Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT8EXYH84Y5AAR4NE7W917

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.030759
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
She turned the third deadbolt with a crisp, heavy click that echoed down the narrow entryway. Rory expected the delivery boy from the curry house downstairs, or perhaps Eva returning with another armful of bound manuscripts from the British Library. Instead, the flickering bulb in the corridor illuminated Lucien Moreau. Rain glistened on his slicked-back platinum blond hair, small droplets clinging to the shoulders of his immaculate charcoal suit. He stood at five-foot-eleven, leaning ever so slightly onto his ivory-handled cane—the one that concealed a narrow, deadly strip of steel inside its shaft. His mismatched eyes met hers through the doorway: the left an icy, fathomless black, the right a warm, smoldering amber that seemed to catch the dingy hall light and turn it to gold. For three seconds, Rory forgot how to breathe. "You're a difficult woman to track down, *ma chérie*," Lucien said softly. His Marseille accent rolled over the words like silk over steel, dark and entirely too familiar. "Even for me." Rory kept her hand firmly on the brass edge of the door, her bright blue eyes narrowing as her pragmatic instincts kicked in, battling the sudden, traitorous jump of her pulse. "Three deadbolts, Lucien. That usually implies I don't want guests." "Deadbolts only keep out those who lack the patience to knock," he replied, tilting his head. "Are you going to leave me in the draft? It is thoroughly unchivalrous weather out here." She ought to slam the door in his face. She ought to throw the bolts, walk back into the main room, and pretend the ghost of her past three months hadn't just materialized on the landing of a cramped flat on Brick Lane. But her left wrist twitched—a nervous habit that always brought her thumb to the crescent-shaped scar tucked against her pulse—and she stepped backward, leaving the entrance open just enough for him to slip through. Lucien crossed the threshold with the fluid, understated grace that belied his half-demon blood. The moment he stepped inside, the flat seemed to shrink. The smell of damp wool, sandalwood cologne, and that faint, metallic hint of ozone that always clung to him cut straight through the lingering aroma of toasted cumin and turmeric rising from the restaurant below. From atop a stack of leather-bound research notes, Ptolemy lifted his head. The tabby cat let out a low, speculative chirp, uncoiled himself, and sauntered over to rub his cheek directly against the cuff of Lucien’s pressed trousers. "Traitor," Rory muttered at the cat. A faint, rare smile tugged at the corner of Lucien’s mouth. "Animals have excellent judgment. It's human beings who complicate things." He looked around the small living space, taking in the towering stacks of scrolls, the open codices on the low coffee table, and the general air of manic scholarly obsession that characterized Eva’s living arrangements. "A bit cozy, isn't it? A long way from the flat above Silas' bar." "It's safe," Rory said, crossing her arms over her chest. She stood at five-foot-six, her straight black hair falling over her shoulders, framing a face she was trying desperately to keep unreadable. "Or at least, it was until ten seconds ago. What are you doing here, Lucien? We said everything there was to say in Soho." "Did we?" Lucien set his cane against the side of an overcrowded bookshelf and stepped deeper into the room. His amber eye burned with a quiet intensity, while the black one remained an unreadable abyss. "As I recall, you said very little. You simply gathered your things while I was dealing with the council, left a key on the kitchen island, and vanished into the fog." "I left because staying meant getting pulled deeper into your world," she said, her voice sharp, cool, and precise—a lawyer's daughter dissecting a flaw in a argument. "I came to London to escape a toxic mess, not to exchange one kind of danger for another. You're an information broker for things that go bump in the night, Lucien. I deliver noodles by day and sleep in borrowed rooms by night. We don't mix." "You never were very good at convincing yourself of your own lies, Rory," he murmured. He closed the distance between them with two slow, deliberate steps. Rory held her ground, refusing to give him the satisfaction of flinching, though every nerve ending beneath her skin flared to life at his proximity. Up close, she could feel the unnatural warmth radiating off him—the subtle, subterranean heat of Avaros that ran through his veins, a reminder of the father he hated and the power he bore. "I didn't come to force you back into my world," he said, stopping just inches away. