| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 951 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 951 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "pang" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "navigating" | | 8 | "marble" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 948 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.782 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "craving that seemed to claw upward from her stomach" | | 1 | "sounded like a massive, collective sigh dr" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.11 | | wordCount | 948 | | matches | | 0 | "not the bruised twilight of London, but a vast, unbroken dome of warm amber, the color of old honey" | | 1 | "not a dry, parched throat from walking, but a deep, hollow craving" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 41.22 | | std | 21.45 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 89 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 2.34% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound wasn't a voice in the traditional sense; it was a dry rustle of autumn leaves swept across stone, carried on a nonexistent wind." | | 1 | "Rory felt a sudden, sharp pang of thirst—not a dry, parched throat from walking, but a deep, hollow craving that seemed to claw upward from her stomach." | | 2 | "Isolde’s gift—a slender, leaf-shaped dagger of cold moonsilver—hummed against her thigh, its blade reacting to the proximity of the boundary." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 851 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "Below, grand open-air" | | 2 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" | | 3 | "distorted, neon-streaked glare" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.022326674500587545 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010575793184488837 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 61 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 61 | | mean | 15.54 | | std | 8.91 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 78.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5081967213114754 | | totalSentences | 61 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "It shifted from the damp," | | 1 | "She straightened, adjusting the strap" | | 2 | "Her breath hitched." | | 3 | "It felt alive." | | 4 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She stopped dead, her bright" | | 6 | "She crossed her arms, her" | | 7 | "She looked down at her" | | 8 | "They were steady." | | 9 | "They pushed past a thicket" | | 10 | "It writhed and rippled, a" | | 11 | "It wasn't thunder." | | 12 | "It sounded like a massive," | | 13 | "She looked from the shimmering," | | 14 | "she said, her voice cutting" |
| | ratio | 0.288 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed first." | | 1 | "It shifted from the damp," | | 2 | "Rory ducked beneath a low-hanging" | | 3 | "She straightened, adjusting the strap" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "The clearing opened before them" | | 6 | "The sky above was not" | | 7 | "The sound wasn't a voice" | | 8 | "Nyx hovered half a foot" | | 9 | "The faint, glowing violet of" | | 10 | "Rory reached instinctively for the" | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm" | | 12 | "It felt alive." | | 13 | "Rory asked, her voice dropping" | | 14 | "Nyx murmured, drifting forward" | | 15 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "The leaves shimmered with a" | | 17 | "Rory felt a sudden, sharp" | | 18 | "Saliva flooded her mouth, tasting" | | 19 | "She stopped dead, her bright" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could answer, a" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary behind them, their gray bark scarred with silver lichen, but beyond them lay a landscape that defied every rule …" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm against her skin, the thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone pulsing with a rhythmic, sluggish beat that matched the heavy thrum of bl…" | | 2 | "They moved deeper into the grove, treading softly over a carpet of wildflowers that bloomed in impossible shades of indigo and marigold, defying the season enti…" | | 3 | "The leaves shimmered with a faint, oily iridescence, dripping with golden nectars that pooled in the rich, dark soil below." | | 4 | "Rory felt a sudden, sharp pang of thirst—not a dry, parched throat from walking, but a deep, hollow craving that seemed to claw upward from her stomach." | | 5 | "She looked from the shimmering, alien vineyards of Dymas back toward the trembling tear that led home." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice dropping to a low, cautious register" | | 1 | "Nyx agreed, their violet eyes fixing on the rent in reality" | | 2 | "she said, her voice cutting cleanly through the amber-scented wind" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx noted (note)" | | 3 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |