Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT6EEBHGSQC219EGF8KXXW

Run Details

Duration:
44.7s
Cost:
$0.063549
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave way with a heavy metallic snap that echoed down the stairwell. Rory pulled the scarred oak door inward, framing six feet of charcoal tailoring against the dull glow of the hallway bulb. "You took your time with the locks." Lucien shifted his weight onto the polished ivory curve of his cane. Rain glinted in his platinum hair, slicked back against his scalp without a single stray lock out of place. One eye burned like molten amber in the dim light; the other remained a deep, lightless black. "Three deadbolts keep out the petty thieves." Rory leaned against the jamb, crossing her arms over her chest. "They work on bloodsuckers and information brokers, too." "I never was a thief, Rory." "You took the Ledger of Avaros and ghosted for three months. That feels like theft." Lucien stepped across the threshold before she could brace her shoulder against the wood. He brought the scent of wet asphalt, cedarwood, and the bitter tang of brimstone into the narrow entryway. "I left you alive." He rested his cane against the rack, where it clattered against her yellow oilskin slicker. "That was a gift." "Keep your charity." She turned on her heel, marching back into the living room before her hands started to shake. Curry spices from the restaurant downstairs seeped through the floorboards, thick with cumin and fried garlic, mingling with the dry rot of ancient parchment. Scrolls lay unspooled across the floorboards like shed snake skins. Stacked folios blocked the narrow pathway to the galley kitchen. Ptolemy slunk out from behind a pile of Latin lexicons, his striped tail flicking. The tabby sniffed the edge of Lucien's trousers, let out a flat, scratchy meow, and retreated beneath an overstuffed armchair. "Your friend Eva keeps a chaotic sanctuary." Lucien picked a route through the minefield of research notes. "A far cry from your flat above Silas' place." "Eva's out of town. I'm house-sitting." Rory snatched a stack of glossaries off the armchair and dumped them onto the desk to clear a seat she had no intention of offering him. "And you shouldn't know where I am." "London belongs to those who listen." He halted two inches short of her space, towering over her with quiet poise. "I listen better than most." Rory traced the pale crescent scar on her left wrist, her skin prickling under his gaze. The last time they stood this close, blood had been drying on his cuff and her fingers had been tangled in his lapels, pulling him down into an error she had spent ninety days undoing. "What do you want, Lucien?" "You left your silver compass at the dockhouse." He reached into his breast pocket. "Keep it." "I don't keep trash." He withdrew a small velvet pouch instead, tossing it onto the heap of open books between them. It landed with a dull thud. "And I don't leave debts unpaid." "I don't want your money." "It isn't coin." Lucien leaned down, his amber eye catching the glare of the desk lamp. "It's the cipher key for the Welsh boundary wards. The ones your father failed to break twenty years ago." Her pulse hammered against her throat. She gripped the back of the armchair until her knuckles turned ivory. "My father was a barrister, not a sorcerer." "Brendan Carter was both, Rory. You know it." He took another step forward. The space between them evaporated. "He hid his notes in Cardiff before the council bound his tongue. This opens his vault." "Why bring this to me now?" Her voice scraped low. "After walking away in the docks? After letting me think the court tore you apart?" Lucien reached out. His gloved thumb brushed the edge of her jawline, his leather cold against her skin. "Because the court almost did." She flinched away from the touch, though every nerve ending screamed to lean into the heat radiating off his chest. "That doesn't excuse the silence." "Silence kept you out of the ash circles." He retracted his hand, resting both palm and knuckles against his ribcage with deliberate restraint. "If Avaros knew you held my favor, they would have peeled the skin from your back to make parchment." "I don't need your protection!" She snapped her hand out, grabbing the collar of his suit jacket. The fine wool bunched in her fist. "I survived Evan. I survived London before you dragged me into your underworld. I can handle a few court hounds!" Lucien didn't pull back. He leaned into her grip, forcing her to bear the full weight of his focus. "You survived Evan because you ran," he whispered, his breath warm against her lips, tainted with the dark sugar of clove liquor. "You survive me because I allow it." "Arrogant bastard." "Honest broker." She yanked him closer, the crescent scar white against her strain. "Tell me why you're really here." Lucien closed his hand over hers, his fingers locking around her wrist right over the pale mark of her childhood fall. The heat of his skin burned through his gloves, demon-fire banked beneath a human facade. "The cipher key requires two drops of Carter blood." His obsidian eye reflected nothing, his amber eye reflecting her angry face. "And I refuse to let anyone else bleed you." Rory stared up at him, her chest heaving against the crisp linen of his shirt. The scent of ozone crackled between them, faint as static on an old radio. Downstairs, the