laila." The use of her middle name, low and intimate, sent a shiver straight down her spine. "Don't lie to me." "Don't call me that." "Then don't wear my coat of arms near your heart." He released her chin, but he didn't pull back. The warmth radiating off his chest was an insult to the damp chill of East London outside. Aurora felt the small space shrinking, the mountains of research paper and half-translated scrolls dropping away until there was only the steady, rhythmic rise and fall of his shoulders and the dark pool of his dark eye swallowing her reflection. "Why are you here, Luc?" Her voice lost its sharp edge, dropping into a exhausted rasp. "If it was a mistake, why come back to Brick Lane?" Lucien reached out, his bare knuckle—he had stripped his right glove off without her noticing—grazing the high curve of her cheekbone. The touch was agonizingly soft, completely at odds with the jagged edge of his shadow stretching across the floor. "Because the ledger is useless," he murmured, his gaze dropping to her lips before snapping back to her eyes. "The secrets of every demon lord from Soho to St. Giles mean nothing if I have to read them in an empty room." Aurora swallowed hard, her heart thudding against her ribs like a trapped bird. "That sounds dangerously close to a feeling." "It's an obsession." Lucien caught her hand, uncurling her tight fist and lacing his long, pale fingers through hers. "A far more dangerous ailment." "I spent three months hating you," she whispered, though she didn't pull her hand away. Her fingers tightened around his, feeling the hard calluses earned from years of holding a hidden blade. "I built a nice, quiet wall. I bought extra locks." "I told you," Lucien leaned down, his forehead resting lightly against hers, his breath fanning across her cheek, cold and sweet as mountain air. "Your locks are entirely useless against me." "Prove it," she breathed. Lucien dropped his cane. The heavy wood clattered against the floorboards, ringing out in the quiet room, but neither of them looked down. His arms wrapped around her waist, lifting her effortlessly against the edge of the kitchen island, scattering a pile of old tax returns and half-drawn pentagrams to the floor. His lips met hers not with the cautious restraint of three months ago, but with a harsh, desperate demand that stole the air straight from her lungs. Aurora threw her arms around his neck, her fingers tangling in the slicked-back platinum strands of his hair, pulling him down, crushing the three months of silence into dust between them. He tasted like smoke and rain, and the dark fire rising in her gut swept away every bitter word she had prepared for this exact moment. Lucien pulled back an inch, his heavy chest heaving, his dark eye swirling with golden flecks of heat. "You are going to be the death of me, Aurora Carter." "Good," she panted, her lips swollen, her bright blue eyes locked onto his. "Then at least I'll know where you are."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice rasped like [like]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.053
84.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"completely"
3"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"swept away"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"sanctuary"
2"silk"
3"weight"
4"down her spine"
5"warmth"
6"chill"
7"rhythmic"
8"silence"
9"swept away"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1314
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount976
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora8
Lucien10
Brick1
Lane1
Soho1
Tuesday1
East1
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Soho"
3"East"
4"London"
globalScore0.988
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like smoke and rain, and the dark"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.761
wordCount1314
matches
0"not with the cautious restraint of three months ago, but with a harsh, desperate demand"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean37.54
std21.02
cv0.56
sampleLengths
041
16
266
334
437
556
661
716
838
95
1080
1130
1226
1340
1465
1550
1654
1761
1825
1927
204
2110
2266
2327
2440
2542
2620
2724
2842
2931
304
3152
3284
3329
3421
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences79
ratio0.025
matches
0"His mis-matched eyes—one golden as summer honey, the other an abyss of absolute dark—fastened onto hers."
1"Lucien reached out, his bare knuckle—he had stripped his right glove off without her noticing—grazing the high curve of her cheekbone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount988
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02631578947368421
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010121457489878543
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean16.63
std9.66
cv0.581
sampleLengths
011
130
26
322
411
517
616
725
89
911
1026
1127
1229
1318
146
1537
1614
172
1815
1917
206
215
225
2337
2438
2511
2619
277
2819
2923
3017
3143
3222
334
3421
3525
3626
375
3823
392
4015
4116
4225
433
4412
4513
4623
474
484
4910
48.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35443037974683544
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners28
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead, his gaze swept over"
ratio0.018
41.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences56
matches
0"His charcoal coat smelled faintly"
1"His mis-matched eyes—one golden as"
2"She threw her toast onto"
3"He did not look at"
4"His voice rasped like silk"
5"She jabbed a finger at"
6"She tucked her hair behind"
7"she repeated, her tone flat"
8"She squared her shoulders, towering"
9"His amber eye caught the"
10"His hand moved faster than"
11"He tilted her face up."
12"Her hand flew to the"
13"She snatched his wrist, her"
14"He didn't budge."
15"she hissed, her blue eyes"
16"He released her chin, but"
17"Her voice lost its sharp"
18"he murmured, his gaze dropping"
19"she whispered, though she didn't"
ratio0.446
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences56
matches
0"The brass handle clicked down"
1"Aurora swung the door wide,"
2"The words died in her"
3"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
4"His charcoal coat smelled faintly"
5"A thin ivory handle rested"
6"His mis-matched eyes—one golden as"
7"Lucien stepped over the threshold"
8"Aurora slammed the door shut,"
9"Ptolemy darted out from beneath"
10"She threw her toast onto"
11"Lucien unbuttoned his coat with"
12"He did not look at"
13"His voice rasped like silk"
14"Aurora rounded the narrow kitchen"
15"She jabbed a finger at"
16"The air went dead cold."
17"The smell of turmeric and"
18"The night she had bandaged"
19"Aurora pulled her hand back,"
ratio0.982
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora swung the door wide, a half-eaten slice of buttered toast poised in her left hand, ready to bark at the delivery driver who kept dumping packages on the …"
1"His amber eye caught the amber glow of her desk lamp, flickering with an ancient, infernal light that made her breath catch in her throat."
2"His arms wrapped around her waist, lifting her effortlessly against the edge of the kitchen island, scattering a pile of old tax returns and half-drawn pentagra…"
3"His lips met hers not with the cautious restraint of three months ago, but with a harsh, desperate demand that stole the air straight from her lungs."
4"Aurora threw her arms around his neck, her fingers tangling in the slicked-back platinum strands of his hair, pulling him down, crushing the three months of sil…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora rounded, her bare feet sticking slightly to the linoleum"
1"she repeated, her tone flat"
2"she hissed, her blue eyes flashing with a lethal sharpness"
3"she panted, her lips swollen, her bright blue eyes locked onto his"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"she hissed (hiss)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"she panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.316
76.2513%