Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTBWSY5B3AGEC8C05CBTD6

Run Details

Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.019156
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The wood of the front door was thin enough that Rory could hear the dull rumble of the late-night traffic on Brick Lane, punctuated by the sharp hiss of a bus dropping its air brakes outside the curry house below. She unlatched the top deadbolt, then the second, her thumb slipping slightly on the cold brass of the third before it gave way with a dry *clack*. She opened the door expecting the takeaway delivery boy or perhaps Eva, who had a habit of losing her keys between the bottom of her tote bag and the rain-slicked pavement. Instead, Lucien Moreau stood beneath the flickering yellow bulb of the landing. He looked infuriatingly intact. Tailored charcoal wool, the sharp lapels uncreased despite the November drizzle, platinum blond hair slicked back without a stray strand out of place. He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, his long fingers wrapped around the smooth bone curve, his posture carrying that infuriating, effortless grace that made him look like he owned whatever patch of floor he happened to be standing on. For three long seconds, neither of them spoke. A fat tabby cat squeezed past Rory’s shins, tail flicking against the doorframe. Ptolemy sniffed at the hem of Lucien’s trousers, gave a low, dismissive chuff, and trotted back toward the kitchen, where stacks of parchment and unbound spellbooks formed dusty towers on the linoleum. "You’re dripping on the rug," Rory said. Her voice was steady, a feat she was quietly proud of given the sudden, violent thudding against her ribs. "It’s rain, Aurora. It vanishes when it dries." Lucien’s voice was a low, smooth rasp, tinted with the cool, rolling cadence of Marseille. He didn't move to enter, but he didn't step back either. His strange, mismatched eyes—one the warm hue of aged amber, the other an abyss of solid black—swept over her face, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar tucked into the crease of her left wrist where she held the edge of the door. "You haven't changed your locks." "Eva installed three deadbolts after you left," she said, leaning against the frame to block the entry. "Clearly, we were missing a fourth." "I see." Lucien’s mouth twitched, the ghost of a smirk threatening the corner of his lips before vanishing into something harder, more guarded. "May I come in? Or would you prefer the neighbors learn the details of our last parting? The family on the third floor has a remarkably keen ear for human tragedy." Rory crossed her arms. Her hands were still slightly raw from her shift at Golden Empress, her knuckles red from the biting wind she’d braved on the mopeds delivering Mrs. Cheung's spicy beef broth. She felt small, frayed at the edges, and intensely conscious of her washed-out jumper while he stood there looking like an oil painting of a bad decision. "Two minutes," she said, turning her back on him and walking into the flat. He followed, the silver ferrule of his cane clicking softly against the worn floorboards. He shut the door behind him, the three deadbolts engaging one by one under his quick, practiced hand. The sound was too familiar. It sent a sudden, unwanted bloom of heat straight to her throat. "Eva isn't here," she said, pulling a stack of research notes off the solitary wooden armchair so he wouldn't sit down. She dumped the papers onto the crowded dining table alongside three empty teacups and an open ledger. "If you’re looking for information on the lower-ring trade routes, she took her notebooks to the British Library." "I know where Eva is," Lucien said softly. He didn't take the armchair. He remained standing near the entryway, his eyes tracking her as she moved around the tiny room. "I didn't come to see the scholar." Rory paused, a heavy leather-bound tome held awkwardly against her chest. "Then you've wasted a walk from Mayfair." "It’s hard to waste a walk when one doesn't expect a warm reception." He set his cane against the side of the sofa and slowly began unbuttoning his coat. Rory hated how well she remembered the gesture—the slight flex of his knuckles, the flash of silk lining, the faint, maddening scent of cedar, damp wool, and the subtle, metallic tang that always clung to him, a bitter reminder of the blood that ran through his father's side of the family. "Don't get comfortable," she said, dropping the book onto the table with a heavy slam that rattled the teacups. "You don't get to disappear for six weeks after what happened at the docks and then stride in here like you're dropping by for tea. You didn't answer my calls, Lucien." "No," he agreed quietly. He folded his coat over the back of the sofa, revealing the dark waistcoat beneath. "I didn't." "You let me think you were dead. Or worse." She glared at him, her bright blue eyes sharp with a heat she had spent weeks trying to douse. "Do you have any idea what it was like waiting for a message? Wondering if some lower-tier demon had finally decided your head was worth more than your broker fees?" "Aurora—" "Don't 'Aurora' me." She took a step toward him, her cool-headed reserve cracking straight down the middle. "You stood in that alleyway with blood soaking through your shirt, told me to leave, and then vanished into the dark like a ghost. I spent three days scouring every underground parlor from Soho to Whitechapel looking for a half-blood fixer who might have had his throat cut." Lucien didn't flinch. He let her words strike him, his amber eye narrowing slightly while the black one remained an unreadable void. "I was compromised," he said, his tone infuriatingly level, though his chest rose and fell a fraction faster than before. "The pact with the Avaros court fell through the moment the blood-seal was broken. If I had stayed, if I had let you stay, they would have used you to pull me out of the shadows. You know how they work." "I know how *you* work," she spat, taking another step. She was close enough now that she could see the faint faint purple shadows beneath his eyes, the slight pale tension in his jaw that meant he hadn't slept, or hadn't fed, or both. "You pull back the second anyone gets close enough