Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT09K317DRC2W5RJ59ZK9N

Run Details

Duration:
7m 35s
Cost:
$0.018927
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone burned against Rory’s collarbone before she saw the rift. Its crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed with a heat that had nothing to do with body temperature. She gripped the silver chain and pulled the pendant free. The faint inner glow matched the amber bleed seeping through the air ahead. Nyx stood beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow, solid enough to stand six foot two in this form. Their violet eyes glowed faintly, like dying embers in deep water. "The Veil thins here," Nyx whispered, voice carried on wind that smelled of rain on hot stone. "Not a tear. A mouth. Open." Rory’s breath fogged, though the London air outside had been crisp winter. "We go in together." Isolde moved past them without leaving footprints. Her silver hair reached her waist, catching the amber light like spun metal. Pale lavender eyes studied the distortion in the air. "What enters gluttony never leaves with an empty belly," she said, leaving no mark on the frost. Rory touched her left wrist, feeling the small crescent scar. "Too late for warnings." The three stepped through. The shift hit Rory’s skin like stepping into a bath of warm wine. The amber sky above held no sun, just a perpetual glow that painted everything in honey and rust. Air thickened, sweet with fermented grapes and roasted sugar cane, yet under it lingered something sharper—charred bone, perhaps, or copper dripping from an unseen forge. Rory’s bright blue eyes widened. Her straight black hair, shoulder-length, stuck slightly to her neck in the warmth. "Look," she said. Endless vineyards rolled in every direction. Vines twisted up trellises of blackened gold, heavy with grapes that glowed like small lanterns. Orchards lined the horizon, trees bearing fruit in colours Rory had never named—violet pears, crimson apples that seemed to drip with syrup, yellow melons with skins like polished wax. The ground beneath her boots was not soil but crushed velvet, soft and yielding, smelling of old books and cinnamon. Nyx’s shadow stretched long across the velvet, thinner at the edges, testing the air. "No shadows here except mine," they observed. "The light eats them." Rory walked deeper. The Heartstone throbbed faster, confirming Hel’s gluttony realm. "This is Dymas," she said, not asking. Isolde walked ahead, ethereal and ageless, her silver hair floating as if underwater. She left no footprints. Wildflowers bloomed at her heels—red, gold, violet—impossible and year-round. They reached a clearing where a feast spread across a table that seemed grown from a single massive root. Platters overflowed with meats glazed in honey, breads that steamed with scents of anise and smoke, fruits arranged in spirals that hurt to look at, too perfect. Wine fountains bubbled softly, dark liquid that caught the amber light. But the diners disturbed Rory. Translucent figures sat on stools of woven vine, chewing slowly, endlessly. Their mouths moved, but no food disappeared. Their eyes—hollow, hungry—watched the newcomers without blinking. "Contracted souls," Isolde said, her voice carrying like a bell underwater. "They taste everything. They keep nothing." Rory’s stomach turned. "We don’t eat." Nyx drifted closer to the table. Their shadow form flickered, almost dissipating near the fountains. "The feast is a contract. Each bite binds deeper." Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade from her coat. The moonsilver dagger, slender and leaf-shaped, felt always cold to the touch, faintly luminescent in the strange amber glow. "We move through. Not stay." They walked past the table. One translucent diner reached out, fingers passing through Rory’s sleeve, leaving a chill like ice water in the bone. Rory didn’t flinch, though her grip on the blade tightened. Her quick mind catalogued exits—the path behind them had vanished, replaced by more vines. Beyond the feast lay gardens that defied ordinary space. Paths curved upward into the sky, lined with flowers that hummed low notes when touched. The air tasted of nectar and something metallic, like blood diluted in wine. Rory reached out. Her fingers brushed a violet bloom. It sang, a single clear tone that resonated in her teeth. "Beautiful," she said, though unease coiled in her gut like a living thing. "Beautiful is the bait," Isolde answered, walking through a wall of hanging vines without disturbing them. "The hook hides in the sweetness." Nyx shifted, their shadow pooling at Rory’s feet, then rising like smoke through her legs. "Something watches. Not the diners. Older. Hunger without mouth." Rory felt it then—a presence vast and indulgent, hidden beyond the orchards, perhaps in grand structures they hadn’t reached. The Heartstone pulsed, not warning of a portal now, but marking territory, claiming proximity. They moved deeper into the orchards. Trees bore crystal fruits that chimed when an unseen current touched them. The sound was like glass bells, discordant and lovely. Rory’s boots crunched on fallen petals that never decayed. The scent of wine grew stronger, almost intoxicating, clinging to her clothes. Her hand rested on the dagger’s hilt, cold against her palm. "Isolde," Rory said. "How do we leave?" The seer turned, lavender eyes unreadable, her lips curved in something that wasn’t quite a smile. "When gluttony has had its fill of you," she said. "Or when you deny it." Rory looked back at the feast, the endless chewing, the glowing vines that seemed to reach toward them like fingers. Wonder and dread mixed in her chest, sharp and sweet as the air itself. She kept the blade ready, the Heartstone burning warm against her heart, and followed Isolde deeper into the amber gloom, where the fruit trees chimed and the shadows whispered secrets only Nyx could understand.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:13:57.481Z" 7/25/2026, 2:13:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount936
