| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.576 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 90.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1529 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "loosely" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1529 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "synthetic" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "electric" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "wavering" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "magnetic" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1518 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil Market." | | 1 | "Eva Kowalski." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1226 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 22 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Police | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Constable | 1 | | Briggs | 9 | | First | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | North | 1 | | South | 1 | | East | 1 | | West | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Bloomsbury | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Police" | | 4 | "Blitz" | | 5 | "Briggs" | | 6 | "Morris" | | 7 | "Museum" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.603 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1518 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 33.73 | | std | 21.85 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 88 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 74 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 58 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 64 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 44 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 12 |
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| 89.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "been tailored" | | 1 | "was charred" | | 2 | "been reduced" | | 3 | "was carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "was already fracturing" | | 1 | "were suddenly taking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police had given Quinn a inner clock tuned to crime scenes, but this disused Tube station—a phantom branch line abandoned before the Blitz—defied standard protocol." | | 1 | "If an electrical arc had struck the man, the burn pattern would possess an entry and exit point—a concentrated blast area with radial feathering outward along the path of least resistance." | | 2 | "She had seen bone carved like that once before—three years ago, in a damp alley off Whitechapel, resting three inches from the lifeless hand of her former partner, DS Morris." | | 3 | "There were no cardinal directions—no North, South, East, or West." | | 4 | "The needle inside—a sliver of tarnished silver shaped like a thorn—was moving." | | 5 | "The silver needle didn't track with her rotation; it stayed locked on that bricked-up archway, quivering like a hound on a leash." | | 6 | "It was high-grade, heavy rag paper—not the cheap newsprint or pulp used by street vagrants." | | 7 | "Young, likely—someone agile enough to negotiate the ladder drop from the street level without breaking an ankle." | | 8 | "Kowalski was the primary research assistant in that specific archive branch—curly red hair, round glasses, always carrying that battered leather satchel full of ancient history texts." | | 9 | "Briggs hesitated, looking at her sharp jaw, the dead precision in her posture, and the deep, unyielding shadow behind her gaze—the shadow that had lived there ever since Morris died." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 387 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.020671834625323 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0103359173126615 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 14.32 | | std | 8.81 | | cv | 0.615 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 63.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4339622641509434 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 39.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the black soot painted" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her left wrist" | | 1 | "He pulled a breath through" | | 2 | "She stood five-foot-nine, her military" | | 3 | "She ran a palm over" | | 4 | "she said, her voice dry," | | 5 | "He lay face up on" | | 6 | "It was carved with fine," | | 7 | "She didn't pick it up," | | 8 | "She had seen bone carved" | | 9 | "She walked away from the" | | 10 | "She knelt, unbuckling a plastic" | | 11 | "It was a small brass" | | 12 | "Its outer casing was thick" | | 13 | "She held it level in" | | 14 | "It didn't swing aimlessly, nor" | | 15 | "It shuddered, vibrating with a" | | 16 | "She turned her body ninety" | | 17 | "She plucked it free with" | | 18 | "It was high-grade, heavy rag" | | 19 | "She had seen it on" |
| | ratio | 0.298 | |
| 49.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The subterranean air beneath Camden" | | 1 | "She checked her left wrist" | | 2 | "The worn leather strap of" | | 3 | "Detective Constable Briggs said, his" | | 4 | "He pulled a breath through" | | 5 | "Quinn didn't answer." | | 6 | "She stood five-foot-nine, her military" | | 7 | "She ran a palm over" | | 8 | "she said, her voice dry," | | 9 | "Briggs offered, stepping closer to" | | 10 | "Quinn squatted beside the corpse," | | 11 | "The victim was a man" | | 12 | "He lay face up on" | | 13 | "The physical evidence was already" | | 14 | "Quinn reached out a gloved" | | 15 | "The air was frigid, yet" | | 16 | "The outer shell of the" | | 17 | "Briggs leaned down, his torch" | | 18 | "Quinn drew a steel pen" | | 19 | "The stiffened fingers opened with" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "If an electrical arc had" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Straight, sharp-angled ribbons of carbon stretched outward from the body like the rays of a dead star, cutting across the grime of the platform floor and termin…" | | 1 | "*The Veil Market.* An underground clearinghouse that moved with the lunar cycle, popping up in dead spaces beneath the city's crust." | | 2 | "It shuddered, vibrating with a high-pitched, metallic hum that vibrated up through Quinn's arm, pointing with absolute, rigid certainty down the dark throat of …" | | 3 | "Someone who moved between the rarefied air of Bloomsbury manuscripts and the cold, wet dark of Camden's sewers." | | 4 | "Briggs hesitated, looking at her sharp jaw, the dead precision in her posture, and the deep, unyielding shadow behind her gaze—the shadow that had lived there e…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice dry, crisp, and low" | | 1 | "Quinn squatted, her knees popping in the dead quiet" | | 2 | "Quinn corrected, her sharp jaw tightening" | | 3 | "Quinn murmured, her mind linking pieces with practiced, cold speed" | | 4 | "Quinn stood up, her brown eyes darting over every inch of the platform" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Briggs muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Briggs observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.364 | | leniency | 0.727 | | rawRatio | 0.417 | | effectiveRatio | 0.303 | |