Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSZJ2AGYF0G8W2R12ZWCE0

Run Details

Duration:
13.4s
Cost:
$0.013862
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The heavy brass lock clicked three times under Rory’s thumb before the door swayed inward. Lucien rested his weight against the frame, the ivory head of his cane tucked into the crook of his elbow. Water dripped from the hem of his charcoal overcoat, pool-forming on the worn hallway linoleum. Rain slicked his platinum hair back across his scalp, accentuating the sharp angle of his jaw and the jagged line where his pale skin met the dark collar of his suit. "You changed the locks." His voice hit her like crushed velvet dragged over gravel, low and unbothered by the downpour soaking his shoulders. "Two extra deadbolts. A bit paranoid, even for you, Rory." Rory kept her hand on the edge of the door, her knuckle white where her grip tightened. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs, but her face remained stone. "Eva's idea. She doesn't like uninvited guests." "And yet, here I am." Lucien stepped past her without waiting for an invitation, the scent of damp wool, cedar, and ozone flooding the tiny foyer. Ptolemy hissed from his perch atop a stack of leather-bound lexicons, his ginger tail puffing to twice its size before he darted under the velvet sofa. Lucien didn't flinch. He leaned his cane against the coat rack, stripped off his Italian leather gloves, and laid them neatly on the crowded side table next to a pile of translated Aramaic scrolls. "You shouldn't be here, Lucien." Rory slammed the door shut, the noise echoing off the narrow walls of the Brick Lane flat. The aroma of roasted cumin and turmeric drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below, mixing with the sharp, metallic tang Lucien always carried with him. "Six months. Not a word. Not a text. Then you show up at midnight looking like a drowned rat." Lucien turned, his heterochromatic eyes catching the amber glow of the streetlamp bleeding through the thin lace curtains. The golden right eye burned with that familiar, predatory spark; the left remained a pit of endless, midnight black. "Six months, three days, and roughly four hours. But who keeps count?" "You do." She crossed her arms, tucking her left hand into her armpit—a reflex to hide the crescent scar on her wrist, though he had seen it a hundred times before. "You always keep count." "I came because the warding around the East End shifted an hour ago." He stepped closer, his boots silent on the Persian rug. The spatial warmth off his body radiated through the chilly air between them. "I thought your ex might have tracked you from Cardiff. Or worse, someone from Avaros took an interest in your sudden relocation." "Evan doesn't know London exists past Paddington," she snapped, though her throat constricted at the name. "And I don't need a babysitter. Especially not one who left me standing in the rain outside Saint Paul's while he ran off to Marseille to play politics with his father's court." Lucien stopped inches away. He reached out, his long fingers hovering near her cheek before sinking back into his pockets. "I left to keep you off their ledgers. If Avaros knew what you meant to me, they would have plucked your eyes out just to see if I’d bleed." "What I meant to you?" A bitter laugh escaped her lips. "You treat people like information, Lucien. You collect us, file us away, and trade us when the price hits the ceiling. I wasn't going to sit around in your flat off Soho waiting to see what my exchange rate was." "Is that really what you thought?" His black eye seemed to swallow the dim light, widening just a fraction. "After everything?" "You made it easy to think." Rory turned her back on him, walking over to the small kitchenette. She grabbed a chipped porcelain mug, her hands trembling despite her best efforts to lock them tight. She set it down hard on the counter. "You closed every door between us the second things got messy. The moment I asked about your father, about the blood on your blade—you locked down." "Because the truth is filthy, Laila." The old nickname fell from his lips like a slip of silk. He used it only when his defenses crumbled, when the polished fixer persona slipped away to reveal the half-demon underneath. "Don't call me that." "It's who you are when you're with me." He closed the distance between them, his chest almost touching her spine. She could feel the furnace heat radiating through his damp shirt. "You aren't the scared girl who ran from Wales. You aren't the delivery driver weaving through traffic for a handful of pounds. With me, you were the only person in this rotting city who looked at what I am and didn't run." Rory spun around, her lower back hitting the edge of the laminate counter. "I didn't run from what you are! I ran from how you treated me! You touched me like I was made of glass one night, and the next morning you spoke to me like I was a stranger who picked the wrong lock." Lucien tilted his head, a single strand of wet blond hair falling over his forehead. His breathing deepened, the heavy rise and fall of his chest stirring the faint scent of rain on her skin. "I was terrified." The confession hung in the cramped space between the sink and the refrigerator, heavy and suffocating. "You don't get terrified," she whispered. "I do." He raised a hand, his knuckles lightly brushing the curve of her jawline. His skin was scorching hot, the infernal bloodline beneath his flesh thrumming against her pulse. "When I realized I would burn London to the ground before I let anyone touch a hair on your head, it horrified me. My father ruled through weakness he exploited in others. I swore I would never give anyone that kind of leverage over me." "I wasn't leverage." Rory didn't pull away from his touch. Her skin tingled where his fingers rested, a electric shiver running down her spine despite her anger. "I was right there." "You were my singular vulnerability," Lucien corrected, his voice dropping an octave, slipping into the dark, liquid cadence of his native French. *"Mon étincelle dans meulage de l'ombre."