Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTCWF2K2DCKQJDMM5ENYXK

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.025565
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park faded behind the moss-slick oak monoliths. Crossing the threshold into the Fae Grove always felt like stepping through wet silk, but tonight the air scraped against Rory's throat. Cold. Dead. She pressed her thumb against the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous tick lingering from childhood. The clearing lay submerged in a violet twilight that belonged to no sensible hour of a London evening. Above, the canopy of ancient branches wove together so tightly that not a single star punctured the gloom, yet the wildflowers beneath her boots bloomed in sickeningly vivid shades of mauve and bone-white. They smelled of copper and crushed stems. Rory reached under her heavy jacket, fingers brushing the thumbnail-sized cabochon resting against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant usually radiated a gentle, comforting ember-warmth. Tonight, it throbbed against her skin like a second heart, throwing a faint crimson pulse through the weave of her wool sweater. "Isolde?" Her voice dropped into the clearing and suffocated. No echo returned from the surrounding oaks. No rustle of autumn leaves answered. Rory shifted her weight, bringing her right hand out of her coat pocket. The clearing remained motionless, save for the faint, unnatural sway of the foxgloves near the center stone. No wind stirred her black hair. The air held the dense, heavy stillness of a tomb sealed underwater. She took three deliberate steps forward. *Crunch.* Rory halted. Her boots rested in deep, yielding moss. No dry twigs lay beneath her soles. She turned her head slowly, keeping her shoulders square. The ambient silence swallowed her own ragged breathing. Three seconds passed. Then, from the dark perimeter behind her, came a soft, answering sound. *Crunch.* "I know the rules of this grove," Rory said, keeping her chin high despite the knot hardening in her stomach. The darkness between the two northern monoliths thickened. It didn't shift like a shadow cast by moonlight; it curdled, pooling at the base of the oak bark like spilled ink. "I brought the trade." The Heartstone surged with sudden, agonizing heat against her sternum. The deep crimson gem flickered, casting long, needle-thin shadows across the turf. The shadows didn't point away from the stone's glow. They reached toward it. A wet, sliding sound filled the space between her heartbeat—like raw meat drawn across dry flagstones. "Isolde isn't here, Rory." The voice didn't come from the front. It whispered directly into the shell of her right ear, ice-cold and thin as greasepaper, though she stood in the dead center of the clearing with several yards of empty space on every side. Rory spun, swinging her elbow on instinct. Her forearm sliced through empty, frozen air. "Show yourself." A low, wet rattle vibrated through the soil beneath her feet. The bone-white wildflowers nearby curled inward, their petals turning brown and dissolving into black gel as she watched. The patch of decay spread in a neat, widening ring, marching toward the toes of her leather boots. Rory retreated a step. Her heel struck something rigid and cool. She turned. One of the oak standing stones towered behind her, its bark deeply furrowed. But as she stared, the ridges in the wood smoothed out. The grain shifted, swirling like dark water until it resembled the faint, blurred outline of a human face stretched three feet long. Two hollow depressions near the top reflected the red glow of her pendant. She reached for her watch, flicking her eyes down to the glass face. The second hand twitched in place, shivering back and forth between the twelve and the one, stuck in a frantic, silent spasm. "Time moves differently here," Rory muttered, her pre-law training clawing for some anchor of logic. "An hour inside. Minutes outside." "No minutes outside," the shadow between the northern stones rasped. It stepped into the weak crimson light. The shape possessed too many joints. Its limbs folded like a spider's, long and grey, wrapped in strips of rotted cloth that dripped grey water onto the moss. It possessed no face—only a smooth, pale expanse of skin stretched over an elongated skull, with a ragged slit where a chin should have been. Rory backed away, but her heel met another obstruction. She chanced a glance backward. The gap between the monoliths had closed. The ancient oaks had drifted together, their trunks fusing into a solid, seamless wall of black timber. "The grove is sealed," she whispered. "The grove was never yours to enter." The grey thing bent double, its spindly fingers planting into the turf. The grass withered beneath its knuckles, turning to white ash. It didn't rush. It crept forward inch by agonizing inch, its joints popping with the sound of dry kindling snapping underfoot. The Heartstone burned against Rory's flesh now, searing through her shirt. The crimson glow flared bright enough to illuminate the corners of the clearing, revealing the true nature of the oak wall. The trees were not wood. They were thousands of arms, tightly coiled and petrified, their fingers clawed into the soil. "You came looking for answers about your little trinket," the creature hissed, its jawless slit expanding to reveal rows of translucent, needle-like teeth. "You brought a key to a door that only opens downward." Rory reached for the silver chain around her neck, her fingers scorching as they made contact with the metal. "Get back." The entity paused, tilting its featureless head. A thick, clear fluid oozed from its maw, sizzling as it hit the moss. "Or what, little delivery girl? You'll argue your case?" It lunged—not with speed, but with a sudden, nauseating warping of space. One moment it sat ten feet away; the next, its pale, featureless face filled her field of vision, inches from her eyes. The stench of deep earth and ancient rot washed over her face. Rory didn't scream. She clamped her teeth together, raised her right hand, and ripped the searing Heartstone pendant from her neck, thrusting the pulsing crimson gem directly into the creature's weeping maw.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"furrowed"
count1
13
word"searing"
count2
14
word"maw"
count2
highlights
0"silk"
1"gloom"
2"comforting"
3"warmth"
4"throbbed"
5"pulse"
6"echo"
7"weight"
8"silence"
9"stomach"
10"flickered"
11"vibrated"
12"furrowed"
13"searing"
14"maw"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords999
ratio0.002
matches
0"Crunch."
