Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSPXDRYB6SY2PCPJD6KBXW

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Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.019395
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron tip of a cane rattled against the oak door frame three seconds before the third deadbolt slid home. "Locking out the rest of London is admirable, Rory, but doing it while I am already inside strikes me as terribly impolite." I didn't turn around. I rammed the heavy brass bar into its socket and rested my forehead against the cool painted wood. The scent of rain, cigar smoke, and expensive French cologne filled the narrow hallway, smothering the familiar stench of stale curry from the restaurant downstairs. "The front door was locked," I said, my voice tight. "For human fingers, perhaps." Lucien Moreau leaned his hip against Eva's crowded bookshelf, setting a stack of centuries-old demonology texts swaying precariously. His platinum hair caught the dull orange light of the streetlamp outside. One amber eye narrowed in amusement; the other, black as pooled ink, tracked the heavy rise and fall of my shoulders. "You left the window on the fire escape unlatched. A dreadful oversight for a woman hiding from an angry ex-boyfriend." "I am not hiding." I spun around, crossing my arms over my chest. My left wrist throbbed, the crescent-shaped scar pulling tight against my skin. "And Evan isn't just an ex-boyfriend. He's a menace." "Semantics." Lucien smoothed the lapel of his charcoal suit jacket. The tailored cloth fit his wide shoulders without a single wrinkle, hiding the half-blood strength that could snap a man's spine like a dry twig. "You look tired, my dear. London air clearly does not agree with your complexion." "You have five seconds to tell me how you found this flat before I throw Ptolemy at your face." On the worn velvet armchair, the fat tabby cat opened one green eye, let out a pathetic squeak, and went back to sleep. "Ptolemy lacks the killer instinct required for assault," Lucien murmured, tapping his ivory-handled cane against the floorboards. *Thump. Thump.* "And as for finding you... you work for Yu-Fei. You deliver greasy noodles on a red scooter through the rain. You might as well have put a neon sign on the Tower Bridge." I closed the distance between us, stopping a mere foot from his chest. The air between us cracked with a sudden drop in pressure. Eight months. Eight months since I left Cardiff, since I left the cold blood on the kitchen tiles, since I watched Lucien stand in the shadow of an alleyway and offer me a clean slate for a price I refused to pay. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "You owe me a conversation." "I owe you nothing. I walked away." "You ran," he corrected softly. His accent slipped, the sharp French vowels smoothing the edges of his words. "There is a distinction. You packed a single duffel bag, stole three thousand pounds from Evan's safe, and vanished into the night. A classic Welsh exit. Though I must admit, I expected you to call me when you reached the border." "I didn't want your help then. I don't want it now." "And yet, here we are." Lucien reached out. His fingers, long and cool, hovered an inch from my jaw. He didn't touch me. He never touched without permission, a lingering piece of court etiquette from his father's realm that felt absurd in a cramped flat on Brick Lane. "You look pale, Rory. Are you eating?" "I eat fine." "Takeout from the Golden Empress does not count as sustenance." He lowered his hand, his amber eye tracking the movement of my pulse in my throat. "Evan found your father." The air left my lungs in a sharp rush. My back hit the edge of Eva's desk, knocking a brass inkwell onto a pile of parchment. "What?" "Brendan is fine. For now." Lucien tilted his head, watching me like a scientist observing a volatile reaction. "Your father is an Irish barrister with an unfortunate gambling habit. Evan simply bought his debts. All sixty thousand pounds of them." "Evan doesn't have sixty thousand pounds." "He doesn't," Lucien agreed. "But his new friends in Avaros do." I pressed my palms against the cold wood of the desk, my knuckles turning white. The room felt smaller suddenly, the walls closing in, suffocating me under the weight of books, scrolls, and ancient mistakes. Evan had tracked me through my family. He was pulling the leash, waiting for me to choke. "Why tell me this?" I asked, my voice barely a whisper. "You don't do charity, Luc. You're a fixer. An information broker. What's the rate for ruining my evening?" "The price is simple." Lucien took a step closer, crowding me against the desk. The faint scent of ozone radiated off his skin, a subtle warning of the demon blood humming beneath his polished exterior. "You come back to work." "I never worked for you." "You were going to." He reached into his inner breast pocket and pulled out a small, folded piece of parchment, placing it on the desk beside my hand. The paper was dry, brittle, and stained with deep crimson ink. "Before you panicked and ran to East London." I stared at the contract. My signature wasn't on it, but my blood was. A single drop, spilled eight months ago when he trapped me in that dark Cardiff alley. "You kept it," I breathed. "I keep everything that belongs to me." "I don't belong to you." "No?" Lucien leaned down, his face inches from mine. I could see the golden specks in his right eye, the infinite dark abyss of his left. "Then why haven't you slept with anyone else since you left? Why do you wake up at three in the morning, holding that little crescent scar on your wrist, thinking about the way my hand felt on your waist?" My breath hitched. "You're spying on me." "I am keeping an