Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT1X4SE2PBBEF47QDPVVYY

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Duration:
17.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Quinn pushed past the yellow tape and her boots echoed through the cavernous belly of Camden’s dead Tube station. The rusted tracks disappeared into blackness. Overhead, Victorian tiles crumbled like old teeth, and somewhere in the dark water pooled on the far platform, rats scratched out a frantic rhythm. She pulled her coat collar high against the chill that had nothing to do with October. Sergeant Doyle waited near the stairwell, his flashlight beam trembling across the grime. “He was dead when we got here.” Doyle’s breath misted. “No ID, no witnesses, and this place—Quinn, this place smells like old copper and burned sugar.” Quinn nodded. She scanned the archway ahead, where arc lights flickered with sick, greenish light that belonged to no maintenance crew. The victim lay crumpled beside a collapsed vendor stall. His coat was expensive wool, now soaked with something blacker than blood. His hands were bare, dirt-caked, and empty—except for his right palm, which clutched a small brass disc. Quinn crouched. The disc was a compass, its needle frozen dead north, its brass face etched with symbols that hurt to stare at too long. Verdigris stained the casing like old bruises. “What do you think?” Doyle asked. Quinn straightened. “I think this isn’t our scene.” Doyle barked a laugh. “Detective, we got a dead body in an abandoned station with no power running these lights. Of course it’s ours.” Quinn ignored him. She walked the perimeter, her leather watch clicking against her wrist with each precise movement. The stall had sold nothing—no goods, no cash box—just charred books with spines in languages that made her molars ache. Then she saw the footprints. Not in dirt—there was no dirt here, only concrete and rust. These footprints glowed faintly, phosphorescent blue, and they led away from the body in a perfect straight line, then stopped dead in the middle of nothing. “Doyle.” Her voice cut low. He shuffled closer, flashlight sweeping wild. Quinn pointed. He squinted. “Scuff marks. Someone dragged—” “No.” She knelt, her brown eyes tracking the pattern. The footprints were human-sized, but they sank too deep for a living weight, and they ended not at a wall or exit, but in open air three feet from any surface. “These were made by pressure, not steps. And they stop because whatever made them stopped existing in our space.” Doyle exhaled hard. “You’re not serious.” Quinn rose. She pulled latex gloves from her pocket and snapped them on. She examined the victim’s neck—no ligature, no wounds—then his eyes, which stared upward with pupils blown wide, not with drugs, but with something that had seen too far. “Cause of death?” Doyle asked. “Not ours to determine.” Quinn circled the body. On the wall behind the stall, someone had scratched numbers—dates, perhaps—then scratched them out with violent strokes. She touched the wall. The plaster was cold, but beneath it, she felt a hum, like a subway train that never arrived. She pulled her notebook. The leather was worn soft from eighteen years of carrying dead ends. Doyle shifted his weight. “Forensics is stuck in traffic. You want to wait?” “No.” Quinn moved to the compass in the dead man’s hand. She pried his fingers open gently, respectful of the dead even when they died strange. The needle twitched. Not north. Toward her. Quinn’s jaw tightened, that sharp line in her face going harder. She pocketed the compass. The brass was warm now, alive with a pulse that matched her own heartbeat if she listened close. “Quinn—” Doyle started. She held up a hand. She walked the tunnel’s mouth, where the dead tracks ran into darkness. The air changed there—denser, tasting of ozone and old iron. She came back. “This place moves,” Quinn said. Doyle blinked. “What?” Quinn pointed to the tiles overhead. One was missing, revealing not ceiling but sky—black sky with wrong stars. Then she pointed to the footprints, now fading, leaving only the victim and the compass and the silence. “He came here for something specific.” Quinn’s voice stayed flat, analytical, but her eyes—dark, tired—scanned every shadow. “The compass brought him. Or led him. And whatever he found, it killed him without leaving a mark.” Doyle rubbed his face. “You think this is—what, some kind of underground market?” Quinn looked at him. “You’ve heard of the Veil?” The color drained from Doyle’s cheeks. “Rumors. Supernatural black market, moves every moon. You think—” “I think evidence is evidence.” Quinn knelt again, examining the dead man’s shoes—mud from three different postcodes, none near Camden. “This location entered his system forty-eight hours ago, according to the dirt patterns. He traveled far for this stall. And he brought nothing with him except that compass.” She opened the compass with her thumb. The sigils on its face glowed faint blue, matching the footprints. Doyle stepped back. “That thing is—” “Attuned,” Quinn finished. “To rifts. To doors that don’t stay open.” She closed it. The needle stilled. Quinn stood, her military posture rigid, her mind running tracks she hadn’t wanted to run since Morris died three years ago in a room that had smelled exactly like this—copper, sugar, and wrongness. She walked to Doyle, close enough that he had to look up. “You will file this as unknown cause, location unspecified. You will not mention the compass, the footprints, or the lights.” Doyle’s mouth opened. Quinn’s gaze held his—brown, hard, carrying eighteen years of authority and three years of buried grief that had taught her the world had hidden floors. “Because this isn’t our scene, Doyle. Not yet. But I’m going to find out who sold this compass. And I’m going to find out why this market exists, and why my partner died in a place just like this one.” She turned, her coat swinging, and walked back toward the stairwell, leaving Doyle with the body and the darkness and the knowledge that some dead ends were just doors, waiting for the right key. Quinn climbed into the October night, the compass heavy and warm in her pocket, its needle already turning—pulling her north, toward answers that lived in shadow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn knelt again [again]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.069
95.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"blown wide"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"chill"
2"scanned"
3"flickered"
4"etched"
5"perfect"
6"weight"
7"blown wide"
8"pulse"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1016
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
25.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount761
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Tube1
Victorian1
October2
Doyle15
Quinn19
Morris1
persons
0"Victorian"
1"Doyle"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"October"
globalScore0.252
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.953
wordCount1016
matches
0"not at a wall or exit, but in open air three feet from any surface"
1"not with drugs, but with something"
2"not ceiling but sky"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean19.17
std15.02
cv0.784
sampleLengths
049
116
213
326
421
538
632
76
88
924
1038
115
1237
135
146
152
166
1759
186
1941
205
2147
2216
2313
241
2525
263
274
2811
2922
303
3127
323
335
343
3536
3635
3713
389
3915
4048
4118
426
4311
446
4533
4612
4720
483
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences94
ratio0.128
matches
0"His hands were bare, dirt-caked, and empty—except for his right palm, which clutched a small brass disc."