muffled bass of the curry house jukebox thumped through the floorboards, a rhythmic heartbeat beneath the room's tension. "You frame your obsession as a service." Her fingers twitched within his grasp, but she didn't break the seal of his grip. "You talk about blood like it's currency on your exchange floor." "It is currency." Lucien’s thumb stroked the inside of her wrist, directly over her thumping radial artery. "The only currency that keeps value when the portals close." "I'm not signing your contracts." "I didn't bring a parchment." He tilted his head, his platinum hair catching the dull amber rays of the desk lamp. "I brought a key. The choice to turn it belongs to you." "You brought trouble to my door." "Trouble was sitting on your windowsill, Rory." He glanced toward the soot-stained glass overlooking Brick Lane. "Two glass-eyed crows have been perched on the drainpipe since you bought your morning tea. They aren't scavengers." Rory went rigid. She dropped her hand from his collar, stepping back into the narrow aisle between two towers of folklore anthologies. Ptolemy let out a low growl from beneath the chair. "Whose spies?" "The Duke of Avaros." Lucien smoothed his lapels with two swift strokes. "He knows I survived the dockhouse ambush. He suspects I didn't return to France alone." "I'm not your refuge, Lucien." "No." He picked up his cane, testing its iron tip against the floorboards. "You are my liability. Which makes you my priority." "I hate the way you talk." She reached for an iron paperweight on the desk, heavy and star-shaped, giving her hands something cold to anchor them. "You speak like a legal brief written in hell." "My father came from Avaros." Lucien straightened his posture. "Your father was an Irish barrister. We were doomed to speak in clauses long before we met in that gambling den in Soho." "That wasn't a gamble," she spat, her eyes flashing bright blue. "You set me up. You used my delivery route to slip past Silas' ward stones." "And you stole fifty sovereigns from my coat while I bled on your backseat." A sharp curve touched the corner of his lips. "We established our dynamic early." "You let me take them." "I was amused." "I bought four months of rent with that money!" "I know. I paid Silas the difference when your flat's boiler burst in November." Rory froze. The iron paperweight lost its weight in her palm. "What?" "Silas charges absurd rates for plumbing." Lucien adjusted his cuffs, revealing silver links etched with protective runes. "I couldn't have my favorite informant freeze over an unpaved pipe." "I'm not your favorite anything." She stepped back into his space, chest to chest, the iron paperweight pressed flat against his sternum. "Stop paying my bills. Stop watching my windows. Stop turning up when I've managed to sleep through the night!" Lucien didn't flinch at the cold metal. His breath stayed steady, slow, infuriatingly still. "I sleep three hours a week, Rory." He leaned down until his forehead almost brushed hers. "And every minute of those three hours, I see you standing in the wet gravel at the docks, holding that stupid brass lantern, screaming at me to get back on the boat." The raw confession hung in the cramped space, thick and suffocating. The rain outside picked up, drumming a frantic rhythm against the glass. "You should have gotten on the boat," she whispered. "And leave you to clean up the wreckage?" His fingers hovered near her hair, untangling a dark strand from her collar without touching her skin. "Half-demons do not forfeit what they claim." "You never claimed me." "Didn't I?" He lowered his hand, his knuckles brushing her collarbone, trailing down to the top button of her flannel shirt. "You still wear the crescent mark from the night we broke the salt seal at St. Jude's." "This scar is from a childhood fall in Cardiff!" "The pale line is," he agreed. "The violet shimmer beneath the skin when you're furious? That's my blood mixing with yours." Rory dropped the paperweight. It slammed onto the hardwood floor with a thud that sent Ptolemy scampering deeper into the shadows. She caught Lucien by the throat, her nails digging into the soft skin just above his collar. "You bound me?" "I saved you." His amber eye burned bright, the pupil slitting into a razor-thin needle. "The rot from that cursed blade would have reached your heart before sunrise. I closed the vein with my own blood." "You had no right!" "I had every right." His hands came up, clamping down on her waist, pulling her flush against his solid frame. The cane dropped from his fingers, clattering against the stacks of paper. "I had the right of a man who refused to bury you." Her heart thudded against her ribs, echoing the chaos of her mind. The fury tangled with an old hunger she had spent three months attempting to drown in delivery shifts and legal textbooks. "I hate you," she breathed, her lips inches from his. "A sensible emotion." Lucien held her suspended in the margin between rage and surrender, his hands burning through her shirt, his mismatched eyes drinking in every line of her face. "Hold onto it. It might keep you alive when the crows break the glass." Rory tightened her grip on his throat, feeling the steady, heavy pulse beneath his skin. "Show me the key," she demanded, her voice cutting through the damp chill of the room. "Show me what my father left behind." Lucien let out a low sigh that vibrated straight through her chest. He reached down without breaking eye contact, picking up the velvet pouch from the table. "The lock is in Cardiff." Lucien untied the silk drawstring. "And the road crawls with the Duke's vanguard." "I don't care about the Duke." She reached into the pouch, her fingers brushing his as she pulled out a cold, triangular piece of black glass etched with Welsh runes. "I care about answers." "Answers carry a price, Rory." "I'm done paying you in blood." "Good." Lucien tilted his head, his thumb tracing the curve of her lower lip, pressing hard enough to draw a sharp breath from her lungs. "Because this time, I intend to charge you in truth."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.388
