Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT2QE71VKER11VVRGN0FGP

Run Details

Duration:
4.6s
Cost:
$0.002502
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pulled the damp wool coat tighter across her shoulders. The air tasted of crushed grapes and toasted fennel, thick enough to chew. Beneath her boots, the soil felt spongy, alive, and uncomfortably warm. Overhead, a stagnant sky burned the color of aged amber, casting long, bruised shadows across row upon endless row of heavy-laden vines. Silver chains clinked against skin as the thumbnail-sized gemstone at her throat warmed against her collarbone. "The air here carries the weight of a thousand banquets." Nyx glided three inches above the furrows of dark earth, their humanoid silhouette folding and rippling like black silk underwater. Faint violet eyes scanned the canopy of sprawling orchards where oversized plums dripped purple nectar onto the grass. "My lungs feel heavy just breathing," Aurora murmured, fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Every breath feeds the engine," Nyx whispered, the sound sliding across the wind without disturbing a single leaf on the nearest apple tree. They stepped past a terrace carved directly into a limestone hillside. Long marble tables groaned under heaps of roasted fowl, crystalline carafes of amber wine, and platters of smoking pastries that steamed despite the gentle heat. Nobody sat at the benches. Ghostly figures in chef whites flitted between the tables, frantically chopping invisible vegetables and stirring enormous copper cauldrons with frantic, soundless movements. "Look at their hands," Aurora pointed toward a gaunt soul weeping silently while kneading dough that constantly dissolved back into flour. "The curse of Dymas," Nyx stopped beside a stone fountain spilling thick, red wine instead of water. "Hunger without end. Creation without consumption." Aurora knelt beside a thicket of silver-leafed bushes bearing golden berries. The sweet, cloying scent of roasted cardamom rolled over the ridge, making her stomach clench with an artificial, sudden hunger. She plucked a single berry from the stem. It thrummed against her fingertips with a faint, steady pulse. "Do not eat the fruit," Nyx materialized solid ground beside her, long fingers wrapping gently around her wrist to pull her hand away. "You will trade your shadow for a seat at their endless table." Aurora dropped the berry into the dark soil. It vanished into the turf within seconds, swallowed by the greedy earth. "How far to the border?" Aurora stood, brushing dirt from her knees. "Past the vineyards," Nyx pointed toward a jagged mountain range cutting the amber sky in half. "Where the orchards turn to ash and the princes count their stores." They pressed forward down a pathway paved with polished animal bones that clicked softly beneath their soles. The landscape shifted abruptly. The lush warmth of the vineyards gave way to a dry, crackling heat that parched the throat instantly. Enormous copper vats bubbled along the sides of the path, emitting plumes of fragrant, intoxicating steam that smelled of cinnamon and burning sugar. A winged figure perched atop a stone archway watched them pass, its goat-like lower body twitching nervously while multi-jointed arms polished a silver goblet. The demon did not descend, only rolled heavy, bovine eyes and hissed a stream of black smoke into the amber sky. Aurora kept her right hand resting near her belt where the moonsilver dagger hung cold against her hip. The blade's faint luminescence cut through the dim, golden haze, providing the only truly sharp light in the sprawling, decadent valley. "Someone approaches," Nyx dissolved into a wisp of smoke, melting instantly into the shadow of a colossal wine press. Aurora froze, her boots sinking an inch deeper into the warm mud as heavy footsteps echoed from around the bend of the copper vats.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:15:17.197Z" 7/25/2026, 2:15:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount600
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
2"nervously"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount600
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"crystalline"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silk"
2"scanned"
3"tracing"
4"marble"
5"crystalline"
6"stomach"
7"pulse"
8"warmth"
9"footsteps"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences34
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences38
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords600
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount526
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx6
Aurora8
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.74
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount600
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean31.58
std16.27
cv0.515
sampleLengths
056
116
210
338
417
523
663
721
823
949
1035
1120
1212
1328
1462
1545
1639
1719
1824
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs81
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences38
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount530
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03773584905660377
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.02830188679245283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences38
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
88.53% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences38
mean15.79
std5.86
cv0.371
sampleLengths
010
113
211
322
416
510
620
718
817
923
1011
1125
125
1322
1421
1517
166
1711
1820
198
2010
2123
2212
238
2412
2512
2616
2712
2817
294
3018
3123
3224
3321
3418
3521
3619
3724
97.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6578947368421053
totalSentences38
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences34
matches
0"They stepped past a terrace"
1"She plucked a single berry"
2"It thrummed against her fingertips"
3"It vanished into the turf"
4"They pressed forward down a"
ratio0.147
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences34
matches
0"Aurora pulled the damp wool"
1"The air tasted of crushed"
2"Nyx glided three inches above"
3"Aurora murmured, fingers tracing the"
4"Nyx whispered, the sound sliding"
5"They stepped past a terrace"
6"Nobody sat at the benches."
7"Aurora pointed toward a gaunt"
8"Nyx stopped beside a stone"
9"Aurora knelt beside a thicket"
10"The sweet, cloying scent of"
11"She plucked a single berry"
12"It thrummed against her fingertips"
13"Nyx materialized solid ground beside"
14"Aurora dropped the berry into"
15"It vanished into the turf"
16"Aurora stood, brushing dirt from"
17"Nyx pointed toward a jagged"
18"They pressed forward down a"
19"The landscape shifted abruptly."
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The lush warmth of the vineyards gave way to a dry, crackling heat that parched the throat instantly."
1"Enormous copper vats bubbled along the sides of the path, emitting plumes of fragrant, intoxicating steam that smelled of cinnamon and burning sugar."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora murmured, fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.333
81.0434%