Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT55125Z01HAN8Q843YQ60

Run Details

Duration:
14.1s
Cost:
$0.014637
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped from a rusted ceiling beam, splashing into a puddle that reflected the flickering glare of portable halogen lamps. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her collar against the underground draft, her boots crunching over decades of accumulated coal dust and gravel. The smell hit her first—ozone, damp earth, and something metallic that made the back of her throat itch. She stepped off the last wooden sleeper of the derelict subway track and into the grand archway of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. "Watch your head, Harlow." Detective Sergeant Miller swung his heavy flashlight toward the vaulted brickwork. Cobwebs hung like tattered shrouds from the Victorian iron girders. "Mind the gap, as they say. Though I reckon no train's run through this stretch since the Blitz." Harlow tapped the face of the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three in the morning. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close to the skull, offered no protection against the chill clinging to the subterranean air. She knelt beside a sprawling chalk outline drawn across the platform edge. "Tell me what we've got, Miller. And make it quick. My joints are already screaming." Miller leaned against a tile-covered pillar, tapping a spiral notebook against his thigh. "Simple home invasion, if you can call a squatter's den a home. Deceased is an unidentified male, late thirties. Found by a transit worker doing structural checks. Body had severe trauma—looks like a heavy-duty serrated blade, maybe a machete. Mugger took his wallet, his coat, even his bloody shoes." Harlow didn't answer. She pulled a pair of latex gloves onto her long fingers and pinched a dusting of crimson powder from the lip of the platform. She rolled the grit between her thumbs. It lacked the stickiness of dried blood, flaking away like crushed garnets. "Where's the rest of the mess?" Harlow stood, her sharp jaw set as her brown eyes swept the tiled wall behind the chalk line. "A blade large enough to cause that kind of trauma severs arteries. There should be arterial spray across these white subway tiles. It’s sterile. Clean." "Killer probably wiped it down," Miller said, taking a step toward a cluster of knocked-over wooden crates. "Panicked. Tried to cover his tracks before running up the emergency ventilation shaft." "Wiped down three square metres of porous, cracked masonry in the dark?" Harlow crossed her arms, her posture rigid with military precision. "Without leaving rag fibers or bucket rings? Try again." She walked toward the perimeter of the crime scene, her eyes tracking patterns in the dust. The platform didn't look like an abandoned station. Footprints crisscrossed the dirt in dizzying, overlapping paths—dozens of distinct tread marks, far too many for a derelict tunnel sealed behind a padlocked iron grate. She paused near an upturned crate. A small brass object gleamed beneath a film of soot. Harlow crouched, lifting the piece of metal with the tip of her pen. A compass, no larger than a pocket watch, its brass casing choked with a thick green patina of verdigris. Strange, geometric sigils were etched directly into the face, encircling a needle that spun wildly, refusing to settle on north. "Look at this," she murmured. Miller strolled over, shining his torch down at her hand. "A souvenir? Bloke was probably a collector. Lots of vagrants hoard shiny junk." "It’s not junk." Harlow watched the needle jerk toward the shadowed tunnel mouth, pause, then snap hard toward the ceiling. "The casing is shade-forged brass. Look at the etching work—it’s not decorative. It’s structural." "You're getting bogged down in the weird details again, Harlow." Miller let out a breath that bloomed into a white cloud in the freezing air. "It's cold, it's late, and the Superintendent wants a clean report by seven. We've got torn clothing, a missing wallet, and a violent struggle. It’s a mugging gone sideways in a squat." Harlow stood up, pocketing the compass in an evidence bag. "A struggle?" "Look at the crates," Miller pointed his flashlight beam across the floor. "Smashed to splinters. Shelving knocked over. Smudged tracks everywhere." "If you smash a pine crate with a blunt force, it splinters outward along the grain," Harlow walked to the wreckage, kneeling to inspect the shattered wood. "These edges are charred. Flaked. The wood split from intense heat, not physical impact. And look at the floor space." She gestured to an eight-foot circle near the platform wall. The dust there wasn't scuffed; it was completely gone, swept clean in a perfect, geometric ring. Outside the ring, the coal dust lay thick. Inside, the concrete shone like polished glass. "Someone set up shop down here," Harlow said. She traced the boundary of the circle with her boot tip. "Tables, stalls, heavy foot traffic. Look at the wear on the stone. This isn't where a homeless man froze to death, Miller. This is a marketplace." Miller snorted, shifting his weight. "An underground market? In an abandoned Tube line sealed by the Ministry of Transport fifty years ago?" "Yes." "Right. Selling what? Stolen copper wire?" "I don't know yet." Harlow walked toward the tunnel edge, her eyes scanning the dark tracks below. Three years ago, when DS Morris disappeared into an alleyway off Soho without leaving a single trace of clothing or blood, she had accepted the official report. Misadventure. Foul play presumed. But the details hadn't lined up then, either. She had spent thirty-six months learning to spot the seams where reality frayed. She crouched at the edge of the platform drop-off. A sliver of white material caught the halogen light, wedged into a crack in the iron rail below. Using a pair of tweezers from her kit, Harlow pulled the fragment free. It wasn't cloth. It was a thin, polished sliver of bleached bone, roughly the size of a coin, stamped with