Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT306G85Z0M1KGVJ4YKVNX

Run Details

Duration:
23.8s
Cost:
$0.012104
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain sheared down Dean Street in silver blades, turning the Soho pavement into a black mirror. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her collar up and her chin low, the worn leather watch on her left wrist glinting briefly as she checked the time against the pulse of the green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest. The sign buzzed like an angry insect, casting sickly emerald light across the old maps and black-and-white photographs she knew hung inside—photographs of a London that no longer existed, or perhaps never had. She was forty-one, with a sharp jaw and brown eyes that missed nothing, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair already darkening with rain. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to stand with military precision even when she was still, and tonight she stood like a blade in the doorway of the shuttered bookshop two doors down. Then the back door moved. Not the front entrance with its welcoming haze of smoke and jazz, but the hidden shelf—the one that swung open into the alley behind the bar. Harlow had mapped The Raven’s Nest three weeks prior, noted the false spine of books, the secret room beyond used for clandestine meetings. She knew the layout because she had lost DS Morris to this clique three years ago, to circumstances she could not explain without sounding mad, and she intended to understand every corner of their world before it swallowed anyone else. The man who slipped out was Tomás Herrera. She recognized him from the file: twenty-nine, olive skin, short curly dark brown hair plastered now to his forehead, warm brown eyes that should have looked kind but instead scanned the alley with the alertness of prey. The scar running along his left forearm—old damage, knife-wound white against the dark—was visible even in the gloom as he pulled his coat tight. Around his neck, the Saint Christopher medallion caught the neon and gleamed. He moved fast, not running, not yet, but with the efficient stride of a former paramedic who knew how bodies worked and how quickly they could break. Harlow stepped into the rain. She followed. Herrera turned onto Brewer Street, then cut through an arcade, his shoes splashing through puddles that smelled of diesel and broken glass. Harlow kept fifteen paces back, her breath steady, her mind cataloging. She had suspected the clique of criminal activity for months—stolen alchemical supplies, unauthorized treatments, the kind of off-the-books medicine that had cost Herrera his NHS license after he treated supernatural patients he refused to name. Now she had him leaving the secret room at midnight in a storm. She would not lose him. He glanced back once. Their eyes met for a fraction of a second. Then he ran. The chase turned savage. Rain lashed Harlow’s face as she pushed off the wall, her legs finding a rhythm she had not used since the academy. Herrera was quick—Seville-born, London-hardened, a man who had survived knife attacks and license revocations—but she was relentless. She had buried a partner who had laughed too loudly in briefing rooms, who had trusted her instinct, and she carried that weight in her shoulders now, a ballast that drove her forward through the soaked dark. They crossed into Camden, the streets narrowing, the shops giving way to graffitied shutters and the bones of old buildings. Herrera turned down a service road Harlow did not recognize, then stopped at the mouth of an abandoned Tube station, its entrance choked with rusted gates and warning signs that had faded to ghosts. This was it. The Veil Market. She had heard whispers—bone tokens required for entry, the location shifting every full moon, a black market beneath Camden that dealt in enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances and information that could kill. She had never seen it. She had never wanted to see it. But Herrera did not hesitate. He reached into his coat, produced something small and pale—a carved token, bone-yellow in the streetlight—and pressed it against the gate’s lock. The gate groaned open. Herrera disappeared down the stairs into blackness. Harlow skidded to a stop at the threshold, rain dripping from her jaw, her heart hammering a precise, military rhythm against her ribs. Down there was unfamiliar territory—potentially dangerous, certainly supernatural, the kind of place that had taken Morris and never explained why. She had no token. She had no backup. She had only her service weapon, her suspicion, and the memory of her partner’s empty chair. But she also had Herrera, and he was running into the dark because he had something to hide. She followed. The stairs were slick with moss and something darker, something that smelled of copper and incense. Harlow descended with her hand near her hip, counting steps—twenty, thirty, forty—until the air changed, growing warmer, denser, charged with a pressure that made her teeth ache. The abandoned station opened into a cavernous vault, its arches lined with flickering lanterns and stalls that seemed to materialize from