| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "quivered" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "disrupting" | | 17 | "shattered" | | 18 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal warmth," | | 1 | "An hour here could be three days outside," | | 2 | "Don't lose your footing." | | 3 | "Drop, drop, drop." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1158 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 3 | | Welsh | 2 | | London | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | English | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Yu-Fei" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Welsh" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Cardiff" | | 7 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like the man who had backed her in" | | 1 | "felt like stepping on a wet mattress" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Crossing that threshold" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 28.88 | | std | 16.84 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 60 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 21 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "were elongated" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, pale anemones, and night-blooming jasmine—carpeted the forest floor in full, absurd bloom, their petals gleaming under the moonless sky." | | 1 | "Not as if brushed by a breeze—the air remained utterly dead—but as if something heavy had pressed them down from above." | | 2 | "A hand poked through the grey threads—long, elegant fingers tipped with iridescent nails." | | 3 | "She didn't throw them—throwing meant missing." | | 4 | "The artifact didn't just glow; it screamed." | | 5 | "The creature shrieked—a sound like tearing metal—and recoiled into the high canopy as the raw, cleansing smell of Thames rain and London smog burst through the shattered veil." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 533 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "grey, moss-bearded oak" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.0300187617260788 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009380863039399626 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 12.51 | | std | 7.32 | | cv | 0.585 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 57.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.41237113402061853 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, thick and suffocating." | | 1 | "Only the trees, closing ranks." | | 2 | "Instead, she crammed a handful" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 89.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped past the outermost" | | 1 | "Her voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 2 | "She had come to drop" | | 3 | "It pulsed against her breastbone," | | 4 | "Her silver chain thrummed, the" | | 5 | "She took three rapid steps" | | 6 | "It wasn't a roar or" | | 7 | "It came from the high" | | 8 | "It didn't fall." | | 9 | "It slid sideways, contravening gravity," | | 10 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 11 | "She refused to look up." | | 12 | "It sounded like Evan." | | 13 | "It sounded like the man" | | 14 | "Her jaw set, though her" | | 15 | "she whispered, taking another measured" | | 16 | "Her boot sank into soft," | | 17 | "It felt like stepping on" | | 18 | "They were elongated, calcified limbs," | | 19 | "She took a step toward" |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 55.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight in Richmond Park usually" | | 1 | "Tonight, the air inside the" | | 2 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "She stepped past the outermost" | | 4 | "The grey, moss-bearded oak trunk" | | 5 | "The city noise died instantly." | | 6 | "Her voice fell flat, swallowed" | | 7 | "Wildflowers—foxgloves, pale anemones, and night-blooming" | | 8 | "She had come to drop" | | 9 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung heavy" | | 10 | "It pulsed against her breastbone," | | 11 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 12 | "Rory spun around, her straight" | | 13 | "The standing stone she had" | | 14 | "Rory said, backing up until" | | 15 | "Nothing answered, but the jasmine" | | 16 | "The crushed stems leaked a" | | 17 | "Her silver chain thrummed, the" | | 18 | "*Hel portal warmth,* she remembered," | | 19 | "She took three rapid steps" |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stone she had passed seconds ago looked further away now, swallowed by a sudden creeping mist that coiled around the ancient oak's roots like grey …" | | 1 | "Not as if brushed by a breeze—the air remained utterly dead—but as if something heavy had pressed them down from above." | | 2 | "Her boot sank into soft, giving soil that hadn't been there a moment ago." | | 3 | "It had no face, only a smooth, stretched expanse of grey skin that twitched over a lattice of shifting bones." | | 4 | "The thing shifted, dropping six inches lower on pale, jointed appendages that ended in dull, keratin spikes." | | 5 | "She lay there, gasping, her lungs burning on the cold English air." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |