Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT367R2KKKXEME12MA9NWT

Run Details

Duration:
13.2s
Cost:
$0.014075
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped onto the rusted rails below, counting down seconds in the dark. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over a section of rotted timber tie, her heavy boots silent against the damp concrete of the disused platform. Fluorescent work lights, strung up on yellow cables by the forensic team, cast harsh white glare across the cracked tiles of the abandoned Camden station. Spiders had long abandoned the web-draped advertisement hoardings. "Third level down, Harlow," Constable Briggs said, rubbing his palms against his high-visibility jacket. Cold air rolled off the tunnel walls, smelling of ozone, wet soot, and copper. "Transit police thought they had a squatter light a fire. Until they saw the layout." Quinn checked her worn leather watch. Two in the morning. She adjusted her grip on her torch, the beam cutting through the chalky haze left by powder tags. "Layout?" Quinn squinted through the shadows toward the center of the cavernous hall. Wooden stalls sat in concentric circles, built from salvaged pallets, corrugated iron, and copper piping. Empty glass jars lay shattered across the floor. Stacks of dried herbs, bundled with red twine, trailed into dust under footmarks left by the initial response team. Briggs stepped carefully around a chalked square on the floor. "Looks like some kind of pop-up farmer's market. Down here. Behind three locked steel doors." "People don't haul hundreds of kilos of timber past British Transport Police for heirloom tomatoes, Briggs." Quinn dropped to one knee near a stall draped in moth-eaten velvet. She dragged her gloved finger through a spill of silver powder on a display counter. It shimmered under her torch beam, clinging to the leather, resisting the draft whistling down the dark escalator shaft behind them. She pinched a grain, brought it close to her eyes, then sniffed. "Salt?" Briggs asked. "Crushed mica mixed with dried nightshade," Quinn said, wiping her fingers on her trousers. "Somebody spent serious money setting this up." "Well, the seller didn't get to enjoy the profits." Briggs pointed his flashlight toward the center ring of stalls. A body lay sprawled on a low velvet divan, arms pinned beneath a fallen wooden beam. Quinn approached, her sharp jaw tightening as the stink of ozone grew thick enough to coat her tongue. She ducked under a strip of blue police tape. The victim was a man in his late fifties, dressed in a pristine tweed waistcoat that looked absurd against the filth of the station floor. No blood pooled beneath him. His eyes remained wide, reflecting the glare of the forensic lamps like polished agates. "Forensics says blunt force trauma," Briggs said, tapping his own forehead. "Beam came down during a scuffle. Knocked him out, crushed his sternum. Simple robbery gone wrong." Quinn didn't answer. She knelt beside the corpse, angling her flashlight close to the dead man's neck. A faint, web-like pattern of dark purple veins stretched up from beneath his starched collar, fading near his earlobes. "Look at the hands, Briggs." The constable leaned over her shoulder, his breath fogging in the chill. "What about them?" "Palms up. Fingers curled." She pointed the narrow beam at the victim's left hand. "He was holding something small. Round." "Probably his wallet. Mugger took it." "If someone smashed his chest with a two-by-four, his hands would have gone up to protect his ribs, or spread wide as he fell." Quinn reached down, gently turning the dead man's wrist. The skin felt strangely brittle, cold as stone, but without the stiff rigidity of rigor mortis. "He stayed still while he died. He didn't fight." "Look at the beam, Harlow. It's sitting right on him." Quinn stood up, sweeping her light across the ceiling above the divan. The iron ribs of the tunnel were intact. The wooden beam had no corresponding fracture mark on the archway above, nor was there plaster dust on its upper face. "The wood was placed on him after he was already down," Quinn said. "Look at the dust layer on that crate next to his head. Undisturbed. If a structural beam dropped from six meters, it would have kicked up debris across a three-meter radius." "So someone framed a structural collapse?" Briggs frowned, scratching his chin. "Why bother? If you kill a bloke in an illegal underground market, you just run." "You run if you're human," Quinn muttered. "Beg pardon?" "Nothing." Quinn turned away, walking a wide circle around the central platform. Three years of chasing ghosts since Morris died in that alley. Three years of files marked 'inconclusive' by superiors who wanted clean statistics. But the smell in this tunnel—the sharp, metallic tang that burned the back of her throat—was identical to the alley behind the docks where Morris's heart had simply stopped beating. Her torch beam caught a glint of metal tucked under the edge of an upturned brass scales tray twenty feet from the body. Quinn crouched, pulling a pair of evidence tweezers from her coat pocket. She lifted the object. It was a small brass compass, heavy for its size, the outer casing corroded with a rich green patina of verdigris. The glass face was intact, etched with delicate, geometric symbols that spiraled inward toward the center. Inside, a needle floated, but it didn't align north. It twitched erratically, spinning half an inch to the left, then snapping back toward the deep tunnel lead heading south toward the Thames. "Find something?" Briggs asked, stepping over a pile of broken stoneware. Quinn closed her hand over the cold metal, feeling a faint, rhythmic vibration through her leather glove, like a pulse. "Just rubbish," Quinn said, sliding the compass into her inner jacket pocket. "Tell the team to clear the perimeter out to fifty yards. I want the soil samples from the south tunnel exit