Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSYFQKB2KZJPZ3VWW39QVY

Run Details

Duration:
46.0s
Cost:
$0.070608
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Condensation trickled down the leaded glass of The Raven's Nest, distorting the green neon sign flickering above the Soho pavement. Rain hammered the cobbles outside. Inside, the heavy scents of damp wool, stale cider, and aged parchment hung in the warm air. Framed nautical maps yellowed against dark pine paneling. Silas Blackwood dragged a linen rag across the mahogany counter, his silver signet ring catching the amber light with every turn of his hand. His left leg stiffened as he pivoted toward the beer taps, the old knee injury dragging against the oak floorboards. In the shadows of a corner booth, Aurora Carter traced the faint crescent scar on her left wrist. Grease from the Golden Empress kitchen still clung to the cuff of her jacket despite two scrubbings under cold tap water. Three hours of delivering takeaway containers through rain-slicked traffic left her shoulders raw. She pulled her straight black hair over her shoulder and took a swallow of bitter stout, letting the chill cool her throat. The brass bell above the front door chimed. A gust of wind pushed wet asphalt air into the room. A woman stepped inside, shaking out a bone-white umbrella. She folded it with sharp, practiced snaps, her tailored camel coat pristine against the murky backdrop of the pub. Leather boots clicked against the floorboards. She lifted her head, dark curls pinned in an immaculate chignon, amber-framed spectacles resting on her nose. Rory froze. The pint glass halted halfway to her lips. Carys Bowen paused by the umbrella stand, her gaze sweeping past the brass taps, past Silas' steady hazel eyes, landing squarely on the corner booth. Her hands stilled on her leather handbag. "Aurora." Rory set the glass down. The wet base stuck briefly to the coaster before tearing the paper edge. Carys crossed the distance between them, each step deliberate, her eyes wide behind her lenses. She stopped beside the table, her shadow cutting across the flickering tea light between them. "I stood in this city three years looking for you. Evan said you vanished into thin air." "Evan lies." Rory pulled her left sleeve down, tucking her wrist beneath the table edge. "Sit down, Carys. You're drawing eyes." Carys slid onto the leather bench opposite Rory, the smooth wool of her coat rustling against the worn hide. She reached out, fingers hovering inches above Rory’s forearm before pulling back into her lap. "Look at you." "I look twenty-five." "You look like a ghost." Carys unbuttoned her collar, exposing a silk scarf tied in a precise knot. "I came in here to escape the rain after leaving a hearing at Southwark. I saw the maps. I thought of your father's study. I didn't expect..." Her words trailed off, her eyes dropping to the smudge of kitchen grease on Rory's cuff. Silas limped over, dropping two slate coasters onto the dark wood. He set a glass of sparkling water beside Carys and refilled Rory's stout without a word. His hazel eyes lingered on Carys' sharp profile for a silent second before he turned back toward the bar, his gait heavy on his left side. Carys watched him retreat, then rested her forearms on the table. "You left Cardiff in the middle of spring term. Your father spent six months calling the South Wales Police every morning at seven. He thought you were in the river." "My father knows where to find me if he cares to look past his own reputation." Rory took another drink, allowing the bitter foam to settle on her tongue. "He didn't want a daughter. He wanted a junior partner." "He retired last autumn." Carys smoothed her leather gloves across the wood. "We had the dinner at the Parkgate. Every senior partner from chambers showed up. Everyone except you." "How tragic for the seating chart." "Don't do that." Carys' voice sharpened, cutting through the low hum of the pub. "Don't hide behind that cold Cardiff Law routine. I buried three years of friendship because you packed a holdall and fled with Evan." "I didn't run with him." Rory met Carys' stare head-on, her bright blue eyes cold. "I ran from him." Silence settled over the booth, heavy and thick. Across the room, Silas rinsed glassware in the zinc sink, the rhythmic splash of water filling the quiet gap. Carys leaned back, her shoulders dropping an inch. Her mouth parted, then pressed into a fine line. "He told everyone you broke." Carys adjusted her glasses, her knuckles pale against the dark table. "He said you couldn't take the pressure of final exams. He took your desk at the firm. He uses your father's old office." "Let him have the wood rot." Rory's fingers tightened around the glass stem. "He earned it." "You were top of our year, Rory. You argued circles around Lord Justice Davies in the moot court. You were supposed to be in London, yes—but at the Old Bailey, not delivering takeaway on a rusty frame." Carys glanced toward the window where rain streaked the glass in silver lines. "What happened to you?" "Time." Rory leaned forward, the faint green glow from the exterior sign catching the high line of her cheekbone. "Time happened. You stayed in the lanes they painted for you, Carys. You took the pupillage. You bought the coats. You wear the silk." "And you live above a Soho pub?" "I sleep without checking the door lock five times." Rory pulled her wrist out from beneath the table, letting the dark fabric slip back to reveal the pale crescent mark near her pulse. "I wake up and nobody owns my morning." Carys stared at the faint scar. Her composure cracked, the rigid lawyer persona yielding to the girl who used to share cold chips on the