| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 74.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "precisely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "resonance" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "footfall" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "tapestry" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "symphony" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "navigated" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "echo" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "chilling" | | 18 | "enigmatic" | | 19 | "flicked" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "churned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.45% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1189 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 958 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Seer | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.926 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "twilight that seemed to bleed directly from the canopy above" | | 1 | "tapestry that seemed to breathe" | | 2 | "darkness that seemed to swallow the amber light surrounding the Seer" |
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| 31.79% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.682 | | wordCount | 1189 | | matches | | 0 | "not the gray-blue canopy of a London afternoon, but a vast, dome-like expanse of liquid twilight, crossed by slo" | | 1 | "not the amber sky above, but a swirling vortex of deep crimson clouds" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.32% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 47.56 | | std | 22.17 | | cv | 0.466 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 97 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 99 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 57 |
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| 81.34% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "was dialed" | | 1 | "was replaced" | | 2 | "been woven" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 52 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Right,\" Rory muttered, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a grounding habit from childhood whenever things spun too fast." | | 1 | "The silence of the park outside was replaced by a symphony of alien sounds: the low, resonant chimes of silver leaves brushing together in a wind that never touched their skin; the distant, crystalline hum of water flowing uphill; and beneath it all, a rhythmic, subterranean throb that felt remarkably like a massive heart beating deep within the soil." | | 2 | "The water mirrored not the amber sky above, but a swirling vortex of deep crimson clouds and towering, sun-drenched vineyards—a strange, jarring glimpse of a completely different realm superimposed upon the surface of the pond." | | 3 | "The Fae compulsion hummed in the air around her, absolute and binding—she could not utter a direct falsehood, but she possessed an endless well of truths designed to mislead." | | 4 | "Before Rory could ask what she meant, a sudden gust of wind swept through the clearing—a wind smelling of roasted spices, sweet wine, and ash." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 973 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped moonsilver" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "wide, glass-calm pool" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.02672147995889003 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014388489208633094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 52 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 52 | | mean | 22.87 | | std | 9.38 | | cv | 0.41 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 94.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5769230769230769 | | totalSentences | 52 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned" | | 1 | "Only the undisturbed bluebells remained," |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "They crossed the threshold into" | | 2 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 3 | "she breathed, recognizing the signature" | | 4 | "Her silver hair cascaded in" | | 5 | "She stood completely barefoot on" | | 6 | "She stepped forward, her movements" |
| | ratio | 0.159 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice sounding" | | 3 | "Rory nodded, her hand instinctively" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm" | | 5 | "They crossed the threshold into" | | 6 | "The clearing opened before them" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible shades" | | 8 | "Rory stared up, her bright" | | 9 | "Nyx warned, drifting a few" | | 10 | "Rory muttered, her fingers tracing" | | 11 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "Every sense was dialed up" | | 13 | "The silence of the park" | | 14 | "The trees thinned, parting to" | | 15 | "The water mirrored not the" | | 16 | "A shiver raced down Rory's" | | 17 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared hot" | | 18 | "she breathed, recognizing the signature" | | 19 | "a voice murmured, light as" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could ask what" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the perimeter, reflecting the peculiar amber twilight that seemed to bleed directly from the canopy above." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm against her skin, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing with a steady, rhythmic thrum that matched the rapid beat of her own heart." | | 2 | "A few inches away, the Fae-forged blade rested in its scabbard at her hip, its slender, leaf-shaped moonsilver form radiating a persistent, icy chill that bled …" | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible shades of indigo, copper, and bioluminescent green, carpeting the forest floor in a living tapestry that seemed to breathe." | | 4 | "Rory stared up, her bright blue eyes wide, her cool-headed pragmatism scrambling to find a foothold in an environment that defied every law of physics she had e…" | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the grove, the air growing thicker, saturated with a heavy, honeyed warmth that contrasted sharply with the bite of the Fae blade at her …" | | 6 | "The silence of the park outside was replaced by a symphony of alien sounds: the low, resonant chimes of silver leaves brushing together in a wind that never tou…" | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared hot against her chest, a warning flare of heat that made her gasp." | | 8 | "The half-fae seer looked as though she had been woven from moonlight and morning mist itself." | | 9 | "Her silver hair cascaded in heavy, luminous waves all the way to her waist, and her pale lavender eyes held the chilling, detached clarity of an oracle who had …" | | 10 | "Nyx drifted forward, a towering silhouette of absolute darkness that seemed to swallow the amber light surrounding the Seer." | | 11 | "She stepped forward, her movements impossibly fluid, gliding closer until Rory could smell the scent of frozen mint and wild honey that clung to her ethereal sk…" | | 12 | "Only the undisturbed bluebells remained, proof that someone had stood there, and vanished as though she had never existed at all." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "a voice murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.706 | |