Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT76RGXYS0K1FHEY5AYZHV

Run Details

Duration:
13.3s
Cost:
$0.015402
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through a thicket of thornless briars, the crimson gem at her throat flaring like a struck match. Warmth bled from the thumbnail-sized stone, pulsing against her collarbone in a steady, frantic rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. "Step only where the clover blooms, mortal." Isolde drifted past, her silver hair trailing through the air like liquid mercury. Silver leaves and pale wildflowers blanketed the soil, though outside the oak ring, London reeked of exhaust and winter frost. Here, the air tasted of crushed elderberries and ozone. Isolde left no indentations on the damp moss, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the horizon where the sky bled from twilight indigo into a warm amber hue. A dark shadow detached itself from the trunk of a ancient oak, coalescing into a towering, humanoid outline. Nyx hovered inches above the turf, their violet eyes glowing softly within the shroud of their faceless form. "The boundary thins here," Nyx said, the voice swishing like dry autumn leaves scraped across cobblestones. "The scent of Dymas bleeds through the seams. Overindulgence. Rot disguised as nectar." Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger from her belt. Moonsilver gleamed under the unnatural amber sky, cold as river ice against her palm. "You said we'd find the tear near the center." "I said the path exists," Isolde corrected, turning mid-air without shifting her weight. "The journey constructs itself around our intrusion." They stepped out of the tree line and onto a ridge overseeing a sprawling, alien valley. Rory caught her breath. The earth plummeted into vast, terraced orchards that defied gravity. Vines thick as ancient oaks twisted upward, weaving into massive arches that bore luminescent, globe-like fruit the size of carriage wheels. Below them, rivers of thick, golden liquid curled through fields of violet wheat, steam rising off the currents to form perfumed clouds of cinnamon and roasting meats. The heat hit Rory's face in a sudden, humid wave. Sweat beaded on her forehead as her jacket quickly became an oven. "It doesn't look like Hel," Rory muttered, her thumb resting on the cold hilt of her blade to anchor herself. "It looks like paradise." "Excess is the most pleasant trap, Malphora," Nyx whispered, their form stretching thin, spreading into a wide shadow that covered Rory’s flank. "Eat a single apple from those boughs, and your stomach will rend itself raw begging for a second." They descended the ridge, following a winding trail forged from polished white river stones. Every step echoed with a faint, musical chime. Around them, giant blossoms unfurled in real-time, spouting pale pink mist that smelled of spun sugar. Rory covered her nose with her sleeve, the heat intensfying as the sky above shifted deeper into the deep amber of melted honey. The Heartstone pendant against her chest vibrated so violently it buzzed against her ribs. "The portal isn't just open," Rory said, pointing toward a massive structure at the heart of the terraced valley. "It's bleeding into the Grove." A colossal archway made of black iron and braided bone spanned across a river of golden honey. Beyond the arch, the scenery lost all illusion of the Fae. The pleasant meadows gave way to towering obsidian kitchens that spiked into the amber sky like broken teeth, spewing plumes of violet smoke. Distant, booming laughter echoed across the valley, accompanied by the rhythmic clinking of iron cookware heavy enough to crush a horse. "Belphegor's domain," Isolde said, pausing at the bank of the glowing river. She reached out, her fingers hovering an inch above the shimmering current. "The gluttons cook their memories into feasts for the prince. A soul for a recipe. A life for a taste." "Can we cross?" Rory asked, peering down into the golden syrup. A shadowy tendril shot out from Nyx, dipping into the liquid. The shadow hissed, steam billowing off the dark mist as if doused in acid. "Not through the water," Nyx whispered, retracting the limb. "It seeks to consume whatever enters it. It craves substance." Rory scanned the riverbank, her black hair clinging to her damp neck. Upstream, a bridge forged from interwoven, calcified vines arched across the expanse, anchored by two weeping willow trees whose leaves drooped like threads of spun glass. "There," Rory said, setting off toward the roots. As they neared the bridge, the silence of the valley shattered. A low, rhythmic humming filled the air, rising from the soil beneath their boots. The ground quivered. Rory froze, her blade held low. The crimson pendant scorched her skin through her shirt. From the violet wheat fields, shapes emerged. They moved on four jointed legs, carved entirely from burnished copper and dark timber, resembling massive, spindly arachnids. Where their heads should have been, heavy iron braziers glowed with white-hot coals, wafting the rich scent of seared fat and roasted spices. "Dymasian automata," Nyx hissed, solidifying beside Rory, their silhouette sharpening into an angular, armored shape. "Harvesters." "They are blind to souls," Isolde noted, stepping casually past one of the hulking metal constructs as it forged a path through the wheat. "They seek only raw yield for the Prince’s tables." One of the spiders paused. Its brazier flared brightly, casting sharp shadows across Rory’s face. The bronze head turned with a sickening metallic crunch, the scent of charcoal suddenly suffocatingly thick. It didn't possess eyes, yet the glowing coals shifted toward the Heartstone pulsing beneath Rory's clothes. "It senses the artifact," Rory said, taking a slow step back. The moonsilver blade hummed in her hand, emitting a pale moonlight glow that cut through the warm amber gloom. The automaton let out a steam-whistle