to touch the collar of your precious suit. You pretend it’s protection, but it’s just cowardice, Luc." That hit home. She saw it in the sudden tightening of his mouth, the way his hand twitched toward his cane before he forced his arm to stay at his side. "Cowardice?" His voice dropped an octave, smooth silk giving way to rough gravel. "I spent forty-eight hours in a salt-circle in an iron basement while my skin burned out the poison from an Avaros blade. I stayed away to keep your heart beating, Rory. Do not speak to me of cowardice." "I didn't ask you to protect me!" "You didn't have to!" He took a swift, sweeping step forward, closing the distance between them until there was barely a breath of air left in the cramped room. The heat coming off him was immense—a half-demon's furnace, suppressed under layers of fine tailoring, now bleeding through the space between them. "You think you’re so remarkably clever, sitting up here with your law books and your deliveries, pretending you’re just a girl from Cardiff who ran away from a bad man. But you walk into the middle of my world without a shadow of fear, and you look at me—*look at me*—as if I am something worth saving." Rory’s breath hitched. She looked up at him, caught in the dual pull of his terrifying, beautiful gaze. Her wrist throbbed where her crescent scar lay beneath her sleeve—an old, human wound, so insignificant compared to the jagged, invisible scars they had spent the last year carving into each other. "Maybe I thought you were," she whispered. The fire in her voice had died down, leaving behind a raw, aching hollow. "Maybe I was stupid enough to think that after everything, we were past the point of you running away." Lucien stared down at her. His hands hovered near her waist, fingers trembling slightly, suspended in the agonizing inch of space between touching her and holding back. The mask of the refined London broker, the unflappable half-blood who bought and sold secrets for sovereign gold, shattered completely. "I didn't run," he said, the words barely audible over the dull hum of the street outside. "I tried to save the only clean thing left in my life." "I'm not clean, Luc," she said, her voice tight. She reached out, her hand hesitant before her palm pressed flat against his chest, right over his heart. It was beating fast, a hard, frantic rhythm against her skin. "I'm right here in the mud with you. I chose to be." He closed his eyes at her touch, a long, ragged exhale escaping his lips. When he opened them again, the amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light of the flat. "You are infuriating," he murmured. "You're late," she countered, though her fingers curled into the fabric of his waistcoat, tugging him just a fraction closer. "And you still owe me an apology." "I don't apologize, Aurora. It’s bad for business." "Then offer me something else." Lucien didn't hesitate. He reached up, his long, cool fingers cupping her jaw, his thumb resting right over the pulse fluttering in her neck. He pulled her up, leaning down until his lips brushed hers—not with the polished ease of a bargainer, but with a desperate, starved intensity that made her knees buckle. Rory wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him down, dropping all her carefully rehearsed speeches, all her anger, into the sudden, intoxicating heat of his mouth. He groaned, a sound low in his throat, his arms coming around her waist to lift her slightly, pinning her against the edge of the heavy oak table. Books tumbled to the floor, a parchment scroll unrolled with a dry rustle, but neither of them moved to catch them. When he finally pulled back, his forehead rested against hers, his breath hot against her mouth. His dark eye looked darker still, but the coldness was gone, replaced by something fierce and unraveled. "I am not going to leave again," he breathed against her skin. "Even if you ask me to." Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands sliding down his neck to rest on his shoulders, feeling the solid, heavy reality of him finally back in her space. "Good," she said, her voice steadying as she looked right into the dark center of his gaze. "Because if you try, I'm locking all four bolts."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:20:17.605Z" 7/25/2026, 2:20:17 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
1"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.468
leniency0.936
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.085
66.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count5
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"intensely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"intensely"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
5"completely"
6"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1808
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"solitary"
count1
3
word"silk"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"familiar"
2"solitary"
3"silk"
4"reminder"
5"comfortable"
6"unreadable"
7"tension"
8"throbbed"
9"shattered"
10"pulse"
11"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1802
ratio0.003
matches
0"clack"
1"you"
2"look at me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1270
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Brick1
Lane1
Eva1
Lucien8
Moreau1
November1
Marseille1
Golden1
Empress1
Mrs1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Mrs"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.555
wordCount1802
matches
0"not with the polished ease of a bargainer, but with a desperate, starved intensity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean39.17
std23.78
cv0.607
sampleLengths
067
131
212
367
48
545
626
781
823
954
1061
1114
1249
1356
1437
1518
1613
1767
1850
1921
2058
211
2265
2322
2461
2570
2631
2751
287
29108
3050
3140
3247
3329
3450
3532
365
3727
388
395
4053
4176
4233
4318
4429
4526
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs197
matches
0"was beating"
1.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences101
ratio0.05
matches
0"His strange, mismatched eyes—one the warm hue of aged amber, the other an abyss of solid black—swept over her face, lingering on the small crescent-shaped scar tucked into the crease of her left wrist where she held the edge of the door."
