Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSQPF6SQZ8HQAWYM6557ME

Run Details

Duration:
58.3s
Cost:
$0.081715
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the dirty glass windows of The Raven's Nest, smearing the green glow of the neon sign across wet Soho cobblestones. Rory sat on the high corner stool, untying the soaked laces of her canvas boots. Behind the counter, Silas polished a heavy whiskey tumbler with a lint-free rag. His silver signet ring caught the low amber light of the hanging lamps. His left leg dragged with a dull scrape against the floorboards as he shifted his weight toward the glass rack. Silas set the tumbler on the mahogany surface with a firm thump. "Two orders cold for the flats on Dean Street. Yu-Fei threatened to throw the wok at the wall." Rory tossed her wet cap onto the bar. "Traffic backed up to Piccadilly. Van skidded sideways across three lanes." The bell above the entrance door chimed. Cold draft air swept into the warm room, smelling of exhaust, wet slate, and tobacco. Heavy leather soles clicked against the floor, stopping two feet from her stool. "Aurora." The voice cut through the background hum of the jukebox. Rory froze. Her fingers caught in the leather lace of her left boot, nails digging into the crescent scar on her wrist. She turned her head. A navy cashmere overcoat dripped rainwater onto the floor. Julian stood there, dark hair combed back into tight, severe lines, immaculate fingers clutching an umbrella with an engraved silver handle. His hazel eyes swept over her faded canvas jacket, her damp black hair clinging to her neck, the smudge of kitchen grease on her cheekbone. "Julian." The name tasted like old copper. Five years back, Julian wore frayed corduroy, smelled of cheap tobacco, and slept through morning lectures on tort law at Cardiff. The man standing under the pub light wore a tailored three-piece suit and a gold signet ring carved with a coat of arms. Long hours under office fluorescent lights had carved sharp hollows beneath his cheekbones. Julian reached out a hand, fingers hovering in the space between them, before dropping his arm back to his side. "It really is you. Nobody in Cardiff knew where you went. Your father—" Rory swung her legs off the stool, her boots hitting the floorboards with a heavy thud. She straightened her spine, locking her shoulders back. "My father knows I breathe. That satisfies him." Silas placed a dry glass on the zinc strip with a sharp ring. His gaze hovered over Julian's tailored shoulders before he reached for the whiskey bottle on the top shelf. Julian glanced around the room, taking in the framed yellowing maps of Central Europe, the cracked red vinyl booths, the peeling wallpaper by the rear corridor. He pulled a linen handkerchief from his pocket and dabbed a drop of water off his jaw. "Is this where you work? Or where you live?" Rory rubbed her wrist. "I carry takeaway boxes twelve hours a day. I drink here the rest." Julian winced. Discomfort twitched around his mouth. "You ranked top of our year, Aurora. You dismantled Lord Denning's arguments in front of the dean. We planned to take the bar exam together in London." "Plans shatter." "Evan said—" Rory stepped closer, her blue eyes narrowing into hard slits. "Leave his name out of your mouth." Silas held the heavy crystal whiskey bottle midway to a glass, his hazel eyes locking onto Julian's face for three long seconds before he tipped liquid into the tumblers. Julian held up his hands, palms open in a courtroom posture. "All right. I apologize." He pulled out the adjacent stool, his cashmere coat draping over the worn vinyl as he sat. "Let me buy a drink." Silas slid two glasses across the dark mahogany. He moved away down the counter, his limp dragging his left heel in rhythmic scrapes against the wood. Julian swirled the dark amber liquor against the ice. "I work four blocks from here. Chancery Lane. Junior partner at Sterling & Croft." Rory picked up her glass and took a long swallow. Heat scorched her throat, burning away the rain chill. "Sterling & Croft. The firm evicting council tenants in Southwark to build luxury flats." Julian didn't flinch. The earnest boy who organized protest marches outside the Cardiff city hall had vanished behind layers of Italian wool and billable hours. "They pay well. They buy stability." "They buy silence." "You still think like a university activist, Aurora." Julian set his glass down with a sharp clink. "You think life is a debate match where the purest argument wins a prize. Look around you. You hide in a Soho basement wearing oil-stained rags while your years slip away." Rory leaned across the wood, her face inches from his clean, shaved jaw. "I am not hiding." Julian gestured toward her worn sleeves, the dim pub lamps, the scar showing at her left wrist. "What do you call this? You ran away. You let Evan burn your work to ash because your pride stopped you from asking for help." Rory slammed her glass onto the counter. Amber liquid splashed over her knuckles, dripping down the zinc edge. "I ran to stay alive, Julian. You surrendered your soul for a mortgage. Do not lecture me on loss." Silence