1"The stall had sold nothing—no goods, no cash box—just charred books with spines in languages that made her molars ache."
2"Not in dirt—there was no dirt here, only concrete and rust."
3"She examined the victim’s neck—no ligature, no wounds—then his eyes, which stared upward with pupils blown wide, not with drugs, but with something that had seen too far."
4"On the wall behind the stall, someone had scratched numbers—dates, perhaps—then scratched them out with violent strokes."
5"The air changed there—denser, tasting of ozone and old iron."
6"One was missing, revealing not ceiling but sky—black sky with wrong stars."
7"“He came here for something specific.” Quinn’s voice stayed flat, analytical, but her eyes—dark, tired—scanned every shadow."
8"“I think evidence is evidence.” Quinn knelt again, examining the dead man’s shoes—mud from three different postcodes, none near Camden."
9"Quinn stood, her military posture rigid, her mind running tracks she hadn’t wanted to run since Morris died three years ago in a room that had smelled exactly like this—copper, sugar, and wrongness."
10"Quinn’s gaze held his—brown, hard, carrying eighteen years of authority and three years of buried grief that had taught her the world had hidden floors."
11"Quinn climbed into the October night, the compass heavy and warm in her pocket, its needle already turning—pulling her north, toward answers that lived in shadow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount779
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.038510911424903725
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007702182284980745
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean10.81
std8.77
cv0.811
sampleLengths
019
16
224
316
413
510
616
72
819
99
1012
1117
122
1323
147
156
162
176
184
1920
203
2115
2220
235
2411
2526
265
276
282
292
304
319
3231
3319
343
353
362
3711
3828
395
408
4117
424
4318
444
4512
464
479
481
4910
48.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.30851063829787234
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then she saw the footprints."
1"Then she pointed to the"
ratio0.032
84.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences62
matches
0"She pulled her coat collar"
1"She scanned the archway ahead,"
2"His coat was expensive wool,"
3"His hands were bare, dirt-caked,"
4"She walked the perimeter, her"
5"Her voice cut low"
6"He shuffled closer, flashlight sweeping"
7"She knelt, her brown eyes"
8"She pulled latex gloves from"
9"She examined the victim’s neck—no"
10"She touched the wall."
11"She pulled her notebook."
12"She pried his fingers open"
13"She pocketed the compass."
14"She held up a hand."
15"She walked the tunnel’s mouth,"
16"She came back."
17"She opened the compass with"
18"She closed it."
19"She walked to Doyle, close"
ratio0.339
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"Quinn pushed past the yellow"
1"The rusted tracks disappeared into"
2"She pulled her coat collar"
3"Sergeant Doyle waited near the"
4"Doyle’s breath misted"
5"She scanned the archway ahead,"
6"The victim lay crumpled beside"
7"His coat was expensive wool,"
8"His hands were bare, dirt-caked,"
9"The disc was a compass,"
10"Verdigris stained the casing like"
11"Doyle barked a laugh."
12"Quinn ignored him."
13"She walked the perimeter, her"
14"The stall had sold nothing—no"
15"These footprints glowed faintly, phosphorescent"
16"Her voice cut low"
17"He shuffled closer, flashlight sweeping"
18"She knelt, her brown eyes"
19"The footprints were human-sized, but"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She pulled her coat collar high against the chill that had nothing to do with October."
1"She scanned the archway ahead, where arc lights flickered with sick, greenish light that belonged to no maintenance crew."
2"His hands were bare, dirt-caked, and empty—except for his right palm, which clutched a small brass disc."
3"The stall had sold nothing—no goods, no cash box—just charred books with spines in languages that made her molars ache."
4"The brass was warm now, alive with a pulse that matched her own heartbeat if she listened close."
5"Quinn’s gaze held his—brown, hard, carrying eighteen years of authority and three years of buried grief that had taught her the world had hidden floors."
6"She turned, her coat swinging, and walked back toward the stairwell, leaving Doyle with the body and the darkness and the knowledge that some dead ends were jus…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She knelt, her brown eyes tracking the pattern"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.9477%