Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSSV78HGPTQF07C0F4EVFB

Run Details

Duration:
11m 38s
Cost:
$0.027326
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above the entrance bled through the rain like a fresh bruise, casting the Soho pavement in sickly emerald. Rory Carter stepped out of the downpour and pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest. The bell above the frame wheezed, rusty and half-hearted. She had not crossed this threshold in three years. Not since she had taken the flat upstairs and decided the stairwell was boundary enough. Inside, the air smelled of old wood, stale tobacco, and the sharp particularity of gin. Dim amber bulbs hung low over the bar, painting everything in honey and shadow. Old maps covered the walls—continents with names that had shifted, borders redrawn in blood and politics. Black-and-white photographs of strangers stared from between the paper, frozen in moments they had regretted. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his left knee locked straight, the right bent to absorb the weight of fifty-eight years. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the light in copper threads. The neatly trimmed beard framed a mouth that knew how to stay shut. On his right hand, the silver signet ring caught the glow, a small authority he never explained. He did not turn when she entered. He polished a glass with a rag that had seen better years, but his hazel eyes lifted in the mirror behind the bottles, tracking her reflection. "You still come in through the front?" His voice carried the gravel of old operations. Rory shrugged the wet delivery jacket from her shoulders. Her straight shoulder-length black hair clung to her neck in dark ribbons. The jacket smelled of sesame oil and rain. "Front, back, window. I just needed somewhere that was not my flat." "Your flat is upstairs." "Exactly that." She slid onto a stool near the corner, away from the hidden bookshelf that masked the secret back room. The wood creaked under her weight. She set her delivery bag—stamped with Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress—on the floor. Her left wrist rested on the counter, exposed. The small crescent-shaped scar faced upward, pale against her skin, a silent signature. Silas set the rag down. "Whiskey?" "You remember." "I remember everything." He reached for the bottle without checking a menu. His slight limp manifested only in the stillness of his left leg, planted like a pillar, a permanent reminder of Prague and the botched operation that had ended his field days. The glass he pushed toward her held amber liquid that caught the bulb above it. Rory wrapped her fingers around the glass. Her bright blue eyes—usually sharp, quick with the out-of-the-box thinking that had once made her a promising pre-law student—held a duller sheen tonight, worn down by London and delivery routes that never seemed to end. "Law school finished?" Silas leaned on the counter, the signet ring tapping once against the wood. "Pre-law at Cardiff. A lifetime ago." She drank. The whiskey burned clean. "Brendan Carter's daughter was going to be a barrister. Welsh discipline. Irish fire. Instead, I carry lo mein up five flights of stairs." "You ran." "I walked. Eva told me to come to London. Childhood friend. Remember her?" "I remember Eva. She pulled you out." "She pulled me here. Then she stopped answering. Or I stopped calling. The geography of regret is complicated." Silas studied her. The high cheekbones remained, but the hollows beneath had deepened. The cool-headed intelligence was still there, buried under the armor of survival. "You changed." "So did you. You used to carry a gun. Now you carry a rag." "I carry a network. The bookshelf still opens." She glanced at the wall of old maps where the hidden entrance waited behind fiction and plywood. "I have seen it. I never went through." "Not your world." "My world is delivery bags and silence." "Your world is scar tissue." Rory turned her wrist, the crescent scar catching the dim light. "This was a childhood accident. At least, that is the story I tell Yu-Fei." Silas did not smile. "You do not deliver food to yourself." "I am not delivering anything to anyone tonight. I am wet." "You live above me. Three years, Rory. Three years of stairs and silence." "I know." "You avoided the bar." "I avoided the questions." He poured himself nothing, just kept his hands on the counter. "Evan." The name dropped like a stone into still water. Rory's fingers tightened around the glass. "Evan is gone. He left his mark. Not just this." She touched the scar. "Other marks. Ones that do not show in mirrors." "You left him." "With Eva's voice in my ear. Then I delivered food to survive. Part-time for Golden Empress. Part-time for my own disappearance." Silas nodded, slow. "You disappeared well." "I am not disappeared. I am right here." "But you are not the girl who argued case law over coffee. You are leaner. Meaner with survival." "I am tired, Silas. That is different." He straightened, his left leg bearing the weight with practiced ease. The limp had become part of his posture, not a weakness but a language. "Tired is not different. Tired is changed. Prague made me tired. The knee made it permanent. The bar made it bearable." "The Raven's Nest is a front." "It is a translation. I speak contact and whiskey now instead of extraction and silence." Rory finished the drink. The empty glass sat between them like an admission. "You never came upstairs." "You never came down." "Would you have knocked?" "Would you have answered?" She looked at the black-and-white photographs—strangers in old coats, smiling at cameras that captured nothing real. "I do not know who I am anymore. The law student died in Cardiff. The girl who left Evan died in a flat with no windows. What is left?" "What is left carries the bag up the stairs." "That sounds like a platitude." "It is an observation." The rain hammered the window, turning the green neon outside into a flickering pulse, a