Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTCWGQJ6V55GTJMW8G8FX2

Run Details

Duration:
29.6s
Cost:
$0.038734
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the tear in the Veil, skin prickling as the shimmering distortion parted like liquid glass. Air hot enough to scorch her throat hit her lungs. The sky stretched above them in a boundless sheet of molten amber, unmarred by sun or clouds. Isolde drifted over the threshold behind her, her waist-length silver hair lifted by a breeze that carried no draft. Her bare feet brushed the glass-smooth crimson soil without disturbing a single crystal grain or leaving a footprint behind. Nyx rose from Aurora's shadow, their six-foot-two silhouette stretching upward until glowing violet eyes burned in a face made of pure darkness. "The air tastes of bruised plums and iron." Nyx's voice drifted past Aurora's ear, soft as dry leaves scraping pavement. Aurora gripped the leaf-shaped hilt of her Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver dagger hummed against her palm, cold as arctic ice despite the oppressive ambient heat. Beneath her linen shirt, the thumbnail-sized Heartstone pendant throbbed against her collarbone, beating in rhythm with her pulse and glowing a ferocious crimson. "We aren't in Richmond anymore." Aurora adjusted her hold on the dagger, her bright blue eyes scanning the vast landscape. Giant marble columns, thick as old-growth oaks and wrapped in thornless violet vines, marched in broken rows toward a distant mountain range carved into the shapes of sleeping giants. High above, massive, translucent creatures swept through the amber sky, their long ribbon tails trailing behind them like silk banners. They made no sound, but the air vibrated with a low hum that shook the soles of Aurora's boots. "Isolde, is this Dymas?" Isolde stroked a leaf larger than a war shield. "Where hunger reigns, the vines drink deep and never wither." She smiled, pale lavender eyes reflecting the amber sky. "You walk upon soil that has swallowed ten thousand banquets." Aurora moved toward the nearest ruined archway. The stone wasn't granite or marble; close up, it shifted color like mother-of-pearl, embedded with crushed gems that caught the golden light. She touched her left wrist, her thumb tracing the crescent scar near her pulse point before pulling away to keep her hand near her weapon. "Watch the canopy." Nyx melted from solid form into a flat ink-stain on the pearlescent stone, sliding up the face of the archway with dizzying speed before pooling at the top. "Things hunt here that do not require legs to stalk." "Can you see a path down into the valley?" Aurora called up, her voice dropping lower as a strange rustling echoed from a nearby orchard. Trees in the grove stood thirty feet tall, their bark silver and sleek like polished chrome. Instead of leaves, thick clusters of glass-like spheres dangled from the branches, each orb filled with swirling, colored liquids—ruby red, topaz yellow, deep sapphire. The scent drifting off them was overwhelming, a mixture of caramelized sugar, roasted spices, and dark wine that made Aurora's mouth water against her will. "The path chooses those who carry the key." Isolde stopped before a low basin carved from obsidian. Fluid flooded the basin from an unseen source, clear and bubbling like a mountain spring, yet scenting the air with heavy, fermented honey. "Drink, and the way clears. Refuse, and the gardens loop forever." "She can't lie, but she certainly knows how to frame a trap." Aurora stepped past Isolde, angling her Fae-forged blade so the moonlight luminescence caught the edge of the dark pool. "Is it poisoned?" Isolde tilted her head, her expression unreadable. "Poison stops the heart. Dymas prefers to keep hearts beating very fast." Nyx dropped from the top of the archway, coalescing into their towering silhouette beside Aurora. Violet fire flared in their hollow eye sockets. "The liquid is alive. Tiny tendrils stir beneath the surface." Aurora bent lower. The reflection in the bubbling pool wasn't her own face—her straight black hair and bright blue eyes were replaced by a crown of woven brambles and skin stained gold. She jerked back, her hand flying to her chest where the Heartstone throbbed against her ribs like a second heart. "The pendant is reacting." Aurora pulled the silver chain out from beneath her collar. The deep crimson gemstone flared, casting blood-red light across the obsidian basin. The bubbling liquid parted instantly, draining down a series of hidden slitted grates at the bottom of the basin. The heavy obsidian slab groaned, sliding back with the sharp crack of ancient gears grinding together. A spiral staircase plunged straight down into the earth, lit by pale, luminescent moss creeping along the steps. "A cellar." Nyx hovered over the opening, shadow-tendrils testing the air rising from the dark descent. "Or a larder." "Only one way to find out." Aurora led the way down, stepping onto the damp moss. The heat of the amber sky vanished the moment her boots cleared the threshold. Cold air rushed up to meet them, thick with the smell of turned earth, crushed spices, and ancient, stagnant water. The stone walls of the shaft were lined with niches. In each alcove sat brass urns, sealed with red wax and inscribed with intricate runes that burned Aurora's eyes to look at directly. "Helbound contracts," Isolde murmured from behind, her speech melodic and unhurried. "Souls bound to serve the kitchens of Prince Belphegor. Each jar holds a recipe that cost a life." "Let's leave the jars alone." Aurora kept her Fae blade raised, its cold, blue-white light cutting through the subterranean gloom. The spiral stairs emptied into a cavernous hall. Columns carved in the shape of sprawling grapevine trellises held up a ceiling so high it was lost in shadow. Down the center of the hall stretched a long wooden table, carved from a single trunk