Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCT9EPCYV8CQ7B72DB2P144

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.002699
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through rain-spattered glass, painting the pavement in sick luminescence. The Raven's Nest crouched between two shuttered shops, old maps pinned inside like dead butterflies. Rory pushed through, her jacket dripping onto the floorboards. The flat above went dark months back. The delivery uniform smelled of sesame oil and resignation. Inside, the haze of tobacco and old wood wrapped tight. Rory scanned faces for Silas. Instead, she found the ghost. Eva sat where Silas placed his regulars, beneath a black-and-white photo of Prague. Her hair had gone silver at the temples, sharp in a charcoal coat Rory had never seen. Eva turned her tumbler with manicured nails. "Rory." The name came out like a warning. "Eva." Rory slid onto the stool opposite. The old friend wore diamonds in her ears and a mouth that had forgotten how to smile without strategy. "You don't belong in these rooms anymore. Your father still writes those letters, you know. Brendan wants his daughter arguing cases, not delivering dumplings for Yu-Fei." "I left that life." "Did you flee it? Or did it flee you?" Rory signaled the barman. A whiskey arrived without a word. Eva leaned in. "You carry his ghost. Evan taught you to shrink." "Don't." "I watched you disappear long before you left Cardiff. You ran to London and hid in Silas' attic like a child playing adult." Rory's fingers tightened around the tumbler. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a childhood reminder that wounds never healed clean, only scabbed over. "I build something here. Intelligence, not arguments." "You build nothing. You survive. There's a difference." Eva's eyes, once warm, now evaluated like an auditor's. "Silas knows. He always used you. The delivery girl with quick hands." "He trusts me." "He uses you. Just as Evan used your fear." Rory stood. The room tilted with alcohol and exhaustion. "You came back to remind me I'm small?" "I came back because someone must tell you. You've become Aurora Carter, but she's a fiction. A delivery girl playing spy in a bar with hidden bookshelves." Rory turned toward the door. The green neon outside flickered, then died, leaving her in darkness with Eva's reflection. "You haven't changed," Eva said. "You've only learned to wear different scars." Rory left without another word. The rain swallowed her steps, and the flat above Silas' bar waited, empty as always.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:18:57.621Z" 7/25/2026, 2:18:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.176
leniency0.353
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount396
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount396
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"reminder"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences27
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences27
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences42
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords396
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount232
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas2
Prague1
Rory9
Eva6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences19
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount396
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean15.23
std11.62
cv0.763
sampleLengths
052
120
237
38
41
525
626
74
89
910
1012
111
1223
1325
147
158
169
1712
183
199
209
218
2227
2319
2412
2520
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences27
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs43
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount235
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.03404255319148936
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.00425531914893617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences42
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences42
mean9.43
std6.22
cv0.66
sampleLengths
012
115
29
37
49
510
65
75
813
917
107
118
121
136
1419
1526
164
179
184
196
203
219
221
2323
246
2519
267
278
289
2912
303
319
322
337
348
3527
365
3714
385
397
405
4115
48.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences42
uniqueOpeners14
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences25
matches
0"Instead, she found the ghost."
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount1
totalSentences25
matches
0"Her hair had gone silver"
ratio0.04
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount22
totalSentences25
matches
0"The Raven's Nest crouched between"
1"Rory pushed through, her jacket"
2"The flat above went dark"
3"The delivery uniform smelled of"
4"Rory scanned faces for Silas."
5"Eva sat where Silas placed"
6"Her hair had gone silver"
7"Eva turned her tumbler with"
8"The name came out like"
9"Rory slid onto the stool"
10"The old friend wore diamonds"
11"Rory signaled the barman."
12"A whiskey arrived without a"
13"Eva leaned in."
14"Rory's fingers tightened around the"
15"The crescent scar on her"
16"Eva's eyes, once warm, now"
17"The room tilted with alcohol"
18"Rory turned toward the door."
19"The green neon outside flickered,"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences8
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.059
leniency0.118
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.6845%