shadow. The Veil Market. Stalls displayed goods she could not name—vials of liquid that moved against gravity, books bound in something that was not leather, herbs that glowed with a faint, poisonous blue. The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible: figures in long coats with faces obscured by bone masks, others with eyes that reflected no light. Information was traded in whispers. Alchemical smoke curled through the air like serpents. And there, thirty feet ahead, was Tomás Herrera. He moved through the crowd with purpose, his Saint Christopher medallion visible against his dark shirt, the scar on his left forearm catching the lantern light as he reached for a vendor’s counter. Harlow pressed herself against a pillar carved with symbols she refused to read. She watched him exchange a packet—small, wrapped in black silk—for a vial of crimson liquid. His warm brown eyes met the vendor’s without flinching. This was not a man out of place. This was a man who belonged here. Harlow’s fingers tightened around the worn leather strap of her watch. She had come for answers about the clique, about the crimes that connected The Raven’s Nest to this underground rot, about the supernatural origins of her partner’s death that she still did not understand. She could arrest him now—draw her weapon, announce herself, drag him back to the surface and into a world of courts and confessions that might never explain the truth. Or she could stay hidden, see what else he carried, learn the full shape of the conspiracy before it closed around her like a fist. The decision held her breath in her chest. Herrera turned, scanning the crowd. For a moment, Harlow thought he had seen her, but he only adjusted the packet inside his coat and walked deeper into the market, toward an archway where the air shimmered with heat. She stepped out from the pillar. The rain above was a memory. Below, in the abandoned Tube station that moved with the moon, Detective Harlow Quinn chose pursuit over safety. She followed Tomás Herrera into the dark heart of the Veil Market, her sharp jaw set, her brown eyes fixed on the scar along his forearm, ready to uncover whatever secret had killed her partner and threatened to kill her too.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1227
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"clandestine"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"efficient"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"mosaic"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"pulse"
2"clandestine"
3"scanned"
4"gloom"
5"efficient"
6"weight"
7"charged"
8"mosaic"
9"silk"
10"scanning"
11"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1209
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street2
Soho1
Harlow12
Quinn2
Raven3
Nest3
London2
Morris2
Tomás3
Herrera11
Saint2
Christopher2
Brewer1
Seville1
London-hardened1
Camden2
Tube2
Veil3
Market3
Detective2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"London"
4"Brewer"
5"Seville"
6"London-hardened"
7"Camden"
8"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.481
wordCount1209
matches
0"Not the front entrance with its welcoming haze of smoke and jazz, but the hidden shelf"
1"not running, not yet, but with the efficient stride of a former paramedic who knew how"
2"not yet, but with the efficient stride of a former paramedic who knew how"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"carried that weight"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean39
std32.58
cv0.835
sampleLengths
087
157
25
389
48
573
632
72
886
913
103
1180
1254
136
1472
154
167
1767
1818
192
2065
213
2267
238
2485
2574
2625
278
2838
296
3065
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs212
matches
0"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences72
ratio0.167
matches
0"The sign buzzed like an angry insect, casting sickly emerald light across the old maps and black-and-white photographs she knew hung inside—photographs of a London that no longer existed, or perhaps never had."
1"Not the front entrance with its welcoming haze of smoke and jazz, but the hidden shelf—the one that swung open into the alley behind the bar."
2"The scar running along his left forearm—old damage, knife-wound white against the dark—was visible even in the gloom as he pulled his coat tight."
3"She had suspected the clique of criminal activity for months—stolen alchemical supplies, unauthorized treatments, the kind of off-the-books medicine that had cost Herrera his NHS license after he treated supernatural patients he refused to name."
4"Herrera was quick—Seville-born, London-hardened, a man who had survived knife attacks and license revocations—but she was relentless."
5"She had heard whispers—bone tokens required for entry, the location shifting every full moon, a black market beneath Camden that dealt in enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances and information that could kill."
6"He reached into his coat, produced something small and pale—a carved token, bone-yellow in the streetlight—and pressed it against the gate’s lock."
7"Down there was unfamiliar territory—potentially dangerous, certainly supernatural, the kind of place that had taken Morris and never explained why."