of dark wood. Silver goblets, golden platters, and crystal decanters lay scattered across the surface, buried beneath centuries of dust and petrified food. At the head of the table sat a high-backed throne made of polished bone. "Someone left in a hurry." Aurora brushed her fingers over a golden platter. The dust peeled away to reveal a carved crest—a crown resting atop a split pomegranate. "Or they were interrupted." Nyx glided toward the far wall, where a massive iron door stood partially ajar. Black frost coated the hinges, crawling outward across the stones in thin, skeletal patterns. "The cold does not belong to Dymas. Something else forced its way inside." Aurora approached the iron door, her boots echoing against the flagstones. She held up her blade. The Fae-forged silver hummed loudly now, vibrating so hard her fingers buzzed. "A tear within a tear," Aurora whispered, staring through the gap in the iron door. Beyond lay no room or cellar. A vast chasm opened up before them, falling away into an abyss filled with floating islands of shattered rock, each connected by shimmering bridges of light. Strange, ancient ruins clung to the floating rocks, defying gravity under a sky torn open to expose cold, unfamiliar stars. Isolde stepped beside her, gazing into the void without blinking. "We have reached the edge of the domain." Aurora shifted her grip on the moonsilver dagger and took a step closer to the drop.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:20:50.084Z" 7/25/2026, 2:20:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"crystal"
count2
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"marble"
count2
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"crystal"
1"oppressive"
2"throbbed"
3"pulse"
4"scanning"
5"marble"
6"silk"
7"vibrated"
8"tracing"
9"echoed"
10"unreadable"
11"intricate"
12"gloom"
13"echoing"
14"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1190
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1000
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Aurora20
Fae-forged3
Heartstone2
Isolde7
Fae4
Nyx6
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.5
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1190
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.83
std18.61
cv0.938
sampleLengths
045
138
222
38
412
548
65
715
868
94
109
1110
129
1310
1454
153
1628
1710
189
1916
2065
218
2232
2311
2412
2519
263
277
2812
2923
3010
3152
324
3322
3453
352
3614
373
386
3910
4067
412
429
4318
445
4515
4667
4714
485
4923
88.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"were replaced"
1"were lined"
2"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was overwhelming"
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences90
ratio0.044
matches
0"The stone wasn't granite or marble; close up, it shifted color like mother-of-pearl, embedded with crushed gems that caught the golden light."
1"Instead of leaves, thick clusters of glass-like spheres dangled from the branches, each orb filled with swirling, colored liquids—ruby red, topaz yellow, deep sapphire."
2"The reflection in the bubbling pool wasn't her own face—her straight black hair and bright blue eyes were replaced by a crown of woven brambles and skin stained gold."
3"The dust peeled away to reveal a carved crest—a crown resting atop a split pomegranate."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1020
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"High above, massive, translucent creatures"
1"cold, blue-white light"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.020588235294117647
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00392156862745098
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.22
std6.8
cv0.514
sampleLengths
018
110
217
319
419
522
68
712
89
916
1023
115
1215
1329
1420
1519
164
179
1810
199
2010
217
2222
2325
243
2528
2610
279
2816
2916
3024
3125
328
339
3423
3511
3612
3719
383
397
4012
4115
428
4310
443
4529
4620
474
4810
4912
68.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners40
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Instead of leaves, thick clusters"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her bare feet brushed the"
1"They made no sound, but"
2"She smiled, pale lavender eyes"
3"She touched her left wrist,"
4"She jerked back, her hand"
5"She held up her blade."
ratio0.094
61.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences64
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the tear"
1"The sky stretched above them"
2"Isolde drifted over the threshold"
3"Her bare feet brushed the"
4"Nyx rose from Aurora's shadow,"
5"Nyx's voice drifted past Aurora's"
6"Aurora gripped the leaf-shaped hilt"
7"The moonsilver dagger hummed against"
8"Aurora adjusted her hold on"
9"They made no sound, but"
10"Isolde stroked a leaf larger"
11"She smiled, pale lavender eyes"
12"Aurora moved toward the nearest"
13"The stone wasn't granite or"
14"She touched her left wrist,"
15"Nyx melted from solid form"
16"Aurora called up, her voice"
17"Trees in the grove stood"
18"The scent drifting off them"
19"Isolde stopped before a low"
ratio0.797
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Isolde drifted over the threshold behind her, her waist-length silver hair lifted by a breeze that carried no draft."
1"Beneath her linen shirt, the thumbnail-sized Heartstone pendant throbbed against her collarbone, beating in rhythm with her pulse and glowing a ferocious crimso…"
2"The stone wasn't granite or marble; close up, it shifted color like mother-of-pearl, embedded with crushed gems that caught the golden light."
3"She touched her left wrist, her thumb tracing the crescent scar near her pulse point before pulling away to keep her hand near her weapon."
4"The scent drifting off them was overwhelming, a mixture of caramelized sugar, roasted spices, and dark wine that made Aurora's mouth water against her will."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8402%