Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT2YN3C42EA9P83QHF1GKQ

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.004287
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed, casting a sickly emerald hue over the damp Soho pavement. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air tasted of stale malt, old wood, and the faint metallic tang of copper pipes. Aurora wiped down the mahogany counter with a grease-stained rag, her bright blue eyes scanning the empty booths. The afternoon hum of London traffic remained muffled behind thick double-glazed windows. A bell chimed overhead. Footsteps dragged across the floorboards. Silas stepped out from the shadows near the back office, his left leg hitching on the second stride. He leaned heavily on the mahogany rail, a silver signet ring flashing under the dim amber pendants. A delivery bag slid off Aurora's shoulder and hit the zinc floor with a dull thud. "Ten minutes late, Rory." "Traffic on Oxford Street locked solid. A lorry dropped its load of scrap metal right across the junction." Silas adjusted the collar of his flannel shirt, his hazel eyes narrowing as he assessed the grease smear on her cheek. "You look like you wrestled an engine block." "The clutch on the moped went. Had to push the last half-mile uphill." A heavy silence settled between them, broken only by the low hum of the beer coolers. Silas reached for a clean glass, polishing it with a dry cloth. "Your father called the flat yesterday. He thinks you're still doing pupillage in Cardiff." Aurora stopped wiping the counter. Her shoulders tightened. "Brendan lives in a fantasy where ink and gavels fix everything." "He sounds worried." "He sounds like a barrister billing by the hour." Silas set the glass down with a sharp click. "Running doesn't change your surname, Rory. Or the jurisdiction." "I am not running. I am standing right here in Soho." "You are hiding behind a fake name and a delivery helmet. There is a difference." The front door groaned open. A gust of cold October wind swept across the room, carrying the scent of rain and petrol. A tall man in a charcoal wool coat stepped inside, shaking water from his umbrella. He scanned the dim interior before his gaze locked onto the bar. Aurora froze. The rag slipped from her fingers, landing in a puddle of spilled lager. Evan stopped three paces from the counter, his breath coming in shallow puffs. The sharp angles of his jawline remained, but the charming boyishness had vanished, replaced by the hardened gaze of a man accustomed to getting his way in courtrooms and corporate boardrooms. He unbuttoned his coat slowly, revealing a bespoke Italian suit that looked entirely out of place among the vintage maps and black-and-white photographs lining the tavern walls. "Laila. Or do we still use Aurora this week?" Aurora did not blink. Her hand drifted instinctively toward her left wrist, pressing hard against the small crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. "How did you find this place?" "Your mother mentioned an old friend of yours worked out of a pub in Soho. It wasn't difficult to connect the dots." Silas stepped forward from the end of the counter, his six-foot-one frame placing an immovable barrier between the two stools. His auburn hair caught the amber light, the grey streaks stark against his temples. "This is a private establishment. We close at five on Tuesdays." Evan spared the older man a brief, dismissive glance. "I am not here for a drink. I am here for my fiancée." "Your fiancée lives in Cardiff. Or she did before she jumped out a first-floor bathroom window." Evan's jaw tightened. He took another step closer, the leather of his shoes squeaking against the damp floorboards. "You made a fool of me in front of the entire firm, Laila. Do you have any idea what the partners said when you vanished without a word?" "They probably realized they didn't have to listen to your misogynistic lectures anymore." "You left your car in the driveway. Your clothes in the wardrobe. You ran like a common thief." "I left because the alternative was ending up in an A&E unit with a broken orbital bone. Again." The words dropped into the space between them like lead weights. Silas shifted his weight, his left knee popping softly as he adjusted his stance. His right hand rested casually near the mahogany base where a heavy iron ledger lay hidden beneath the bar. Evan flushed, a dark red spreading up his neck past his collar. "You always were dramatic when things didn't go your way. A simple disagreement and you invent a tragedy." Aurora laughed, a cold, sharp sound devoid of humor. "A disagreement. Is that what you call throwing a heavy glass paperweight at my head?" "You provoked me. You always pushed until I broke." "Abusers always blame the wall for their bruised knuckles." Evan lunged forward, his hand shooting out to grab Aurora's arm. Before his fingers brushed her sleeve, Silas moved. The older man grabbed Evan's wrist with a grip like a vice, twisting the arm upward with a sudden, practiced torque. Evan gasped, stumbling against the edge of a wooden booth as Silas forced him down until his forearm pressed flat against the table. "In this bar," Silas murmured, his voice dropping to a low, gravelly register that didn't carry past the second booth, "we keep our hands to ourselves." Evan struggled, his face contorting in pain and