Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSQFPJ0NAWV9W2P7SPYBGV

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.033125
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The metal rungs of the maintenance ladder were slick with condensation, coating Harlow Quinn’s leather gloves in greasy grime as she descended into the belly of Camden. Below her, portable halogen work lights hissed, casting long, jittery shadows across Victorian brickwork that hadn't seen daylight in fifty years. She reached the iron catwalk, adjusted her collar against the damp subterranean chill, and checked her worn leather watch. 03:14 AM. Eighteen years with the Metropolitan Police had conditioned her body to ignore the exhaustion, but her brown eyes were sharp, scanning the shadows with the cold, practiced discipline of her army days. At fifty feet below street level, the air in the abandoned Tube station tasted wrong. It wasn't just the expected reek of stagnant water, rust, and lime. Underneath it was a thick, sweet tang—clove, ozone, and copper, like a thundercloud trapped in a spice shop. "Detective Quinn," a voice called out. Detective Constable Miller stepped out from under an arched passageway, pulling off his latex gloves. He looked pale, his collar turned up against the cold. "Glad you made it down. Pathologist isn't here yet, but honestly, I don't know why they called Senior Investigating Officers out for this one. Looks like a straightforward squatter fatality." Quinn walked past him, her boots clicking in a steady, measured rhythm on the damp concrete. She stood five-foot-nine, her posture immaculate, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped close to her scalp in a strict military cut. She didn't offer a greeting. She merely turned her gaze down the forgotten station platform. "Walk me through it, Miller," she said, her voice a low, dry rasp. "Right," Miller said, turning on his torch to illuminate the corpse slumped against a tiled pillar. "Male, late thirties, light clothing. No wallet, no phone. Looks like an urban explorer or a homeless guy who found a way past the street-level grates. No obvious signs of violence. No blood, no defensive wounds. My guess? Hypothermia or an overdose. Found him sitting like that, stone cold." Quinn knelt beside the body, her trousers brushing the soot-covered floor. She didn't touch the man immediately. She observed. The victim sat upright, back pressed against a tile faded to a nauseating shade of hospital green. His eyes were wide open, his dark irises blown out so large they almost swallowed the brown. His lips were parted, drawn back in a frozen rim of white, but it wasn't frost. Quinn drew a gloved finger along the man’s lapel. A fine, glittering dust coated the wool. She brought her fingers to her nose. Salt. Pure, coarse brine, crystallized in the warm moisture of his coat. "You think he froze to death in October?" Quinn asked softly. "It gets cold down here, ma'am," Miller offered, shrugging. "Drafts from the Northern line tunnels. Plus, look at his posture. Relaxed. He just fell asleep." "His muscles are in severe post-mortem spasm, Miller," Quinn corrected, her sharp jaw setting tightly. "Look at his hands." Miller leaned in, shining his torch closer. The victim's right hand was clenched into a fist so tight the knuckles were bleached bone-white. The left hand was splayed flat against the concrete, the fingernails peeled back and torn, as though he had tried to claw his way into the stone floor. "He didn't fall asleep," Quinn said. "He was terrified. And look at the ground." She stood up, sweeping her eyes over the wide expanse of the platform. The dust on the floor was disturbed, but not in the messy, chaotic pattern of a single homeless man bedding down for the night. There were distinct, rectangular clearings in the soot—dozens of them, arranged in parallel rows down the entire length of the platform, like market stalls pulled away in a hurry. "He wasn't alone," Quinn said. "Squatters," Miller reasoned, though his voice lacked conviction now. "A camp. They panicked when he died and cleared out so the Met wouldn't arrest them." "They cleared out in under twenty minutes," Quinn said, pointing her finger at a patch of mud near the disused track bed. "Look at those boot prints. Dozens of different treads, all hurrying toward the emergency stairs. But there are no trash piles. No sleeping bags left behind. No empty cans, no discarded clothes. Who leaves a squatter camp without leaving a single piece of rubbish?" She walked slowly toward the center of the platform. Her sharp eyes caught a slight gleam in the gap between two rotting wooden ties on the disused track. Quinn crouched down and picked it up with a pair of tweezers from her kit. It was a flat piece of carved polished ox bone, roughly the size of a coin. One side was smoothed down by countless thumbs; the other was etched with an intricate, looping knotwork that made her temples throb with a sudden, dull ache. She tucked it into an evidence bag. "They weren't squatters. This place was packed tonight." "A rave?" Miller suggested, rubbing the back of his neck. "An illegal club?" "Without music equipment? Without alcohol bottles?" Quinn stood up, her brow furrowed. "No. It was a market." "An underground market? Down here?" "A black market," Quinn murmured, her mind racing. "Selling things that don't go through customs." She began to pace, taking three long strides to the left, then four to the right, tracing the perimeter of the ghost stalls. Three years ago, when her partner DS Morris had gone missing during a late-night raid in Whitechapel, the crime scene had looked just like this. No blood. No struggle. Just a room swept impossibly clean, a corpse with blown-out pupils, and that same suffocating stench of burnt clove and salt. The official report had called Morris’s disappearance a rogue act, claiming he had taken a bribe and fled the country. Quinn had never believed it. She had spent thirty-six months clawing through off-the-books leads, watching the fringes of London's underbelly, waiting for the pattern to repeat. Now, here it was. "Miller," Quinn said, her voice dropping an octave. "Where's the rest of the physical evidence?" "That's all of it, ma'am. Just the body." Quinn didn't answer. She knelt near the victim again, this time looking beneath the rusted edge of a nearby cast-iron