| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1631 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1631 | | totalAiIsms | 41 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "scanned" | | 7 | "marble" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "oppressive" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "echo" | | 20 | "scanning" | | 21 | "echoing" | | 22 | "chill" | | 23 | "down her spine" | | 24 | "shimmered" | | 25 | "reverberated" | | 26 | "crystalline" | | 27 | "rhythmic" | | 28 | "crystal" | | 29 | "pulsed" | | 30 | "complex" | | 31 | "intricate" | | 32 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1624 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1411 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 22 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.72 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to echo before the foot fell" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1624 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 34.55 | | std | 17.49 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 62 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 45 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 29 | | 46 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her balance, her breath hitching as heat washed over her skin—heavy, suffocating, and scented with overripe plums and scorched sugar." | | 1 | "Carvings lined the walls—depictions of sprawling feasts where figures with curving horns and elongated limbs toasted one another with chalices that spilled endless rivers of dark wine." | | 2 | "The air smelled stronger now—vanilla, burnt honey, and the faint metallic tang of copper." | | 3 | "Within the floating dust, geometric shapes coalesced and dissolved—cubes of rose-colored glass, spinning rings of pale bone, and shimmering spheres that chimed when they brushed against one another." | | 4 | "Above the doorframe, etched deep into the lintel, sat a symbol—a coiled serpent eating a lotus flower, surrounded by characters that shifted whenever Rory tried to read them directly." | | 5 | "Every step echoed three times—once sharp and clear, once soft and muffled, and once a strange, reversed whisper that seemed to echo before the foot fell." | | 6 | "In the center of the filigree pattern on the altar sat an indentation—the exact size and shape of the crescent scar on her left wrist." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1426 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "soft, peach-colored light" | | 1 | "clear moonlight-colored light" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.020336605890603085 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007713884992987377 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 14 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 59.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3793103448275862 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 34.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of water, thick golden" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 1 | "She turned her pale lavender" | | 2 | "She drew the moonsilver dagger" | | 3 | "They moved down a terraced" | | 4 | "She lowered her center of" | | 5 | "She leaned over it, silver" | | 6 | "It was a tremor in" | | 7 | "She paused before the threshold," | | 8 | "They descended into the passage." | | 9 | "She stopped in front of" | | 10 | "She pushed past the relief," | | 11 | "They wrapped tightly around massive," | | 12 | "She stopped before a central" | | 13 | "Her Heartstone Pendant now throbbed" |
| | ratio | 0.146 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The membrane of reality snapped" | | 1 | "Rory stumbled forward, her boots" | | 2 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted past her shoulder," | | 4 | "Isolde stepped through the tear" | | 5 | "Wildflowers clung to the hem" | | 6 | "She turned her pale lavender" | | 7 | "Rory pressed a palm against" | | 8 | "The crimson gem radiated a" | | 9 | "She drew the moonsilver dagger" | | 10 | "The metal hummed, throwing faint" | | 11 | "Rory scanned the bizarre landscape" | | 12 | "Nyx glided down the ridge." | | 13 | "They moved down a terraced" | | 14 | "Grapes the size of fists" | | 15 | "A thick syrup seeped from" | | 16 | "Rory avoided the puddles." | | 17 | "The liquid hissed faintly where" | | 18 | "Isolde drifted effortlessly over a" | | 19 | "Rory traced the crescent scar" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem radiated a sudden, prickling warmth that drove away the damp stickiness of the air." | | 1 | "Carvings lined the walls—depictions of sprawling feasts where figures with curving horns and elongated limbs toasted one another with chalices that spilled endl…" | | 2 | "Within the floating dust, geometric shapes coalesced and dissolved—cubes of rose-colored glass, spinning rings of pale bone, and shimmering spheres that chimed …" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned hotter against her sternum, a sharp heat that snapped her focus back." | | 4 | "Above the doorframe, etched deep into the lintel, sat a symbol—a coiled serpent eating a lotus flower, surrounded by characters that shifted whenever Rory tried…" | | 5 | "The scent of sweet rot faded, replaced by damp earth, old iron, and stone that had never known daylight." | | 6 | "The central figure was a woman with shoulder-length hair, holding a blade that glowed in the stone's very texture, facing a towering silhouette with horns that …" | | 7 | "High overhead, stalactites hung like inverted spires, dripping liquid that shimmered with faint, bioluminescent turquoise light." | | 8 | "Each drop struck the floor with a ringing tone, creating an unearthly musical chord that reverberated through the vast space." | | 9 | "Flowers with petals of spun gold opened and closed in rhythmic beats, exhaling clouds of blue mist that hung low over the dark water filling the pathways." | | 10 | "They wrapped tightly around massive, glowing conduits of red crystal that stretched across the floor of the cavern like a subterranean nervous system." | | 11 | "Upon the dais stood an altar, its surface etched with intricate silver filigree that matched the pattern on Rory’s dagger." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.045 | | leniency | 0.091 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |