Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT6R1CFEGZFXWRBGF1XTT4

Run Details

Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.014748
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain beat a steady rhythm against the leaded glass of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the distinct green neon sign above the entrance into a emerald smudge. Inside, amber light pooled over polished mahogany and threadbare leather booth seats. Old maps of forgotten empires bowed in their frames along the walls, yellowed by decades of stale smoke and damp London air. Aurora sat on the tall stool at the far corner of the bar, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A half-empty glass of dark ale sweated onto a cardboard coaster before her. She tapped her boots against the brass footrail, the stiff leather of her delivery jacket squeaking with the movement. The heavy oak front door groaned open, letting in a gust of wet wind and the sour stench of Soho asphalt. Silas set down a glass he was polishing, his hazel eyes tracking the newcomer over the top of his spectacles. His silver signet ring caught the dim overhead light as his grip tightened on the rag. The man shaking off the rain wore a charcoal wool coat that screamed Savile Row, his damp blonde hair slicked back with precise care. He scanned the room, his gaze gliding over the framed black-and-white photographs before locking onto the corner stool. His breath hitched. "Rory?" Aurora froze, her hand stilling on her wrist. The voice carried a smooth, silver-plated cadence that she hadn't heard since a rained-out train platform in Cardiff four years ago. She turned slowly. Julian. He didn't look like the boy who used to share cheap cider behind the university library, his thumb holes frayed in a second-hand jumper. The posture was different—shoulders set with a deliberate, manufactured ease. A golden signet ring gleaming on his left pinky rivaled Silas's for weight. "Julian." Her voice sounded flat, a pebble dropped into a deep well. "What are you doing in Soho?" Julian stepped forward, his leather soles clicking against the scuffed floorboards. He gestured toward a table, but Silas shifted behind the bar, his slight limp barely noticeable as he placed himself firmly between the newcomer and the back half of the room. "Just a Scotch, landlord," Julian said, throwing a careless nod toward Silas before leaning against the bar rail a foot away from Aurora. "Single malt. Whatever top-shelf bottle you keep hidden back there." Silas stared for a beat, his expression an unreadable slab of stone, then turned to fetch a heavy crystal glass. "You look..." Julian trailed off, his eyes darting over her worn delivery jacket, the dark circles under her bright blue eyes, the straight black hair tied into a hasty, functional knot. "You look completely different." "I work for a living now." She took a slow sip of her ale, letting the bitterness coat her tongue. " real work. Not debating mock trials in heated lecture halls." "That's harsh." He smiled, but the warmth didn't reach the fine lines newly carved around his eyes. "I tried calling. Your father said—" "I don't care what Brendan said." Julian flinched, the polish slipping for a fraction of a second to reveal the boy who used to flinch at his own father's shouting. Silas placed the Scotch on the mahogany top with a quiet tap. Julian picked it up, swirling the amber liquid against the glass. "He was worried, Rory. We all were. You vanished. Eva wouldn't say a word, just packed your things from the flat and handed the keys back to the landlord." He took a long swallow, his throat working. "Evan was beside himself." Aurora’s knuckles turned white around her glass. The air in the bar grew thick, heavy with the phantom smell of stale gin and the metallic tang of fear that used to choke her old apartment. "Evan was a monster," she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper that cut through the low hum of the bar's jazz record. "And you knew it." Julian set his glass down hard enough to rattle the ice. "He was my friend. You were my best friend. I was caught in the middle, Rory. You think it was easy watching the two of you tear each other apart?" "Tear each other apart?" She let out a dry, barking laugh that made a patron three booths down glance over. "Is that what you called it? A balanced fight?" She unzipped her jacket an inch, letting him see the guarded posture, the subtle way her feet were planted to bolt or strike. She wasn't the terrified girl who had locked herself in his bathroom while Evan kicked at the hollow wood door. She had learned to move through the dark, learned the weight of Silas's quiet lessons in the hidden room behind the bookshelf. Julian looked away, his gaze falling to his own reflected image in the dark wood of the bar. "I was twenty-two. I was scared." "You were coward," she said simply. "You chose his father's law firm over doing the right thing." "I made a life!" Julian's voice cracked, the carefully rehearsed composure shattering. He gestured to his tailored coat, his expensive watch, the gold ring. "Look at this. I'm a senior associate. I'm buying a place in Kensington. I did what we always talked about doing, Rory. I played the game." "You swallowed the bait." She leaned in, her bright blue eyes catching the dim light, sharp as broken glass. "Look at you. You speak like his father. You dress like his father. Do you even remember what you sound like when you aren't pitching to a magistrate?" Julian swallowed hard. He reached out, his manicured fingers trembling slightly as he made to touch her sleeve, but he checked the movement halfway, dropping his hand to the mahogany counter. "I came into town for a deposition," he said, the silence stretching between them until it felt like a physical wall. "I saw a girl who looked like you turning down the alleyway. I walked past three other pubs just hoping..." "Hoping what?" "That you were okay." He looked at her, truly looked at her, stripping away four years of courtrooms and corporate dinners. "That I hadn't lost you entirely to