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then tracked slowly up to her eyes. "I came because you left a piece of business unfinished." "What business?" "Us." The word was barely a whisper, heavy with three months of bitter silence, of sleepless nights, of hurt disguised as arrogance. Rory swallowed hard, her cool exterior cracking just enough for the raw heat underneath to show. "There is no *us*. There was a mistake. A moment of madness in an alley behind a club when we both thought we weren't going to make it out alive." "Is that what it was?" Lucien reached out, his long, leather-gloved fingers hovering just shy of her face before he slowly drew the glove off with his teeth, dropping the leather onto a nearby table. His bare skin was smooth, pale, and remarkably warm as he gently brushed the back of his knuckles against her cheekbone. "A mistake?" Rory’s breath hitched. Her hand shot up to catch his wrist, intending to push him away, but her fingers locked around his pulse point instead. Beneath her palm, his heartbeat was steady, fast, and impossibly real. The crescent scar on her wrist pressed against his sleeve, a point of contact that sent a shiver straight down her spine. "Lucien, don't," she breathed, though she didn't let go of him. "You know what I'm like. You know why I run." "I know Evan hurt you," Lucien said, his voice dropping into a register so dark and protective it set her teeth on edge. "I know he made you believe that caring for someone is a trap, a cage with gold bars. But I am not him, Rory. I have never asked you to be quiet. I have never asked you to be small. I have only ever asked you to look at me." She looked at him then—truly looked at him. She saw the fine lines of fatigue around his heterochromatic eyes, the faint tension in his jaw that revealed just how much this moment was costing his legendary composure. The master fixer of London's underworld, the man who bargained with demons and commanded kingpins, standing in a cramped Brick Lane flat, bleeding his pride onto the floorboards for her. "You terrify me," she admitted, the truth slipping out before her intellect could filter it. "Not because of what you are. Because of what you make me want." Lucien’s breath rattled in his chest. His thumb moved, stroking soft circles over her jawline, tilting her face up. "Good," he whispered against her lips, his breath smelling of dark chocolate and rain. "Then let me be terrified with you." When his mouth met hers, it wasn't the tentative reunion of two bruised souls; it was a collision. Rory let out a soft sound—half a sigh, half a surrender—and wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him down to her. Lucien groaned, his arms wrapping around her waist, lifting her slightly until her toes barely scraped the rug. He dragged her closer, burying his hands in her shoulder-length black hair, deepening the kiss with a hungry, desperate precision that claimed every inch of her lingering doubts. The rain beat a steady rhythm against the glass of Eva’s front window. Downstairs, the muffled hum of the curry house went on, oblivious to the world shifting upstairs. Ptolemy settled back down on his pile of scrolls, purring heavily. When Lucien finally pulled back, resting his forehead against hers, both of them were breathless. His amber eye burned hotter than before, but the shadowed black one looked soft, vulnerable in a way she had never seen. "You're staying," she said, though it sounded less like a command and more like a discovery. Lucien offered a slow, wicked smile that made her heart pull a dangerous stunt against her ribs. "Only if you promise not to lock those three deadbolts on me ever again." "I'll think about it," Rory said, her cool, sharp wit returning, though her hands remained firmly anchored against the lapels of his suit. "First, you're buying me dinner. And not from downstairs." "Consider it done, *ma chérie*," he murmured, kissing her forehead, his grip on her refusing to loosen. "Whatever you want."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:18:25.097Z" 7/25/2026, 2:18:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
1"He looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.472
leniency0.944
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.111
69.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"ever so slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"slowly"
4"gently"
5"truly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1491
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silk"
2"familiar"
3"firmly"
4"pulse"
5"unreadable"
6"intensity"
7"could feel"
8"warmth"
9"reminder"
10"whisper"
11"silence"
12"down her spine"
13"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1483
ratio0.003
matches
0"ma chérie"
1"us"
2"ma chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1092
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
British1
Library1
Lucien12
Moreau1
Rory10
Marseille1
Brick2
Lane2
Ptolemy2
Avaros1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Marseille"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"London"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"amber that seemed to catch the dingy hall light and turn it to gold"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1483
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean42.37
std22.97
cv0.542
sampleLengths
040
110
276
38
431
541
632
777
859
938
106
1170
1256
1366
1473
1515
1669
1739
182
1922
2046
2158
2258
2321
2473
2567
2628
2740
2886
2940
3037
3116
3231
3332
3420
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was costing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences81
ratio0.086
matches
0"He stood at five-foot-eleven, leaning ever so slightly onto his ivory-handled cane—the one that concealed a narrow, deadly strip of steel inside its shaft."