bench. The halogen light bounced off something metallic wedged far back against the wall, half-buried in soot. She pulled out her penlight, reached under the iron frame, and dragged the object out. It was a small brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch. The outer casing was heavy, coated in a thick, velvety patina of verdigris that spoke of immense age and damp storage. Quinn held it in her palm. The glass face was intact, though the surface beneath was etched not with cardinal directions, but with sharp, geometric sigils cut deep into the metal. "What is that?" Miller asked, stepping closer. "An antique?" "Look at the needle," Quinn said. The iron indicator was spinning. It didn't settle north. It twitched violently, vibrating against the brass casing, before snapping sharply to the left—pointing straight at a blank, solid brick archway at the far end of the station wall. "Faulty magnet," Miller muttered, pulling out his notebook. "Probably picking up the high-voltage lines from the active line nearby." "The active line is three hundred yards to the east," Quinn said smoothly, her eyes locked on the needle. "This needle is pointing west. Straight into fifty feet of solid earth." She turned the compass in her hand. As she moved, the needle stayed pinned to that brick wall, quivering with an eerie, mechanical intensity. Quinn approached the archway. The bricks were blackened by a century of train soot, but near the mortar line at waist height, the soot was smeared. Someone had recently touched this wall. Quinn shined her torch into the seam. A hair was caught in the wet mortar—a long, tight spiral of bright red hair. Beside it, pressed into the dirt on the ground, was a faint impression from the corner of a heavy bag. A worn leather satchel, judging by the grain left in the damp mud, full of heavy, sharp-edged contents. Books, or ledger boxes. Quinn tapped the brass compass against her glove. The sigils carved into its face caught the harsh halogen glare, gleaming like fresh copper beneath the green rot of the casing. "Miller," Quinn said, her tone absolute and unyielding. "Call the forensically trained team. Tell them I want this entire wall scraped for organic material. I want the soil tested for chemical compounds, specifically salt and copper sulfur. And call the British Museum." Miller paused, his pen hovering over his notepad. "The museum? Detective, it's four in the morning." "I don't care what time it is," Quinn replied, her brown eyes dark and cold as she stared at the trembling needle of the brass compass. "Find out who has access to the restricted archives in their Ancient History department. Specifically anyone who carries a leather satchel and works with occult relics." "You think this is linked to a robbery?" "I think," Quinn said, sliding the brass compass into her inner coat pocket, right next to her heart, "that three years ago, somebody lied about what happened to DS Morris. And tonight, whoever ran this market left the door open." She turned away from the wall, her military posture stiff, her mind locking onto the trail with relentless precision. The Veil Market had moved, but for the first time in three years, Harlow Quinn had a compass.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:09:08.84Z" 7/25/2026, 2:09:08 PM
model"google/gemini-3.6-flash-20260721"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1394
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time27996
tokens_prompt896
tokens_completion3460
native_tokens_prompt883
native_tokens_completion4240
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning2106
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
service_tier"default"
usage0.0331245
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"5d6d133d-a953-4781-a835-7ee76f4e1388"
id"hMNkasb-OKeqsOIPp7_lqQ0"
is_byokfalse
latency1394
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3.6-flash-20260721"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1784988548-f68LNOHSB5LICrHvcia6"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1784988548-SVn1GNHtCsBsx8cYlv1s"
upstream_id"hMNkasb-OKeqsOIPp7_lqQ0"
total_cost0.0331245
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn asked softly [softly]"
1"Quinn said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.095
87.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1586
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"tightly"
2"slowly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1586
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"crystallized"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"etched"
count2
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanning"
2"measured"
3"crystallized"
4"chaotic"
5"etched"
6"intricate"
7"throb"
8"furrowed"
9"racing"
10"tracing"
11"mechanical"
12"intensity"
13"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
81.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1582
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
42.52% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1163
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn25
Camden1
Victorian1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tube1
Detective1
Constable1
Miller9
Morris2
Whitechapel1
London1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Constable"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Market"
places
0"Victorian"
1"Whitechapel"
2"London"
globalScore0.425
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.632
wordCount1582
matches
0"not with cardinal directions, but with sharp, geometric sigils cut deep into the metal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean32.29
std19.87
cv0.615
sampleLengths
048
153
245
361
450
513
665
719
850
935
1011
1125
1219
1351
1414
1566
165
1725
1866
1928
2058
2115
2213
2317
245
2515
2673
2746
284
2915
308
3137
3215
3364
349
356
3638
3719
3831
3924
4054
4142
4230
4342
4416
4552
468
4740
4837
78.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences93
matches
0"were parted"
1"was clenched"
2"were bleached"
3"was splayed"
4"was smoothed"
5"was etched"
6"was etched"
7"were blackened"
8"was smeared"
9"was caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was spinning"
17.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences114
ratio0.044
matches
0"Underneath it was a thick, sweet tang—clove, ozone, and copper, like a thundercloud trapped in a spice shop."