whatever ghost you were running from." "I'm not running anymore, Julian." "Then come have dinner. Real dinner. Not..." He waved a hand at the sticky coasters and the faded maps. "Not in a pit like this." Silas paused in his sweeping of the bar top, his hazel eyes locking onto Julian with an icy, lethal stillness that made the younger man's throat click as he swallowed. "This pit keeps the rain off," Aurora said, her voice flattening into that cold, unyielding register she had perfected since coming to London. "And the company knows when to keep its mouth shut." Julian took a slow breath, adjusting his silk tie. The armor was sliding back into place, piece by piece, hiding the boy from Cardiff under layers of expensive wool and calculated ambition. "You're cruel now," he murmured. "I'm alive." He picked up his glass, finished the Scotch in one deep pull, and reached into his inner pocket for a leather wallet. He pulled out a crisp fifty-pound note and slapped it down next to his glass. "Keep the change," Julian told Silas, his voice regaining its practiced smoothness. He turned back to Aurora, lingering for a second as if waiting for her to say a name, to drop the barrier, to ask about home. Aurora took a slow drink of her ale, her eyes fixed straight ahead on the dark bottles lined up against the mirror. Julian pulled his collar up against the damp air, turned on his heel, and walked out into the London rain. The heavy oak door thudded shut behind him, cutting off the sound of the street. Silas stepped over, his signet ring clicking against the bar top as he swept the fifty-pound note away. He replaced Julian’s empty glass with a fresh pour of dark amber liquid, setting it right next to Aurora’s wrist. "Friend of yours?" Silas asked softly.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"Silas asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.1
77.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"completely"
2"carefully"
3"slightly"
4"truly"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"firmly"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanned"
2"gleaming"
3"weight"
4"firmly"
5"unreadable"
6"crystal"
7"warmth"
8"whisper"
9"silence"
10"silk"
11"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1346
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1030
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Soho1
Savile1
Row1
Cardiff2
Silas11
Julian15
Aurora8
Scotch2
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.772
windowScore0.833
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical wall"
1"as if waiting for her to say a name, to drop the barrier, to ask about home"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1346
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.91
std15.92
cv0.532
sampleLengths
060
155
221
336
445
51
632
71
847
918
1042
1133
1220
1335
1431
1523
166
1747
1841
1935
2028
2141
2229
2365
2424
2517
2650
2747
2831
2941
302
3134
325
3325
3430
3533
3632
375
382
3937
4038
4122
4235
4338
446
99.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"were planted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was sliding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"The posture was different—shoulders set with a deliberate, manufactured ease."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1040
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"smooth, silver-plated cadence"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025961538461538463
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008653846153846154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.65
std8.52
cv0.544
sampleLengths
026
112
222
323
413
519
621
720
816
924
1018
113
121
138
1421
153
161
1724
1810
1913
2012
216
2211
2331
2423
2510
2620
2731
284
2920
3011
3117
326
336
3424
3512
3611
3737
384
397
4028
4124
424
4311
4430
4520
469
4723
4820
4922
48.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3488372093023256
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences62
matches
0"She tapped her boots against"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He scanned the room, his"
3"His breath hitched."
4"She turned slowly."
5"He didn't look like the"
6"Her voice sounded flat, a"
7"He gestured toward a table,"
8"She took a slow sip"
9"He smiled, but the warmth"
10"He took a long swallow,"
11"she said, her voice dropping"
12"She let out a dry,"
13"She unzipped her jacket an"
14"She wasn't the terrified girl"
15"She had learned to move"
16"she said simply"
17"He gestured to his tailored"
18"She leaned in, her bright"
19"He reached out, his manicured"
ratio0.435
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora sat on the tall"
1"A half-empty glass of dark"
2"She tapped her boots against"
3"The heavy oak front door"
4"Silas set down a glass"
5"His silver signet ring caught"
6"The man shaking off the"
7"He scanned the room, his"
8"His breath hitched."
9"Aurora froze, her hand stilling"
10"The voice carried a smooth,"
11"She turned slowly."
12"He didn't look like the"
13"The posture was different—shoulders set"
14"A golden signet ring gleaming"
15"Her voice sounded flat, a"
16"Julian stepped forward, his leather"
17"He gestured toward a table,"
18"Julian said, throwing a careless"
19"Silas stared for a beat,"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The man shaking off the rain wore a charcoal wool coat that screamed Savile Row, his damp blonde hair slicked back with precise care."
1"He didn't look like the boy who used to share cheap cider behind the university library, his thumb holes frayed in a second-hand jumper."
2"The air in the bar grew thick, heavy with the phantom smell of stale gin and the metallic tang of fear that used to choke her old apartment."
3"Silas paused in his sweeping of the bar top, his hazel eyes locking onto Julian with an icy, lethal stillness that made the younger man's throat click as he swa…"
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Her voice sounded, a pebble dropped into a deep well"
1"Julian told, his voice regaining its practiced smoothness"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.05
79.8784%