Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSV6Y7XNSVXRCZD7FN3JJ9

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.004872
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked back in a frantic stutter—one, two, three—then the door to Eva's flat tore open against the chain. Rory froze on the curry-scented stairwell, her delivery bag still slung across one shoulder, blue eyes widening at the spectacle in the frame. Eva's hair had been chopped into uneven spikes dyed bruise-purple, but her grin split familiar. "You actually came." Ptolemy wound between Rory's boots, tail high. Rory stepped into the cramped flat above the curry house. Books teetered in stacks across every surface—scrolls pinned to the walls with knives, research notes taped over the stove. The air hung thick with old paper and some sharp incense that scratched her throat. "You look like hell, Rory." Eva tugged her inside, chain snapping loose. "When did you stop sleeping?" "After I stopped answering texts." Rory dropped her bag on the floor. Her black hair clung to her damp neck. She wore a dark jacket over her delivery uniform, sleeves rolled past her wrists—past the small crescent scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin. Eva's grin faltered. "I didn't ask for apologies. I asked for you." The door clicked shut behind her. Three deadbolts slid home with finality. Rory turned. Her breath hitched. Lucien Moreau stood beside Eva's bookshelves, one gloved hand resting on the knob of an ivory-handled cane. His charcoal suit looked untouched by the flat's chaos—sharp lapels, crisp shirt, platinum hair slicked back without mercy. One amber eye, one black, pinned her like a specimen. "You never said you'd bring him." Rory's voice stayed flat, but her fingers curled tight around the strap of her bag. Eva hovered between them, small in comparison to both. "He's the only one who knows the sigil on your wrist isn't just a scar." "It's not just anything." Lucien's accent curled, low and French. "It is a key, Aurora." She hated that name from his mouth. From anyone else, Rory was enough. "I don't care what it is. You left me to clean up the mess with Evan alone." Rory's jaw tightened. "You both vanished." Eva reached out, then withdrew. "We saved your life." "You disappeared." Rory stepped closer, close enough to smell the faint sulfur beneath Lucien's cologne. "No word for six months, Eva. No text. No bloody warning." Lucien leaned his weight onto the cane. The blade inside stayed hidden, but she knew it lived there—thin, vicious, patient. "I stayed away to protect you, not abandon you." His amber eye softened, almost human. The black one never blinked. "Every time I come near, the hunger grows." Rory's heart knocked hard against her ribs. She remembered Marseille, the half-demon's mouth on hers in a rain-soaked alley behind a club—teeth too sharp, promises too broken. "You never told me you were leaving," she said, quieter now. "Just that you loved me too much to stay." Eva pressed her palms together like prayer. "The flat's warded. Three locks. The scrolls—" She gestured to the chaos. "I've mapped half the Avaros sigils. But Rory's wrist, Lucien. The crescent." Rory glanced down. The old scar had started to itch the moment she entered. "It's burning," she admitted. Lucien moved then—slow, precise. His hand closed around her wrist, gentle despite everything. His thumb traced the crescent mark through the fabric of her sleeve. "I know," he said. "The realm wants its key back." Rory should have pulled away. She didn't. "Why now?" she asked. "Why show up after all this silence?" Eva stepped forward, clutching a scroll that smelled of ash. "Because Evan found the flat. And he's not human anymore, Rory. He's something that wants this." She tapped the scroll against Rory's wrist. "We need you to open the door. Together." Rory looked from Eva's desperate face to Lucien's stillness. The hurt sat heavy, old and sharp, but so did the heat of his touch. "I don't forgive you yet," she told them both. Eva exhaled, shaky. "We don't need forgiveness. We need you alive." Lucien's mouth curved—not quite a smile, but closer than before. "Then stay, Aurora. Just for tonight." Rory pulled her wrist free. The scar throbbed beneath her sleeve. "I'll stay," she said. "But you're explaining everything. Every lie. Every night you let me think I was alone." Ptolemy jumped onto the book-laden table, knocking a scroll loose. The paper unfurled with a hiss of old magic. Rory didn't leave.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:11:10.926Z" 7/25/2026, 2:11:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His amber eye softened almost [almost]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.938
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.063
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount739
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount739
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords730
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount505
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva11
Rory16
Moreau1
French1
Lucien7
Marseille1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0
windowScore0.333
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, but closer than before"
63.01% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.37
wordCount730
matches
0"not quite a smile, but closer than before"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"hated that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean19.21
std11.01
cv0.573
sampleLengths
020
123
218
37
444
517
646
712
812
95
1045
1121
1224
1315
1413
1523
169
1726
1820
1928
2027
2120
2231
2314
244
2525
2610
277
2811
2941
3024
319
3211
3316
3411
3519
3619
373
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"been chopped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs85
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences76
ratio0.105
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back in a frantic stutter—one, two, three—then the door to Eva's flat tore open against the chain."
1"Books teetered in stacks across every surface—scrolls pinned to the walls with knives, research notes taped over the stove."
2"She wore a dark jacket over her delivery uniform, sleeves rolled past her wrists—past the small crescent scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin."
3"His charcoal suit looked untouched by the flat's chaos—sharp lapels, crisp shirt, platinum hair slicked back without mercy."
4"The blade inside stayed hidden, but she knew it lived there—thin, vicious, patient."
5"She remembered Marseille, the half-demon's mouth on hers in a rain-soaked alley behind a club—teeth too sharp, promises too broken."
6"Lucien moved then—slow, precise."
7"Lucien's mouth curved—not quite a smile, but closer than before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount520
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.028846153846153848
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean9.61
std5.64
cv0.587
sampleLengths
020
123
215
33
47
510
619
715
812
95
1012
118
1226
133
149
156
166
172
183
1917
2018
2110
2221
239
2415
2510
265
277
286
2920
303
315
324
3315
3411
357
3613
3715
385
398
407
4120
4211
439
447
4512
4612
473
4811
494
53.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.34210526315789475
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her black hair clung to"
1"She wore a dark jacket"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"His charcoal suit looked untouched"
4"She hated that name from"
5"His amber eye softened, almost"
6"She remembered Marseille, the half-demon's"
7"she said, quieter now"
8"She gestured to the chaos"
9"His hand closed around her"
10"His thumb traced the crescent"
11"She tapped the scroll against"
12"she told them both"
ratio0.245
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences53
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back in"
1"Rory froze on the curry-scented"
2"Eva's hair had been chopped"
3"Ptolemy wound between Rory's boots,"
4"Rory stepped into the cramped"
5"Books teetered in stacks across"
6"The air hung thick with"
7"Eva tugged her inside, chain"
8"Rory dropped her bag on"
9"Her black hair clung to"
10"She wore a dark jacket"
11"Eva's grin faltered."
12"The door clicked shut behind"
13"Her breath hitched."
14"Lucien Moreau stood beside Eva's"
15"His charcoal suit looked untouched"
16"Rory's voice stayed flat, but"
17"Eva hovered between them, small"
18"Lucien's accent curled, low and"
19"She hated that name from"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air hung thick with old paper and some sharp incense that scratched her throat."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory's voice stayed, but her fingers curled tight around the strap of her bag"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.063
78.6378%