1"There were distinct, rectangular clearings in the soot—dozens of them, arranged in parallel rows down the entire length of the platform, like market stalls pulled away in a hurry."
2"One side was smoothed down by countless thumbs; the other was etched with an intricate, looping knotwork that made her temples throb with a sudden, dull ache."
3"It twitched violently, vibrating against the brass casing, before snapping sharply to the left—pointing straight at a blank, solid brick archway at the far end of the station wall."
4"A hair was caught in the wet mortar—a long, tight spiral of bright red hair."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1181
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, sharp-edged contents."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02201524132091448
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.01100762066045724
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean13.88
std9.24
cv0.666
sampleLengths
027
121
219
32
432
515
612
718
86
915
1010
1130
1216
1319
145
1510
1613
1716
1849
1911
206
212
2217
2317
2416
259
267
277
281
2911
3011
319
3216
3315
344
357
3616
3728
386
398
4013
4124
4229
435
449
4516
4622
4744
489
4919
62.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners48
39.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Just a room swept impossibly"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences85
matches
0"She reached the iron catwalk,"
1"It wasn't just the expected"
2"He looked pale, his collar"
3"She stood five-foot-nine, her posture"
4"She didn't offer a greeting."
5"She merely turned her gaze"
6"she said, her voice a"
7"She didn't touch the man"
8"His eyes were wide open,"
9"His lips were parted, drawn"
10"She brought her fingers to"
11"She stood up, sweeping her"
12"She walked slowly toward the"
13"Her sharp eyes caught a"
14"It was a flat piece"
15"She tucked it into an"
16"She began to pace, taking"
17"She had spent thirty-six months"
18"She knelt near the victim"
19"She pulled out her penlight,"
ratio0.294
36.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences85
matches
0"The metal rungs of the"
1"She reached the iron catwalk,"
2"It wasn't just the expected"
3"a voice called out"
4"Detective Constable Miller stepped out"
5"He looked pale, his collar"
6"Quinn walked past him, her"
7"She stood five-foot-nine, her posture"
8"She didn't offer a greeting."
9"She merely turned her gaze"
10"she said, her voice a"
11"Miller said, turning on his"
12"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
13"She didn't touch the man"
14"The victim sat upright, back"
15"His eyes were wide open,"
16"His lips were parted, drawn"
17"Quinn drew a gloved finger"
18"A fine, glittering dust coated"
19"She brought her fingers to"
ratio0.847
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Now, here it was."
ratio0.012
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Below her, portable halogen work lights hissed, casting long, jittery shadows across Victorian brickwork that hadn't seen daylight in fifty years."
1"One side was smoothed down by countless thumbs; the other was etched with an intricate, looping knotwork that made her temples throb with a sudden, dull ache."
2"The outer casing was heavy, coated in a thick, velvety patina of verdigris that spoke of immense age and damp storage."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, her voice a low, dry rasp"
1"Miller reasoned, though his voice lacked conviction now"
2"Quinn stood up, her brow furrowed"
3"Quinn murmured, her mind racing"
4"Quinn said, her voice dropping an octave"
5"Quinn said, her tone absolute and unyielding"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn corrected (correct)"
1"Miller suggested (suggest)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
3"Miller muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.19
80.0752%