humiliation as he tried to yank his arm free. "Let go of me, you old bastard. I'll have your license revoked. I'll have this entire rat-trap demolished." Silas applied another fraction of an inch of pressure, forcing Evan's shoulder blades down. "You couldn't close a door in a house fire. Now, you are going to walk out that front door, get back into your overpriced saloon car, and drive back down the M4. Is that clear?" Evan glared up at Silas, his chest heaving. He shifted his gaze to Aurora, who stood motionless behind the counter, her bright blue eyes fixed on the empty doorway. "She'll come back," Evan spat, his voice shaking with suppressed rage. "They always come back to what they know." Silas released the wrist. Evan stumbled backward, catching himself against the coat rack before righting his jacket with trembling fingers. He cast one last venomous look toward the counter, spun on his heel, and slammed the front door hard enough to rattle the green neon sign outside. The bell chimed once. Then silence returned, heavy and suffocating. Aurora let out a long, shaky breath, her fingers finally leaving her left wrist. She picked up the discarded rag from the floor and wrung it out into a plastic bucket. Silas rubbed his left knee, his face mask-like in the dim light. "He knows where you are now." "He knew the moment he talked to my mother. She tells him everything under the guise of keeping the peace." "You need to pack a bag. The spare flat in Islington is empty." "No more running, Si. I'm tired of packing bags." Silas reached into his pocket, pulling out a heavy iron key and sliding it across the zinc counter until it stopped against the cash register. "Then we reinforce the locks."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:15:24.589Z" 7/25/2026, 2:15:24 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1197
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"scanned"
4"stark"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount751
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Aurora9
October1
Italian1
Silas14
Evan12
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
globalScore0.568
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1197
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean19.62
std14.91
cv0.76
sampleLengths
077
135
216
34
418
521
68
713
828
914
108
1111
123
139
149
159
1611
1715
1849
1915
2071
219
2223
236
2422
2534
2611
279
2813
2916
3018
3128
3213
3318
3418
3544
3612
3718
389
3915
409
419
4211
4352
4426
4517
4618
4714
4835
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences88
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount758
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"behind thick double-glazed windows."
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.025065963060686015
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013192612137203167
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13.6
std6.84
cv0.503
sampleLengths
018
120
218
312
44
55
618
717
816
94
1018
1121
128
1313
1416
1512
1614
175
183
1911
203
219
229
239
2411
2515
265
2717
2815
2912
302
3113
3213
3331
3427
359
364
3719
386
3922
4020
4114
4211
439
4413
4516
463
4715
4828
4913
49.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3181818181818182
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners28
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then silence returned, heavy and"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences54
matches
0"He leaned heavily on the"
1"Her shoulders tightened."
2"He scanned the dim interior"
3"He unbuttoned his coat slowly,"
4"Her hand drifted instinctively toward"
5"His auburn hair caught the"
6"He took another step closer,"
7"His right hand rested casually"
8"He shifted his gaze to"
9"He cast one last venomous"
10"She picked up the discarded"
ratio0.204
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences54
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora wiped down the mahogany"
2"The afternoon hum of London"
3"A bell chimed overhead."
4"Footsteps dragged across the floorboards."
5"Silas stepped out from the"
6"He leaned heavily on the"
7"A delivery bag slid off"
8"Silas adjusted the collar of"
9"A heavy silence settled between"
10"Silas reached for a clean"
11"Aurora stopped wiping the counter."
12"Her shoulders tightened."
13"Silas set the glass down"
14"The front door groaned open."
15"A gust of cold October"
16"A tall man in a"
17"He scanned the dim interior"
18"The rag slipped from her"
19"Evan stopped three paces from"
ratio0.944
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Before his fingers brushed her"
ratio0.019
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He unbuttoned his coat slowly, revealing a bespoke Italian suit that looked entirely out of place among the vintage maps and black-and-white photographs lining …"
1"He shifted his gaze to Aurora, who stood motionless behind the counter, her bright blue eyes fixed on the empty doorway."
2"Silas reached into his pocket, pulling out a heavy iron key and sliding it across the zinc counter until it stopped against the cash register."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Evan spat, his voice shaking with suppressed rage"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
1"Evan spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.114
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.114
84.9605%