Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCSZXH9Z2ESPYDXE6FV20Q4

Run Details

Duration:
2m 42s
Cost:
$0.005942
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory ducked beneath the twisted arch of standing stones and stepped onto ground that yielded like moss over stone. The old oaks marked the boundary, but they had crossed without ceremony. Behind them, Richmond Park vanished into a silver fog. No birds called. Only the hush of a world holding its breath. Her shoulder-length black hair clung to damp air that smelled of crushed thyme and something sweeter, older. She touched the crescent scar on her left wrist, feeling the raised skin pulse in time with the crimson gem hanging at her collarbone. The Heartstone warmed against her ribs, faint and insistent, a heartbeat not her own. Eva moved beside her. Silas followed, boots crunching softly on paths that bloomed with wildflowers despite the winter biting at the park beyond. "Time lies here," Eva said. Her breath formed no mist. "An hour inside," Rory said. "Could be minutes out there. Or days." A clearing spread before them. Ancient oaks formed a cathedral ceiling woven with vines that glowed faintly amber, borrowing color from some distant sky. Flowers bloomed in impossible spirals—violet, gold, ink-blue—under a moon that was not London's moon. No footprints marred the grass behind them, though their boots pressed into soil that felt like silk wrapped around granite. Rory drew the moonsilver blade Isolde had given her. The leaf-shaped dagger stayed cold in her grip, its edge luminescent, drinking the false moonlight. "Where does it go?" Silas asked, gesturing to a path that split around a pool of still water. "Not where." Rory stepped closer to the water's edge. "Who." The pool reflected no stars, only shapes that shifted like smoke remembering faces. She knelt. Her bright blue eyes widened. "There's something under there," she said. Nyx stepped forward from the shadow of an oak. Their violet eyes glowed softly, humanoid silhouette rippling like silk in water. They spoke like a whisper carried on wind. "The grove remembers every soul that stepped inside without invitation." Rory stood. The Heartstone pulsed faster, crimson light beating against her sternum. "We were invited." "Not by this soil." Nyx pointed a shadowed hand toward the path that angled downward. "That way, the Veil thins. The Wardens left cracks. Can you feel them?" Rory closed her eyes. The air changed pressure, a shimmer she could not see but her skin recognized—a faint distortion, like heat rising from summer asphalt, visible only to those who knew to look. The Veil. Weaker here, perhaps, or simply tired. "I feel warmth," Rory said. "Not from the Heartstone alone." "Belphegor's kitchens have been searching," Nyx said. "Dymas runs on appetite. The Vineyards near the rifts smell of smoke." Eva touched Rory's arm. "We move together. No one splits." They walked deeper. The path narrowed. Oak bark peeled away in strips that moved like slow fingers. The wildflowers released scents that changed with each breath—first honey, then iron, then something that reminded Rory of her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, long gone. "Listen," Eva whispered. A sound came—not wind, not water. A low humming, as if the earth itself sang behind glass. Rory recognized it. Not human. Not Fae. Something between. "It's calling," she said. They rounded a bend and found the standing stones arranged in a circle older than any church. In the center, a portal shimmerednot a door, but a tear in the fabric, silver and faint like a scar in the air. The Heartstone blazed warm, crimson glow matching the tear's faint crimson pulse. Rory stepped closer. Her breath fogged despite the warmth pressing against her cheeks. "This is a rift point," she said. "Monitored by the Wardens, but unguarded now." Silas gripped the hilt of a blade at his belt. "We go through?" "No," Nyx said. Their shadow form flickered, dense then thin. "Not yet. The winter solstice weakens the Veil, yes, but this tear is fresh. Someone fed it." "Fed it?" Eva asked. "Gluttony leaves residue." Nyx drifted near the portal. "Dymas contracts souls for its kitchens. The ingredients for those feasts come through places like this." Rory clenched the Fae blade. The moonsilver felt alive, vibrating against her palm. "We need to see what's on the other side," Rory said. "Not cross. Just look." She moved to the portal's edge. The shimmer distorted her reflection—bright blue eyes stretched long, black hair floating like ink in water. Behind her image, she saw amber sky. Vineyards. Sprawling orchards. Dymas. The world-building had emerged through her feet, her breath, the cold blade in her hand, the crimson pulse at her throat. No one had explained it. They had felt it. "There's a feast happening," Rory said, her voice low. "Not far from this tear. I can smell the smoke." Eva stepped beside her. "Then we close it." "Not alone," Nyx said. "But I can hold the shadow long enough for you to see." Rory nodded. She pressed her palm to the portal's edge. The Veil shivered. The grove held its breath. The wildflowers stopped swaying. And through the tear, the amber sky burned.<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount843