heartbeat for the street below. Rory stood. The delivery jacket hung on her shoulders like a flag of surrender. "I will go back up. Through the front door this time." "Rory." She paused, her black hair framing a face that had seen too much of London's underbelly to be young, too much of abuse to be soft. "Do not stay hidden in that flat." Silas's voice dropped lower, carrying the weight of a man who had hidden in worse places. "It is not a fortress. It is a waiting room. And I am still here, behind the books and the bar, in case the waiting gets too long." She did not promise anything. The door opened, the bell wheezed, and Rory Carter stepped back into the rain, leaving Silas with his limp and his ring and the unspoken truth that some reunions did not heal—they simply acknowledged the distance that time had carved. Inside, The Raven's Nest returned to its amber silence, the old maps watching, the secret room waiting behind the bookshelf, and Silas polishing a glass that never seemed to stay clean.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:10:26.159Z" 7/25/2026, 2:10:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1180
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"reminder"
2"silence"
3"practiced ease"
4"pulse"
5"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
92.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1173
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount736
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Carter2
Raven2
Nest2
Blackwood1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Prague1
London2
Silas9
Rory8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Blackwood"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
7"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"London"
globalScore0.889
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.853
wordCount1173
matches
0"not a weakness but a language"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean18.62
std17.07
cv0.917
sampleLengths
021
149
260
361
433
57
68
741
84
92
1058
116
122
133
1455
1542
1616
1735
182
1913
207
2118
2227
2314
248
2525
263
277
285
2925
3011
3111
3213
332
344
354
3612
379
3829
393
4021
416
428
4318
447
4546
466
4715
4817
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs127
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences105
ratio0.048
matches
0"Old maps covered the walls—continents with names that had shifted, borders redrawn in blood and politics."
1"She set her delivery bag—stamped with Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress—on the floor."
2"Her bright blue eyes—usually sharp, quick with the out-of-the-box thinking that had once made her a promising pre-law student—held a duller sheen tonight, worn down by London and delivery routes that never seemed to end."
3"She looked at the black-and-white photographs—strangers in old coats, smiling at cameras that captured nothing real."
4"The door opened, the bell wheezed, and Rory Carter stepped back into the rain, leaving Silas with his limp and his ring and the unspoken truth that some reunions did not heal—they simply acknowledged the distance that time had carved."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount754
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.023872679045092837
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007957559681697613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.17
std7.97
cv0.713
sampleLengths
021
116
29
39
415
515
614
716
815
921
1010
1113
1217
137
1426
157
168
179
1812
198
2012
214
222
2319
246
2512
268
2713
285
291
302
313
329
3331
3415
357
3635
3716
388
394
4023
412
4213
437
4418
453
4610
4712
482
4914
50.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences55
matches
0"She had not crossed this"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He did not turn when"
3"He polished a glass with"
4"His voice carried the gravel"
5"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
6"She slid onto a stool"
7"She set her delivery bag—stamped"
8"Her left wrist rested on"
9"He reached for the bottle"
10"His slight limp manifested only"
11"Her bright blue eyes—usually sharp,"
12"She glanced at the wall"
13"He poured himself nothing, just"
14"She touched the scar"
15"He straightened, his left leg"
16"She looked at the black-and-white"
17"She paused, her black hair"
18"She did not promise anything."
ratio0.345
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences55
matches
0"The green neon above the"
1"Rory Carter stepped out of"
2"The bell above the frame"
3"She had not crossed this"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"The neatly trimmed beard framed"
7"He did not turn when"
8"He polished a glass with"
9"His voice carried the gravel"
10"Rory shrugged the wet delivery"
11"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
12"The jacket smelled of sesame"
13"She slid onto a stool"
14"The wood creaked under her"
15"She set her delivery bag—stamped"
16"Her left wrist rested on"
17"The small crescent-shaped scar faced"
18"Silas set the rag down."
19"He reached for the bottle"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He polished a glass with a rag that had seen better years, but his hazel eyes lifted in the mirror behind the bottles, tracking her reflection."
1"She slid onto a stool near the corner, away from the hidden bookshelf that masked the secret back room."
2"His slight limp manifested only in the stillness of his left leg, planted like a pillar, a permanent reminder of Prague and the botched operation that had ended…"
3"The glass he pushed toward her held amber liquid that caught the bulb above it."
4"She looked at the black-and-white photographs—strangers in old coats, smiling at cameras that captured nothing real."
5"She paused, her black hair framing a face that had seen too much of London's underbelly to be young, too much of abuse to be soft."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas leaned, the signet ring tapping once against the wood"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.5085%