Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT69C1VTD68E7CZ262N4WS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 9s
Cost:
$0.003982
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber sky bled warmth onto endless vineyards. Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped through the rift, her boots crushing grapes that smelled of burnt sugar. The air tasted like honey and smoke. "Bloody hell," she breathed, bright blue eyes widening. Nyx drifted beside her, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes. "The Veil thins here. I feel it pull." Rory's scar—small crescent on her left wrist—itched. She touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized on its silver chain, pulsed with warmth. Near the portal. Right at the gate to this place. Behind them, the rift to Richmond Park shimmered, then sealed. "Isolde said winter solstice weakens the boundary," Rory said. "That means—" "We're locked in until it strengthens." Nyx's voice sounded like whispers carried on wind. They shifted between solid and incorporeal, edges fraying. "Dymas. The realm of gluttony." The Fae Grove had left no footprints where Isolde walked, but here, in this realm of Hel ruled by Prince Belphegor, the ground remembered everything. Ancient oak standing stones lined the threshold, twisted roots drinking amber light. Wildflowers bloomed year-round back in Isolde's grove; here, every vine bore impossible fruit—figs dripping gold, pomegranates split open to show black seeds like eyes, clusters of grapes dark as bruises. Eva stepped out last, her face pale. "This is—what did the seer call it?" "Excess," Rory said. The word hung wrong in her mouth. "Dymas. All indulgence." They moved deeper. The path wound through an orchard where trees grew in spiraling towers, bark polished like bone. Rory heard music—no instruments, just breath and heat, a rhythm that made her teeth ache. She touched the Fae-forged blade at her hip, moonsilver, always cold, faintly luminescent in this amber light. Isolde's gift. It cut through magical wards. Here, she needed every edge. "Look," Eva pointed. A clearing opened. Grand tables stretched for miles, hewn from black marble, laden with feasts. Souls—helbound, contracted from Earth—moved between courses, serving, tasting, never stopping. Their eyes held no hunger, only endless want. Rory felt the pull. The Heartstone pulsed faster. Nyx reached out with shadowed hands. One finger passed through a goblet of wine that never emptied. "They're trapped. Bound by appetite." Rory's cool head steadied her. "We don't eat. We don't drink. We find the portal out." The sky above shifted. Warm amber deepened to burnt orange. Somewhere, laughter boomed—Prince Belphegor's court? The sound made Rory's shoulder-length black hair stand. She kept walking. Discovery came in the vineyard's heart. A fountain flowed not with water but with syrup, thick and crimson. Around it, chefs—mortals in white, faces blank with devotion—competed. They carved roasts that screamed softly when cut. The scent hit Rory: rosemary, char, something sweet that made her stomach twist despite herself. "Unease suits you," Nyx said. "You think too clearly for gluttony." "I think we need out before the winter solstice ends and the Veil strengthens without us." But wonder held her too. The trees bore lantern-fruit, glowing like the Heartstone's faint inner glow. The air shimmered with heat and magic. This realm existed between Earth and Hel, monitored where rifts tore, but here in Dymas, no Wardens walked. Only excess. Rory stepped closer to the fountain. The syrup rippled. For a moment, she saw herself—bright blue eyes, crescent scar, the pendant glowing crimson—reflected not in water but in pure desire. The image smiled with teeth too sharp. She pulled back. The blade at her hip grew colder, moonlit, responsive. "We go now," she said. Behind them, the orchard swallowed the path. The amber sky pressed closer. The feast never ended. But Rory Carter walked through it, shadow and blade and burning stone, untouched by the hunger that devoured kingdoms.<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount632
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount632
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"marble"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"shimmered"
3"marble"
4"stomach"
5"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences64
matches
0"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords618
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.62% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount532
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Rory11
Nyx4
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Grove1
Isolde3
Hel2
Prince2
Belphegor2
Fae-forged1
Earth2
Dymas1
Wardens1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
5"Isolde"
6"Hel"
7"Prince"
8"Belphegor"
9"Wardens"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.466
windowScore0.833
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like honey and smoke"
1"sounded like whispers carried on wind"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords3.236
wordCount618
matches
0"not with water but with syrup, thick"
1"not in water but in pure desire"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean24.72
std17.28
cv0.699
sampleLengths
029
18
223
336
410
511
627
767
814
913
103
1160
123
1341
1422
1516
1626
1750
1811
1916
2043
2137
2212
235
2435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences73
ratio0.11
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped through the rift, her boots crushing grapes that smelled of burnt sugar."
1"Rory's scar—small crescent on her left wrist—itched."
2"Wildflowers bloomed year-round back in Isolde's grove; here, every vine bore impossible fruit—figs dripping gold, pomegranates split open to show black seeds like eyes, clusters of grapes dark as bruises."
3"Rory heard music—no instruments, just breath and heat, a rhythm that made her teeth ache."
4"Souls—helbound, contracted from Earth—moved between courses, serving, tasting, never stopping."
5"Somewhere, laughter boomed—Prince Belphegor's court?"
6"Around it, chefs—mortals in white, faces blank with devotion—competed."
7"For a moment, she saw herself—bright blue eyes, crescent scar, the pendant glowing crimson—reflected not in water but in pure desire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02909090909090909
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00909090909090909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean8.47
std5.47
cv0.646
sampleLengths
08
114
27
38
415
58
67
78
811
93
107
1110
129
132
1414
158
165
1725
1812
1930
207
217
223
237
243
253
2616
2715
2817
292
305
315
323
333
3412
3510
368
374
384
396
4011
415
425
4311
444
456
465
478
483
496
81.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5068493150684932
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners37
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Somewhere, laughter boomed—Prince Belphegor's court?"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences57
matches
0"she breathed, bright blue eyes"
1"She touched the Heartstone Pendant"
2"They shifted between solid and"
3"They moved deeper."
4"She touched the Fae-forged blade"
5"It cut through magical wards."
6"Their eyes held no hunger,"
7"She kept walking."
8"They carved roasts that screamed"
9"She pulled back."
ratio0.175
74.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences57
matches
0"The amber sky bled warmth"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped through the rift,"
2"The air tasted like honey"
3"she breathed, bright blue eyes"
4"Nyx drifted beside her, a"
5"Rory's scar—small crescent on her"
6"She touched the Heartstone Pendant"
7"The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized on"
8"Nyx's voice sounded like whispers"
9"They shifted between solid and"
10"The Fae Grove had left"
11"Wildflowers bloomed year-round back in"
12"Eva stepped out last, her"
13"The word hung wrong in"
14"They moved deeper."
15"The path wound through an"
16"Rory heard music—no instruments, just"
17"She touched the Fae-forged blade"
18"It cut through magical wards."
19"Here, she needed every edge."
ratio0.772
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory—stepped through the rift, her boots crushing grapes that smelled of burnt sugar."
1"But Rory Carter walked through it, shadow and blade and burning stone, untouched by the hunger that devoured kingdoms.<|end_message|>"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.125
78.9577%