settled over the table, heavy and suffocating. The jukebox ended its track, leaving only the sound of rain hammering the glass panes. Julian stared at her wrist, his eyes lingering on the pale crescent scar. His hands tightened into fists over his lap. "I searched for you." Julian looked down at his glass. "Six months. Every weekend after you vanished from Cardiff. I went to your flat. I knocked on your parents' oak door in Cyncoed. Your father threatened to call the police if I mentioned Evan." Rory wiped the whiskey off her knuckles against her trousers. "Brendan despises scenes." "He told me you lacked discipline. He said you threw your life in the gutter." "He was right about the gutter." Rory traced the wet ring left on the mahogany by her glass. "He was wrong about the rest." Julian drained his drink in one swallow. He reached into his coat pocket, pulled out a matte-black business card embossed with silver lettering, and slid it across the wood. The card rested beside her wrist. "My firm maintains a legal research pool." Julian stood up. He fastened his coat buttons with deliberate, neat snaps. "I can secure you a seat. No questions about the gap on your record." Rory picked up the heavy cardstock. *Julian Vance, Esq.* gleamed under the emerald light of the window. "I do not need a handout." "It is an exit route, Aurora. Take it or rot here." Julian raised his umbrella, his face hardening into the cool mask of a stranger. He dropped a twenty-pound note onto the zinc strip, turned, and walked toward the entrance. The bell chimed. The door swung open, admitting a rush of cold air, then slammed shut. Silas limped down the length of the bar. His signet ring scraped against the mahogany as he swept the twenty-pound note into the tip jar. "Friend from Cardiff?" Silas picked up the empty glasses. "A ghost." Rory folded the matte-black card in half. The heavy stock resisted, then tore along the seam with a sharp rip. She dropped the pieces into the bottom of her wet tumbler and reached for her drenched coat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"crystal"
2"rhythmic"
3"chill"
4"silence"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1229
ratio0.002
matches
0"Julian Vance, Esq."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount873
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas7
Julian18
Cardiff2
Central1
Europe1
Italian1
Vance1
Rory13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Vance"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Europe"
globalScore0.469
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like old copper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1229
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean18.91
std20.56
cv1.087
sampleLengths
095
118
28
311
435
51
691
71
883
913
1024
118
1274
139
144
1513
167
1727
182
192
2010
217
2240
234
2417
255
2635
2714
2819
2914
3025
316
323
338
349
3531
3613
374
3817
3925
4018
4119
4244
434
446
4534
4610
473
4815
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount879
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.009101251422070534
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011376564277588168
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.59
std7.1
cv0.612
sampleLengths
022
115
213
313
420
512
618
78
811
97
1015
1113
121
1310
142
1520
164
179
1821
1925
201
216
2221
2323
2413
2520
2613
2716
288
298
3013
3118
3226
3317
349
354
3613
372
385
3927
402
412
4210
437
4429
4511
464
4717
485
498
55.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3584905660377358
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences69
matches
0"His silver signet ring caught"
1"His left leg dragged with"
2"Her fingers caught in the"
3"She turned her head."
4"His hazel eyes swept over"
5"She straightened her spine, locking"
6"His gaze hovered over Julian's"
7"He pulled a linen handkerchief"
8"He pulled out the adjacent"
9"He moved away down the"
10"His hands tightened into fists"
11"He reached into his coat"
12"He fastened his coat buttons"
13"He dropped a twenty-pound note"
14"His signet ring scraped against"
15"She dropped the pieces into"
ratio0.232
17.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences69
matches
0"Rory sat on the high"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"His left leg dragged with"
3"Silas set the tumbler on"
4"Rory tossed her wet cap"
5"The bell above the entrance"
6"The voice cut through the"
7"Her fingers caught in the"
8"She turned her head."
9"A navy cashmere overcoat dripped"
10"Julian stood there, dark hair"
11"His hazel eyes swept over"
12"The name tasted like old"
13"The man standing under the"
14"Julian reached out a hand,"
15"Rory swung her legs off"
16"She straightened her spine, locking"
17"Silas placed a dry glass"
18"His gaze hovered over Julian's"
19"Julian glanced around the room,"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The earnest boy who organized protest marches outside the Cardiff city hall had vanished behind layers of Italian wool and billable hours."
1"The jukebox ended its track, leaving only the sound of rain hammering the glass panes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8244%