eye on an investment." "I hate you," I snarled, pushing against his chest. It was like shoving a marble statue. He didn't budge an inch, though his amber eye flared bright yellow for a fraction of a second. "You hate that I see through you," he corrected, his voice dropping an octave, rich and velvety. "You hate that Evan treated you like a doll to be broken, while I treat you like a weapon to be drawn. You are intelligent, Rory. You have a brilliant, sharp, terrifying mind. And you are wasting it delivering cold food to drunk tourists." "It's an honest living." "It is a boring living. And you were not made for boredom." He slid his hand down his cane, his thumb catching a hidden release latch near the ivory handle. A sharp *click* echoed through the room. Two inches of gleaming, steel blade emerged from the wood, catching the dull lamplight. "What are you doing?" I asked, my pulse hammering against my ribs. "Evan's men are downstairs," Lucien said calmly, sliding the blade back into the cane with a metallic snap. "They followed me. Or rather, I allowed them to follow me." My eyes widened. "You brought them here?" "They were going to burn your father's house down at midnight," Lucien said, adjusting his cuffs with infuriating slowness. "I thought it far more efficient to bring the fire to us." A heavy thud sounded against the front door, shaking the frame. Ptolemy finally hissed, scrambling off the chair and bolting under the sofa. "You bastard," I whispered. "Sign the contract, Rory." Lucien smiled, a dark, dangerous expression that revealed the slightly pointed edges of his canines. "Or answer the door yourself." The wood groaned as a shoulder slammed into the lock from the outside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"I spun around [around]"
1"he corrected softly [softly]"
2"Lucien said calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.107
88.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1269
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"throbbed"
2"velvet"
3"pulse"
4"weight"
5"whisper"
6"marble"
7"echoed"
8"gleaming"
9"efficient"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1269
ratio0.002
matches
0"Thump. Thump."
1"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount745
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
French2
Lucien12
Moreau1
Eva2
Cardiff2
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.695
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1269
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.9
std20.25
cv0.782
sampleLengths
020
122
247
310
475
534
649
719
823
952
1066
115
125
137
1459
1511
1655
173
1830
1926
201
2140
226
2311
2452
2529
2640
275
2847
2930
305
317
325
3365
347
358
3634
3761
384
3912
4039
4112
4229
437
4431
4523
464
4724
4813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
91.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was pulling"
1"was like shoving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences96
ratio0.01
matches
0"One amber eye narrowed in amusement; the other, black as pooled ink, tracked the heavy rise and fall of my shoulders."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount749
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.01602136181575434
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010680907877169559
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.22
std9.02
cv0.683
sampleLengths
020
122
24
318
425
510
622
712
821
920
1013
1112
129
1310
1425
1514
1619
1723
1817
191
2034
2113
2211
232
2440
255
265
277
285
2913
3041
3111
328
3311
344
3525
367
373
3826
394
409
4117
421
4318
4422
456
464
477
4815
4920
44.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences57
matches
0"I didn't turn around."
1"I rammed the heavy brass"
2"I said, my voice tight"
3"His platinum hair caught the"
4"I spun around, crossing my"
5"My left wrist throbbed, the"
6"I closed the distance between"
7"he corrected softly"
8"His accent slipped, the sharp"
9"His fingers, long and cool,"
10"He didn't touch me."
11"He never touched without permission,"
12"He lowered his hand, his"
13"My back hit the edge"
14"I pressed my palms against"
15"He was pulling the leash,"
16"I asked, my voice barely"
17"He reached into his inner"
18"I stared at the contract."
19"My signature wasn't on it,"
ratio0.509
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"The iron tip of a"
1"I didn't turn around."
2"I rammed the heavy brass"
3"The scent of rain, cigar"
4"I said, my voice tight"
5"Lucien Moreau leaned his hip"
6"His platinum hair caught the"
7"I spun around, crossing my"
8"My left wrist throbbed, the"
9"Lucien smoothed the lapel of"
10"The tailored cloth fit his"
11"Lucien murmured, tapping his ivory-handled"
12"I closed the distance between"
13"The air between us cracked"
14"he corrected softly"
15"His accent slipped, the sharp"
16"Lucien reached out"
17"His fingers, long and cool,"
18"He didn't touch me."
19"He never touched without permission,"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The tailored cloth fit his wide shoulders without a single wrinkle, hiding the half-blood strength that could snap a man's spine like a dry twig."
1"He never touched without permission, a lingering piece of court etiquette from his father's realm that felt absurd in a cramped flat on Brick Lane."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"I said, my voice tight"
1"I asked, my voice barely a whisper"
2"he corrected, his voice dropping an octave, rich and velvety"
3"I asked, my pulse hammering against my ribs"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he corrected softly (correct)"
2"Lucien agreed (agree)"
3"I breathed (breathe)"
4"I snarled (snarl)"
5"he corrected (correct)"
6"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.25
77.0091%