tested for chemical residue." "Harlow, the DI wants this wrapped by dawn. He's calling it an accidental death in an abandoned structure. Squatters, illegal gambling, rotten timber." Quinn walked back to the body, her gaze scanning the polished floor tiles. Near the victim's right foot, barely visible beneath the soot, a series of faint, chalky lines formed a crescent shape. Someone had swept the floor frantically before leaving, but they had missed the groove between the tiles. "He wasn't a squatter," Quinn said, pointing her torch at the victim's lapel. "And this wasn't a robbery." She leaned down and pulled a small card from the victim's waistcoat pocket. It wasn't paper. It was a wafer-thin slip of polished bone, stamped with a single, intricate mark that looked like an open eye surrounded by thorned vines. "What is that?" Briggs asked. "An entry ticket," Quinn said, her voice dropping. "He wasn't selling fruit, Briggs. He was selling entry." She looked down the dark, unlit expanse of the south running tunnel. The air drifting out of the gloom carried a fresh scent—not damp earth, but old leather, dried lavender, and burnt tallow. "Call the coroner," Quinn said, straightening her coat. "Tell them not to touch the chest cavity until I'm in the room. And keep the press out of the station." "Where are you going?" "Someone spent a lot of effort making this look like an ordinary accident," Quinn said, her hand resting over the bulge in her pocket where the compass thrummed against her ribs. "I'm going to go find out who bought what he was selling."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:15:32.354Z" 7/25/2026, 2:15:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.525
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
91.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"structure"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"velvet"
2"shimmered"
3"pristine"
4"chill"
5"glint"
6"etched"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulse"
9"structure"
10"scanning"
11"intricate"
12"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1226
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount857
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn20
Camden1
Briggs8
Cold1
Wooden1
Three2
Morris2
Thames1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Briggs"
3"Morris"
places
0"Wooden"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.333
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an open eye surrounded by tho"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.816
wordCount1226
matches
0"not damp earth, but old leather, dried lavender"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.86
std17.48
cv0.627
sampleLengths
069
143
228
313
442
525
628
748
83
921
1019
1143
1244
1327
1436
155
1615
1720
186
1958
2010
2141
2244
2326
247
252
2612
2753
2823
2916
3069
3111
3220
3337
3423
3550
3618
3740
385
3917
4033
4129
424
4343
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences88
ratio0.023
matches
0"But the smell in this tunnel—the sharp, metallic tang that burned the back of her throat—was identical to the alley behind the docks where Morris's heart had simply stopped beating."
1"The air drifting out of the gloom carried a fresh scent—not damp earth, but old leather, dried lavender, and burnt tallow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount622
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.014469453376205787
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00482315112540193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13.93
std7.2
cv0.517
sampleLengths
013
123
225
38
414
514
615
76
84
918
1013
1115
128
1319
1410
1515
1628
1715
1821
1912
203
2114
227
2319
2416
2518
269
2725
285
2914
3011
3116
323
3314
3419
355
3612
373
3814
396
406
4133
4216
439
4410
4512
468
4721
4813
4931
95.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6136363636363636
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences64
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"She dragged her gloved finger"
2"It shimmered under her torch"
3"She pinched a grain, brought"
4"She ducked under a strip"
5"His eyes remained wide, reflecting"
6"She knelt beside the corpse,"
7"She pointed the narrow beam"
8"Her torch beam caught a"
9"She lifted the object."
10"It was a small brass"
11"It twitched erratically, spinning half"
12"She leaned down and pulled"
13"It wasn't paper."
14"It was a wafer-thin slip"
15"She looked down the dark,"
ratio0.25
45.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences64
matches
0"Water dripped onto the rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"Spiders had long abandoned the"
3"Constable Briggs said, rubbing his"
4"Quinn checked her worn leather"
5"She adjusted her grip on"
6"Quinn squinted through the shadows"
7"Stacks of dried herbs, bundled"
8"Briggs stepped carefully around a"
9"Quinn dropped to one knee"
10"She dragged her gloved finger"
11"It shimmered under her torch"
12"She pinched a grain, brought"
13"Quinn said, wiping her fingers"
14"Briggs pointed his flashlight toward"
15"A body lay sprawled on"
16"Quinn approached, her sharp jaw"
17"She ducked under a strip"
18"The victim was a man"
19"His eyes remained wide, reflecting"
ratio0.828
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The victim was a man in his late fifties, dressed in a pristine tweed waistcoat that looked absurd against the filth of the station floor."
1"But the smell in this tunnel—the sharp, metallic tang that burned the back of her throat—was identical to the alley behind the docks where Morris's heart had si…"
2"The glass face was intact, etched with delicate, geometric symbols that spiraled inward toward the center."
3"It was a wafer-thin slip of polished bone, stamped with a single, intricate mark that looked like an open eye surrounded by thorned vines."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice dropping"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.05
85.0342%