1"Rory hated how well she remembered the gesture—the slight flex of his knuckles, the flash of silk lining, the faint, maddening scent of cedar, damp wool, and the subtle, metallic tang that always clung to him, a bitter reminder of the blood that ran through his father's side of the family."
2"The heat coming off him was immense—a half-demon's furnace, suppressed under layers of fine tailoring, now bleeding through the space between them."
3"Her wrist throbbed where her crescent scar lay beneath her sleeve—an old, human wound, so insignificant compared to the jagged, invisible scars they had spent the last year carving into each other."
4"He pulled her up, leaning down until his lips brushed hers—not with the polished ease of a bargainer, but with a desperate, starved intensity that made her knees buckle."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1285
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"heavy leather-bound tome"
2"faint faint purple shadows"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.036575875486381325
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.017120622568093387
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean17.84
std11.67
cv0.654
sampleLengths
040
127
231
312
44
523
640
78
813
932
107
1119
1223
1311
1442
155
1617
176
1823
1931
204
2126
224
2327
2414
2514
2618
275
2812
2921
3017
3118
328
335
3417
357
3611
377
3813
3916
4051
4119
4231
434
4415
452
4628
4730
481
4917
49.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3465346534653465
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners35
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, Lucien Moreau stood beneath"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences73
matches
0"She unlatched the top deadbolt,"
1"She opened the door expecting"
2"He looked infuriatingly intact."
3"He leaned lightly on his"
4"Her voice was steady, a"
5"He didn't move to enter,"
6"His strange, mismatched eyes—one the"
7"she said, leaning against the"
8"Her hands were still slightly"
9"She felt small, frayed at"
10"she said, turning her back"
11"He followed, the silver ferrule"
12"He shut the door behind"
13"It sent a sudden, unwanted"
14"she said, pulling a stack"
15"She dumped the papers onto"
16"He didn't take the armchair."
17"He remained standing near the"
18"He set his cane against"
19"she said, dropping the book"
ratio0.63
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences73
matches
0"The wood of the front"
1"She unlatched the top deadbolt,"
2"She opened the door expecting"
3"He looked infuriatingly intact."
4"He leaned lightly on his"
5"A fat tabby cat squeezed"
6"Ptolemy sniffed at the hem"
7"Her voice was steady, a"
8"Lucien’s voice was a low,"
9"He didn't move to enter,"
10"His strange, mismatched eyes—one the"
11"she said, leaning against the"
12"Lucien’s mouth twitched, the ghost"
13"Rory crossed her arms."
14"Her hands were still slightly"
15"Cheung's spicy beef broth."
16"She felt small, frayed at"
17"she said, turning her back"
18"He followed, the silver ferrule"
19"He shut the door behind"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She opened the door expecting the takeaway delivery boy or perhaps Eva, who had a habit of losing her keys between the bottom of her tote bag and the rain-slick…"
1"He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, his long fingers wrapped around the smooth bone curve, his posture carrying that infuriating, effortless grace that…"
2"He remained standing near the entryway, his eyes tracking her as she moved around the tiny room."
3"She was close enough now that she could see the faint faint purple shadows beneath his eyes, the slight pale tension in his jaw that meant he hadn't slept, or h…"
4"The mask of the refined London broker, the unflappable half-blood who bought and sold secrets for sovereign gold, shattered completely."
5"He pulled her up, leaning down until his lips brushed hers—not with the polished ease of a bargainer, but with a desperate, starved intensity that made her knee…"
6"Rory wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him down, dropping all her carefully rehearsed speeches, all her anger, into the sudden, intoxicating heat of his…"
7"He groaned, a sound low in his throat, his arms coming around her waist to lift her slightly, pinning her against the edge of the heavy oak table."
8"Rory let out a shaky breath, her hands sliding down his neck to rest on his shoulders, feeling the solid, heavy reality of him finally back in her space."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice tight"
1"she countered, though her fingers curled into the fabric of his waistcoat, tugging him just a fraction closer"
43.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he agreed quietly (agree)"
1"she spat (spit)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.638
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.213
73.9801%