an intricate, looping rune. "What's that then?" Miller leaned over her shoulder, his breathing heavy. "A button?" "An entry ticket," Harlow whispered. She held the bone up to the light, noting the fine grease on its edges. "Or currency. The victim didn't get ambushed by a petty thief. He was trying to buy something. Or run from someone he met here." "Harlow, listen to yourself," Miller’s voice dropped, dropping the friendly tone for something sharper. "You're building an empire out of a broken compass, some burnt wood, and a piece of carved butcher's trash. The coroner is going to mark this as death by sharp-force trauma, and we're going to tag the evidence and file the report." Harlow turned her head slowly, looking up at Miller. "The cut marks on his clothes—the ones you saw in the photos before they took the body away. Were they horizontal or vertical?" Miller blinked. "Horizontal. Across the chest." "A blade drawn horizontally across the chest severs the sternum if pressed deep enough to cause fatal internal trauma," Harlow stood up, closing the distance between them until she was staring directly into his face. "The fabric on his coat was shredded in four parallel lines. Spaced precisely two inches apart. Show me a combat knife or a machete that has four parallel blades set on a curved axis." Miller opened his mouth, closed it, and took a small step back. "Maybe it was an industrial tool. A piece of farm equipment." "Underneath Camden?" Harlow pointed her flashlight straight down the dark curve of the subway tunnel. The beam died in the thick, unnatural fog rolling off the damp ballast stones. "He wasn't cut by a knife, Miller. He was swiped by something with claws." The needle of the brass compass inside her pocket clicked sharply against its glass face, spinning twice before pointing straight down the pitch-black tracks into the deep subterranean dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
2"precisely"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1291
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"etching"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"etched"
2"etching"
3"shattered"
4"perfect"
5"traced"
6"weight"
7"scanning"
8"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1286
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount759
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow16
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Sergeant1
Miller12
Cobwebs1
Victorian1
Three2
Morris1
Soho1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Miller"
4"Cobwebs"
5"Morris"
places
0"Victorian"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.446
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1286
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean34.76
std18.34
cv0.528
sampleLengths
059
124
243
348
415
562
646
749
830
931
1049
1116
1252
135
1423
1534
1657
1712
1821
1947
2041
2145
2222
231
246
2569
2627
2737
2813
2944
3056
3132
326
3369
3423
3543
3629
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"were etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was staring"
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"The smell hit her first—ozone, damp earth, and something metallic that made the back of her throat itch."
1"Footprints crisscrossed the dirt in dizzying, overlapping paths—dozens of distinct tread marks, far too many for a derelict tunnel sealed behind a padlocked iron grate."
2"The dust there wasn't scuffed; it was completely gone, swept clean in a perfect, geometric ring."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount769
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.022106631989596878
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010403120936280884
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.95
std9.19
cv0.615
sampleLengths
020
121
218
324
415
510
618
713
84
919
1012
1115
1213
1349
143
1524
167
1712
1824
1925
2017
2113
2222
239
2416
258
2625
276
2810
2913
3019
3120
325
3310
3413
3520
3614
3725
3832
3910
402
4112
429
4327
4420
4510
4616
478
487
498
83.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5232558139534884
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences57
matches
0"She stepped off the last"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
2"She knelt beside a sprawling"
3"She pulled a pair of"
4"She rolled the grit between"
5"It lacked the stickiness of"
6"She walked toward the perimeter"
7"She paused near an upturned"
8"She gestured to an eight-foot"
9"She traced the boundary of"
10"She had spent thirty-six months"
11"She crouched at the edge"
12"It wasn't cloth."
13"It was a thin, polished"
14"She held the bone up"
ratio0.263
30.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences57
matches
0"Water dripped from a rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
2"The smell hit her first—ozone,"
3"She stepped off the last"
4"Detective Sergeant Miller swung his"
5"Cobwebs hung like tattered shrouds"
6"Harlow tapped the face of"
7"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped close"
8"She knelt beside a sprawling"
9"Miller leaned against a tile-covered"
10"Harlow didn't answer."
11"She pulled a pair of"
12"She rolled the grit between"
13"It lacked the stickiness of"
14"Harlow stood, her sharp jaw"
15"Miller said, taking a step"
16"Harlow crossed her arms, her"
17"She walked toward the perimeter"
18"The platform didn't look like"
19"Footprints crisscrossed the dirt in"
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Water dripped from a rusted ceiling beam, splashing into a puddle that reflected the flickering glare of portable halogen lamps."
1"Strange, geometric sigils were etched directly into the face, encircling a needle that spun wildly, refusing to settle on north."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Harlow crossed, her posture rigid with military precision"
1"Harlow walked, kneeling to inspect the shattered wood"
2"Harlow walked, her eyes scanning the dark tracks below"
3"Miller leaned, his breathing heavy"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.1
81.5309%