Cardiff Pierhead. "Eva told me you were in London." Carys moved her hand across the dark stain of the table. "She wouldn't give me an address. She said you were safe. I hated her for months because I thought she was keeping you from us out of spite." "Eva kept me alive." "I would have helped you too." Carys' voice strained at the edges. "If you had trusted me." Rory looked away, her eyes fixing on a yellowed map of the Bristol Channel pinned to the wall behind Carys. The lines drawn a century ago didn't show the sandbars shifted by the tides, or the ships sunk in the shoals. "You had everything to lose." Rory turned back, her tone flat, stripped of defense. "Evan would have dragged you into the mud just to hurt me. You were going to be brilliant. You are brilliant." "It's lonely at chambers." Carys reached out, her fingers resting lightly against the back of Rory's hand. "I look at the empty desk across from mine every afternoon. I bought two mugs for the espresso machine three years ago. One sits in the cupboard, still in its bubble wrap." Silas set a fresh tray of polished glasses onto the back bar, the soft clatter echoing off the mahogany walls. "Keep it in the wrap." Rory pulled her hand back to wrap both palms around her dark glass. "It breaks easier once you wash it." Carys took a slow breath, inhaling the smell of rain, beer, and fried ginger clinging to Rory's clothes. She stood up, smoothing the front of her camel coat. "I come to London every Tuesday for hearings." Carys straightened her scarf, her voice composed once more, though her eyes remained dark with lingering hurt. "I'll be at the coffee shop on Broadwick Street at eight." Rory didn't move. "Don't make me buy a third mug, Rory." Carys turned and walked toward the door, her leather boots clicking rhythmically against the floorboards. The brass bell chimed as she stepped out into the pouring Soho rain, leaving the heavy oak door to slam shut behind her.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:12:58.236Z" 7/25/2026, 2:12:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory's fingers tightened around [around]"
1"Rory turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.093
96.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1314
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chill"
2"pristine"
3"silk"
4"silence"
5"rhythmic"
6"pulse"
7"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1313
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount797
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Carys"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Blackwood1
Aurora1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Bowen1
Carys17
Rory18
Silas4
Silence1
Cardiff1
Pierhead1
Bristol1
Channel1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
5"Bowen"
6"Carys"
7"Rory"
8"Silas"
9"Silence"
10"Channel"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bristol"
globalScore0.371
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1313
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean29.84
std19.84
cv0.665
sampleLengths
094
174
219
351
410
532
61
718
830
917
1021
1134
123
133
1461
1553
1611
1730
1839
1929
206
2137
2219
2344
2439
2516
2654
2743
287
2941
3027
3146
324
3317
3441
3535
3649
3720
3825
3928
4036
413
428
4338
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences87
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.004658385093167702
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0015527950310559005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean15.09
std8.96
cv0.594
sampleLengths
020
15
217
38
424
520
618
721
813
922
108
1111
129
1319
146
1517
162
178
1825
197
201
215
2213
2315
2415
2517
2615
276
2819
2915
303
313
3218
3343
3411
3516
3626
3711
3830
3929
4010
4112
4217
436
4414
4523
4615
474
488
4919
61.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42528735632183906
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences58
matches
0"His left leg stiffened as"
1"She pulled her straight black"
2"She folded it with sharp,"
3"She lifted her head, dark"
4"Her hands stilled on her"
5"She stopped beside the table,"
6"She reached out, fingers hovering"
7"Her words trailed off, her"
8"He set a glass of"
9"His hazel eyes lingered on"
10"Her mouth parted, then pressed"
11"Her composure cracked, the rigid"
12"She stood up, smoothing the"
ratio0.224
20.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences58
matches
0"Condensation trickled down the leaded"
1"Silas Blackwood dragged a linen"
2"His left leg stiffened as"
3"Grease from the Golden Empress"
4"She pulled her straight black"
5"The brass bell above the"
6"A gust of wind pushed"
7"A woman stepped inside, shaking"
8"She folded it with sharp,"
9"Leather boots clicked against the"
10"She lifted her head, dark"
11"The pint glass halted halfway"
12"Carys Bowen paused by the"
13"Her hands stilled on her"
14"Rory set the glass down."
15"The wet base stuck briefly"
16"Carys crossed the distance between"
17"She stopped beside the table,"
18"Rory pulled her left sleeve"
19"Carys slid onto the leather"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Condensation trickled down the leaded glass of The Raven's Nest, distorting the green neon sign flickering above the Soho pavement."
1"Her composure cracked, the rigid lawyer persona yielding to the girl who used to share cold chips on the Cardiff Pierhead."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"His hazel eyes lingered, his gait heavy on his left side"
1"Carys adjusted, her knuckles pale against the dark table"
2"Rory turned back, her tone flat, stripped of defense"
3"Carys reached out, her fingers resting lightly against the back of Rory's hand"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.8266%