* "English, Lucien." "My spark," he translated, his thumb tracing the soft contour of her lower lip. "You lit up every dark corner I spent thirty years cultivating. And then you locked three deadbolts against me." Rory swallowed hard, her blue eyes searching the stark contrast of his gaze. The hurt was still there, a jagged stone sitting in the pit of her stomach, but the sharp edge of her anger was dulling under the relentless heat of his proximity. He had always done this—pulled her into his orbit with an undeniable, gravitational force, leaving her breathless and disoriented. "You can't just slide back into my life because you had a bad feeling in the dark," she said, though her voice lacked its earlier bite. "I didn't come to slide back in." Lucien leaned down, his forehead coming to rest gently against hers. The smell of cedar and rain enveloped her completely. "I came to ask if the locks were meant to keep the world out, or just me." "Both," she breathed, her hands rising to press against his damp chest, feeling the wild, rapid beat of his heart through the tailored wool. "Mainly you." "Good." Lucien’s lips brushed the corner of her mouth, a ghost of a touch that made her breath hitch. "Then at least I know you were thinking of me."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:13:33.393Z" 7/25/2026, 2:13:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.465
leniency0.93
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"lightly"
2"gently"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1278
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"porcelain"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"velvet"
2"echoing"
3"familiar"
4"warmth"
5"porcelain"
6"silk"
7"could feel"
8"pulse"
9"electric"
10"down her spine"
11"tracing"
12"stark"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1275
ratio0.005
matches
0"\"Mon étincelle dans meulage de l'ombre.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount766
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Ptolemy1
Italian1
Aramaic1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien10
Persian1
French1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Aramaic"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.847
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1275
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean39.84
std20.21
cv0.507
sampleLengths
015
166
233
338
426
560
669
749
835
958
1048
1149
1251
1321
1469
1538
164
1773
1856
1938
2016
216
2275
2331
2428
252
2633
2763
2826
2944
3026
3129
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
84.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs115
matches
0"was scorching"
1"was dulling"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences72
ratio0.042
matches
0"The golden right eye burned with that familiar, predatory spark; the left remained a pit of endless, midnight black."
1"\"You do.\" She crossed her arms, tucking her left hand into her armpit—a reflex to hide the crescent scar on her wrist, though he had seen it a hundred times before."
2"He had always done this—pulled her into his orbit with an undeniable, gravitational force, leaving her breathless and disoriented."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount771
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.020752269779507133
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007782101167315175
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean17.71
std9.86
cv0.557
sampleLengths
015
120
215
331
423
510
617
714
87
926
1026
113
1231
1322
1428
1519
1618
1719
1812
1931
204
2123
2213
2322
2416
2532
264
2716
2829
2911
3040
3119
322
3318
3417
358
3626
3718
3820
394
4020
4111
4242
4313
4443
4515
4620
473
4816
496
68.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4305555555555556
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences48
matches
0"His voice hit her like"
1"Her heart hammered a frantic"
2"He leaned his cane against"
3"She crossed her arms, tucking"
4"He stepped closer, his boots"
5"she snapped, though her throat"
6"He reached out, his long"
7"His black eye seemed to"
8"She grabbed a chipped porcelain"
9"She set it down hard"
10"He used it only when"
11"He closed the distance between"
12"She could feel the furnace"
13"His breathing deepened, the heavy"
14"He raised a hand, his"
15"His skin was scorching hot,"
16"Her skin tingled where his"
17"he translated, his thumb tracing"
18"He had always done this—pulled"
19"she said, though her voice"
ratio0.438
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences48
matches
0"The heavy brass lock clicked"
1"Lucien rested his weight against"
2"Water dripped from the hem"
3"Rain slicked his platinum hair"
4"His voice hit her like"
5"Rory kept her hand on"
6"Her heart hammered a frantic"
7"Lucien stepped past her without"
8"Ptolemy hissed from his perch"
9"Lucien didn't flinch."
10"He leaned his cane against"
11"Rory slammed the door shut,"
12"The aroma of roasted cumin"
13"Lucien turned, his heterochromatic eyes"
14"The golden right eye burned"
15"She crossed her arms, tucking"
16"He stepped closer, his boots"
17"The spatial warmth off his"
18"she snapped, though her throat"
19"Lucien stopped inches away."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His skin was scorching hot, the infernal bloodline beneath his flesh thrumming against her pulse."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"He stepped, his boots silent on the Persian rug"
1"she snapped, though her throat constricted at the name"
2"He closed, his chest almost touching her spine"
3"He raised, his knuckles lightly brushing the curve of her jawline"
4"he translated, his thumb tracing the soft contour of her lower lip"
5"she said, though her voice lacked its earlier bite"
6"Lucien leaned down, his forehead coming to rest gently against hers"
7"Lucien’s lips brushed, a ghost of a touch that made her breath hitch"
56.98% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Lucien corrected (correct)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.116
leniency0.233
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.186
76.3072%