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount936
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"velvet"
3"throbbed"
4"perfect"
5"stomach"
6"flickered"
7"chill"
8"resonated"
9"crystal"
10"unreadable"
11"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords928
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount825
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Rory18
London1
Endless1
Hel1
Isolde5
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx6
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Hel"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
5"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.409
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"apples that seemed to drip with syrup, yellow melons with skins like polished wax"
1"seemed grown from a single massive root"
2"quite a smile"
3"vines that seemed to reach toward them like fingers"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.155
wordCount928
matches
0"not soil but crushed velvet, soft"
1"not warning of a portal now, but marking territory, claiming proximity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean29.94
std17.89
cv0.598
sampleLengths
050
154
216
346
414
54
656
721
870
925
1018
1126
1257
135
1425
1517
166
1724
1832
1948
2037
2120
2213
2322
2424
2533
2627
2732
287
2931
3068
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences84
ratio0.071
matches
0"Air thickened, sweet with fermented grapes and roasted sugar cane, yet under it lingered something sharper—charred bone, perhaps, or copper dripping from an unseen forge."
1"Orchards lined the horizon, trees bearing fruit in colours Rory had never named—violet pears, crimson apples that seemed to drip with syrup, yellow melons with skins like polished wax."
2"Wildflowers bloomed at her heels—red, gold, violet—impossible and year-round."
3"Their eyes—hollow, hungry—watched the newcomers without blinking."
4"Her quick mind catalogued exits—the path behind them had vanished, replaced by more vines."
5"Rory felt it then—a presence vast and indulgent, hidden beyond the orchards, perhaps in grand structures they hadn’t reached."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.029832935560859187
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00954653937947494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.05
std6.25
cv0.566
sampleLengths
011
116
210
313
420
511
617
76
812
94
107
1113
129
1317
1410
154
164
1713
1818
1925
205
2113
223
236
2415
2529
2620
2714
287
294
303
318
327
3313
344
359
3619
3727
3811
395
4011
417
427
4311
446
453
463
476
489
499
70.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4523809523809524
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences68
matches
0"Its crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed"
1"She gripped the silver chain"
2"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
3"Her silver hair reached her"
4"she said, leaving no mark"
5"Her straight black hair, shoulder-length,"
6"she said, not asking"
7"She left no footprints."
8"They reached a clearing where"
9"Their mouths moved, but no"
10"Their eyes—hollow, hungry—watched the newcomers"
11"Their shadow form flickered, almost"
12"They walked past the table."
13"Her quick mind catalogued exits—the"
14"Her fingers brushed a violet"
15"It sang, a single clear"
16"she said, though unease coiled"
17"They moved deeper into the"
18"Her hand rested on the"
19"She kept the blade ready,"
ratio0.294
11.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences68
matches
0"The Heartstone burned against Rory’s"
1"Its crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed"
2"She gripped the silver chain"
3"The faint inner glow matched"
4"Nyx stood beside her, a"
5"Their violet eyes glowed faintly,"
6"Nyx whispered, voice carried on"
7"Rory’s breath fogged, though the"
8"Isolde moved past them without"
9"Her silver hair reached her"
10"she said, leaving no mark"
11"Rory touched her left wrist,"
12"The three stepped through."
13"The shift hit Rory’s skin"
14"The amber sky above held"
15"Air thickened, sweet with fermented"
16"Rory’s bright blue eyes widened."
17"Her straight black hair, shoulder-length,"
18"Vines twisted up trellises of"
19"Orchards lined the horizon, trees"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Its crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed with a heat that had nothing to do with body temperature."
1"Vines twisted up trellises of blackened gold, heavy with grapes that glowed like small lanterns."
2"Orchards lined the horizon, trees bearing fruit in colours Rory had never named—violet pears, crimson apples that seemed to drip with syrup, yellow melons with …"
3"Isolde walked ahead, ethereal and ageless, her silver hair floating as if underwater."
4"Wine fountains bubbled softly, dark liquid that caught the amber light."
5"One translucent diner reached out, fingers passing through Rory’s sleeve, leaving a chill like ice water in the bone."
6"Nyx shifted, their shadow pooling at Rory’s feet, then rising like smoke through her legs."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, not asking"
1"Isolde said, her voice carrying like a bell underwater"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"they observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.182
67.8050%