8"Harlow descended with her hand near her hip, counting steps—twenty, thirty, forty—until the air changed, growing warmer, denser, charged with a pressure that made her teeth ache."
9"Stalls displayed goods she could not name—vials of liquid that moved against gravity, books bound in something that was not leather, herbs that glowed with a faint, poisonous blue."
10"She watched him exchange a packet—small, wrapped in black silk—for a vial of crimson liquid."
11"She could arrest him now—draw her weapon, announce herself, drag him back to the surface and into a world of courts and confessions that might never explain the truth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1238
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023424878836833602
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008077544426494346
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.79
std11.7
cv0.697
sampleLengths
016
138
233
322
435
55
626
723
840
98
1037
1124
1212
1327
145
152
1622
1711
1835
1913
205
214
229
233
244
2522
2617
2737
2820
2934
303
313
3233
335
347
355
3622
374
387
3923
4020
414
424
4316
4418
452
4616
4727
4822
493
48.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3472222222222222
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners25
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then the back door moved."
1"Then he ran."
ratio0.029
82.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences70
matches
0"She was forty-one, with a"
1"She knew the layout because"
2"She recognized him from the"
3"He moved fast, not running,"
4"She had suspected the clique"
5"She would not lose him."
6"He glanced back once."
7"Their eyes met for a"
8"She had buried a partner"
9"They crossed into Camden, the"
10"She had heard whispers—bone tokens"
11"She had never seen it."
12"She had never wanted to"
13"He reached into his coat,"
14"She had no token."
15"She had no backup."
16"She had only her service"
17"He moved through the crowd"
18"She watched him exchange a"
19"His warm brown eyes met"
ratio0.343
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rain sheared down Dean Street"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
2"The sign buzzed like an"
3"She was forty-one, with a"
4"Harlow had mapped The Raven’s"
5"She knew the layout because"
6"The man who slipped out"
7"She recognized him from the"
8"The scar running along his"
9"He moved fast, not running,"
10"Harlow stepped into the rain."
11"Herrera turned onto Brewer Street,"
12"Harlow kept fifteen paces back,"
13"She had suspected the clique"
14"She would not lose him."
15"He glanced back once."
16"Their eyes met for a"
17"The chase turned savage."
18"Rain lashed Harlow’s face as"
19"Herrera was quick—Seville—born, London-hardened, a"
ratio0.8
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Now she had him leaving"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"She was forty-one, with a sharp jaw and brown eyes that missed nothing, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair already darkening with rain."
1"She recognized him from the file: twenty-nine, olive skin, short curly dark brown hair plastered now to his forehead, warm brown eyes that should have looked ki…"
2"She had suspected the clique of criminal activity for months—stolen alchemical supplies, unauthorized treatments, the kind of off-the-books medicine that had co…"
3"Herrera was quick—Seville-born, London-hardened, a man who had survived knife attacks and license revocations—but she was relentless."
4"Herrera turned down a service road Harlow did not recognize, then stopped at the mouth of an abandoned Tube station, its entrance choked with rusted gates and w…"
5"She had heard whispers—bone tokens required for entry, the location shifting every full moon, a black market beneath Camden that dealt in enchanted goods and ba…"
6"Harlow skidded to a stop at the threshold, rain dripping from her jaw, her heart hammering a precise, military rhythm against her ribs."
7"Down there was unfamiliar territory—potentially dangerous, certainly supernatural, the kind of place that had taken Morris and never explained why."
8"The stairs were slick with moss and something darker, something that smelled of copper and incense."
9"Harlow descended with her hand near her hip, counting steps—twenty, thirty, forty—until the air changed, growing warmer, denser, charged with a pressure that ma…"
10"Stalls displayed goods she could not name—vials of liquid that moved against gravity, books bound in something that was not leather, herbs that glowed with a fa…"
11"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible: figures in long coats with faces obscured by bone masks, others with eyes that reflected no light."
12"She had come for answers about the clique, about the crimes that connected The Raven’s Nest to this underground rot, about the supernatural origins of her partn…"
13"Below, in the abandoned Tube station that moved with the moon, Detective Harlow Quinn chose pursuit over safety."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.2730%