leniency0.777
rawRatio0.025
effectiveRatio0.019
97.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1961
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1961
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"facade"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"etched"
count2
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"silk"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"chaotic"
3"sanctuary"
4"traced"
5"velvet"
6"pulse"
7"silence"
8"facade"
9"rhythmic"
10"tension"
11"etched"
12"echoing"
13"chill"
14"vibrated"
15"silk"
16"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences151
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1961
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1150
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien18
Curry1
Latin1
Rory9
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
Welsh1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Welsh"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.717
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1961
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean22.54
std13.87
cv0.615
sampleLengths
015
121
27
348
426
56
615
732
823
920
1044
1134
1226
1339
1425
1551
165
1714
182
1933
205
2135
2218
238
2434
2525
2618
275
2820
295
3042
3144
3219
3329
342
352
3617
3736
3830
3949
4033
4127
425
4333
446
4534
4632
472
4827
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"been tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences151
ratio0.007
matches
0"One eye burned like molten amber in the dim light; the other remained a deep, lightless black."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1154
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01559792027729636
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017331022530329288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences151
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences151
mean12.99
std7.11
cv0.547
sampleLengths
015
121
27
312
419
517
618
78
86
915
1014
1118
1219
134
1420
1524
1610
1710
1814
1920
2017
219
2232
237
2420
255
2616
2735
285
2914
302
3121
326
336
345
3516
3619
376
3812
398
4013
415
4216
4310
4415
453
4615
475
4820
495
47.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.33774834437086093
totalSentences151
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences85
matches
0"He brought the scent of"
1"He rested his cane against"
2"She turned on her heel,"
3"He halted two inches short"
4"He reached into his breast"
5"He withdrew a small velvet"
6"It landed with a dull"
7"Her pulse hammered against her"
8"She gripped the back of"
9"He took another step forward"
10"Her voice scraped low"
11"His gloved thumb brushed the"
12"She flinched away from the"
13"He retracted his hand, resting"
14"She snapped her hand out,"
15"He leaned into her grip,"
16"he whispered, his breath warm"
17"She yanked him closer, the"
18"His obsidian eye reflected nothing,"
19"Her fingers twitched within his"
ratio0.471
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences85
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave way"
1"Rory pulled the scarred oak"
2"Lucien shifted his weight onto"
3"Rain glinted in his platinum"
4"Rory leaned against the jamb,"
5"Lucien stepped across the threshold"
6"He brought the scent of"
7"He rested his cane against"
8"She turned on her heel,"
9"Curry spices from the restaurant"
10"Scrolls lay unspooled across the"
11"Ptolemy slunk out from behind"
12"The tabby sniffed the edge"
13"Lucien picked a route through"
14"Rory snatched a stack of"
15"He halted two inches short"
16"Rory traced the pale crescent"
17"The last time they stood"
18"He reached into his breast"
19"He withdrew a small velvet"
ratio0.976
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The last time they stood this close, blood had been drying on his cuff and her fingers had been tangled in his lapels, pulling him down into an error she had sp…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien leaned down, his amber eye catching the glare of the desk lamp"
1"His obsidian eye reflected, his amber eye reflecting her angry face"
2"she spat, her eyes flashing bright blue"
3"His amber eye burned, the pupil slitting into a razor-thin needle"
4"she demanded, her voice cutting through the damp chill of the room"
72.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"He retracted (retract)"
1"She snapped (snap)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"she spat (spit)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he agreed (agree)"
6"she breathed (breathe)"
7"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.155
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.155
80.8274%