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silk"
2"whisper"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"shimmered"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords837
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
34.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount650
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.31
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
London1
Isolde1
Rory15
Nyx6
Veil2
Eva6
Cardiff1
Fae2
Silas3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"Veil"
5"Eva"
6"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.346
windowScore0.5
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like silk wrapped around granite"
80.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.195
wordCount837
matches
0"not a door, but a tear in the fabric, silver"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean20.41
std14.67
cv0.719
sampleLengths
052
155
223
310
412
558
624
718
810
920
106
1129
1210
1315
1428
1542
1610
1719
1810
193
2039
213
2226
234
2452
2513
2614
2713
2827
294
3024
3113
3215
3332
341
3530
3619
378
3816
3922
408
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences98
ratio0.061
matches
0"Flowers bloomed in impossible spirals—violet, gold, ink-blue—under a moon that was not London's moon."
1"The air changed pressure, a shimmer she could not see but her skin recognized—a faint distortion, like heat rising from summer asphalt, visible only to those who knew to look."
2"The wildflowers released scents that changed with each breath—first honey, then iron, then something that reminded Rory of her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, long gone."
3"A sound came—not wind, not water."
4"In the center, a portal shimmered—not a door, but a tear in the fabric, silver and faint like a scar in the air."
5"The shimmer distorted her reflection—bright blue eyes stretched long, black hair floating like ink in water."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount661
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03479576399394856
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.01059001512859304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean8.54
std6.15
cv0.72
sampleLengths
019
112
29
33
49
517
624
714
84
919
105
115
125
137
145
1519
1614
1720
189
1915
2018
219
221
2313
242
255
266
279
2812
298
3010
312
3210
333
3415
3513
364
3730
382
396
405
415
427
4312
444
456
463
473
4811
4925
66.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners42
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Only the hush of a"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
1"She touched the crescent scar"
2"Her breath formed no mist."
3"Her bright blue eyes widened."
4"Their violet eyes glowed softly,"
5"They spoke like a whisper"
6"They walked deeper."
7"They rounded a bend and"
8"Her breath fogged despite the"
9"Their shadow form flickered, dense"
10"She moved to the portal's"
11"They had felt it."
12"She pressed her palm to"
ratio0.217
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rory ducked beneath the twisted"
1"The old oaks marked the"
2"Her shoulder-length black hair clung"
3"She touched the crescent scar"
4"The Heartstone warmed against her"
5"Eva moved beside her."
6"Silas followed, boots crunching softly"
7"Her breath formed no mist."
8"A clearing spread before them."
9"Flowers bloomed in impossible spirals—violet,"
10"Rory drew the moonsilver blade"
11"The leaf-shaped dagger stayed cold"
12"Silas asked, gesturing to a"
13"Rory stepped closer to the"
14"The pool reflected no stars,"
15"Her bright blue eyes widened."
16"Nyx stepped forward from the"
17"Their violet eyes glowed softly,"
18"They spoke like a whisper"
19"The Heartstone pulsed faster, crimson"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory ducked beneath the twisted arch of standing stones and stepped onto ground that yielded like moss over stone."
1"Her shoulder-length black hair clung to damp air that smelled of crushed thyme and something sweeter, older."
2"Silas followed, boots crunching softly on paths that bloomed with wildflowers despite the winter biting at the park beyond."
3"Ancient oaks formed a cathedral ceiling woven with vines that glowed faintly amber, borrowing color from some distant sky."
4"Flowers bloomed in impossible spirals—violet, gold, ink-blue—under a moon that was not London's moon."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.061
79.5446%