1"But her left wrist twitched—a nervous habit that always brought her thumb to the crescent-shaped scar tucked against her pulse—and she stepped backward, leaving the entrance open just enough for him to slip through."
2"\"I left because staying meant getting pulled deeper into your world,\" she said, her voice sharp, cool, and precise—a lawyer's daughter dissecting a flaw in a argument."
3"Up close, she could feel the unnatural warmth radiating off him—the subtle, subterranean heat of Avaros that ran through his veins, a reminder of the father he hated and the power he bore."
4"She looked at him then—truly looked at him."
5"When his mouth met hers, it wasn't the tentative reunion of two bruised souls; it was a collision."
6"Rory let out a soft sound—half a sigh, half a surrender—and wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him down to her."
89.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, leather-gloved fingers"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.045004500450045004
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.018001800180018002
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean18.31
std10.1
cv0.552
sampleLengths
016
124
210
319
424
533
68
712
816
93
1031
1110
1216
1316
149
1534
1634
1714
1810
1935
2012
2126
226
2311
2445
2514
2610
2722
2824
2919
3016
3131
3227
3346
3415
3511
3625
3733
3816
3913
4010
412
4222
4316
4430
4535
4621
472
483
4922
78.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5061728395061729
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners41
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, the flickering bulb in"
ratio0.016
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences62
matches
0"She turned the third deadbolt"
1"He stood at five-foot-eleven, leaning"
2"His mismatched eyes met hers"
3"His Marseille accent rolled over"
4"he replied, tilting his head"
5"She ought to slam the"
6"She ought to throw the"
7"He looked around the small"
8"She stood at five-foot-six, her"
9"His amber eye burned with"
10"she said, her voice sharp,"
11"He closed the distance between"
12"he said, stopping just inches"
13"His gaze dropped to her"
14"His bare skin was smooth,"
15"Her hand shot up to"
16"she breathed, though she didn't"
17"She looked at him then—truly"
18"She saw the fine lines"
19"she admitted, the truth slipping"
ratio0.419
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"She turned the third deadbolt"
1"Rory expected the delivery boy"
2"Rain glistened on his slicked-back"
3"He stood at five-foot-eleven, leaning"
4"His mismatched eyes met hers"
5"Lucien said softly"
6"His Marseille accent rolled over"
7"Rory kept her hand firmly"
8"he replied, tilting his head"
9"She ought to slam the"
10"She ought to throw the"
11"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
12"The moment he stepped inside,"
13"The smell of damp wool,"
14"The tabby cat let out"
15"Rory muttered at the cat"
16"A faint, rare smile tugged"
17"He looked around the small"
18"Rory said, crossing her arms"
19"She stood at five-foot-six, her"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"His mismatched eyes met hers through the doorway: the left an icy, fathomless black, the right a warm, smoldering amber that seemed to catch the dingy hall ligh…"
1"Lucien crossed the threshold with the fluid, understated grace that belied his half-demon blood."
2"She stood at five-foot-six, her straight black hair falling over her shoulders, framing a face she was trying desperately to keep unreadable."
3"Rory held her ground, refusing to give him the satisfaction of flinching, though every nerve ending beneath her skin flared to life at his proximity."
4"The crescent scar on her wrist pressed against his sleeve, a point of contact that sent a shiver straight down her spine."
5"She saw the fine lines of fatigue around his heterochromatic eyes, the faint tension in his jaw that revealed just how much this moment was costing his legendar…"
6"The master fixer of London's underworld, the man who bargained with demons and commanded kingpins, standing in a cramped Brick Lane flat, bleeding his pride ont…"
7"His thumb moved, stroking soft circles over her jawline, tilting her face up."
8"He dragged her closer, burying his hands in her shoulder-length black hair, deepening the kiss with a hungry, desperate precision that claimed every inch of her…"
9"Lucien offered a slow, wicked smile that made her heart pull a dangerous stunt against her ribs."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she admitted, the truth slipping out before her intellect could filter it"
1"he whispered, his breath smelling of dark chocolate and rain"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
5"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.333
75.1810%