shriek and lunged, its sharp copper legs tearing through the white river stones. Rory darted to the left, ducking beneath a sweeping metal leg that shattered a boulder where she had stood a second prior. She spun, slicing the moonsilver dagger across the machine's joint. The Fae-forged steel cut through the enchanted bronze like warm butter, spraying bright yellow sparks across the grass. The automaton buckled, its brazier tipping sideways to spill white-hot embers onto the purple flora, which instantly burst into violet-tinted flames. Nyx dissolved into a wave of pure darkness, surging over the second spider-like construct. The shadow seeped into the iron joints, grinding the gears to a screaming halt as cold shade smothered the internal fires. The machine collapsed into a heap of cold scrap. "Move!" Rory yelled, her lungs burning from the sweet, heavy air. They scrambled onto the glass-willow bridge. Beneath them, the golden river churned, smelling enticingly of warm caramel and dark spices, a sickeningly sweet lure beneath the deadly current. Rory kept her eyes fixed ahead, forcing her feet to move across the slippery glass roots until they hit the dark, ash-strewn dirt of the far bank. The amber sky dimmed into a bruised purple as they crossed the threshold. The air lost its warm, comforting scents, replacing them with the iron tang of raw meat, woodsmoke, and dry heat. Standing at the precipice of Dymas, Rory looked back once. The Fae Grove was visible only as a distant, shimmering bubble of light caught in a sea of black rock and burning sky. Her wrist twitched, the crescent scar glowing faintly in the dim light of the demon realm. "We're through the Veil," Rory whispered, adjusting her grip on the Fae blade. "No, child," Isolde murmured, her voice carrying across the jagged wasteland ahead. "The Veil is behind us. Now, you walk on the belly of the beast."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:17:43.962Z" 7/25/2026, 2:17:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"structure"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count2
10
word"quivered"
count1
11
word"hulking"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"churned"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"echoed"
4"vibrated"
5"structure"
6"rhythmic"
7"scanned"
8"silence"
9"shattered"
10"quivered"
11"hulking"
12"gloom"
13"churned"
14"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1250
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1079
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silver1
London1
Rory21
Nyx7
Heartstone2
Fae4
Isolde6
One1
Fae-forged1
Dymas1
Grove1
persons
0"Silver"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.527
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1250
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean35.71
std19.87
cv0.556
sampleLengths
039
177
236
329
431
520
678
722
824
940
1061
1114
1224
1372
1444
1511
1625
1719
1838
198
2043
2148
2216
2333
2447
2530
2619
2771
2844
2911
3055
3166
3216
3313
3426
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02110091743119266
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013761467889908258
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.53
std6.11
cv0.42
sampleLengths
019
120
220
320
49
528
618
718
816
913
108
1114
129
1313
147
1516
164
1710
1821
1927
2010
2112
2220
234
2422
2518
2614
278
2816
2923
3014
3119
325
3317
3411
3523
3621
3712
3812
3920
4011
4111
4214
439
4410
4512
4626
478
4811
4914
70.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4883720930232558
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences75
matches
0"They stepped out of the"
1"They descended the ridge, following"
2"She reached out, her fingers"
3"They moved on four jointed"
4"Its brazier flared brightly, casting"
5"It didn't possess eyes, yet"
6"She spun, slicing the moonsilver"
7"They scrambled onto the glass-willow"
8"Her wrist twitched, the crescent"
ratio0.12
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rory pushed through a thicket"
1"Warmth bled from the thumbnail-sized"
2"Isolde drifted past, her silver"
3"Here, the air tasted of"
4"Isolde left no indentations on"
5"A dark shadow detached itself"
6"Nyx hovered inches above the"
7"Nyx said, the voice swishing"
8"Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger"
9"Moonsilver gleamed under the unnatural"
10"Isolde corrected, turning mid-air without"
11"They stepped out of the"
12"Rory caught her breath."
13"The earth plummeted into vast,"
14"Vines thick as ancient oaks"
15"The heat hit Rory's face"
16"Sweat beaded on her forehead"
17"Rory muttered, her thumb resting"
18"Nyx whispered, their form stretching"
19"They descended the ridge, following"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Warmth bled from the thumbnail-sized stone, pulsing against her collarbone in a steady, frantic rhythm that matched her own heartbeat."
1"Vines thick as ancient oaks twisted upward, weaving into massive arches that bore luminescent, globe-like fruit the size of carriage wheels."
2"Around them, giant blossoms unfurled in real-time, spouting pale pink mist that smelled of spun sugar."
3"She reached out, her fingers hovering an inch above the shimmering current."
4"Rory darted to the left, ducking beneath a sweeping metal leg that shattered a boulder where she had stood a second prior."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde drifted, her silver hair trailing through the air like liquid mercury"
1"Nyx said, the voice swishing like dry autumn leaves scraped across cobblestones"
2"Rory yelled, her lungs burning from the sweet, heavy air"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice carrying across the jagged wasteland ahead"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde corrected (correct)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
5"Isolde noted (note)"
6"Rory yelled (yell)"
7"Rory whispered (whisper)"
8"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.6
78.0468%