1"Crunch."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount927
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Rory12
London1
Heartstone4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
2"Grove"
3"London"
globalScore0.853
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like stepping through wet silk, bu"
99.90% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.001
wordCount999
matches
0"not with speed, but with a sudden, nauseating warping of space"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean24.37
std18.45
cv0.757
sampleLengths
032
176
246
31
421
548
66
71
816
932
101
1120
1230
134
1435
1516
164
1741
1814
192
2047
2111
2261
2335
2420
2510
267
2753
2838
296
307
3143
3232
3320
3434
3519
362
3721
389
3946
4032
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences89
ratio0.056
matches
0"It didn't shift like a shadow cast by moonlight; it curdled, pooling at the base of the oak bark like spilled ink."
1"A wet, sliding sound filled the space between her heartbeat—like raw meat drawn across dry flagstones."
2"It possessed no face—only a smooth, pale expanse of skin stretched over an elongated skull, with a ragged slit where a chin should have been."
3"It lunged—not with speed, but with a sudden, nauseating warping of space."
4"One moment it sat ten feet away; the next, its pale, featureless face filled her field of vision, inches from her eyes."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, needle-thin shadows"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026680896478121666
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010672358591248666
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean11.22
std7.41
cv0.66
sampleLengths
08
122
21
31
418
518
633
77
815
99
1022
111
128
137
146
1513
1617
176
1812
196
201
212
227
237
249
258
263
2712
281
2920
308
3122
324
3310
3412
359
364
3716
384
397
4034
417
427
432
4411
4518
4618
474
487
492
39.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3258426966292135
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners29
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then, from the dark perimeter"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences73
matches
0"She pressed her thumb against"
1"They smelled of copper and"
2"Her voice dropped into the"
3"She took three deliberate steps"
4"Her boots rested in deep,"
5"She turned her head slowly,"
6"It didn't shift like a"
7"They reached toward it."
8"It whispered directly into the"
9"Her forearm sliced through empty,"
10"Her heel struck something rigid"
11"She reached for her watch,"
12"It stepped into the weak"
13"Its limbs folded like a"
14"It possessed no face—only a"
15"She chanced a glance backward."
16"It didn't rush."
17"It crept forward inch by"
18"They were thousands of arms,"
19"It lunged—not with speed, but"
ratio0.288
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"Richmond Park faded behind the"
1"She pressed her thumb against"
2"The clearing lay submerged in"
3"They smelled of copper and"
4"Rory reached under her heavy"
5"The Heartstone pendant usually radiated"
6"Tonight, it throbbed against her"
7"Her voice dropped into the"
8"Rory shifted her weight, bringing"
9"The clearing remained motionless, save"
10"The air held the dense,"
11"She took three deliberate steps"
12"Her boots rested in deep,"
13"She turned her head slowly,"
14"The ambient silence swallowed her"
15"Rory said, keeping her chin"
16"The darkness between the two"
17"It didn't shift like a"
18"The Heartstone surged with sudden,"
19"The deep crimson gem flickered,"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bone-white wildflowers nearby curled inward, their petals turning brown and dissolving into black gel as she watched."
1"Its limbs folded like a spider's, long and grey, wrapped in strips of rotted cloth that dripped grey water onto the moss."
2"It crept forward inch by agonizing inch, its joints popping with the sound of dry kindling snapping underfoot."
3"She clamped her teeth together, raised her right hand, and ripped the searing Heartstone pendant from her neck, thrusting the pulsing crimson gem directly into …"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory muttered, her pre-law training clawing for some anchor of logic"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"the creature hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.429
76.7753%