Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSSQTAADTB2309ZANA4R52

Run Details

Duration:
4.6s
Cost:
$0.002375
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora tightened her grip on the silver chain beneath her wool coat, the small crimson gemstone burning a steady, feverish warmth against her collarbone. The air tasted of roasted chestnuts and scorched sugar, heavy enough to chew, clinging to the inside of her throat with every breath. She stepped past the jagged obsidian archway, boots sinking an inch into soil that looked less like earth and more like crushed purple grapes. Nyx glided three inches above the spongy ground, their humanoid silhouette of living shadow absorbing the amber wash of the sky overhead. A soft rustle accompanied their movement, resembling dry leaves scraped across slate. The wind carries grease and perfume. Nyx’s voice barely disturbed the dense atmosphere, a dry rasp that seemed to emanate directly from the amber clouds themselves. Aurora kept her eyes fixed on the horizon, where endless tiers of terraced vineyards climbed jagged cliffs of hardened caramel. Massive glass spheres floated silently between the vine rows, glowing from within with a trapped, golden fire that pulsed in rhythm with a distant, subterranean thrum. Isolde moved soundlessly beside them, her silver hair catching the amber illumination and scattering it into pale lavender motes. The half-fae seer ran gloved fingers over the bark of a nearby tree bearing glowing blue figs, her expression taut. Banquets call from the valley floor. Eat the fruit and forget the sky. Aurora traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the familiar sting grounding her against the dizzying sweetness of the orchards. She unbuttoned her pocket, letting her thumb brush the cold, leaf-shaped hilt of the moonsilver dagger Isolde had given her back in the Richmond grove. The metal sucked the ambient heat straight off her skin. They walked deeper down a winding cobblestone path paved from polished bone and hardened sugar-glass, the slope descending toward a sprawling valley choked with colossal copper cauldrons and spiraling smoke stacks. Thousands of figures moved among the colossal vines, harvesting clusters of translucent grapes the size of melons. None of the laborers looked up; their eyes remained glazed and fixed on the purple earth beneath their boots. A sharp, metallic clang echoed from a nearby pavilion draped in velvet banners the color of dried blood. Three winged humanoids stood around a rotating spit the size of a carriage, basting a roasted beast with a smoking, crimson glaze that smelled of cinnamon and iron. Belphegor’s kitchen never closes its doors. Nyx dissolved into a pool of darkness beneath an iron trellis, then reappeared ten paces ahead near a towering stack of wooden crates filled with glowing citrus. Aurora sidestepped a wandering stream of lukewarm red wine cutting across the path, the current sluggish and thick like cooling syrup. A fat, golden-scaled fish breached the surface of the wine, locked eyes with her using entirely human, bloodshot pupils, and sank back down without a splash. The heat pressed against their temples like a warm thumb, dampening hair and sticking wool coats to skin. Every surface in the landscape glistened with a fine, sugary dew that coated their boots in a sticky amber film. Isolde stopped at a crossroads marked by a towering monolith of crystallized honey, tilting her silver head toward a grand amphitheater carved directly into the side of a massive mountain of marzipan. The audience sits empty while the master chef prepares the final course. Aurora drew the Fae blade an inch from its sheath, the silver steel casting a pale, cold crescent of light against the sticky amber ground.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:10:22.672Z" 7/25/2026, 2:10:22 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount585
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount585
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"traced"
3"familiar"
4"echoed"
5"velvet"
6"crystallized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences30
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences30
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences30
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords585
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount585
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Isolde3
Richmond1
Fae1
Aurora5
Nyx3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"rasp that seemed to emanate directly from the amber clouds themselves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount585
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean34.41
std19.19
cv0.558
sampleLengths
071
134
26
320
446
539
613
756
867
946
106
1127
1247
1338
1432
1512
1625
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs92
matches(empty)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences30
ratio0.033
matches
0"None of the laborers looked up; their eyes remained glazed and fixed on the purple earth beneath their boots."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount590
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"cold, leaf-shaped hilt"
1"fat, golden-scaled fish"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.020338983050847456
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010169491525423728
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences30
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
87.14% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences30
mean19.5
std7.17
cv0.368
sampleLengths
024
123
224
322
412
56
620
720
826
919
1020
116
127
1321
1425
1510
1631
1717
1819
1918
2028
216
2227
2321
2426
2518
2620
2732
2812
2925
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences30
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences30
matches
0"She stepped past the jagged"
1"She unbuttoned her pocket, letting"
2"They walked deeper down a"
ratio0.1
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences30
matches
0"Aurora tightened her grip on"
1"The air tasted of roasted"
2"She stepped past the jagged"
3"Nyx glided three inches above"
4"A soft rustle accompanied their"
5"The wind carries grease and"
6"Nyx’s voice barely disturbed the"
7"Aurora kept her eyes fixed"
8"Isolde moved soundlessly beside them,"
9"The half-fae seer ran gloved"
10"Banquets call from the valley"
11"Aurora traced the crescent-shaped scar"
12"She unbuttoned her pocket, letting"
13"The metal sucked the ambient"
14"They walked deeper down a"
15"None of the laborers looked"
16"A sharp, metallic clang echoed"
17"Belphegor’s kitchen never closes its"
18"Nyx dissolved into a pool"
19"Aurora sidestepped a wandering stream"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences30
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She stepped past the jagged obsidian archway, boots sinking an inch into soil that looked less like earth and more like crushed purple grapes."
1"Nyx’s voice barely disturbed the dense atmosphere, a dry rasp that seemed to emanate directly from the amber clouds themselves."
2"Every surface in the landscape glistened with a fine, sugary dew that coated their boots in a sticky amber film."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1757%